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--------------------------------------------------THAT NIGHT... It was alot worse for Zim since he didn't only have Gir sleeping on his head, but he also had Tak sleeping on his feet. He only got three hours of sleep. THE volgende MORNING.... "ZIM! GET UP, FATHEAD!" Tak shouted. she got an early start. "Wha?..." he said. "I MADE WAFFLES!" Gir said. "No. We must destroy this planet NOW!" Zim said. So, as much as Gir wanted to stay, they followed Zim to find Scourge. They heard someone shout, "HELP!" It was Scourge. "I'm tied to this big boom a-" They heard someone interupt him. "Put a sok in it! What did u do with the emeralds?" a red echidna said, and oddly enough, he put a sok in Scourge's mouth. "MMMPHHHH, Ptoo!" He spit the sok out. Zim, Tak, and Gir saw him. It was going to be pretty hard to get him with the croud surrounding saying, "Where are the emeralds?" "Attention! Attention!" Zim said. "SSSSHHHHHUUUUUUTTTT UUUUPPPPP!!!!" he shouted. He got their attention. "I have the emeralds! Now undo his straps!" He shouted. The croud untied him, and they were on the run. "CHAOS CONTROL!" they shouted. They were warped to the base. They found someone they had never seen before. "I've been spying on you. I know you're irken. Now give me the emeralds, of I will be forced to take them from you!" she said. "OOOHHH, we're so scared." Gir said. "You should be. because I'm a vampire!Elise the Vampire!" she said. Gir would've crapped his pants if he were wearing any. "Chaos Control!" they shouted. Elise was a vampire, so she could easily get to where they were going before them. "Chaos Spear!" they shouted. "You're going to need meer than that to kill a vampire." Another voice said. "The name's Yuri the Leolynx. Now give one of us the emeralds." she said. "Never!" Zim shouted. seconden later, the crowd chasing them appeared. They were so loud that it made Zim mad. Very mad. So mad that Zim turned black, his pupils faded, and he was in his dark form. "Zim, are u okay?" Tak said. "Run to the base, QUICKLY!" Dark Zim said. "Chaos Control!" Tak and Gir shouted. "Chaos.... BLAST!!" Dark Zim shouted. The crowd was blasted far away in an instant. He returned back into his regular form. "Wow." he said. Down at the base, they heard an explosion that sounded like a nuke exploding. "Ker-SPLODEH!" Gir said. "Chaos Control!" Zim shouted. He was back at the base.
TO BE CONTINUED....
Chapter 8 coming soon!
--------------------------------------------------THAT NIGHT... It was alot worse for Zim since he didn't only have Gir sleeping on his head, but he also had Tak sleeping on his feet. He only got three hours of sleep. THE volgende MORNING.... "ZIM! GET UP, FATHEAD!" Tak shouted. she got an early start. "Wha?..." he said. "I MADE WAFFLES!" Gir said. "No. We must destroy this planet NOW!" Zim said. So, as much as Gir wanted to stay, they followed Zim to find Scourge. They heard someone shout, "HELP!" It was Scourge. "I'm tied to this big boom a-" They heard someone interupt him. "Put a sok in it! What did u do with the emeralds?" a red echidna said, and oddly enough, he put a sok in Scourge's mouth. "MMMPHHHH, Ptoo!" He spit the sok out. Zim, Tak, and Gir saw him. It was going to be pretty hard to get him with the croud surrounding saying, "Where are the emeralds?" "Attention! Attention!" Zim said. "SSSSHHHHHUUUUUUTTTT UUUUPPPPP!!!!" he shouted. He got their attention. "I have the emeralds! Now undo his straps!" He shouted. The croud untied him, and they were on the run. "CHAOS CONTROL!" they shouted. They were warped to the base. They found someone they had never seen before. "I've been spying on you. I know you're irken. Now give me the emeralds, of I will be forced to take them from you!" she said. "OOOHHH, we're so scared." Gir said. "You should be. because I'm a vampire!Elise the Vampire!" she said. Gir would've crapped his pants if he were wearing any. "Chaos Control!" they shouted. Elise was a vampire, so she could easily get to where they were going before them. "Chaos Spear!" they shouted. "You're going to need meer than that to kill a vampire." Another voice said. "The name's Yuri the Leolynx. Now give one of us the emeralds." she said. "Never!" Zim shouted. seconden later, the crowd chasing them appeared. They were so loud that it made Zim mad. Very mad. So mad that Zim turned black, his pupils faded, and he was in his dark form. "Zim, are u okay?" Tak said. "Run to the base, QUICKLY!" Dark Zim said. "Chaos Control!" Tak and Gir shouted. "Chaos.... BLAST!!" Dark Zim shouted. The crowd was blasted far away in an instant. He returned back into his regular form. "Wow." he said. Down at the base, they heard an explosion that sounded like a nuke exploding. "Ker-SPLODEH!" Gir said. "Chaos Control!" Zim shouted. He was back at the base.
