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posted by SweetHoneyBunny
Talow stood reading the task he had been given. It had come from the general of the battalions and recruiting so he couldn't object. He read the scrawled out message again:

Task #1: Thursday, August 3 ****
Recruit 003579-Dains

u are to meld to the prison-holds this afternoon for your task of executing the captured victims from the villages of Dains and of the Bellator boy captured one dag after. Failure to comply will result in serious penalty including but not restricted to:
Demotion
Reassigned
Imprisoned
Death

Talow swallowed as he pushed open the large doors, behind were the prison-holds. The air held a stench of sweat and blood that lingered in one's throat. He forced himself not to gag as he walked towards the three soldiers standing around a large desk. The bureau was occupied door a large man who was giving one boy the death stare.
“You brought this upon yourself, failure to follow the rules has its consequences.” The man's fingers were inched towards a drawer in the desk, the boy in vraag watched silently. “Do u remember what it was u did?” The man sat forward, a wicked grin on his face. The boy was sweating but made no verplaats to wipe his brow. “Speak!” He jolted and like a machine began to talk.
“I refused to follow my battalion into battle, leaving my brothers to the mercy of the Bellators.” His mouth clamped shut when he was done.
“Exactly.” The man at the bureau had a look in his eye like a savage beast with its prey pinned under it. “And u know why I have to punish u for this. If everyone started abandoning mission we would have lost years ago. Is that what u want! To be ruled door self-loving Bellators! Well do you?” The man's face had turned red with rage as he leaned across the bureau to shout in the traitor's face.
“No...I...um..” He was silenced door the man as he stood and gripped him door the throat.
“I new u were a rat the dag u were recruited.” He dropped him to the ground. “Take him away, I'll deal with him later.” Two of the soldiers who had been standing behind the boy now came vooruit, voorwaarts and grabbed him door the arms. His shouts and pleading could be heard as he was dragged down the hall. Talow watched them leave and was having seconde thoughts about this when the man noticed him.
“Quit cowering and get over here before I do the same to you.” Talow obeyed and stood before the man, handing his paper over. The man read it and sank back into his chair.
“So, u got the guts to do this of are u going to chicken out like most of them?” Talow didn't say a word as the man walked around the bureau and lead him down the same hall the soldiers had vanished down. Talow could see people locked behind bars, dirty and sad-looking as he passed keeping close to the officer. When they reach cell 23 Talow could see the villagers from Dains watching him as the door was unlocked. They backed into the corner as the officer entered the cell and grabbed a thin man with bloody nails and a bruise on his cheek. He dropped him in-front of Talow.
“Your choice. We can do this the quick way of we can drag it out.” He pulled from his riem a small gun and a club with nails poking out of it. Talow looked from the weapons to the man who was watching the floor, not meeting his eyes. Talow picked the gun, checking how many rounds it had left. One. Just enough to finish the job. He saw the officer watching him, waiting for him to pull the trigger and end this mans life in full view of the others. Talow knew this man which made all so much harder. As he aimed the gun and steadied his shaking finger on the trigger Talow was about to bury the bullet in the man's head when a shout from down the hall forced him to jerk his hand and shoot the floor volgende to the man. The officer spun on his heel and stormed down the small ahllway, stopping at a cell containing one person. The boy who had attacked Talow in the clearing. The man zei something to him before he started walking back to his bureau to fins another bullet.

Talow took this opportunity to run down the hall and stop at the cell.
“Why did u do that?” He asked the boy behind the bars. The boy leaned casually against the wall, examining his nails.
“Do what?”
“Stop me from shooting that villager.” Talow was growing impatient knowing that his time was running out.
“I know u don't like killing, it's written all over your face.” The boy came closer. “You want to get out of here?” Talow nodded eagerly. “Next chance u get out of this place find the main road until u reach a place with two alley ways. Take the second, it'll lead u the jungle.” Talow made a mental note of what he was told.
“Why are u helping me?”
“Think of it as a favour.” Talow took a step back from him and started to turn away.
“Thank you...um..” He didn't even know his name to thank him properly.
“Name's Raza, now get out of here.” Raza shooed him away as the officer started coming back down the hall.

