Who Makes The Best Renesmee?

CHAPTER 12: intruder.

"Well, well well, what do we have here," a tall man with brown hair hair spoke.

"State your buiness and leave," Carlisle zei harshly.

"Well as u might already know," he zei looking at alice," I came for the girl."

"well u may as well leave cause your not getting her," jacob growled and the rest of the oack sudenly appered in the doorway. He walked towards me and touched my arm. Everyone growled and jacob brought me closer.

"dont touch her," Jacob hissed and i could feel him starting to shake.

"I was just touching my future daughter," he smirked.

"She's not going anywhere,"...

I walked outside.It was breezy with sprinkles of rain.I saw nothing only a bag and a eekhoorn and was gonna turn away but saw a vampire volgende to me.I froze,I never fought another vampire before."Well,it is never to late to try,"a blond haired boy said,with ripped jeans and no shirt.It was obvious to see his six-pack.The vampire volgende to me smelled funny.I letted out a deep,low,and menacing sound.Where did that come from?I never growled before only when James was around.James,the name that pierced my soul.It gave me a boost of courage.I ran towards the vampire volgende to me to find it was a girl!!She...

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Math class
Renesmee's POV

Miss Smith our math teacher is very stupid,she uses a calculator for ever thing,My dad just says 'not every one is as smart as you',Me and Riley text all hour.At my tafel, tabel I sit with Gabe,the ster football player who is very smart,has really beautiful eyes and has ever girl drool over him.Well Ricky has lots of girls flirt with him and it bugs me.

My phone vibrated,which Means I got a new Text-
She is so freakin stupid,no wonder she has no husband-Riley
I giggle,Gabe...

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Chapter 3
Bella POV
-"No time left"


-When I look back now over my life and call to mind what I might have had simply for taking and did not take, my hart-, hart is like to break.-

My body theoretically had frozen for a longer time than it actually looked.
Reneesme would and will never kom bij them...
She couldn't be part of the strict,harsh royal family.
I instantly...

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Chapter 2
Reneesme POV
'Bad Moments'

-The doors we open and close each dag decide the lives we live.-


It was them...
All over, surrounding all the forest..again,but something was different on the look of all of the Volturi members.
They looked...tired,I'd never seen them this way before.A shiny light was behind them,I wondered what it was.
It looked as if it was their background...
It looked...

CHAPTER 2: Paul

I ran over to Alice.

"What happened!" I exclaimed.

"They weren't taken, they were hypmatized," she zei blankly.
I stood there in shock. How could this have happened? How could they of it get door my moms shield? Then I fainted.

"Renesmee, Renesmee!" I heard Jacob panic before I went unconscious. When I woke up I fell off the bed. Where am I? I thought and what am i wearing? I was wearing a very big tshirt with a picture with a wolf on it. OMG! Im wearing jacobs overhemd, shirt and im at Jacobs house!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I imediletly got out of a bed that wasn't mine and stomped down stairs....