What do u think of my fan made manga

Well there's a volgende page coming up and if u can't read it
Snow: why is it so hard
Snow: my powers are already hard enough but protecting an Iceland
Snow: what should I do
???: well my dear
Snow:what the!?
???: it's so simple
Ok first of all snow is a angel well typically an ice angel and the other person well I'll tell u when I make the volgende page if u hate spoilers