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it's raining outsaid ,david finished his work early today ,he took his sons from school and brought them back home pagina
mary was daivd's wife and the mother of four children (kiven,poul, jack and kat ),when david and his sons entered the house mary was surprised seeing them in the house in that time
"you're early today "mary said
"yea ,mary can I talk to u in the keuken-, keuken ?"david asked
"yea ,sure"mary said

mary and david sit on the sofa that their little where daughter sleep at night
"ok I don't know how to tell u this ,but we should verplaats "david said
"move to where ? and why? "mary asked
"this place is no longer our home" david said
"you lost your job today right ?"mary asked
"no ,it's not about the job ,it's your father" david said
"david my father can't do anything ,he's not even my real father , he intimidated u that doesn't mean he's dangerous "mary said
"no ,listen your father want to..." david and mary conversation cutted door ringing the bills door
"oh my god ,they're here "david said

poul opened the door ,it was his grandfather with tow strange men
"is your father in home pagina kid?"george (the grandfather ) said
"yes ,he's in the keuken-, keuken "poul answered
"then let me see him please" george said
"ok"poul said

when george entered the keuken-, keuken with those strange men david was very angry ,he was looking in george's face but george was smilling and standing afront of him
"so did u tell her? "george asked
"tell me what?" mary asked
"I was going to tell her" david answered
"tell me what ?,will somebody please explain what's going here ?" mary said
"I'll help your husband with make meer money door make this family lower "george said
"so you'll take our kids ?" mary asked
"no I don't want your kids ,your pathetic husband can't make money and he can't take this family expenditure ,so your life is useless ,If we killed u your husband can save meer money "george said
"but that's so overstated "mary said
"listen to me woman ,you're living in our money and we who decide who will live and who will die ,so u have tow choice ,you can save your family and die of u can die with your kids ,your husband will watching u with the kids when you'll all die and we will let him live to make meer money for us ,and u can't run away ,we have many men watching u "one of the men said
"you son of a..."mary cutted what david will say "I'll do it alone " mary zei
"mary...no please no "david said
"ok we will take u after two weeks "the man zei while he moving to the door

"are u out of u mind mary "david said
"we have no choice david " mary said
"I can save u "david said"
"if u saved me we will lose the kids ,it's ok daivd u did your best "said mary sad
"so u guys will still here of what "jack said
"we're here hunny ,ok act normal for the kids "mary said
"ok"david said

the days ran fast ,five days left for mary ,she was sitting with her kids everyday ,talking and playing with them to forget that she will leave them after five days ,her dream was watching her children growing up but unfortunately she can't be with them
mary's sons were sleeping in one small room cause the house is very old and small ,mary knocked the door before she went to sleep ,keivin opened the door ,"mom is there something wrong?" kevin asked
"can I talk to u inside ?" mary asked
"sure ,get in" kevin answered
mary sat down on kevin's bed ,"how old are u kevin ?" mary asked
"I'm almost 15 ,why ?" kevin answered
"you're a man now kevin ,you have to look out for your younger brothers and your little sister ,I want u to help your father "mary said
"yea of curse ,but why are u telling me this ?" kevin asked
"cause someday I won't be able to take care of all of u ,I just want u to understand that I'll be with u even if I'm not beside u ,I just want u to remember this " mary zei wiping on kevin's hair
"don't worry mom "kevin said
"I know" mary zei ,mary walking toward the door "good night hunny"said mary befor she closed the door
david heard what mary and kevin were talking about ,he can't take his life anymore ,he's almost losing his wife and he lost his job today but he doesn't want to tell mary
"mary ,please don't be emotional in the last hours "david said
"I know I just.... can't "mary zei crying
"I know it even harder for me but we can't do anything now ,I saw three men with guns looking at our house they were sitting in the empty building that near us "david said
"yea I know ,I just want to tell u something and please promise me to do what I'll say " mary said
"I'll do anything ,what u want ?" david asked
"don't let this happened to kat too in the future and don't tell her that I'm dead tell she been in school "
"mary what are u talking about do u think I'll do the same thing that your father did to u ?" david asked
"no ,I just think that she's just three years old girl but u don't talk to her of play with her just like when our sons were in her age ,don't hate her cause she's a girl and we are poor " mary said
"are u kidding me mary ,do I sound like a girls hater ? " david asked
"no ,I'm sorry I just... feel very angry ,I'm sorry I don't want to fight with u in my last days " mary said
"it's ok ,I think u should take some rest now "david zei
"ok "mary said
posted by Problematic129
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    Abe
    It seemed as if everything went quieter when Alex and Iris sat down, I could see we were all tensed and hopeful. Although it didn’t seem Iris had gotten over her anger of us how she never zei a word and just frowned at her tray unless Alex was saying something to her.
    What irked me was that when Alex would talk to Iris, u could tell it was really important door the way they looked, but the geniuses had the conversations between the two in different languages. One minuut there speaking what...
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posted by alicia386
Chapter Ten: I Always Lose At The Game of Chance

