It is a jaar after Tdwt and Duncan and Gwen are still together. In Courtneys’ side she still want her payback .
-FLASHBACK-
One dag Gwen was in Leshawnas’ house and was going to spend the night there. Duncan was watching the TV when he had a message from his lawyers that he had to pay them then he went mad because he hadn’t expect that and he gave all his money for buying his new car so he decided to loosen up in a bar.
When he’s arrived he noticed a familiar shadow sitting door the bar. Her onyx eyes were deep in pain, her hair was curly and she was drinking some jus and in her hand was her PDA.
Duncan POV
When I saw her my jaw dropped to the floor and my eyes doubled their size because she was wearing knee high leather boots, fishnets, a schoolgirl's red skirt, a studded belt, and a black tank top, boven that showed off some midriff and a decent amount of cleavage. She had left the makeup very simple except for her smoldering eyes .
‘that girl was Gwen of I was simply dreaming? Is that my girlfriend?’ those vragen passed door my mind but I was sure that girl wasn’t Gwen because she was supposed to be at her friends’ house she don’t have any PDA and finally she wasn’t tanned like that hot girl . I mean that girl. (He corrected his self).
I decide to sit door her side then I drank some vodka(a lot of wodka till he got drunk.) I had totally forgotten the girl who was sitting door my side till she dropped the alcohol sap all over my jacket.
“I am sorry” she told me lazily.
“No matter” I replied her as lazily as her .
When I turned my face I saw Courtney, that girl was from the beginning Courtney my ex.
“What are u doing here?” I asked her.
“Duncan? It is you? “She replied.
“Who u want else princess? Wait a minuut you’re drunk?”
“Yeah maybe but you’re drunk too . I knew it when I looked at your blue eyes ….and please don’t call me princess” then she giggled loudly .
“Why are u laughing? Are u laughing at me? “
“Kind of …..But for real I am laughing because it was necessary for me and u to be drunk after all those years to have a similar point.”
“And what is that similar point?”
“Both of us are drunk.” Then she giggled again.
I didn’t make out what she was saying but her laugh was so warm that I laughed too.
She was drunk , and sad ( it was clear in her eyes)there was something wrong.
“What’s wrong with u ? Are u OK? ” I asked her.
“Hmm yeah I have some problems….and my hart-, hart couldn’t handle it because he is already broken.”
‘Why is it already broken?’ I thought loudly.
“It is broken door u Duncan, remember?”
When I’ve heard those words I had been in shock then I said: “ Can I feel if it still beaten of not?” (Ok it was a rhetoric vraag I know)
I putted my hand on her chest and felt her hart-, hart beating faster than ever .
“Why is it beating so fast?” I asked.
Maybe…. Maybe because of your presence door my side.” She stuttered shyly then blushed.
‘Am I dreaming of she’s just told me that she loves me after all that time?’ I thought surprised.
Courtney POV
‘Oh my god! Why I’ve zei that?’ I thought.’ I am over him now, I think, I mean I am sure’
“Court…”
“What?” I wasn’t expecting what he is going to continue his sentence with.
“Court…I am sorry a-about what happened in-in TDWT …. I had never meant to-to hurt u “ he stuttered. “I think…I mean I am sure that I am in love with…….”
-END OF THE FLASHBACK –
Courtney POV
In the volgende morning I was sleeping on something so comfortable, something so warm, something … ‘Wait a minuut why am I sleeping on “something” and not in my bed?
commentaar please and be gentle cause this is my first fiction, and don't forget to wait for the part 2 !
see u!
-FLASHBACK-
One dag Gwen was in Leshawnas’ house and was going to spend the night there. Duncan was watching the TV when he had a message from his lawyers that he had to pay them then he went mad because he hadn’t expect that and he gave all his money for buying his new car so he decided to loosen up in a bar.
When he’s arrived he noticed a familiar shadow sitting door the bar. Her onyx eyes were deep in pain, her hair was curly and she was drinking some jus and in her hand was her PDA.
Duncan POV
When I saw her my jaw dropped to the floor and my eyes doubled their size because she was wearing knee high leather boots, fishnets, a schoolgirl's red skirt, a studded belt, and a black tank top, boven that showed off some midriff and a decent amount of cleavage. She had left the makeup very simple except for her smoldering eyes .
