Alpha and Omega Article: What's your take. Episode 3/FOR THE BLOOD OF THE SOUTH

What's your take. Episode 3/FOR THE BLOOD OF THE SOUTH

posted by Canada24

Well.

Like with the other two. I taking a 'blast to my past' to give reviews that I read, originally back in 2011.

First things first.
It feels weird, giving such a review for a story written door one of my closest fan fiction friends, BRAVOBRAVO.
He, ChocolateBrownPegasis and Villain84 were to first to ever make me feel welcome on there.

Much like Ecology, Applejackrocks thehumphrey, KingSimba4ever9 and probably KarinaBrony were the firsts to welcome me, and befriend me, here on fanpop, back in the day.

Uhh, anyway.

I won't 'only' focus on the neggatives.
I'll give the positives as well.

The story is set as full out war between the Western/Eastern group, vs the mennecing Southern pack.

The worst of the Southerners, is the one who started the war.
HUNTER.
An omega hating sociopath, who in his first appeance, violantly turtures Humphrey, and enjoys doing it.
At the time I read this.
I wasn't as morbid as I am NOW. and didn't enjoy Hunter as much as I probably would NOW.

Same gose to the graphic battle scenes.

I didn't enjoy them as much as I would now, thanks to my enjoyment of saw series, Freddy Krueger, happy boom friends, and MLP creepypastas (mostly cupcakes).

Its too bad to. Cause there's one in basically every single chapter. And Andrew (bravo) dosen't hold back on graphic details for each battle.
What kind of battles?
Well.
picture the brawl between Dash and Big Mac in ROCKET TO INSANITY, times ten.

Anyway.

One of my neggatives was. The langth.
Though I don't think this one should count.
I find it too long.
Others might find it too short.

Another neggative is. The story isn't exatly 'sex free'.
And when there is sex chapters.
It's not held back, on detail.

what else should I say?

I have no idea.
This story is all over the place.
Do much going constantly going on. It's like PRISONERS.
Well.
Okay. It's 'nothing' like that movie.
But who cares.
PRISONERS is awesome!
I just wanted to mention it, lol.
Though the ending annoyed me.
I hate when films do that to you.

Well.
That's all I got.

The story can still be found.
Look it up on google, it's the easiest way to find it.

In any case.
Please leave commentaren and suggestions for the volgende review episode.

Till then.
Here's some badass quotes from the story.

"this whole Alpha and omega thing a disgrace" - Fang (or 'the traiter/bitch' as I call him)

"Today we moan the loss of a friend. A friend who taken from us from the Southern Pack.. NO MORE! We will allow them to rip our loved ones away from us! No longer, will we offer peace! IT IS TIME THEY LEARNED THE POWER OF RHE EASTEN AND WESTERN PACKS!.. We wil, rush forward!. FOR THE BLOOD OF THE SOUTH!" - Winston

"Omega twerp!" - Hunter

"WE WILL CRUSH WHAT THEY HOLD DEAR! WE WILL BREAK THERE DEFENCE! WE WILL KILL THEM ALL!" - Hunter

Windwakerguy430 I'd say the story sounds shitty, which makes the review better. Nice work

Canada24 Uhh. Thanks

Windwakerguy430 Its quite simple really. Reciews are good when you mention positive things, but mentioning negatives are better, because today, people love to see others anger... for some reason, and it also keeps the other people from doing the same thing the reviewer does. Still, great work

Canada24 Well.. I'm both. A raging realist, And a 'positive' reviewer

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The Making of my Stories: References in A Hero's Past

posted by PurpleDragon02

A Hero’s Past is where the callbacks and references really started coming. I figured I kinda had to reference the first movie a bit since this was a prequel story.

Right off the bat, the story starts out with the ending paragraph from Legend and that’s because this is the beginning of the entire Alpha and Omega story. I zei at the end of Legend that the story told around the logboard always began with those words, so I decided to include them in quotations at the very start of the very first story.

In chapter two, I made a quick reference to the third movie when I mentioned the Great Wolf...

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The Making of my Stories: Aftermath

posted by PurpleDragon02

I guess, in a way, Viggo did break Humphrey’s piece during the final battle. But instead of killing him, he broke his spirit instead when he killed Runt. Humphrey’s grief over Runt was going to be the cause of something big going vooruit, voorwaarts so I wanted to take a lot of time to fully flesh out just how badly Runt’s death affected him. Plus, it made Kate’s uplifting monologue even meer meaningful.

