Why is it some of us seem to lose our steam of put too much in and get the story all confused. We start out all steady and calm and then when we go further in. It's like we stuck ourselves in a leaky boot to go fishing and found ourselves in one hell of a storm and of course no fish. Just sucks and that is if u don't get sea-sick in the course of it all. Now I try to publiceer this and like hitting a uithangbord it won't go through. Apparently, I'm not talkative enough so please bare with me.
Tell me what your think of my story good of bad, I know it gets crazy confusing I'm trying to sort it out. But I do look for ways to improvise of improve. of if u want to hack this of that to add to your own story, be my guest. It's not like I'm Kubo, he has deadlines to make. Gives me shivers just thinking about it. To be pressured into cracking your brain to meet a deadline instead of having the grace to see the image of the storyline come together, than again some people thrive on that kind of stress.