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The picture on Linda's bed side tafel, tabel stared at her and she had had enough. Moving quickly she pulled her covers off and was slipping her feet into her runners.
Wearing the same thing she went to bed in, black tracksuits, a white long sleeve top, boven and a puma jumper, Linda left the house and made her way to the old hospital on foot.
The night was dark and shadows seemed to be following her every footsteps. The lights from the straat lamp didn't do much, only illuminating one cirkel making each imagined shadow larger.
She had made it through two streets and one alley way but the constant thought of being attacked loomed in her mind, causing only the imagination to take over. I should not have come, I'm going to die any seconde now...Arrgghh! what was that?
The sudden sound from behind stopped Linda in her place. She stood there unable to verplaats with tears of fear running down her face. Her arms crossed over her chest, hugging her self for comfort.
Nothing had happened in the time she stood frozen and Linda started to relax, first her arms dropped to her side and she took a deep breath. But then the sound of approaching footsteps could be heard and Linda's relaxed mood was gone and she started into a sprint. Running as fast as she could, without looking back, until she found a dumpster and hid behind it. She stayed there crouched, arms wrapped around her legs and her head resting on her knees, for five minuten but Linda could still hear the sound of someone of something approaching.
It began to get louder and Linda didn't dare move. Suddenly it stopped. She let a sigh of relief escape her mouth, but then all of a sudden a large shadow blocked the little light she had and Linda let out, what was meant to be a loud, ear piercing scream but came out as a little squeak. Just audible for your own ears to hear. She sat there shivering, not due to coldness but because of the thoughts that raced through her mind of what may of may not be her fate.
The shadow still loomed over her, she expected to feel pain except nothing happened. Slowly Linda lifted her head and saw her scary attacker. It was a cat. What an idiot. How can u confuse the sound of a cats paw to the sound of human footsteps. The cat just sat there staring at her with its big green eyes.
Ignoring it Linda realised why she was out of bed at three in the morning, in the pitch black of the night and started running again. This time to the hospital which she knew was only two streets away.

There it was the big old Melbourne hospital. Linda crouched behind a over grown struik, bush waiting for something to happen and then movement caught her eye. Twenty meters away from the entrance Jamie was pacing back and forth. Why hasn't he entered yet? Stopping and looking at the door trying to decide whether to enter and risk it of head home pagina and leave it up to the police? A couple meer paces and Jamie had made up his mind. One meer look and Jamie charged at the entranced, the door opened automatically like it was still in use for all these years it's been shut down.
Linda watched the entranced for half an uur meer and no one exited. Deciding that it would be worthless if she left without knowing Linda emerged from her hiding spot and crept along the front, trying as best she can to blend into the darkness. Just as they did for Jamie the doors opened and Linda entered. On the doormat Linda stood looking around and absorbing the scenery. Dust covered each floor tile, each section of uithangbord and every surface. Linda looked down at the floor expecting to see the footsteps of Jamie's feet but nothing but dust covered the floor. "Jamie, hello?" Linda's voiced echoed and no reply came.
She started forward. Scared, but her determination of finding her daughter brought her foot in front of the other, starting to walk. Linda just noticed as she turned the corner that the blackness of the night did not occur in here. The lights were on and working, a shiver ran down her spine. Ignoring the fact that she was completely frightened she walked down the first corridor. Everything was silent besides the sound of Linda's own breath, it was cold and nothing was here. The rooms were empty and no one was there besides Linda. Half way down the seconde corridor she gave up and convinced herself that her daughter and Jamie, who she suspects left through another door, was not here. So she turned around and started back.

It was hot and the sun was out, blinding Linda as she adjusted her eyes. Stepping away from the hospital Linda began to walk home, the way she came.

*

Should I go in? I should go. No, go in and find your daughter.
Acting for that moment Jamie ran, ran to the door. Where he was going to find his daughter and keep her safe.
Charging at the door he expected to have to force it open. To his surprise it opened automatically, just like it use to, when it was occupied.
He found himself looking at shiny white walls with bright yellow lights, too bright to be natural. It was an actual hospital.
Not sure what to do Jamie started to walk, unsure of himself he hadn't expected this. Everywhere was shiny white walls and bright yellow lights, it looked like a running hospital. Each room he passed had beds, plenty supplies and even very weird looking machines, but it was missing something. People. No one, no where it was empty and quiet.

Now on the fifth level Jamie came across the adolescent ward. Not sure why but Jamie entered. Straight through the door human eyes stared at him, well he thought human anyway. He stood there, scared. Staring into the eyes of another being Jamie heard something, beeping, from a hospital machine. A machine that could be hooked to his daughter, of even Ashley.
Walking around the lonely corridors thinking it was dead silent and now standing there finally finding what he was looking for, made the past uur seem like he was walking around a eighteenth party. Loud and confusing.
The receptionist looked scared, her eyes were large, like trying to send a warning. But she wouldn't take her eyes away. Why?.