‘that girl was Gwen of I was simply dreaming? Is that my girlfriend?’ those vragen passed door my mind but I was sure that girl wasn’t Gwen because she was supposed to be at her friends’ house she don’t have any PDA and finally she wasn’t tanned like that hot girl . I mean that girl. (He corrected his self).
I decide to sit door her side then I drank some vodka(a lot of wodka till he got drunk.) I had totally forgotten the girl who was sitting door my side till she dropped the alcohol sap all over my jacket.
“I am sorry” she told me lazily.
“No matter” I replied her as lazily as her .
When I turned my face I saw Courtney, that girl was from the beginning Courtney my ex.
“What are u doing here?” I asked her.
“Duncan? It is you? “She replied.
“Who u want else princess? Wait a minuut you’re drunk?”
“Yeah maybe but you’re drunk too . I knew it when I looked at your blue eyes ….and please don’t call me princess” then she giggled loudly .
“Why are u laughing? Are u laughing at me? “
“Kind of …..But for real I am laughing because it was necessary for me and u to be drunk after all those years to have a similar point.”
“And what is that similar point?”
“Both of us are drunk.” Then she giggled again.
I didn’t make out what she was saying but her laugh was so warm that I laughed too.
She was drunk , and sad ( it was clear in her eyes)there was something wrong.
“What’s wrong with u ? Are u OK? ” I asked her.
“Hmm yeah I have some problems….and my hart-, hart couldn’t handle it because he is already broken.”
‘Why is it already broken?’ I thought loudly.
“It is broken door u Duncan, remember?”
When I’ve heard those words I had been in shock then I said: “ Can I feel if it still beaten of not?” (Ok it was a rhetoric vraag I know)
I putted my hand on her chest and felt her hart-, hart beating faster than ever .
“Why is it beating so fast?” I asked.
Maybe…. Maybe because of your presence door my side.” She stuttered shyly then blushed.
‘Am I dreaming of she’s just told me that she loves me after all that time?’ I thought surprised.
Courtney POV
‘Oh my god! Why I’ve zei that?’ I thought.’ I am over him now, I think, I mean I am sure’
“Court…”
“What?” I wasn’t expecting what he is going to continue his sentence with.
“Court…I am sorry a-about what happened in-in TDWT …. I had never meant to-to hurt u “ he stuttered. “I think…I mean I am sure that I am in love with…….”
-END OF THE FLASHBACK –
Courtney POV
In the volgende morning I was sleeping on something so comfortable, something so warm, something … ‘Wait a minuut why am I sleeping on “something” and not in my bed?
commentaar please and be gentle cause this is my first fiction, and don't forget to wait for the part 2 !
see u!
~in hallways with Calvin and Courtney~
Calvin: HOW COULD u THINK THAT IT WAS OK FOR u TO DANCE WITH DUNCAN TO THAT SAME SONG!?!?!?
Courtney: well excuse me but i didn't think that i needed your permission.
Calvin: *pins her to lockers*
Courtney: OMG Calvin!!?!
Calvin: *slams her to wall*
Courtney: *falls to ground*
Calvin: oh crap....what did i just do?!
Courtney: *still on ground*
Calvin: get up....please.
Duncan: *walks to hallway and sees Courtney on floor* WTF IS GOING ON HERE!?
Calvin: oh she just fainted.
Duncan: your'e lying.
Calvin: no.....it's the truth.
Duncan: i saw it.
Calvin:.............how did u see it?
Duncan: i didn't. i heard the slam.
Calvin: so?
Duncan: do u have a cell phone on you?
Calvin: wtf? why do u need that?
Duncan: To call an ambulance. my dad is a cop. he taught me all the 911 signals.
Calvin: *sighs* fine. BUT i expect to have my cell phone back.
Duncan: *calls 911*
~at hospital~
Calvin: HOW COULD u THINK THAT IT WAS OK FOR u TO DANCE WITH DUNCAN TO THAT SAME SONG!?!?!?
