Twilight Sparkle

Wheels of Evil – Part 11


The doorbell rang. The turquoise unicorn idled on the porch for several minutes. There was no answer. She rang the doorbell again and again. After a while, the door opened for a bit. Only for a gap…

“Oh, Lyra… I didn’t expect u today…”

“Hello, Doctor! I came to see if there’s anything I can do to help.” Lyra explains happily. “How’s the reconstruction going?”

“Good… Good…” the brown earth pony antwoorden abstractedly.

“Oh, great! Sooo… Can I take a look?”

“No… I… this is a very delicate stage right now… listen, I’m very busy…”...

Ok before u read the fanfic I want u guys to know that I will only be posting the first chapter as of right now. I know I geplaatst it a while geleden but I made some changes to it. I also geplaatst it to get some feedback. This is only the first chapter of the first 1/4 of the story. The amount of pages in the first 1/4 of the story is actually 20 pages, so thats why I am posting it chapter door chapter. Feel free to tell me what u think and If u have any suggestions of see any errors please let me know. I am turning this in as part of one of my assignments in school and I would like to make it...