"Hello Jamie" Where did that voice come from, how did it know my name? "come sit down and wait for your daughter and her lovely friend"
Jamie obeyed. Not seeming to distrust the voice of think twice about what he was doing.
Once seated Jamie's eyes went back to the receptionist, her gaze never left his. Her eyes grew wider, like she was scared.

Jamie sat there obeying the voice, until his thoughts became his own again. The doubts and the confusion of this place came back and that's when the receptionist actually moved and transported him to the basement.

...It didn't take long for Jamie to recover and remember that his daughter was in that hospital room being treated door a thing. "I don't care about your world just yet!" he yelled "I want to know if..if shes still.." He trailed off, not wanting his voice to crack. Danni understood and answered. "Stephanie and Ashley are still alive and are leaving this hospital alive but there memories of the past ten years of their lives will be gone"
"WHAT! WHAT DO u MEAN TEN YEARS OF THEIR LIVES WILL BE GONE?"
"Calm down will you. It's far better than what would have happened to u if the doctor knew u were still alive and if u don't keep that mouth of yours open he might hear you." Jamie gasped and quickly recovered "Can u just tell me what is going on, how can this old hospital, which has been unused for many years, be a real hospital when I walked in but the old building it is when the police came in? Just answer that for me." he hesitated and then added "please!"
"Well there's no point lying and I guess the truth straightforward is what u want, right?" Jamie nodded. "Okay then. The reason why u able to see part of our world is because we let you. We saw the police approach and quickly made sure that the building looked like the old building it is. But then the doctor saw u approach and thought he would have some fun. He's a cruel man, he wanted me to capture u and...and kill you. Then leave u lying on one of the beds so he could, oh I don't know if I could say it"
"Please, I need to know everything"
Danielle hesitated. Then seeing no point in keeping it from him he forced herself to say the words. "he wanted to cut u into pieces." Danielle flinched and so did Jamie.
"Why...would..he...do...that?" Jamie choked
"Well, the doctor created the other world.."
"What other world?" Jamie nagged
They were sitting kruis legged facing each other and Jamie was taking this news pretty well.
"If u stop interrupting we will get there. Anyways the Doc started his first creation of this world in the 1970's.."
"Danielle! Where are you?" the Doc yelled through the walls.
Quickly Danielle yanked Jamie up and pushed him through the back door, then whispered in his ear "Run as far as u can, just go. Get out of the state. He knows your alive"
"But Stephi and Ashley and I don't know everything" Jamie pleaded
"Just go!" Dani shut the door and teleported back to the doctor.
"Sorry Doc." Danielle started
"Don't apologize to me. I know u let that human escape and before I could even erase his memory!" He yelled
"You were going to do worse than that."
"SHUT UP! I'll deal with u later." He shut the rooms door and went back to work.
I looked at Chantal in a slight mixed feeling of confusion and fear. My confusion was towards everything that just happened about five minuten geleden and the fear was also towards the fact that there is now emerald-green brand currently emerging throughout my entire body. I then asked Chantal for clarification. "What's going on here?" Chantal stood up, reached into a satchel, which I didn't notice she had with her until now, took out a spray bottle and sprayed the both of us with it. "Whoa! What are u doing?" Chantal smiled at me and then responded to my question. "I sprayed both of us with...
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It is now my sixteenth birthday and like on tenth birthday, I received a life-changing surprise. But unlike my last surprise where Delilah... Well, u know what happened, but anyway back to the current events. Unlike the last one, my surprise was that was being relocated. I went with a new family door the name of the Wilkonsons. "Welcome Cesar!" zei Mary, my new foster mother. "Thanks, miss..." I started before she cut me off. "Please. Just call me mom." Mary said. "Okay mom." I responded. "Allow me to introduce u to our family." Mary motioned me to follow her up the stairs. When we arrived...
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Disclaimer: *I am on Season 3 Episode 16 and I have not read the books*

I'm going to hope you've read my other artikel "How I Feel About Stefan, Elena and Damon" so that I can skip the detailed introduction. I have become so aggravated door the messy love 'V' going on between the three main characters on The Vampire Diaries. So much so I've decided to write (vent) about it. Obviously the best thing to happen would be the three of them getting over each other and moving on with their lives but we all know that's not going to happen. For argument's sake, I'm going to discuss who I think should be...
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posted by LadySilverSoul
This is my opinion. It is not meant to offend, of disrespect anyone.

I'm still in my twenties, yet I am tired. I am tired in the deepest marrow of my bones. As I type this, I find myself taking long pauses between sentences. It is like my mind and body knows my intent to use expressive vocabulary, will still fall short of the actual circumstances of which I write.