Speaking of which, Kate’s monologue in chapter twenty-four wasn’t too hard to come up with. I really just thought about what Humphrey meant to her and the impact he had on her life. Kate’s...

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The Making of my Stories: The Final Battle

posted by PurpleDragon02

I decided to have a little misdirect door having Humphrey saying some worrying final-sounding words to make it seem like he was gonna die again, when in actuality, it was Runt who was going to die. And I decided to rub it in a little door having Runt be the one who says they’re all going to make it out alright.

Something I didn’t realize with the dialogue between Viggo and Humphrey when the battle first starts is that even though I didn’t try, I followed up with the quote from the beginning, saying that Viggo didn’t seem to have any weaknesses. That line was mainly just for effect to emphasize...

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The Making of my Stories: Preparing for the Final Battle

posted by PurpleDragon02

The very first thing that I knew would happen when I first started thinking up ideas for The Final War was that I was going to bring as many characters back as I could and get everyone together to fight Viggo. This was the grand finale and although cliché, I knew it was going to be awesome. So, I made a lijst of all the packs and individual allies from both the films and my stories, so I made sure that I got them all. And there was one character in particular I was excited to bring back, meer on that later.

The Lone Survivors are not my creation. For the last six months of so of writing The...

Kate and Humphrey Adventures

posted by Katecutewolf

This is a series of mini stories that I created getting parts from the original movie and liking the chapter 5 based on the story of @katealphawolf named “The ritual of Love” I hope u enjoy it as much as I do. This story contains sexual content, so it’s recommended for +13. u are warned!

Chapter 2: The wedding day
The dag arrived and it was a beautiful dag full of joy and happiness because that same dag was going to be the wedding dag of those two wolves in love. Kate bathed and brushed her beautiful mane, also arranged with a beautiful purple bloem volgende to her ear. On the other side...

Making meer storys for The lone survivors

posted by penguinsir23

Well hello there everyone l am making plans for my each oc
characters tonen what l'm having in the future not just only of mine oc lara's future development now give u toon some info.

The Lone Survivors:The revenge of the hunter:Atfer the events of The Final War Lara and her's few pack members before they went back to their's home pagina seeing the three hunters lara had encounter back in the winter season while she was a lone wolf.

Birth of The Prowler:Before she was named the Prowler Barbara was a warrior in her's cain her's mother Alvie teaches her the ways of the prowler.

Alone Wolf:When Viggo raided The New Frontier Johnny was forced out of his home.

The Wise Warrior:A week later after Kenny's death Lara and Johnny are dealing with his death when they meet a strong wolf named Brutus.

Alpha and Omega: The Final War Chapter 11: Important Meeting

posted by PurpleDragon02

Part 2: His Greatest Gambit
Chapter 11: Important Meeting

For two days after the cliffside ambush, Humphrey and the group wandered through the woods, trying to find a better place to hide out, but without much luck. Viggo had forced them from every veilig haven they could think of.

“We need to find a better place to hide,” Humphrey said.

“Humphrey, we have nowhere else to go,” Adam replied.

“Yeah,” Kenya agreed, “they’ve bullied us away from every veilig haven we have.”

“Not every veilig haven,” Humphrey said.

“What do u mean?” Adam asked. “Where else can we go?”

“Home,”...

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A&O: The Final War Soundtrack

posted by PurpleDragon02

Again, this is just to give people a sense of the tone of the story, be it dramatic, intense, of sad. Plus, the song titles can give a little meer insight into what might happen in the story. I recommend at least 22-31 since it hints at something very big. And I recommend the special thanks too since the songs are a little surprise.

1. Humphrey's Return (Chapter 1: Humphrey's Return)
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2. Kenya's Rescue (Chapter 3: Into the Walls of Fire)
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3. The Takeover of Jasper Park (Chapter 4: "We're at War")
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4. Robert's Theme
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5. The Lost Tale (Chapter 7: The Lost Tale)
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6. Crippled (Chapter...

