WHAT DO u THINK OF THIS POEM?

He's like a flower,so gentle and sensitive.
He needs a light,he needs a water,he needs a care.
He's so sweet and mysterious,he never lets anybody close to his minds,anybody but me. He gives me a little part of his soul to keep,to cherish.
And yet,he's so lonely,trapped inside his own world,which no one else understands.
But he sees everything,he sees the hatred into the eyes of the people who judge.
And yet,he's different,he feels the weakness of the others,and it hurts.
He's trying to be a better man,but arrogant,no.
He asks no help from the others,because that's who he is,a man who lives in his own world,cold,alone and empty.
His words are like the most beautiful song,you can feel the dept in in,his eyes are so bright,you feel calm while u look into them.
And he's like a poison,won't let u go,but yet so cold,himself.
You're trying to reach his soul,but u fail,he gives u only that u need to see,but yet the cold guy like he is long for the deepest love and understanding.
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TDIFan960 posted een jaar geleden
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Yes.
irena83 posted een jaar geleden
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Oh yeah,it is possible.
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Pikafan32 said:
What a pleasant poem. i particularly enjoy poems like this, ones that talk about love in hating way. of as I dubbed them 'Ripping Menders'.

It was very enjoyable and fluent to read, the minor mistakes wouldn't be noticed door anyone but an overeacting perfectionists.

I hope no one says anything but good about this poetic wonder!

- Re Re
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Oh thank u so much. Well,actually i have noticed several mistakes during the reading. lol
irena83 posted een jaar geleden
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I saw them too but I meant the minor ones like for example a comma splice. Spelling mistakes and others I tought u would notice... Anyways it was still delicious to read! <3 XD
Pikafan32 posted een jaar geleden
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Well,i did notice after i had finished the poem.lol Anyway thanks,i appreciate it.
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Dwolf247 said:
I love it. It's beautiful. u made it?
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Thank you. Oh yes,i wrote this poem.
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