Platypus i couldn't find where to post my poem so i am doing it here

Marthamarie posted on Jul 21, 2009 at 06:44PM
SWEET SWEET PLATYPUS

Sweet sweet platypus on the river bank,
having a nice day swimming in your tank,

fur of an otter bill of a duck,
swimming around and around in the muck,

tail of a beaver body of an otter,
diving in the water as the sun gets hotter.

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een jaar geleden Bubaloozy said…
I don't understand how he is on the riverbank yet in a tank. What's that about? Also, swimming around and around must really suck sounds alot better. At least the last part makes sense. All in all, a pretty poor effort.