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Alpha and Omega: Rise of the Hunter Chapter 2: Welcome to the Western Pack

posted by PurpleDragon02

Chapter 2: Welcome to the Western Pack

A few days later, after Runt had brought Oscar back to the valley, Stinky was tonen him around and officially welcoming him into the pack. The battle with the Crimson Pack was long over and nothing had been heard of them since, yet the pack wasn’t taking any chances and hadn’t let their guard down. They knew the pack would return. The matter of “when” was a different story.

The dag had still been young when Oscar’s orientation into the pack took place. Everyone had gathered in the valley to see it. The dag was warm and sunny with no wind to disturb...

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Alpha and Omega: A Hero's Past Chapter 18: Love at First Sight

posted by PurpleDragon02

Chapter 18: Love at First Sight

Cando and Hutch led Humphrey through the territory as they were on their way to see the pack leader, Winston. Humphrey noticed many of the wolves stop and look at him, not so much as an outsider who was intruding on their turf, but as a pup who needed help finding his place in the world, even though they knew nothing about him. He could tell that they were a very accepting pack, and that was an encouraging thought.

From down in the valley, Humphrey could already see the large hol, den where they were headed. It was a stone cave with a large boom that stood on top, boven of...

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Alpha and Omega: A Hero's Past Chapter 17: The Western Pack

posted by PurpleDragon02

Chapter 17: The Western Pack

The cold wind woke Humphrey the volgende morning. He slowly opened his eyes, not quite sure about why he was sleeping underneath a tree. But then it all came back to him. He remembered the logboard and Kyle. And getting banished from the pack. He was out on his own again and Humphrey was beginning to believe that he was destined for a life as a lone wolf. At least he was a fun-loving lone wolf, but that wouldn’t do anything to improve his situation.

Humphrey stretched his legs and yawned as he prepared to verplaats on. As he looked around, he noticed a berry struik, bush nearby....

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Alpha and Omega: A Hero's Past Chapter 7: Separated

posted by PurpleDragon02

Chapter 7: Separated

The truck began its drive back to the human settlement with Humphrey and Kenya trapped in the back; scared, alone, and fearing for their lives. After it left the clearing, the truck turned onto an uneven dirt road with an embankment on one side that steadily led down into the forest. Humphrey looked over to the other cage, where his sister was sobbing uncontrollably. He was extremely frightened, too and he was worried about his parents. But then he remembered what they had told him when Kenya was born.

“She’s the youngest one out of the three of you,” they had said....

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Can u commentaar Please For Me Please?

posted by LazarusTheAlpha

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Episode 12

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"So who's gonna pay for the drinks first huh?" As I questioned everyone from the back of the car counting the exact change I have left from the palm of my hand, tonen the digits off my palm couting off.
"All I have is 32 digits, I can give u 12, I need the rest to buy my little sister a birthday present" Maria told me with a realtive; javier suniga in the back looking at the flashes of lights from the store while on his phone.
"Wey're just getting some cigarettes then don't worry about it Maria." I told her while getting out of the truck, locking the doors.
We all walked towards the small...

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Alpha and Omega 6, 7 and 8 CONFIRMED!!

posted by TimberHumphrey

hallo y'all! i'm back and for all u A&O fans who still don't know this yet, i'm gonna tell y'all about something that might make u excited like i am. okay, so up till we all thought Alpha and Omega 5: Family Vacation was gonna be the last movie of the franchise. ya know, everybody was getting ready for it to end and some of us were sad, but here's the pitch: about 2 days ago, (Note: This is REAL! i'm not lying) Crest and Lionsgate came out and officially announced 3 meer sequels after Family Vacation, and they're teaming up with Splash Entertainment to do them. when i first heard about...

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Cave Explorers *Warning! Extreme Underwater Sexiness* *Incest**Explicit**You Have Been Warned!*

posted by Red_Pyramid206

Kate and Lilly are college roommates who go exploring in an uncharted cave on the beach. But to their surprise, the tide begins to come in and they get lost. They have to think Quick in order to escape cause the water is rising....

"So Kate who told u about this cave?" Lilly said, following her roommate/sister. Kate, who was a Junior, grinned. "My friend who explores caves all the time, Scar remember?" Kate said. She wore a sports bra and a short sleeve t-shirt with skinny, tight jeans. "Kate, don't u wonder if guys stare at your ezel all the time?" Lilly said. "Hell, I want guys to stare...