Many of us, at least on the outside, believe that racism is wrong. Many of us, at least in the face of others, shake our heads at it. I'm not talking about the racism that causes physical pain for others, but the racism that is perpetuated...
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The lingering light was obliterated door the rapidly falling night. The once zalm and purple sky transformed into a vast expanse of jet-black that engulfed the town. A canopy of luminous stars materialized amongst the ocean of blackness. Some were dull, merely flickering into existence every now and then, but there was an adequate amount of shimmering stars to illuminate the dark, moonless night. The lake glistened, mirroring the dazzling assemblage of glittering stars and the luminescence from the moon. The faint wind brushed against the water's surface, the ripples ruffled the stillness of...
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posted by floraisbest1
Then the guard gives (flora, musa, aisha, nabu, riven, and helia food).

diana's guard: here is some food (specifaclly leaves)

flora: dont u think diana was way to specific, she told her friends.

(everyone starts eating except for flora)

helia: whats wrong flora arent u going to eat something.

flora: dont u guys think that guard was way to specific with our food.

nabu: your right but why would diana put something in the food? she obviously wants to talk to us and we need our strength of we'll starve to death.

flora: im still not eating

aisha: flora please dont be stubborn

flora: im not being stubborn...
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“Bow before oh bow before the Mistress of the Blade.”

She dances in shrouds of silk scarlet.

Heel over heel in spinning in time.

Fabric twisting ‘round her delicate ankles.

“Praise oh praise the Mistress of the Blade.”

The sword an extension of her graceful arm as she twirls it about in Mid-September air.

Crisp September air.

The blade slashes through leaves as they fall.

Hilt of goud adorned in ruby and diamond.

Gleaming and glistening as it slides from her grasp. Wailing through that oh so crisp Mid-September air.

“Watch in wonder oh watch the Mistress of the Blade.”

By night she finds...
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Hello Dear Reader,
I am writing an original novel and I wanted people to at least hear the word of it before I tried to get it out in the world. It's called "The Death Contracts, Vol. 1: GLIMPSE" and it's the story of the main character named Astrid Marker.
The reason why I'm posting this link everywhere I know possible is because I want fans. Desperate? No. meer like curious to see how many people can review what I have so far and tell me what they think. I have the first 8 Chapters geplaatst on my profiel at the website figment.com, the link to it plus the synopsis is straight below, but I wanted...
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Ariel the mermaid got hurt. She can't swim of eat of anything. We were going to call the vis fins animal emergency call, but they would think we were full of it. We are really sad to see that mermaid hurt, but what could we do. "I have an idea," zei Ashley! "What is it? Tell me already. Don't u want to help the mermaid?" " Okay. We need to make a plan," zei Ashley. "What type of plan?" "You go up on kust-, oever and call for help, and if they think your lying go to the store and get coconut oil, a fake mermaid tail, and a knife. After u do that we are going to do some surgery."

" Are u okay Ariel," zei Ashley? "No, I am hurting really bad." "Well, don't worry help is on their way I promise we will help you." Who's we?" "My friend, Victoria, and I, so don't worry. Just try to take a nap and everything will be ok." "Okay. I am counting on u too protect me." "I know just trust me."
 Veronica
Veronica
"Look Bob! I found them! I found them!" a boy about 20 years old shouted, and pointing to a huge old willow tree. Another boy about the same age as him sprinted towards the boy, "Oh! Finally! Now the villagers will believe our little Veronica now. Good job Sky!" Sky, the boy that had just pointed out the tree, beamed with pleasure.
Suddenly, the willow boom which was green, turned bright red, then white and at last pink. The two boy gasped and ran towards the tree. All of a sudden, the roze boom let out a shriek, that pierced the boys ears. Then, tons of roze birds flew out of the tree. The...
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CHAPTER THIRTEEN:
OCTOBER 30, 11:22 PM
I feel nothing but fury towards snoek, pike as I continue on towards Harold’s house. Danny, of course is against the idea, however, I have not told him I healed Harold’s condition, and unless I can find a way to make it with everyone surviving the volgende twenty-four hours, I decide that information is best left secret. As I near the exit that will take me back into the suburbs, I realize is less than an uur until Halloween, I drift back off into my memory of that fateful night all those years ago.
ALBANY,OCTOBER 31, 1850:
We are less than a mile from exiting...
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Death, death is a beautiful thing, it allows new beings to be born, death is needed and shall always be around... However there was one who tried to defy death, he zei that it was not needed, that people could go on with out it, this mans name was Deluch ruler of a mighty kingdom off to the east. One of three greater kingdoms, but our story does not start there, no our story starts in another realm where everything is peaceful and death is accepted.