Talow found the entrance to HQ easy enough, it was getting out that would cause some problems. He waited around until he saw someone he knew.
“Nico, Cyle!”
“Hey Talow, what's up?” They stopped to talk to him, moving to a uithangbord where they wouldn't be in the way.
“I was wondering if u guys could get the guards to open the doors since you've both got meer seniority then me. I think I dropped something outside when we were coming back.” Cyle and Nico exchanged looks, not quite believing his story but they helped him anyway. When Talow was far enough away, he started to follow the directions Raza had gegeven him, sure enough he found himself at the edge of the jungle. All he had to do was dive in there and he'd be home pagina free, but should he? Talow looked back at the city noticing the line of men coming down the main road. He still held the plans under his jas and he knew they were looking for him. Were they after the plans? Did they know he had escaped? All thinking came to late as UFS soldiers found him. Maybe if he talked to them they would see it from his point of view. He had the plans, all he had to do was toon them.
posted by alicia386
Chapter Eight

IF ONLY I COULD HAVE MULTIPLE LIVES of LIVE FOREVER. -Erica

      I was rudely thrown in a miniature room. He didn't say much when he lugged me here. Although, I could sense others nearby but when I looked there were no ghost of anyone near. I had finally gotten rid of the feeling to only have it come back again. This time I saw who it was. "Erica?" A shimmery figure exposed itself to me. A little surprise but not as surprise as Erica who was now flickering on and off like a light bulb.
      "Who are u and why did u attack me?" This Erica was not the one I remembered from...
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Chapter Twelve
 
      "This just in," announced anchorman Douglass. "Some new insight on the Dalton murder case has just been revealed. Not only have they discovered the real killer they also have a CD of the killer admitting to the crime. Although, they will not go public with the names and other crucial details we still keep faith for the Dalton parents as they go through this awful time. Back to u Joe."
      Dakota stared her tv with astonishment. She had just leave the jailhouse and arrived home pagina to find her parents watching the news. Not only was she surprised, she was also impressed...
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posted by hgfan5602
I've had the time of my life
We were comin and goin
But I told myself,
Kid, things are gonna be alright.

Things were hard,
Things were mighty difficult,
Things were strange,
But I kept my head through it all

Boy I survived...
And what a mess I've made
At least I made it through alive
Gosh, unexpectedly, it was the time of my life

When I thought
I could not text and party all night long
When I thought
No one's gonna keep me down

The strange life
The awesome life
Just comin and goin
It's weird how it is

One day, it's like "Awesome!"
And the volgende dag it's like "I wish I was dead"
Life's just always strange
But I've...
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Chapter Three

THE TRUE MYSTERY IS NOT WHAT HAPPENED IN YOUR LIFE BUT WHAY HAPPENED AFTER DEATH. ARE u STILL ALIVE, DO u TRANSFER INTO A NEW BODY, of WHAT? -EMMA

      Sophie didn't arrive home pagina until late that evening. That was so like her. She was such a party girl that she assumed that she could toon up whenever she pleased. I was getting tired of that. I really needed her today but she was too busy having fun and being social. I had spent the rest of the dag painting a new canvas of a stormy dag with wind, rain, and lightening. It turned out beautiful.
      Sophie came into the basement...
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posted by hgfan5602
I've been written
The painful truth,
Just two days ago,
When I was...betrayed.

He walked away from me
He threw me down in the sand
Like I was some little doll
Of little importance.

It was a scary thought
To think,
Of all those years...
When he took me in
Now he threw me down and that's that

I'm not a paper doll
So I will not be thrown down again
Cuz I am not a puppet
No one will control me with strings

I am invincible
I am an individual
No one shall make me suffer
Though I must cry sometimes....

