"Emily, Emily. Wake up!"Sonic zei to Emily."What is it Sonic?" Emily said."I just want it to tell u that it's x-mist!"Sonic zei leaving. "Ok and?"Emily said."The presents are here u stupid bíćh!"Sonic zei leaving."Ok ok but volgende time don't yell at me u @$$hole!"Emily zei to Sonic who who was leaving."Ok but u should open your present." Sonic zei leaving only for Shane to come in."Emily,get out of your room."Shane zei in a sweet voice."Why should I!?" Emily said."Because your acting like your sister Jisseca." Shane zei in a much meer sweeter voice(if u know what I mean)"You know the meer u talk sweet to me, the meer I get meer meaner!"Emily zei in a hush voice."I know that." Shane zei in a sweet sweet voice."SHUT UP SHUT UP SHUT UP SHUT UP SHUT UP!"Emily zei a really really mad voice."You know if u want it me to go u should it have told me ."Shane zei in a nice voice."Shane I'am sorry." Emily zei in a almost whispering voice."It's ok Emily, it's u that I'm sorry about you."Shane zei in ummm in a sad voice."Ok, but I mean about you, the girl that u loved."Emily zei in a sad voice."Emily let's not get in to my life, what about your mother & sister?"Shane said."I left them to die , and now my sister hates me!"Emily zei in a sad voice."Dose it matter?" Shane said."My sister wants to KILL me now!"Emily zei in a sad & mad voice."Emily I have to go now."Shan said."Ok Shane, goodbye." Emily zei only to find out the he was gone. Will thats all folks! Tell me how it was ok!
So why am I remaking it? Well the series was the first fanfiction series I made and when I did it wasn’t really well written, plotholes galore, so I wanted to remake it completely. But at the same time I didn’t want to redo it because of all the ideas I had.
So what I’m doing is rewriting the story, and keeping it as it was, but making some changes along the way. This way the original story will be there but it will be written better. I’ll add some other parts into it, but rest assured it’s not a reboot, just an edited version.
So what I’m doing is rewriting the story, and keeping it as it was, but making some changes along the way. This way the original story will be there but it will be written better. I’ll add some other parts into it, but rest assured it’s not a reboot, just an edited version.