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Lightning was striking below. Thank Celestia all the ponies were veilig inside. I was flying close enough to feel the heat of the lightning. To hear the loudness of the thunder. I loved it. Just then I got a brilliant idea. I remember AJ zei that it was too dangerous to stay at appel, apple Acres because of the trees; so I decided to run through the Everfree Forest! It's, like I zei before, brilliant! I landed at the the entrance of it. "Bring it on", I zei to myself. I started running through the forest as fast as I could, lightning bolts striking a few trees that were in front of me.

Not dangerous enough.

I started flapping my wings and went closes to the boom leaves. This time, a lightning bolt nearly missed my face.

Awesome.

Just then, I flew higher. I flew over the boom tops. The lightning bolts were still striking. "Is that the best u got", I shouted to the clouds again. As I turned my attention back to the the boom tops, a lightning bolt hit me right in my wing. I screamed and did a nose dive.
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"Then my world went black."