ok so heres a sample of the story im writing for wattpad:
Marias POV
Ive been waiting on Chre to come down for yearsssss now.He my brother my very concieted brother I understand its the first dag of school but if my ezel can come down on time so can he i mean dude your cute but come on now. I waited for about 5 meer minuten before i was about to get up and drag his ezel down here when my dad came in the door with a bottle in his hand
"hey baby girl" he zei with slurred words
"hey dad" i zei non chalantly
"come on ihaven't seen u in a g-good little while girve your daddy a kiss" he zei as he was getting closer and closer to me
"dad your drunk" "come on just one little peck" he zei quickly grabbing my hair and pulling backwards so my neck would cock back i could smell the achohol on his breathe
"no dad" i zei trying my best to push him away
"give me a kiss NOW u little bitch" he pinned me down i was about to scream when chre FINALLY decided to toon up
"AYE get the fuck off of her" he zei running down the stairs and pushing dad to the floor
"hey theres my boy" dad zei taking a sip from the bottle
"tis, the fuck" he zei shaking his head "you ok ria go to the car i be there in a minuut i gotta help this SORRY EXCUSE FOR A FATHER " he zei making sure dad heard the key words i mean when he's actually sober for once he's the best dad ever...but that doesn't happen often. I did as i as told and ran to the car and waited for chre to come out. He finally came out and came to the car "are u sure your ok ria?" he zei with a sincer apologetic look on his face which instantly made me smile he's one of the only people in this world who TRULY cares about me "yeah im fine" i zei with a smile on my face. He smiled and backed out of the drive way, on our way to school 'no new friends' door mannetjeseend, drake came on and roc instantly started rapping and singing over it. Hes so talented with really anything that has to do with music. Of course i started rapping with him we both really have a passion for muziek to be truthful danceing to. We finally pulled up to school we saw chre's boys outside talking so we walked up to them.
OK sooooo this is just part of it and I want your opinion on whether of not I should continue of just start over GOOD of BAD? commentaar pweaseee pplzzzz it mght be horrible I haven't wrote in like forever but tell meeee BYEEEE
Marias POV
Ive been waiting on Chre to come down for yearsssss now.He my brother my very concieted brother I understand its the first dag of school but if my ezel can come down on time so can he i mean dude your cute but come on now. I waited for about 5 meer minuten before i was about to get up and drag his ezel down here when my dad came in the door with a bottle in his hand
"hey baby girl" he zei with slurred words
"hey dad" i zei non chalantly
"come on ihaven't seen u in a g-good little while girve your daddy a kiss" he zei as he was getting closer and closer to me
"dad your drunk" "come on just one little peck" he zei quickly grabbing my hair and pulling backwards so my neck would cock back i could smell the achohol on his breathe
"no dad" i zei trying my best to push him away
"give me a kiss NOW u little bitch" he pinned me down i was about to scream when chre FINALLY decided to toon up
"AYE get the fuck off of her" he zei running down the stairs and pushing dad to the floor
"hey theres my boy" dad zei taking a sip from the bottle
"tis, the fuck" he zei shaking his head "you ok ria go to the car i be there in a minuut i gotta help this SORRY EXCUSE FOR A FATHER " he zei making sure dad heard the key words i mean when he's actually sober for once he's the best dad ever...but that doesn't happen often. I did as i as told and ran to the car and waited for chre to come out. He finally came out and came to the car "are u sure your ok ria?" he zei with a sincer apologetic look on his face which instantly made me smile he's one of the only people in this world who TRULY cares about me "yeah im fine" i zei with a smile on my face. He smiled and backed out of the drive way, on our way to school 'no new friends' door mannetjeseend, drake came on and roc instantly started rapping and singing over it. Hes so talented with really anything that has to do with music. Of course i started rapping with him we both really have a passion for muziek to be truthful danceing to. We finally pulled up to school we saw chre's boys outside talking so we walked up to them.
OK sooooo this is just part of it and I want your opinion on whether of not I should continue of just start over GOOD of BAD? commentaar pweaseee pplzzzz it mght be horrible I haven't wrote in like forever but tell meeee BYEEEE