Courtney: well excuse me but i didn't think that i needed your permission.
Calvin: *pins her to lockers*
Courtney: OMG Calvin!!?!
Calvin: *slams her to wall*
Courtney: *falls to ground*
Calvin: oh crap....what did i just do?!
Courtney: *still on ground*
Calvin: get up....please.
Duncan: *walks to hallway and sees Courtney on floor* WTF IS GOING ON HERE!?
Calvin: oh she just fainted.
Duncan: your'e lying.
Calvin: no.....it's the truth.
Duncan: i saw it.
Calvin:.............how did u see it?
Duncan: i didn't. i heard the slam.
Calvin: so?
Duncan: do u have a cell phone on you?
Calvin: wtf? why do u need that?
Duncan: To call an ambulance. my dad is a cop. he taught me all the 911 signals.
Calvin: *sighs* fine. BUT i expect to have my cell phone back.
Duncan: *calls 911*
~at hospital~
Okay I'm curious as to what u readers want.I only have 1 commentaar for my new chapter and its been 2 days.I don't know if i'M just impatient of if my story really sucks.I know most of u rpobably like it and don't commentaar but,I have a low self esteem and when i don't see commentaren i don't feel too confident to continue because i think no one will read them.My WHY DO u LIKE HER story is the most populair now.And that was one of the first ones I did.Now I think I peeked too early.
Anyway,it helps me to see meer commentaren about my stories to continue.SO please comment!PLEASE!NO one make fun of me please!
Anyway,it helps me to see meer commentaren about my stories to continue.SO please comment!PLEASE!NO one make fun of me please!
Courtney-um hallo so how u doing Duncan-fine fine very nice Duncan-hey can i talk to u in private Courtney-sure sure they walk to a a hallway Trent -im gonna go listen to them be right back dudes .... Duncan-so Courtney um I broke up with Gwen Courtney-why u guys were perfect for each other Duncan-we were cause u were really mean and mad Courtney-i was but then i gusse i got over u Duncan-u did Courtney-i dont know how but i guess i did Duncan-look im sorry if i hert u so would u like to be um Courtney-to still be vrienden thatll be nice Duncan-sure we can but i ment meer than vrienden Courtney-oh u mean boyfriend and girlfriend Duncan-yeah Courtney-but What will be diffrent this time Duncan-look will be honest and not crazy I just want to be with u Courtney-really? Duncan-really then they kiss
Narrators POV:
Duncan found Courtney and left Steve unconces and went back to the wedding (this only took like 5 min.)Do u Duncan Paine Take Courtney bloem to be your ofley wedded wife...I do and do u Courtney bloem Take Duncan Paine to be your ofley wedded husbind.....I do....not
just kidding I do. Then with the power invested in me I now pronunce u man and wife u may now kiss the bride.
Duncans POV:
With plesher.This is the best dag of my life.
Courtneys POV: This is the best dag ever.
Narrators POV:
When they got home pagina they poped open a bottle of shapane and watched films on cable.
Duncan found Courtney and left Steve unconces and went back to the wedding (this only took like 5 min.)Do u Duncan Paine Take Courtney bloem to be your ofley wedded wife...I do and do u Courtney bloem Take Duncan Paine to be your ofley wedded husbind.....I do....not
just kidding I do. Then with the power invested in me I now pronunce u man and wife u may now kiss the bride.
Duncans POV:
With plesher.This is the best dag of my life.
Courtneys POV: This is the best dag ever.
Narrators POV:
When they got home pagina they poped open a bottle of shapane and watched films on cable.
Okay; This.. May possibly sound wierd. But! It's kinda related. So.. I was reading Twilight. Then; All of the sudden... The love driehoek popped into my mind. Do u know how Edward is protective, somewhat strict about Bella, and who she hangs out with? Well... Edward is like a male version of Courtney. then; Theres... Gwen. -_-. Gwen is layed back; Protective when she wants to be; and knows how to have fun. See? Jacob's a male version if Gwen—Not goth though. Then, Bella is a female version of Duncan. u see how in NewMoon; she got into tons of trouble? And; Thats how Duncan is.
Now.. What do ya think?
Now.. What do ya think?