"Don't come back" Emma says "why" I say
"One of Eggman's robots got in some how, probably
looking for the chaos smaragd, emerald u have" Emma says
"hey, pilot turn around I have somewhere to be" "ok, agent ruby" the pilot says I land in station square "well this is ok"I say "Ruby the hedgehog" "Who's there?" I say A blue hedgehog walks out of the shadows "sonic" I wisper to myself softly "so u know my name" sonic says "what do u want" I say "That chaos smaragd, emerald u stole" "I didn't steal it from you. I stal it from Eggman" "We need it" sonic says "for what"
I say "What do u need the chaos smaragd, emerald for" "Top secret" "We need to keep it to defeat him" Sonic says "Oh well, u will not get it from me, Sonic the hedgehog" I run as fast as I can, but Sonic is faster and keeps up with me "I forgot he can go as fast as the speed of sound" I think to myself
"Give the chaos emerald" Sonic says "Never, Pilot pick me up" The helicopter lets down a rope. I climb up the rope and went into the helicopter, But then I realize this is not the spy helicopter. "uh oh"
"One of Eggman's robots got in some how, probably
looking for the chaos smaragd, emerald u have" Emma says
"hey, pilot turn around I have somewhere to be" "ok, agent ruby" the pilot says I land in station square "well this is ok"I say "Ruby the hedgehog" "Who's there?" I say A blue hedgehog walks out of the shadows "sonic" I wisper to myself softly "so u know my name" sonic says "what do u want" I say "That chaos smaragd, emerald u stole" "I didn't steal it from you. I stal it from Eggman" "We need it" sonic says "for what"
I say "What do u need the chaos smaragd, emerald for" "Top secret" "We need to keep it to defeat him" Sonic says "Oh well, u will not get it from me, Sonic the hedgehog" I run as fast as I can, but Sonic is faster and keeps up with me "I forgot he can go as fast as the speed of sound" I think to myself
"Give the chaos emerald" Sonic says "Never, Pilot pick me up" The helicopter lets down a rope. I climb up the rope and went into the helicopter, But then I realize this is not the spy helicopter. "uh oh"
I had seen so many sites, about:
Bad Sonic fan Characters
And there is so many critiques about EVERYTHING and EVERYONE designs of them.
So, I had come to this point of having 'good character'
No character isnt perfect.
If the owner loves it, that's all the matters.
u can have a detailed character, if u want so.
u can have simply character, if u want so.
There is only one think u must remember:
Make the character's design fitting in her/him personality and his/her story.
Thank you.
Have a good night, I'm off to sleep now. >8'I
Bad Sonic fan Characters
And there is so many critiques about EVERYTHING and EVERYONE designs of them.
So, I had come to this point of having 'good character'
No character isnt perfect.
If the owner loves it, that's all the matters.
u can have a detailed character, if u want so.
u can have simply character, if u want so.
There is only one think u must remember:
Make the character's design fitting in her/him personality and his/her story.
Thank you.
Have a good night, I'm off to sleep now. >8'I
Ok, so I know a hedgehog whose life is dark... simple this story is about that hedgehog and their long, lost, forgotten life. How the good times turn to simply bad times. And that I know their life. How do I know this? I'm not a stalker nor a watch of life. This hedgehog is me... Shadey Grey the last dark user... the last hope of the planet Dark/Light. First off, dark users are like chaos users, they use dark power of darkness control and so do chaos users... they use chaos control. I never cared for anyone... not even you. Only that I lost my family... my friends... everyone I knew and loved. And I seeked revenge for them... only to find new friends. vrienden that could handle my anger... I become calm for some time. Yet, I still kill people for my family and friends...for anything I can remember.
-Shadey Grey, writer.
(Thank-you for reading this intro, tell me if I should write this of not. I start volgende week. 1/12/12)
-Shadey Grey, writer.
(Thank-you for reading this intro, tell me if I should write this of not. I start volgende week. 1/12/12)