Tell me if u see MS qualities in this new character.
Name-Festus Pyre
Age-28
Birth date-796 6CE*(1996)
*aging increased due to interdimensional travel*
Birthplace- San Fransisco, California
Eyes- brown
Hair- red
FATAL FLAWS-
is considered an outcast. Has ADHD and can rarely focus, and has shattered personalities due to a car crash when he was young.
Talents-
none of relevance to society. Can smith metal, but is mediocre at best.
Friends-
his only friend died in the car crash aforementioned.
Enemies-
most of the school. Most notable are the snooty twins "Maryland and Danithan Suella" the two have supposedly nothing wrong with their life.
Family- adoptive parent Robyn Nera. Did I mention the car crash? It was bad.
Other Notes- has created a fantasy world called "Nimea", often wishes it was true. Has suspicions, but cannot prove it. Robyn is very lazy and forces him to do everything for her. His old family was abusive too.
DID taco MAKE GARY SUE?
TELL MEEEE!
Name-Festus Pyre
Age-28
Birth date-796 6CE*(1996)
*aging increased due to interdimensional travel*
Birthplace- San Fransisco, California
Eyes- brown
Hair- red
FATAL FLAWS-
is considered an outcast. Has ADHD and can rarely focus, and has shattered personalities due to a car crash when he was young.
Talents-
none of relevance to society. Can smith metal, but is mediocre at best.
Friends-
his only friend died in the car crash aforementioned.
Enemies-
most of the school. Most notable are the snooty twins "Maryland and Danithan Suella" the two have supposedly nothing wrong with their life.
Family- adoptive parent Robyn Nera. Did I mention the car crash? It was bad.
Other Notes- has created a fantasy world called "Nimea", often wishes it was true. Has suspicions, but cannot prove it. Robyn is very lazy and forces him to do everything for her. His old family was abusive too.
DID taco MAKE GARY SUE?
TELL MEEEE!
Frost.
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Birthstone: Amethyst [February]
Boyfriend: Helix the wolf (image)
link
*Frosts picture is not online*
Frost is the twin daughter of Storm & Freeze, who died of heat stroke long ago.
Because Frost was born & her powers involve cold temperatures, she cannot be in heat for too long, if she does, she'll begin to feel weak.
If not cooled when weakend, Frost will begin to lose her sight & hearing. **
If not cooled door then, she'll be dead.
**If cooled door then, she'll go back to her normal, happy self**
Her eyes are a brilliant gold. Shes calm, loving and when angered, can mean instint death for her. Shes fragile, & cannot fight. Though shes tried, she admits that shes a lover, not a fighter.
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Birthstone: Amethyst [February]
Boyfriend: Helix the wolf (image)
link
*Frosts picture is not online*
Frost is the twin daughter of Storm & Freeze, who died of heat stroke long ago.
Because Frost was born & her powers involve cold temperatures, she cannot be in heat for too long, if she does, she'll begin to feel weak.
If not cooled when weakend, Frost will begin to lose her sight & hearing. **
If not cooled door then, she'll be dead.
**If cooled door then, she'll go back to her normal, happy self**
Her eyes are a brilliant gold. Shes calm, loving and when angered, can mean instint death for her. Shes fragile, & cannot fight. Though shes tried, she admits that shes a lover, not a fighter.
I got my time to sit down and do this today! Even though I zei tomorrow. For Rachel.
Gender: male
Name:Cooper (His agent name is Jenkins)
Age 20 turning 21 soon
Height 3.3
Weight: I'm not very good with weight so a healthy weight good for acrobatics ( for 20 jaar olds)
Powers: Can slow time but not for long. He can use chaos and that let's him do it longer but he doesn't know that.
Weapons he carries a sniper on his back
Abilities. Really good acrobat and using his sniper.
Species: Wolf
Appearance: his eyes are green, his hair is messy but doesn't go down (not like sonic's) including wolf like ears and two
black stripes over his cheek. Brown fur. He wears no clothes. (Only hanging his sniper over is right shoulder) he is a left handed person
But he has a furry chest that's quit similar to his vacht, bont colour but a whiter. Wears shadow like shoes just re coloured (your choice)
If it's not enough I'll write a backstory and tell me what I missed out.
Gender: male
Name:Cooper (His agent name is Jenkins)
Age 20 turning 21 soon
Height 3.3
Weight: I'm not very good with weight so a healthy weight good for acrobatics ( for 20 jaar olds)
Powers: Can slow time but not for long. He can use chaos and that let's him do it longer but he doesn't know that.
Weapons he carries a sniper on his back
Abilities. Really good acrobat and using his sniper.
Species: Wolf
Appearance: his eyes are green, his hair is messy but doesn't go down (not like sonic's) including wolf like ears and two
black stripes over his cheek. Brown fur. He wears no clothes. (Only hanging his sniper over is right shoulder) he is a left handed person
But he has a furry chest that's quit similar to his vacht, bont colour but a whiter. Wears shadow like shoes just re coloured (your choice)
If it's not enough I'll write a backstory and tell me what I missed out.