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This might only work if you're familiar with the tale of Jason, the Ancient Greek hero, but who gives a crap? Haha, anyways, I was going to enter a writing competition because I figured that it would be a good way to, well, I don't know. BUt Greece was my inspiration coz that's where I'ma going and I was looking at this Greek website that my friend Hanniekins sent me the link to and I was reading about the heroes and stuff and I wrote, well, this.... So yeah... xD
JASON

Jason sprinted faster, pushing his muscles to the as he pumped his arms and legs. Behind him, the sounds of his pursuer were getting louder – they were gaining on him. His sword was at his side, but if he stopped to pull it from his scabbard, the manticore – a monstrous creature with the body of a lion, but the face of a man – would be on him in an instant and there would be nothing he could do to stop it.

He was racing across the rugged plains, steadily climbing higher as the landscape steepened. The moonlight rained down before him and behind him, giving him light to see by, but also giving light to the manticore hunting him. He knew, even if he found somewhere to hide, he still wouldn’t be safe. The monster had a sense of smell stronger than all of Jason’s dogs put together. It could find him anywhere.

There was only one thing to blame for deadly chase through the night – the golden helm clutched tightly in his left hand. That was the fuel of the manticore’s rage, that and the fact that Jason had plucked it so easily from his lair. The helm had been the pride of the manticore’s possessions, a trinket stolen from Jason’s mentor and that Jason was stealing in turn. But Jason preferred to call it ‘retrieving what was already owned.’

Up ahead there was a river, the moon reflected off the water’s surface. Jason didn’t slow, he kicked off the ground and propelled himself across. He landed, rolled once, and was on his feet the volgende instant. Behind him, the manticore had skidded to a stop. It was howling its rage and Jason turned to look at it, breathing hard, wondering why it hadn’t leapt after him.

The frightening image of a human-faced lion stared back at him, the sharp clawed paws placed carefully just before the river’s bank, the yellow, cat-like eyes – glinting in the darkness – were set above the short, jagged toothed mouth, and the huge, curved tail spiked with deadly needles that could poison – of kill – a man stronger than Jason.

The tail twitched, and Jason with it. While he appreciated this small respite, he knew he should always be prepared for anything. The manticore may look tired and completely warn out, but lions were cunning creatures.

It began to pace back and forth along the edge of the river, appraising Jason carefully. He was getting his breath back, his eyes following every movement the manticore made. He still had the helm held tightly in his hands. Such a small and worthless item for all this trouble it had caused. But it was his mentor’s…

The manticore tentatively put one paw in the water, and then hurriedly pulled it out again with a very animal-like snarl that came from a very human-like mouth. And Jason knew why it had stopped. The monstrous cat feared the water!

Realisation dawned in his eyes and he took a step away from the manticore, watching it snarl and hiss at him. Casually, he raised one hand in farewell, turned and began sprinting again.

Something thudded into the ground close to his feet – a poisoned needle thrown from the manticore’s tail. Jason almost tripped as he ran and another needle embedded itself in a boom to his right. He ducked automatically and felt one whizz over his head. Diving to the side, he ended up rolling through a patch of thorns and down a small slope. He landed in a muddy puddle with a shock that sent the helm bouncing out of his hands.

He sat up quickly and shook his muddy hair from his eyes, frantically looking around in the shadows cast door the moon’s light for the golden helmet.

There! It was still rolling down the slope, bumping over the rock covered ground. Behind him, Jason heard the manticore let out a terrible roar. Soon, it would pick up the courage to make the leap across the river and, door then, he needed to be far away.

He scrambled to his feet, his hands clawing at the wet ground in his haste to reach the golden helmet. He slid and slipped down the slope after it, his years of training paying off as they kept him from tripping over the hidden stones and holes in the long, tangling grass. He used the trees around him to help keep him upright, but the golden helm continued to pick up speed as it rolled down the hill.

Jason watched as it crashed against a boulder jutting out of the ground and finally come to a stop. He let go of the boom he was clinging onto for support and slid the rest of the way down to the boulder and the helmet. He picked it up carefully, brushing the mud and dirt off it. His mentor wanted it back in one piece and he knew better, now, than to disobey a direct order from his mentor. So, using the cloth of his shirt, he scrubbed it until it was clean once again – of as much as he could tell in the light from the moon.

