~~~~~~~~~~~at spa~~~~~~~~~~~
Lindsay: ahhhhhhhhh did i mention that i love spas?
Bridgette: u might've zei it once of twice.
Courtney: of 30 times.
Hadar: but who can blame her?
Courtney: true..
~~~~~~~~~~~~a few hours later with all girls~~~~~
Bridgette: *gasps* Courtney...you look amazing!
Gwen: Duncan's going to faint harder than in TDA.
Courtney: seriously?
Lindsay and Hadar: totally!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~at prom~~~~~~~~~~~
Courtney: *comes in*
Duncan: u look....wow.
Gwen: i think he likes it. of forgot how to talk.
Courtney: thank you.
Calvin: Courtney....you look beautiful.
Duncan: *to Courtney* u really are a princess!
Courtney: let's just dance.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~to be continued~~~~~~~~~~~~
Lindsay: ahhhhhhhhh did i mention that i love spas?
Bridgette: u might've zei it once of twice.
Courtney: of 30 times.
Hadar: but who can blame her?
Courtney: true..
~~~~~~~~~~~~a few hours later with all girls~~~~~
Bridgette: *gasps* Courtney...you look amazing!
Gwen: Duncan's going to faint harder than in TDA.
Courtney: seriously?
Lindsay and Hadar: totally!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~at prom~~~~~~~~~~~
Courtney: *comes in*
Duncan: u look....wow.
Gwen: i think he likes it. of forgot how to talk.
Courtney: thank you.
Calvin: Courtney....you look beautiful.
Duncan: *to Courtney* u really are a princess!
Courtney: let's just dance.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~to be continued~~~~~~~~~~~~
~in hallways with Calvin and Courtney~
Calvin: HOW COULD u THINK THAT IT WAS OK FOR u TO DANCE WITH DUNCAN TO THAT SAME SONG!?!?!?
Courtney: well excuse me but i didn't think that i needed your permission.
Calvin: *pins her to lockers*
Courtney: OMG Calvin!!?!
Calvin: *slams her to wall*
Courtney: *falls to ground*
Calvin: oh crap....what did i just do?!
Courtney: *still on ground*
Calvin: get up....please.
Duncan: *walks to hallway and sees Courtney on floor* WTF IS GOING ON HERE!?
Calvin: oh she just fainted.
Duncan: your'e lying.
Calvin: no.....it's the truth.
Duncan: i saw it.
Calvin:.............how did u see it?
Duncan: i didn't. i heard the slam.
Calvin: so?
Duncan: do u have a cell phone on you?
Calvin: wtf? why do u need that?
Duncan: To call an ambulance. my dad is a cop. he taught me all the 911 signals.
Calvin: *sighs* fine. BUT i expect to have my cell phone back.
Duncan: *calls 911*
~at hospital~
Calvin: HOW COULD u THINK THAT IT WAS OK FOR u TO DANCE WITH DUNCAN TO THAT SAME SONG!?!?!?
Courtney: well excuse me but i didn't think that i needed your permission.
Calvin: *pins her to lockers*
Courtney: OMG Calvin!!?!
Calvin: *slams her to wall*
Courtney: *falls to ground*
Calvin: oh crap....what did i just do?!
Courtney: *still on ground*
Calvin: get up....please.
Duncan: *walks to hallway and sees Courtney on floor* WTF IS GOING ON HERE!?
Calvin: oh she just fainted.
Duncan: your'e lying.
Calvin: no.....it's the truth.
Duncan: i saw it.
Calvin:.............how did u see it?
Duncan: i didn't. i heard the slam.
Calvin: so?
Duncan: do u have a cell phone on you?
Calvin: wtf? why do u need that?
Duncan: To call an ambulance. my dad is a cop. he taught me all the 911 signals.
Calvin: *sighs* fine. BUT i expect to have my cell phone back.
Duncan: *calls 911*
~at hospital~
Okay I'm curious as to what u readers want.I only have 1 commentaar for my new chapter and its been 2 days.I don't know if i'M just impatient of if my story really sucks.I know most of u rpobably like it and don't commentaar but,I have a low self esteem and when i don't see commentaren i don't feel too confident to continue because i think no one will read them.My WHY DO u LIKE HER story is the most populair now.And that was one of the first ones I did.Now I think I peeked too early.
Anyway,it helps me to see meer commentaren about my stories to continue.SO please comment!PLEASE!NO one make fun of me please!
Anyway,it helps me to see meer commentaren about my stories to continue.SO please comment!PLEASE!NO one make fun of me please!
Courtney-um hallo so how u doing Duncan-fine fine very nice Duncan-hey can i talk to u in private Courtney-sure sure they walk to a a hallway Trent -im gonna go listen to them be right back dudes .... Duncan-so Courtney um I broke up with Gwen Courtney-why u guys were perfect for each other Duncan-we were cause u were really mean and mad Courtney-i was but then i gusse i got over u Duncan-u did Courtney-i dont know how but i guess i did Duncan-look im sorry if i hert u so would u like to be um Courtney-to still be vrienden thatll be nice Duncan-sure we can but i ment meer than vrienden Courtney-oh u mean boyfriend and girlfriend Duncan-yeah Courtney-but What will be diffrent this time Duncan-look will be honest and not crazy I just want to be with u Courtney-really? Duncan-really then they kiss
Narrators POV:
Duncan found Courtney and left Steve unconces and went back to the wedding (this only took like 5 min.)Do u Duncan Paine Take Courtney bloem to be your ofley wedded wife...I do and do u Courtney bloem Take Duncan Paine to be your ofley wedded husbind.....I do....not
just kidding I do. Then with the power invested in me I now pronunce u man and wife u may now kiss the bride.
Duncans POV:
With plesher.This is the best dag of my life.
Courtneys POV: This is the best dag ever.
Narrators POV:
When they got home pagina they poped open a bottle of shapane and watched films on cable.
Duncan found Courtney and left Steve unconces and went back to the wedding (this only took like 5 min.)Do u Duncan Paine Take Courtney bloem to be your ofley wedded wife...I do and do u Courtney bloem Take Duncan Paine to be your ofley wedded husbind.....I do....not
just kidding I do. Then with the power invested in me I now pronunce u man and wife u may now kiss the bride.
Duncans POV:
With plesher.This is the best dag of my life.
Courtneys POV: This is the best dag ever.
Narrators POV:
When they got home pagina they poped open a bottle of shapane and watched films on cable.
Okay; This.. May possibly sound wierd. But! It's kinda related. So.. I was reading Twilight. Then; All of the sudden... The love driehoek popped into my mind. Do u know how Edward is protective, somewhat strict about Bella, and who she hangs out with? Well... Edward is like a male version of Courtney. then; Theres... Gwen. -_-. Gwen is layed back; Protective when she wants to be; and knows how to have fun. See? Jacob's a male version if Gwen—Not goth though. Then, Bella is a female version of Duncan. u see how in NewMoon; she got into tons of trouble? And; Thats how Duncan is.
Now.. What do ya think?
Now.. What do ya think?