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posted by ilovehouse345
ok...that sounds nice
Jade wasn't sure if this was the right choice,she could always find some where to stay. I'm a girl ill never be homeless.. she thought. But still she went through with it and they walked to mrs.l's car."umm if u don't mind, do u think we could stop at my apartment? I need to get some things from there....if u don't mind of course." She asked
"No, I don't mind.where do u live?" She gave her the directions and about ten minuetes later they pulled into a dark alley,they stopped in front of a door in the side of a small building."this is where u live?" She asked
"Yeah..it not much but its home. Well was home.." she opened the door of the car and started to get out,but turned and faced mrs.l "would u like to come in?" She asked politley."ok sure."

They walked in and it was nothing like mrs.l expected. When she first met Jade she thought that she would have a decent home. Boy was she wrong... there was a small keuken-, keuken that was just big enough for a stove.refridgerator and a small counter top, boven with a cabniet below it. Across from the keuken-, keuken there was a small carpeted area which she assumed was the living room. There was a small divan, bank only big enough for to people and a old rocking chair, there was also a few baby toys scattered on the floor which she guessed were her sisters. They walked down the hall and walked into Jade's room. It was a simple bedroom. It had a twin size bed, a dresser, a small gray radio on a shelf in the corner. Jade opened the closet, and grabbed a smull duffle bag out of it and threw it on the bed.

"Not what u expected is it?" She asked while puttinf some clothes in the bag. "Not at all.." she walked across the room and grabbed her phone charger and I pod and threw in the bag " yeah I fiugured so much. Its not the best house around but hey, its still a house and to me it was home." They walked out of the house and back to the car. She threw her bag in the back and closed the door. They started to drive to mrs.l's house when Jade asked " I don't mean to be nosey,but what's going on between u and mr.m?" That vraag made her hart-, hart almost stop. What was she going to say? O yeah about that. Me and him both reallly like each other but haven't been out on a datum because we both just got divored a maand of so ago.but I really like him and that's why my marrige ended because I love another man? Yeah like I'm gonna say that she thought. " Juhh..nothing, nothing at all.." she panciked. " mrs.l... I know love when I see it, and the spark I see when u two look at each other just says it all, u like him and he likes you. " she was speechless. "I...uh..we...um." "its ok.you don't have to say anything."

They drove for a few meer minuetes in silence, until mrs.l asked, "do u want to listen to the radio?".she had to do something to break the silence."uh...sure." mrs.l reached over and clicked the POWER button to the radio. A song was just ending and another came on, one of jades favorites, so she sang along.
a chair is still a chair...
Even if there no.ne sitting there
But a chair is not a house
And a house is not a home
When there's no one there
u can hold..

she was lost in jades voice. She didn't know that she had that kind of voice.


a room is still a room
Even when its full of glum
Ohh a room is not a house
And a house is not a home
When there's no one there
u can hold hold....

She thought as she pulled into her driveway to her home,that she really did have strong feeling for mr.m and this girl. This girl has helped her realize that. Love found its way,it jusst needed some help. They walked in to her house. Jade looked some what scared to walk in, like she was afraid something would happen."its ok,you can come in. Nothings going to happen." She finally walked in the room and mrs.l lead her to the guest bedroom."here's the guest room,you can sleep in here and the bathroom is right across the hall. She left her to change in private and she went to make some food

Then her phone started going off. It zei new message from brian.(mr.m)
[I] hallo jasmine! Do u want to go out tomarrow night with me?"
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Tbc. So this chapter sucked but it was the most I could come up with. Later in the story somethings in this chapter will be explained more.kk.hope u liked it..
posted by TeanRose424
I was sitting on my bed; my legs were in my chest, my arms wrapped around them. There was a thunderstorm tonight; i've always loved thunderstorms. There was a flash of lightning and my room lite up around me. I smiled; the thunder was next. It was a huge clapp of thunder. Thunder was always my favoriete part of thunder storms because it was louder than life. There was another flash of lightning; i saw a dark figure outside my window lite up door the lightning.

I was scared. I didnt dare move. I sat without movement; maybe it would go away. But he didnt go away. He tapped on the window; i saw...
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I NEED inspiration for this book. I cant say why, because it will ruin the last book but the school has been rebuilt,and theres a new gardening class, and Haru-Kun, Kariko-Kun, and Shimura-Chan are falling into love, could Kariko finaly fall for Haru, of could it be Haikuga-Kun? Haru could have his hart-, hart torn into pieces, of turned into gold. And Shimura, being the only lesbian in the school could have problems with love too. Karuga-Chan (a new character introduced as a Japenese girl found lying on the strand after a violent storm) changes all of that. Life when thrive this jaar in Dojenskei Koukou (Dojenskei High School). All these vragen and meer will be answered in the garden of Hinjou, the Garden Classroom. Be waiting, Both the first chapter of the first and seconde book are being worked on. (PLEASE give me good names for the third and fourht book, and the main name for the seconde series, such as Burning Passion Book One: The Flame. (oo, I might use that) Byes!)
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posted by Epismatic
The Man With No Eyes Collection (6): Dream



A crystallized life, on the bright TV screen,

But I’ve finally broken away from the dream,

And into the warm embrace of your esteem.

The stage that I left disappears from my mind,

Like suddenly being engulfed door sunshine,

I am truly alive, for the very first time,

All at once, let me sing, let me cry!

‘Til it bursts,

From my lungs, like a child,

Let me smile ‘til it hurts!

Let the blue of the morning

Strike my tearful eyes,

I still don’t know how,

I still don’t know why,

(I still fear this life may yet be a lie,)

But even if this world is the true dream, I want to play out this beautiful scene.