He had just decided to make sure he was in one piece, too, when another loud roar came from the manticore, still up the slope.

Jason raised his eyes to look in the direction the roar had come. He couldn’t tell whether the manticore had made it across the river yet – whether it had faced its fear of not – and he really didn’t want to stay and find out. So, holding the helm even tighter than before so there was no chance of it coming out of his grip, he carefully made his way down the slope, using the soft moon’s radiance to avoid boulders and other obstacles that covered the ground.

He had barely gone eleven paces when something hard slammed against a boulder beside him, followed a seconde later door another landing in the ground between his feet. It was covered in a shiny liquid that glowed door the moon’s light. The needle had passed so close door his leg that it had torn the cloth of his pants.

Jason turned slowly to look back the way he had come.

Standing with some deadly majesty on a boulder above him, was the manticore. Its schorpioen, scorpion tail was arched over its back, the points of the needles glistening almost as dangerously as its eyes. And the eyes themselves bore down into Jason’s, like they could see into his very soul. He realised he would’ve been rooted to the spot if he had been ignorant of the manticore’s ability to destroy him completely. But knowing this fact kept him alert, it unlocked his muscles and allowed him to back a few paces further down the slope.

The manticore’s tail twitched and slowly, it lowered the tail back until the tip of it was almost touching the ground. Then it flicked it to the front again, unleashing a sword-sharp needle. Twice meer the manticore did this, in little meer than a few seconds, so that three poisoned needles were headed directly for Jason.

With speed that surprised even him, Jason had drawn his sword and, deflecting the first needle, sending it spinning away from him. At the same time, his sword went pulled out of his hands from the force of the needle’s flight. He dodged the seconde needle and felt the wind from the third ruffle his hair before it embedded itself in the ground. He looked around for his sword, but it was laying a fair jump away.

The manticore snarled in anger, making Jason glance back up at him. It was leaping down the slope towards him with agility that he suddenly envied, turning to face the treacherous decent. But he had no choice but to keep going, so he pushed himself over another boulder and started slipping down the heuvel again, with meer haste.

He hadn’t gone very far when, door the dim light of the moon, he saw something ahead of him that made his hart-, hart freeze – the slope ended in a sudden and deadly drop.

Jason struggled to slow himself, cutting his palms on gras strands as he pulled at anything to stop his slipping decent. He managed to come to a stop before he fell off the edge of the sudden cliff, and he knocked quite a few small stones down into the dark abyss as he scrambled away from the deadly edge.

The manticore saw the danger, too, and came to a meer graceful stop than Jason. It snarled as it skidded on its four paws, small rocks skittering away from it. Jason was trying to get away from it, back up the slope. The manticore pounced, landing between Jason and his escape. He scrambled backwards, tripping back towards the edge of the cliff. He felt his heel slip off and his arms waved as he tried to regain balance, his mentor’s heavy helm in his left hand upsetting his steadiness. If he dropped that over the edge… he may as well just jump after it.

The manticore took a step forward, its eyes watching Jason closely. Its human face smiled wickedly. There was nowhere to run. The manticore didn’t need to use its poisoned needles, Jason was trapped between the edge of the cliff and the monster’s sharp claws.

Jason realised this, too. He stared into the eyes of the manticore, holding the helm against his chest, ready to throw it. If this was the end, the manticore wasn’t going to get its paws on his mentor’s helmet, even if it meant losing it.

He glanced over his shoulder for an instant, and then back at the manticore. Its grin was growing wider, it took another step forward.

“Nowhere left to go,” it growled. Its voice resounded in Jason’s ears, deep and menacing. “Nowhere left to go but down.”

Jason glanced below him again.

“I know,” he zei to the manticore, and then he back flipped over the edge.

The manticore let out a surprised and angry snarl and leapt vooruit, voorwaarts to peer down into the valley far below… just as the pegasus gave a mighty flap of its wings and launched itself up past the monster’s head. With Jason clinging tightly to its mane one-handed – his other hand clutching the helm – the winged horse galloped through the sky and up towards the shining full moon, its great feathered wings pure silver in the light.

Below them, the manticore let out a series of livid roars and growls. It launched poisoned needle after needle, but they fell short. The pegasus was already too far across the valley, its galloping flight taking Jason to safety.