      "Who would be dumb enough to follow us?" demanded Courtney who was already forgetting that Darrell almost kidnapped us. "Don't they know who they are messing with." Courtney zei it a bit playful but playful was not the kind of mood we were looking for.
      "You might be trained, but they are experienced and probably know 40 different ways to kill someone. It is best if we go hide out somewhere." Darrell kept his eyes on the road, those sky blue eyes.
      "You're right," I said. "But where are Charles and Raven? We can't just...
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posted by Problematic129
~Genre: Fiction, fantasy~
15
    Terry
    Lunchtime! Finally! It felt like ages before it came. Lunchtime has become a favoriete event for me lately, because now the gang and I can get to hang out together and just be ourselves.
    Marie wasn’t too happy about it when I told her the first time though, she glared at my vrienden almost every time, and she’s been trying to push Brooklyn over the edge. But she doesn’t ruin our lunch, she doesn’t even come close.
    I know I’m not the only one with friend troubles,...
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posted by Problematic129
~Genre:realistic fiction, humor~
Chapter 27
    It takes a miracle
    Wednesday’s, one of my favoriete days, because on the dag I was first born, I was born on Wednesday. The funny thing was my parents wanted to name me Wednesday, but Adam and Melanie kept on howling and yelling, so my mom picked Pamela, so my middle name is Wednesday.
    Why the name Pamela?
    I’ll tell u why, I’m a miracle baby, u know how some baby’s don’t come out perfect and the hospital has to hold them, well that’s what happened....
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posted by Dhampires
She looked at me throw narrow eyes droping her hostage to the floor she took a step toward me. She'd started to mouth off at me but I wasn't paying attention the only thing I had my eyes on was the man behind her.

He slowly drew a gun from his chest pocket before angling it at Camila's head he smiled at me and mouthed 'thanks'. I couldn't speak, I was speechless.

It was her words that brought me to life as of where I could run. "Duck he's going to kill you?"
"What?!" she sheirked turning to her attacker. He held a tight grin on his face. "Sweet dreams Princess." I could hear a faint Itialian...
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posted by Problematic129
~Genre:realistic fiction, humor~
Chapter 26
    Here my roar!
    I couldn’t stop gushing over the fact that Ryler kissed me! He kissed me! Best dag ever! And I just couldn’t wait for our date, and Ryler wouldn’t be telling me anything, but it was pretty clear Adam knew. He’d always give me this secret smile, and wink.
    I wonder if I was obvious with my crush with Ryler, of if Ryler told Adam from the beginning, of just told him. All in all, I’m relieved there’s no ‘touch my sister and die’, everything seems normal....
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posted by Problematic129
~Genre:realistic fiction, humor~
Chapter 24
    Maternal instinct
    “Oh! My lovely baby’s growing up!” My mom squeals while I hold a groan.
    “Mom please!” I whine. “Were here for shopping not gushing.”
    Mom rolled her eyes. “It’s clothes shopping, stupid. Gushing is mandatory. And u in that dress! Oh the tears!”
    I smile as she clutches herself dramatically. “Whatever.”
    After that little get together, which wasn’t that bad when I look back...
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I stared in horror at what was in Blake’s computer I didn’t see this coming. What have I done? I felt like I was going to throw up. I can’t believe what I just gave him I am so stupid! I sighed me beating myself up is not going to change anything. All I can do now is find my brother find out what is going on and stop Blake before it is to late. What are u waiting for it is time to come up with a plan to escape this nut house.

I took a flash drive and copied everything on Blake’s computer. I made sure there was no tracking device on the laptop double-checking found it clean than I packed...
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After the war was finally finished, three years, seven months and twenty weeks, people waited at the hospital. Hoping, praying for their loved ones to be found. Kyle Goodman's Foster Dad; Angus, his two sisters; Tiffany and Mariah, brother James and girlfriend, Summer Thorn waited. Their friend, Katherine Dreamwhisper. They called her Katie for short, had finished her shift, working as the nurse and went to kom bij them. "They'll find him" she said. Nobody spoke, they just sat there. Three hours past and it was getting cold, the night air was coming and the warmth from the sun disappeared. Katie...
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posted by Problematic129
~Genre:realistic fiction, humor~     
Chapter 21
    Just a lovely game
    I wasn’t even worried about our run in with Talia, in fact, I almost forgot about it. The rest of the dag was spent on purely fun and I found myself humming as I unlocked the front door to my house. It was eerily quiet but I just shrugged, entering the house I found Ryler sprawled on the divan, bank again eyes opened blankly.
    “Are u dead?” I asked. “Because if u are it’ll be a pain to verplaats your body.”
    He...
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posted by Problematic129
~Genre:realistic fiction, humor~
Chapter 20    
    When a psycho is near, chaos occurs
    Guess what? I was right! Adam’s team did lose, victory for Pam! u could hear his sad frustrating voice on the other end as I was hanging out with my gal’s and surprisingly Grey. He just invited himself but I’m not complaining.
    “That movie was awesome!” Sage announced as we exited the movie theater.
    “Of course it was, I paid good money for it.” Grey replied.
    I...
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A/N: I love love loved the feedback I got for Part One! Not to mention the prompts :) I love u guys and I hope u enjoy this one! meer feedback equals faster posts. Happy reading :)
ALSO: If you're new here, here's part one: link Anyways, enjoy!