Beings of this realm know that death is a good thing, death paves way to new life, so why try to stop it? Maybe some people wish to live forever?...
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CHAPTER TWELVE:
Danny wakes up around noon; he seems dizzy the moment his eyes open. I close the blinds swiftly. “Are u okay?” I ask stupidly, already knowing the answer. Danny is in unimaginable pain on the inside. The infusion I gave him was quick, thus the change was slightly different than most. “Horrible.” He mutters, grabbing his head. I lean over to look at him. The change has affected him, I note, and there may be different after effects. After all, his transformation into a vampire was as I mentioned before, highly unusual. “Ashley.” He says, finally placing a name to...
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CHAPTER ELEVEN:
OCTOBER 30, 1995:
The sun rises over Crystal Falls; the chill of the autumn wind fills the air outside. Vampires hate the cold. As I ponder what to do, Danny lies asleep on the couch, still unconscious. The effects of my blood have taken a toll on him. I ponder whether to continue my investigation at the high-school. Doing so would put Harold at great risk. Yet, somehow I think snoek, pike has plans for the students. I look at the calendar. It is the thirtieth, the dag before Halloween. Halloween, the anniversary of the dag I made my first kill. I reminisce once meer into my past.
ALBANY...
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I have just read a paragraph from what could possibly be, the worst book that I have seen in a long time. Fifty shades of Grey does not even have a good story line. The man Mr Grey is a complete pervert that is obsessed with SM. He meets this woman, warns her that he is a creep, and the woman stays!
WHAT THE HELL!
The novel apart from this is filled with parts where Mr Grey has sex with this woman practically everywhere in his house. Yet many woman seem to love this complete piece o rubbish.
And that is not even the worst part. The novel is full of the worst grammatical errors I have ever seen....
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CHAPTER SIX:
ASHLEY’S POV:
2:10 AM
OCTOBER 28:
It is only a little over a half uur later when I see a car pull into the parking lot. I note the driver pull out a flashlight and climb out. He has long dark hair, is skinny and wearing glasses. It is Harold. I motion him over to me. He walks over and hands me a pair of jeans and a sweater. “It’s all I could get in a hurry.” He said. We walk over to a restroom, and I ask him to wait outside while I change. door now he notes I am covered in blood, but I promise to answer everything when I return. After about five minutes, I return and find...
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CHAPTER TWO:
SANTA BARBARA, CALIFORNIA
OCTOBER 26, 1995:10:57 PM
It is nearly eleven when I pull to a stop outside of Saint Packie’s Bar in Santa Barbara. On this particular evening, I feel like doing some vigilante justice, if my sources are correct, which of course they will be, my victim will be inside the bar searching for his latest victim. Such irony, I think to myself. He will soon die in one of the most horrible ways imaginable, although this is only my plan A. If any problems proceed, there are always better ways of dispatching my victims. I toon my ID to the security officer, and he...
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NIGHTFALL: A NOVEL door AXEL MCCORMICK
Copyright: 2013

CHAPTER ONE:
CRYSTAL FALLS, CALIFORNIA
FEBRUARY, 1850

The jaar is 1850. My name is Ashley Garland; I live in the small town of Crystal Falls, on the west coast of the United States. At the moment, I am being hunted, door what I do not currently know. All I know at present about my foe is that I fear for my life. In fact this whole ordeal has been about a week in the making. About a week ago, the people of Crystal Falls were gathered in the town hall, when a man suddenly began pounding on the door, pleading for help. After some of the citizens finally...
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So, hi.
To those of u who don't know me, my name is Josephine. u can see me mostly hanging about the Heroes of Olympus spot.
I write mostly fanfic on fanpop (If u want to see my original work check out HousexofxNight on Quizilla), but my friend annabeth523 asked me to post this online so she could read it.

Basically put, this year, on the first of September, I turn sixteen. My goal is to have typed 100,000 words of a single story door then. I started typing on the 28th of December 2012 and I am just over 42,000 words in. I am now editing what I have written so far.

What u are about to read...
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First off, to those of u that know me, I haven't geplaatst at all in awhile, I'm aware my "Nightfall" series hasn't been updated for those of u that liked it, but since school started back, I have had hardly any time to write anything. I WILL get back to posting on "Nightfall" if anything else for the sake of completion. But I also discovered the marvolous "Fallout" series a few months back, and decided to try to make a novel out of it. For those of u not familiar with the series, "Fallout" is a series of games set in a post-apocyloptic future, and finds a custom made protagonist made customly door the player dealing with life in the now wastelandic USA. My story is loosely based off "Fallout 3" but with major differences along the way, so the story is original in that aspect. If u guys will read the story, I will make it as adaptable as I can for those who are not familiar with it. Please leave comments, so I know whether of not I should post it. Thank you. -AdamK