TO BE CONTINUED....
Chapter 8 coming soon!
Bullet The Hedgehog
Tell me if u see MS qualities in this new character.
Name-Festus Pyre
Age-28
Birth date-796 6CE*(1996)
*aging increased due to interdimensional travel*
Birthplace- San Fransisco, California
Eyes- brown
Hair- red
FATAL FLAWS-
is considered an outcast. Has ADHD and can rarely focus, and has shattered personalities due to a car crash when he was young.
Talents-
none of relevance to society. Can smith metal, but is mediocre at best.
Friends-
his only friend died in the car crash aforementioned.
Enemies-
most of the school. Most notable are the snooty twins "Maryland and Danithan Suella" the two have supposedly nothing wrong with their life.
Family- adoptive parent Robyn Nera. Did I mention the car crash? It was bad.
Other Notes- has created a fantasy world called "Nimea", often wishes it was true. Has suspicions, but cannot prove it. Robyn is very lazy and forces him to do everything for her. His old family was abusive too.
DID taco MAKE GARY SUE?
TELL MEEEE!
Name-Festus Pyre
Age-28
Birth date-796 6CE*(1996)
*aging increased due to interdimensional travel*
Birthplace- San Fransisco, California
Eyes- brown
Hair- red
FATAL FLAWS-
is considered an outcast. Has ADHD and can rarely focus, and has shattered personalities due to a car crash when he was young.
Talents-
none of relevance to society. Can smith metal, but is mediocre at best.
Friends-
his only friend died in the car crash aforementioned.
Enemies-
most of the school. Most notable are the snooty twins "Maryland and Danithan Suella" the two have supposedly nothing wrong with their life.
Family- adoptive parent Robyn Nera. Did I mention the car crash? It was bad.
Other Notes- has created a fantasy world called "Nimea", often wishes it was true. Has suspicions, but cannot prove it. Robyn is very lazy and forces him to do everything for her. His old family was abusive too.
DID taco MAKE GARY SUE?
TELL MEEEE!
slick's full attire
goud desert eagle(side arm)
commando assault rifle(primary)
intervention(sniper)
uzi(secondary)
wears(his overhemd, shirt but with longer sleeves and his pants have 2 ammo holds on each side 4 each gun.and a grey long scarf)
regular combat mes just the handle has his name on it
his military vehicle(a regular military humvee)
his regular person car(a red middle striped car with the left side black and the right side white.the middle of the front kap has his logo)
climbing boots
gloves(grey)
a special red edges sword
mystacal powers:
dark power
chaos shot,chaos blast(only when enraged)chaos control(only with a chaos emerald)
brand powers(only when 1 of his vrienden r hurt and the 1 that hurt the friend tries to burn him)
goud desert eagle(side arm)
commando assault rifle(primary)
intervention(sniper)
uzi(secondary)
wears(his overhemd, shirt but with longer sleeves and his pants have 2 ammo holds on each side 4 each gun.and a grey long scarf)
regular combat mes just the handle has his name on it
his military vehicle(a regular military humvee)
his regular person car(a red middle striped car with the left side black and the right side white.the middle of the front kap has his logo)
climbing boots
gloves(grey)
a special red edges sword
mystacal powers:
dark power
chaos shot,chaos blast(only when enraged)chaos control(only with a chaos emerald)
brand powers(only when 1 of his vrienden r hurt and the 1 that hurt the friend tries to burn him)
