Ok so my fan fic will be done in big chapters so there will be around 5 in total maybe more. Please have a read though, I put quite a bit into this!
Twilight gazed upon the stars, she watched them flicker and twirl in the endless night sky. But as she watched one ster caught her attention.
"Spike?" She called turning towards her faithful assistant, he was categorising her books.
"Yeah Twilight?" "Can u get my telescope!" "Yeah yeah in a second"
"Now Spike!" Twilight stamped her hoof, "Ok geez!" Spike ran upstairs and came back in seconden cradling a fancy telescope in his claws.
"Here it is!" "Thankyou Spike." Twilight adjusted her telescope; she knew the position had to be perfect. "Ah ha!" She shouted triumphantly when she finished.
She stared through it's lens and gasped; "Spike u better have a look at this!" Spike toddled over; "What is it Twilight?"
"Tell me spike, why this ster has the imprint of a mare on it."
"We have to tell Celestia!" "Your right Spike! Take a note:
'Dear Princess Celestia,
Today I discovered a odd ster today in our evening sky: it has the imprint of a mare on it much like when luna was on the moon. I was wondering why this ster was there and it's origin.
Your Faithful Student, Twilight Sparkle.'
Send it off Spike!" "Ok!" Spike sent the letter off in one blow.
Twilight waited anxiously for the princess' response, but it seemed like she didn't want to answer it.
Finally, "Buurrfp" Spike breathed out a letter, "Here it is!" He passed it to Twilight whom, steadily read it out;
"Dear Twilight Sparkle,
That is the Dawn Star. But there is something very special about that star, and at the same time haunting. Let me tell u a story.
Once Upon a Time,
A little pegasus had psychic powers, and an Alicorn realised her potential. The Alicorn invited her to her palace to study, the filly agreed and soon she was studying. But one dag an evil creature came and took the little pegasus' kindness away, leaving only a evil body. The pegasus realised the evil would soon consume her and pleaded to be sent away. So the Alicorn sent the little child away to a ster where she will sleep for eternity."
Twilight stood there speechless, was this story true? She looked at Spike who just stood there gaping.
Twilight gazed upon the stars, she watched them flicker and twirl in the endless night sky. But as she watched one ster caught her attention.
"Spike?" She called turning towards her faithful assistant, he was categorising her books.
"Yeah Twilight?" "Can u get my telescope!" "Yeah yeah in a second"
"Now Spike!" Twilight stamped her hoof, "Ok geez!" Spike ran upstairs and came back in seconden cradling a fancy telescope in his claws.
"Here it is!" "Thankyou Spike." Twilight adjusted her telescope; she knew the position had to be perfect. "Ah ha!" She shouted triumphantly when she finished.
She stared through it's lens and gasped; "Spike u better have a look at this!" Spike toddled over; "What is it Twilight?"
"Tell me spike, why this ster has the imprint of a mare on it."
"We have to tell Celestia!" "Your right Spike! Take a note:
'Dear Princess Celestia,
Today I discovered a odd ster today in our evening sky: it has the imprint of a mare on it much like when luna was on the moon. I was wondering why this ster was there and it's origin.
Your Faithful Student, Twilight Sparkle.'
Send it off Spike!" "Ok!" Spike sent the letter off in one blow.
Twilight waited anxiously for the princess' response, but it seemed like she didn't want to answer it.
Finally, "Buurrfp" Spike breathed out a letter, "Here it is!" He passed it to Twilight whom, steadily read it out;
"Dear Twilight Sparkle,
That is the Dawn Star. But there is something very special about that star, and at the same time haunting. Let me tell u a story.
Once Upon a Time,
A little pegasus had psychic powers, and an Alicorn realised her potential. The Alicorn invited her to her palace to study, the filly agreed and soon she was studying. But one dag an evil creature came and took the little pegasus' kindness away, leaving only a evil body. The pegasus realised the evil would soon consume her and pleaded to be sent away. So the Alicorn sent the little child away to a ster where she will sleep for eternity."
Twilight stood there speechless, was this story true? She looked at Spike who just stood there gaping.
as i looked around i noticed the forest looked alot like the one at home. it was simple getting there. and there it was. the lake surrounded door blue roses. a tear comes to my eye. i say.." thank u all, i really enjoyed my time here. u taught me how to be a true friend.ill never forget any of u ever". they say theyre goodbyes and i leap in the lake..... its been 5 months since that incident. me and my friend worked things out and iv not been depressed. one dag i was walkin home pagina and decided to visit the lake. the roses are all wilted and dead...but i decided to visit it one meer time. i arrive at the lake. i sit down. as i peer over the lake. a tear crosses my cheek as i see floating along the lakes surface a single....blue....rose......
THE END
THE END
Oh my goodness. u don't know my emotions right now. Here's a few things I LOVED about the royal wedding:
Lyra talked, the evil changlings, the twists and turns, the music, DJ PON3, the somewhat Disney-like plot, the darkness, the battles, the story, the dialouge, the dresses, Shining Armor, and Luna.
My emotions. My brain can't take all of this amazingness.
It was just so...Amazing.
I can't say there was something I didn't like because that's a lie.
I didn't see a thing coming. They went all out with this and it was just beautiful and the voice-acting was spot-on too.
My head is going to explode.
Thanks for reading!
~shadirby
Lyra talked, the evil changlings, the twists and turns, the music, DJ PON3, the somewhat Disney-like plot, the darkness, the battles, the story, the dialouge, the dresses, Shining Armor, and Luna.
My emotions. My brain can't take all of this amazingness.
It was just so...Amazing.
I can't say there was something I didn't like because that's a lie.
I didn't see a thing coming. They went all out with this and it was just beautiful and the voice-acting was spot-on too.
My head is going to explode.
Thanks for reading!
~shadirby
Hello everypony, this is triq267. I would like to apologize for the behavior of ilikefrogs22, also known door people who have met him as Jason. He did not even know about this website until he heard me talk about it, and he has been plotting on doing something to piss us off ever since. I would like to blame it all on him, but I can't. He hates MLP for two reasons. The first is that he's an @ss. The seconde is that he was mad at me for calling Unicorn Planet gay, and then admitting to being a brony the volgende week. I'm sorry for letting this troll among u and I hope u all can forgive me.
Sincerely,
triq267
Sincerely,
triq267