Like with the other two. I taking a 'blast to my past' to give reviews that I read, originally back in 2011.
First things first.
It feels weird, giving such a review for a story written door one of my closest fan fiction friends, BRAVOBRAVO.
He, ChocolateBrownPegasis and Villain84 were to first to ever make me feel welcome on there.
Much like Ecology, Applejackrocks thehumphrey, KingSimba4ever9 and probably KarinaBrony were the firsts to welcome me, and befriend me, here on fanpop, back in the day.
Uhh, anyway.
I won't 'only' focus on the neggatives.
I'll give the positives as well.
The story is set as full out war between the Western/Eastern group, vs the mennecing Southern pack.
The worst of the Southerners, is the one who started the war.
HUNTER.
An omega hating sociopath, who in his first appeance, violantly turtures Humphrey, and enjoys doing it.
At the time I read this.
I wasn't as morbid as I am NOW. and didn't enjoy Hunter as much as I probably would NOW.
Same gose to the graphic battle scenes.
I didn't enjoy them as much as I would now, thanks to my enjoyment of saw series, Freddy Krueger, happy boom friends, and MLP creepypastas (mostly cupcakes).
Its too bad to. Cause there's one in basically every single chapter. And Andrew (bravo) dosen't hold back on graphic details for each battle.
What kind of battles?
Well.
picture the brawl between Dash and Big Mac in ROCKET TO INSANITY, times ten.
Anyway.
One of my neggatives was. The langth.
Though I don't think this one should count.
I find it too long.
Others might find it too short.
Another neggative is. The story isn't exatly 'sex free'.
And when there is sex chapters.
It's not held back, on detail.
what else should I say?
I have no idea.
This story is all over the place.
Do much going constantly going on. It's like PRISONERS.
Well.
Okay. It's 'nothing' like that movie.
But who cares.
PRISONERS is awesome!
I just wanted to mention it, lol.
Though the ending annoyed me.
I hate when films do that to you.
Well.
That's all I got.
The story can still be found.
Look it up on google, it's the easiest way to find it.
In any case.
Please leave commentaren and suggestions for the volgende review episode.
Till then.
Here's some badass quotes from the story.
"this whole Alpha and omega thing a disgrace" - Fang (or 'the traiter/bitch' as I call him)
"Today we moan the loss of a friend. A friend who taken from us from the Southern Pack.. NO MORE! We will allow them to rip our loved ones away from us! No longer, will we offer peace! IT IS TIME THEY LEARNED THE POWER OF RHE EASTEN AND WESTERN PACKS!.. We wil, rush forward!. FOR THE BLOOD OF THE SOUTH!" - Winston
"Omega twerp!" - Hunter
"WE WILL CRUSH WHAT THEY HOLD DEAR! WE WILL BREAK THERE DEFENCE! WE WILL KILL THEM ALL!" - Hunter
Wolf: Wait!
Me: What?
Wolf: Look they're wolves that are dangerous Trust me it's not safe
Me: Who are you?
Wolf: It's Sophie.
Me: Beautiful name.
Sophie: Thanks.
Me: mine is Jason.
Then Shade and Rose which are my mom and dad come in while Sophie is sleeping
Shade: hallo son How the den.
Me: It's Alright A female is sleeping.
Rose: is she your age what's her name
Me: could be a jaar younger but she's pup like me mom. Her name is Sophie.
Shade: Does she mind ?
Me: She's kind and doesn't mind
Rose: Okay
Me: What?
Wolf: Look they're wolves that are dangerous Trust me it's not safe
Me: Who are you?
Wolf: It's Sophie.
Me: Beautiful name.
Sophie: Thanks.
Me: mine is Jason.
Then Shade and Rose which are my mom and dad come in while Sophie is sleeping
Shade: hallo son How the den.
Me: It's Alright A female is sleeping.
Rose: is she your age what's her name
Me: could be a jaar younger but she's pup like me mom. Her name is Sophie.
Shade: Does she mind ?
Me: She's kind and doesn't mind
Rose: Okay
ai is EXTREME CONTROVERSIAL but I did got curious on found one of the ai sites and so I tried it out and this is what the ai literally said:
- The wolf pack's dynamics would have changed, as the alpha pair would be Garth and Kate, leading with their own style and rules.
- Humphrey would have felt heartbroken and rejected, and probably would have moved away from the pack of tried to find another mate.
- It is likely that Garth and Kate's progeny would have a different set of characteristics and personalities compared to Humphrey's offspring.
- The plot of the subsequent films in the franchise would have undergone significant changes, as the focus would shift from Humphrey's adventures and romantic endeavors to Garth and Kate's challenges as leaders.
Despite these differences, I believe that the central message of the movie, which emphasizes the importance of teamwork, accepting differences, and breaking down prejudices, would have remained unchanged.
- The wolf pack's dynamics would have changed, as the alpha pair would be Garth and Kate, leading with their own style and rules.
- Humphrey would have felt heartbroken and rejected, and probably would have moved away from the pack of tried to find another mate.
- It is likely that Garth and Kate's progeny would have a different set of characteristics and personalities compared to Humphrey's offspring.
- The plot of the subsequent films in the franchise would have undergone significant changes, as the focus would shift from Humphrey's adventures and romantic endeavors to Garth and Kate's challenges as leaders.
Despite these differences, I believe that the central message of the movie, which emphasizes the importance of teamwork, accepting differences, and breaking down prejudices, would have remained unchanged.
