Hello Guys This Is A Song I Wrote ..... :) MY First Song Ever so Please Give Me Your Opinion Either Is Good of Bad i Understand ... Thanks In Advance :)

[Verse 1]
Yeah
Its been so long
Since i rided through the storm
The night will come
Without u hon'
In this 4 long corner home
All door my own
Dont get it wrong
I did the thing
And now im alone
Paying the price
I wish we could get aside
Till then i pray the god
U'll be alright...

[No Ref atm.. i couldnt come up with a good one :( :(]

[Verse 2]
I know its impossible
To get u back
But your equal to my life
meer important than this
meer important than that
So i'llsing for u girl
Till i pass
And leave my will to someone else
Till he finish the quest
Cuz u dont deserve
To be on your own
Simple as that
Cuz u got my hart-, hart
And u aint giving it back....


[Verse 3]
u leaving me alone
Laying down on this bed
Thinking of what we had
Im becoming even meer sad
u becoming mad
That's all that can be said
u jsut droping me dead
So go ahead
Tell your new boy
Whats has been unsaid
How my blood is kers-, cherry red
How u killed my soul
Without letting me understand
The roses i gave u 2 years geleden
Now are back to my hand
Like im banned
This wasnt planned
My life now is like a dead poker hand
I need a friend
To put this shit
To an END..

And Of The Song :P ope U liked It :)