The Stranger's Musings: A Collection of Drabbles (Part Two)

Prompt 1: Darkness (requested door SweetHoneyBunny)

The darkness suffocates me.

I can’t see, I can’t breathe. My hands claw at nothingness as I
attempt to find a way out.

My breathing escalates. It feels as though my lungs are constricting.
Cold sweat breaks on my forehead and I find...
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posted by 1999jacko
fantasy
1 week later
Walter stood in the room where he had first used his wand, fighting off creatures coming out of Libras wand. Suddenly Will dropped his wand and looked at the monsters and oddly they all turned and started to attack Libra, "sorry Libra I can't use that power properly," Walter zei and with a tendril shooting out of his wand and destroying all the monsters and quickly jolting back to his wand. " Walter don't worry your almost there you'll just have to be put under some re-,"Libra stopped mid sentence with a thoughtful look before continuing," go against me I will try my hardest...
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posted by flabaloobalah
 Sadie and Claire's Ride
Sadie and Claire's Ride
I was so nervous as to what we would be doing out in the woods in the middle of the night. I couldn't tell Claire, I decided. That would only scare us more. So I laid out the outfit they instructed I wear and took a douche in the bathroom. The water was, at first, very cold, but I figured out how to work the nozzle and turn the freezing water into comfortable, steamy hot water. I made as many bubbles as I could and tried to distract myself, but I just couldn't. Sadie, I told myself, stop overthinking this. You'll be alright. We're just gonna play a game out there at night. I slicked my clean...
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This is reality
This is what u call the Earth
This is what people call the world
This is what we call life

We can't go on pretending dag door day
That good things will always happen
Stormy days will come, it's not a miracle
But the storm will end soon, and all will be clear again

Heavy rain's crashing against my windowsill
I think, when will this ever stop?
The thunder's crashing against the trees outside
Today's not going to be a fine day, but it will end

I woke up this morning and guess what I saw
Bright sunny mornings with a clear future
No one's gonna stop me from believin
The rain stopped and the future's bright again

Good and bad create our lives
We can't pretend that everything's gonna always be alright
It's hard to think that something's gonna be wrong
But it's the truth, the whole truth.

We can't go on dag door dag pretending
Everything's gonna be alright
But we know that sunny days will come out
Soon of later.
posted by flabaloobalah
Genre: Realistic Fiction, Drama/Romance

I like Blake. He seemed to enjoy having company with our six cousins, and they all looked excited to do whatever they were going to do tonight. That reminded me: what exactly were we doing? I had no idea. I decided to just forget about it and enjoy the rest of the day. We all ran out back and explored th backyard. Past the shed were woods like the ones we traversed to get to Blake's. I guess they were all around us. Dark and inviting and creepy.
We had a few hours to run around outside, then we were called in for supper. Jeb stood door the creaky back door...
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posted by alicia386
Interview with Simone Rivers

Me: How do u feel about the book The Deadly Truth? Was everything in it accurate?

Simone: I guess the book was okay. It didn't give a good beschrijving of my beauty. The auteur didn't describe how brilliant my hair looks in the light of how my eyes shimmer when I smile. The auteur didn't even mention my glamourous white teeth. [shakes head disapprovingly].

Me: [ignores vain comment]. Can u tell the viewers out there about your relationship with the pastor?

Simone: [smiles lovingly]. Of course! I just want to smash all of those commentaren about him dating Faye. He would...
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posted by rory2011
some people think if u did something good to someone ,one dag the person will takes your hand from your problems hole ,but that won't happen this time, that low is only in the fantasy stories ,not in the real life , Kat was very stupid to believe that she would reward for what she did and realize she must stop being that nice girl who does everything people tell her and she can't say no to anyone

David start taking his medication ,he stood in the hospital cause Mac wanted to fix that old house and give it his soul again
Kat is very busy with her work ,but everything happening taking all...
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posted by Problematic129
~Genre:realistic fiction, humor~
Chapter 15
        A Gal’s talk
    “Talia, I’m so sorry that u have to leave so early, but my parents, not very trusting. Plus they already have a full plate…so…the gal’s are leaving soon, again sorry, looking vooruit, voorwaarts to the volgende sleepover.”
    Gosh, I almost believed myself!
    “Sure!” Talia beamed, clueless. “See u later, Pal!”
    “Buddy,” I saluted her.
    Ryler shook his head as soon as the...
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posted by 1999jacko
action of fantasy I am really not sure

Present Day
Leo,now 13, stood on top, boven of the tall, sturdy boom looking for any sign of the kids who kill. Luckily he'd been there for 2 hours and seen of heard nothing and decided to make the schommel, swing back to the boom he lived in with Jason and Sarah, he ran down the branch and jumped onto the branch and pushed off from what they call the watch tree.

The swinging was the greatest thing ever in Leos mind, with the trees flying door at unnatural speeds, the insects moving all around your head wondering whats going on and best of all the height your up at, because...
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