it this ok (my mj poem)

in the literacy class u had to make a poem about our favoriete artist. i suck at poems so i wanted to ask if this was ok it's ok if u don't like it i'm just glade i was able to write a poem
it's called never forget
we miss u everyday. Oh how people wish u never went away. u were one of the most precious gifts we'll ever know, but i guess it was your time to go. u gave us years of beautiful music. that we'll always love, and we'll never forget that sparkly white glove. it's true u were one of a kind. i'll never forget being six and watching u moonwalk across a stage. i knew u were extraordinary at the age. now years later u are gone, but it's ok because everyone moves on to that better place. a place were u don't have to deal with lies and hate. it's true u will be strongly missed, becasue when michael jackson died the world cried, but we'll never forget