Don't schommel, swing me door my head
Don't make me lose my mind
I don't want to destroy you
But I will, if u destroy me.
posted by Problematic129
*Thanks for all the commentaren :) Please read and review and please don't copy*
Chapter 4
    Something fishy
    I had the perfect excuse to go back to the station, after my parents rash behavior I would need to have an apology at the ready. I mean, if u fight in the police station be glad u weren’t arrested.
    I entered the police station, looking for anyone similar. I felt a tap on my shoulder and whirled around to find the boy I was looking for.
    Cadence.
    “Hello again, Destiny,”...
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hallo readers as u all know I usually begin with Abbie Preston my main character in this story but now I kinda wanted something diffrent so I began with the Gellar family and some of their relatives, this chapter is all them so I hope u enjoy it just the same! ..two characters in this chapter are named after two of my most loyal readers usernames..
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Chapter (14):
"Thank u so much for coming" zei Laura Gellar to the last of the guests as the filed one door one out of the door, "Your welcome, Laura, and agian...
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posted by rory2011
chapter (4)


the vampires took me with my sister and my brother ,they hit us on our head to pass out and when we woke up ,we found our self's in a dark nasty old room ,the room were empty ,the only thing I can see is the sun light crossing that small window
I looked around me Sofia and Jeremy were still sleeping on the floor ,I smelled something weird ,I feel dizzy ,I can't see very clear so I started knocking the room door strongly "help ,please somebody help me " ,I can feel my body hit the ground strongly ,I want to get up but I couldn't verplaats ,I couldn't even breath

all I see now is darkness...
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posted by Dhampires
No matter how much u wish for meer it happens like the uur glass time runs out and you'll lung for more.

With that time your ideas that others may know them as sweet they run out and leave people wanting more.

We song writers, novelists, story writers and poets will all leave our adience want so much more. The reason? It's because of our massive creatively, our unique style and tenchquie it's what drives us to a certain point as of where we'll keep our audience entertained. While inventors may lose their touch after contrast copies from the same old ideas being modefiyed we have our minds being put to the test door our viewers. After all they matter most their who we write for right?
posted by SweetHoneyBunny
I woke up cold, tired and sore. I moved a little and got a face full of sunshine, I reached for the curtains and for my quilt. I opened one eye a bit to find them, but when I looked I wasn't in my bed, of even in my house. I was in the forest on the cold, hard ground. “What happened?” I zei out loud. I stretched. “Ouch.” My back and shoulders were killing me, I touched my shoulder blade and winced. It was scratched and the skin was torn. I heaved myself off the ground and nearly fell back down. “What is going on?” I stood there for what felt like eternity, when I heard something....
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posted by rory2011
chapter (3)

    
"ok where are we ? " Jeremy zei ,"I don't know ,it looks like we're in china "
"yea but there's nobody here ,the streets are empty"
I heard a weird scary voice ,"what was that sound ? " I zei ,"it's my stomach ,I'm so hungry" Sofia zei ,"ok let's try to find a restaurant of a place that we could eat there "I zei
we were walking around the city ,trying to find the restaurant ,I looked all over the thing that can give me a clue for the place that we're in but I couldn't understand anything ,it's like we're in everywhere ,there were houses took the shape...
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(Verse 1)
I am in love with the guy whois sweet
till we meet It isn't possible

(Verse 1)

(Chorus)
We need to meet before we go under cover for each other We need to meet before we go undercover for each other

(Verse 2)
We haven't met yet
Still single hearted
thinkin' 'bout each other
Everyday

(Verse 2)

(Bridge)
Now & then everyday we need to meet each other goin' separate paths and ways to meet each other and go undercover

(Pre-Chorus)
We are going separate paths and ways sometime we need to meet in the middle and go undercover Now,

(Chorus)
We need to meet before we go under cover for each other We need to meet before we go undercover for each other

(Chorus)