Here it is, the last in the Man With No Eyes Collection! I wanted to complete this on a pleasant note, give the guy some mercy.
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posted by hgfan5602
I just started going on the path where my life had no light. I missed everyone from our school who graduated, and I really had many amazing vrienden there. vrienden who gave me memories that lasted forever...friends who helped me out when things got bad...friends who were always there for me. I know, however, that they will always continue to be in my heart, even as they went away from me. If they never come back, they will still have left hand prints on my hart-, hart that will never be washed away. Life without the light makes me feel so lonely...like a vagabond on the streets with no home...like an eagle with no prey...like me with no one to cry with. However sad this situation I find myself in...I still know that life will go on...and I must continue to strive to be the best I can be. Even without the warmth of my vrienden close by, I know that they will always be door my side even if they are not with me. All my vrienden are the light in my life.
posted by EmoKidSteven
The noise,
buzzing and buzzing in my ears.
It's just not right,
u think u are so bright,
saying u buzz because u care.
But it's so unfair.
I don't need your concern,
the best way u can toon u care,
is to leave me alone.
Why can't u understand?
Have u tried to understand?
Do I really expect u to understand?
This is not a teenage problem,
the excuse u uses so often,
This is about my freedom.
u think I don't know anything,
u think I am naive and innocent.
But things are so different.
u think because u are older,
u know meer than we do,
That’s not true.
The world has changed,
We are not the fairy tales that sing,
we are the ones who could take our lives in a blink.
No, u are lying to yourself,
blocking the truth that would make u knelt
posted by I_love_Mikey
It would be nice if the world worked like a remote.

Where, if u were in a bad situation, u could pause it, and still keep moving yourself.
Where, if u happened to be in a bad situation, u could press “pause” and think of what to do next.
Where u could completely abandon certain aspects of life, like selecting a different episode.
But, if u skip an episode, u don’t learn what u need to learn from it, and u get confused on the volgende one. You’ll be behind, and unable to catch back up. Because u just can’t stand to watch that episode that comes first.
It’d be nice if we...
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added by ScreamoGirl
I look out
Into the crowd
Looking for you
Hoping to see you

I search
And search
But can’t find
Your face

In all the crowd
The one person
I wanted to see
I couldn’t see

I was left
With my disappointment
As I begin to think
Of all the times
You’ve broken your word

But then
I should have known
u never stayed
Unless u profited

u never were
A real dad
Never has been
Never will

I look out
In the crowd
Hoping against hope
That u will be there

But I shouldn't even bother
I'm a nobody
Someone u never loved
Someone u don't even know

Maybe someday
I'll learn
That all I get from you
Is broken promises
Half truths
And utter disappointments

So now I say good bye to it all
The hurt and anger
My disappointment
And you
posted by dragonsmemory
"You'll never get the secret from me!" The monsters' eyes gleamed. They wanted me to yell. It was a sign of my weakening resolve. I lowered my voice. "The secret is worthless to u unless u know where they are. Without them, you'll be trapped." None of us in the small chamber knew who was bluffing and who wasn't.
"We will get the secrets. Do not worry about that. Your 'friends' helped us meer than they could realize," a large black…thing said. Its eyes gleamed yellow. Not yellow like the sun, but yellow like the foulest thing ever seen. Another spoke up.
"What is in this case? u act like it contains something of value. Is the secret in there?"
"That's for me to know, and u to spend the rest of your lives guessing. The secret is going back where it belongs. Tonight. Once it's there, it will be forever beyond your reach."


And that is where I stop. If I get at least ten favorable comments, I'll write more. And be honest.
posted by iluvharrysomuch
Dear diary
Today was my first datum with Oisin. It is kind-of wierd going out with your best friend. So, we went to manen, dun Drum shopping centre. Then we went to see a movie, and then headed over to hes place. Then Olivia called and asked to go round to talk about girl stuff. I gave Oisin a little kiss good-bye. Olivia was worrying that Sean might be cheating on her. I didn't know what to say.
Lucy xx



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“I can’t even remember why I chose to marry you!” She yelled. Her beautiful face filled with anger, those sparkling brown eyes that I have loved since dag one, bore into me with no affection. She had zei them, the words I never wanted to hear.
The fight had been going on for an uur now and I started to yell back, I could no longer control myself. Our first real fight in five years. I knew she would be over it soon and that big bright smile will light up her face, but I was overwhelmed too. I was hurt. But I stopped myself.
There were no lights on in our house; the outside light had...
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posted by Ichigo127
I wrote it once when i was down in the dumps =) Writing helps....so if you're sad, Write....it's an easy way to let it all out =D
so, Here goes:
Facades. That’s something everyone has. Some may appear to be tough and cool, others will be cute and delicate but in reality, they’re all same. Pretending to be someone else, someone they’re not but someone they want to be. They’ll pretend to be living, but inside, they’re dead, full of shattered feelings.
Even the smallest acts in this life forces our facades upon us. Someone higher up will insult us and we’ll appear to be sorry and say...
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posted by Kimi4312
Heres a song about my boyfriend and his last ex enjoy

Hey, I heard your girlfriend had a fight with you,

She is a very crazy cheerleader,

She thinks she can fool everyone but she is wrong,

She can't fool me because I seen her bad soul,

She already fooled u but she haven't fool me,

I seen u smile everytime u walked up to me,

I never seen u smile in days since she showed,

I know what she is been doing behind your back,

I got your back since we were so small,

You walked me home pagina and always stay door my side,

She don't love u like I do,

She don't love u like I do,

She don't love u like I do,

Her...
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