I NEED HELP!!!!

ok i am in the making of making a story called mysterious love can u guys please please help me door messageing me so i can give u a link to the first chapter and then can u please commentaar on it of come back too the message and tell me what u think of u can just answer this vraag and say "can i please have a link?" and i will message u and give u a link please help me i need help i dont feel that people no it exists enuff. [sry if i am miss spelling a lot lol.]

and if u like the first i will send u a link too the seconde chapter and so on and so fourth.

there are 8 chapters so far.