We need to meet before we go undercover
posted by alicia386
Chapter Five

Mason met Olivia at his favoriete restaurant. It was a perfect dag for a avondeten, diner date. The sun was shinny, the clouds were extra white, and the gras seemed greener then ever. If only she knew that this was a avondeten, diner date. He signed the last autograph for today as Olivia sat across from him at their round table. Her hair was curly and in a ponytail. Then she wore a red dress with a thick, black riem in the middle. His seconde impression of her was still the same, gorgeous. This datum was going pretty well but Cassidy dresses better. Mainly because Cassidy is rich but he didn't want to...
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posted by Problematic129
*First of all thanks for commentaren :) Please read and review and please don't copy*
Chapter 3
    Colorful styles and pictures to doom
    After that class I found out that Cali and I shared all the same classes. And hallelujah for that, because she’s been giving me advice and tips throughout the beginning of the day, and I stuck to her like glue.
    The meer I got to know I realized that she wasn’t all that perky, it’s just in the morning because she has too much coffee. door the time lunch rolled around I was practically shaking....
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posted by hgfan5602
Every weekend, I sleep late, like every normal teenager. Problem is, my annoying little brother wakes up at like what? 6:30 every morning? Yeah. And he dumps a bucket of water filled with ice in it on my face if I don't wake up at 6:30. What a nuisance. Otherwise, if I go hangout with my vrienden before he gets up. he says, "Mrs. Mellark! Going out with your boyfriend?" Yeah, I like Peeta, as a matter of fact, if u didn't know before. Personal opinion, you'll live with it. What a strange little kid. No idea where he learned what a boyfriend was, but fine. The major thing that makes me mad...
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Hi. My name is Jake Gartner, and right now, basically a huge mutant serpent is coming to slikken me whole, tear me to pieces of flesh, so I have no time to talk right now. Oh, um...you want to follow me? Sure, just accept that everyday will be the best of the thrills. Right now, we are not getting any help from the immortal world, so just know that we have a horrible system of magic right now, and we have an extremely low supply of weapons, thus, the chance that u will get out of this mess is around eighty-six percent. (because of me, the master of war) Oh yeah, the serpent. Enough talk. (ROARS) Off to kill a mutant serpent!!! (stabs, deflects, cuts a gash in its head, dies) That's only our first one, trainee. Whatever your name is. volgende time, I invite u to kom bij with us on our battle. And it will be even meer life-consuming, if u know what that means.
Yo, everyone. Chase here. u know, Jake's been acting all strange lately like he's hiding something from me. And I don't like it. I don't see how anyone would. I thought we were a team. And I thought he zei that I was just as great as he was. Now, this proves that he was totally lying. What a fraud. Okay, I found out something today that might be useful to the two of us. Well, that is, if Jake even wants to work with me. I saw his light on yesterday night. Face it, he's probably researching something about the mutant serpent. Am I right? Well, yes, I thought so. u know, I am telepathic....
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posted by hgfan5602
I walk into
The Fields of Sorrow
Once again.
Why do I walk there
Almost everyday?

I stroll along the grasses
Thinking
Bearing a horrible pain.
I think of the world around me
And how much they have inspired me.

I start to cry once again.
All my teachers
All my friends,
They have always stood door me,
When things went wrong.

I want a chance to repay them,
To toon them that...
Their work was useful.
To toon them that
I am truly thankful.

Why do I have to leave them then
Now?
No, now's not a good time.
But I know it was not intended
That I leave them now.

I want to toon all those people
That they have been
The change of my life,
That they have made my life so much
Better,
That they were the flames
In the darkness.
posted by sawfan13
Dear Mother,

Yes I know what u did to me

You threw me down the well

All because I made your life a living hell

Mommy, Mommy can't u see?

I'm your little adopted baby girl

If u didn't want me, why did u adopt me

Yes Mommy, I know

I, Samarra morgan knows.

The tape that is cursed

Is nothing worse

Than what I had experienced

Why didn't I ever sleep?

Because the horses kept me up at night

Because u let Daddy keep me in the barn.

I have hurt others

I have killed others

I may have even sickened your horses

I bet u loved them meer than u loved me

Yes, I know I am a freak

Because I am afraid of water, so...
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posted by Knowitall123
 cover of the original Vamp out
cover of the original Vamp out
part 2

****2 Weeks Ago*****
I woke up thinking how this was just another usual dag
"Sweetie, we need to talk." my mom zei seriously while her dragon Vinictus flew around her head
"I didn't do anything wrong, u don't have any proves."
My dad stopped me and put a hand on my shoulder.
"We kn..what proves?" He asked with a serious face.
"Nothing. What did u need me?" I tried to change the subject, Dia who just stopped chasing Emmas dragon looked at me.
"Well..we got a latter this morning.." My mom started.
"And it's an Invitation." My dad continued.
"An Invitation?" I was getting interested in it,...
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