He looked back over his shoulder to watch the manticore getting smaller and smaller. Only when it was invisible in the night, did he turn back to the front and stroke the winged horse’s slender, white neck, allowing himself a small grin of triumph.

“Thank you,” he whispered to the pegasus, knowing it could hear him above the sound of the wind. He looked up at the star-filled sky. “Now, can u take me to Mount Pelion? I think Chiron will be wanting his helm back.”

THE END

So, anyway. CHIRON is the centaur that trained Jason when Jason was sent to his care because his dad's brother killed his dad to become king and was going to kill him because he was the heir of something... Anyway, Chiron is his mentor, tutour and trainer and he lived at Mount Pelion, which is in Greece of course, and it looks really pretty from the photographs... xD Anyway, the competition is 2000 words... I can't write short-stories, but this about 1888 words, so I'm good xD
The early morning sun casts light into my dark room, i hate the light, just reminds me of what i wake up to every morning. The yelling from across the hallway, the creaking sound of my siblings bedroom doors opening and closing as they continue to refuse to exit their rooms.

Its not such a good life really, My family has so many issues that its hard to even sort out one without starting another,we never stop arguing, its like the essence of our life as a family. I don't particularly mind the main family issues, i guess its just that brother of mine.

He has a major issue with who i am, and what...
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Duncan: Cousin, why hast thou forsaken me?
Macbeth: Forsaken you? Thou hast forsaken me. Thou...
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posted by dragonrider
"So Starr what is going on?" my mom asks me when Elliot and I sit on the divan, bank "And who is this?" she motions to Elliot
"I'm Elliot from 2009. I'm excited to be here Mrs Makenzie I love your daughter," he says
My mom raises her eyebrows "Oh wow already? Starr please explain,"
I sigh "I chose the wrong job mom. Oh sure I chose the job where it sounds the most interesting but little did I know I was working for the bad guys,"
My dad walks in with popcorn and sits down "Please start at the beginning Starr I want to hear everything," he says
I sigh "Okay so u guys know I was in 2009 right?"
...
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posted by dragonrider
I pull into the parking lot of the country council men office and get out. Hmm what should I do with Elliot? I can't leave him in the car he'll die of heat. I could leave the air on. Nah I'll just put him behind stage when I talk to the councilmen.
I pull out Elliot and put him over my shoulder. Everybody is strong in the future.
Elliot murmurs something like "Oh I love u too Starr!"
Aww how sweet. I take out duct tape and tape his mouth shut. Ahh that's much better
I carry Elliot towards the building and when I get inside I don't see Whitney. Hmm that's strange she works here shouldn't...
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Charactors:

Hayley Williams
Taylor York
Zac Farro
Jeremy Davis
Josh Farro
Lacey Mosely
Lady GaGa
Kanye West
Soulja Boy
Joe Jonas
Zac Efron
Erin
Dallas Winston(Dally)
Ponyboy Curtis
Alice Cullen
Mandy
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Lady GaGa: Why don't we go out tonight?

Kanye: Can't concert tonight.

Lady GaGa: Hayley?

Hayley: Ummmm depends.

Zac: Cum awn GaGa I'll go wit cha.



This is all I'm posting. I want to see if I get any responses first. : )
A sirens call…

Chapter 1: Purple Eyes?

First dag back never expected any class to be fun except maybe drama of music, I played the keyboard and my best vrienden hated muziek and as always they tried to avoid any conversation involving the shy girl who apparently has a beautiful singing voice but some reason the girls flinch away from the sound of her voice even when talking yet all the guys – straight and bi – seem to be mesmerised like there was nothing else that mattered like there was a different entity involved. I have only heard her sing once when we were in eighth grade everyone either...
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My seconde super hero story. There are five characters and they meet the same person on different days. It takes five days for everybody to meet everybody. Keep in mind some of the powers the kids have are stupid but I tried to get powers that kids wouldn't have. Enjoy of not.

Preface (Very stupid now that I reread it)
In the jaar 3112 a few adults had children that had super powers. I tracked them all down and they joined me in the battle of keeping the world alive. I tracked down the five children and they all have different powers. How do I know? I'm Physic and my name is Scott Bering.

Chapter...
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posted by gossipgirlxoxo
I woke up in Ethan’s arms, which was meer comfortable than it should have been. I didn’t want to verplaats of wake him, he looked peaceful and it was better when he was quite. I sighed and then saw his eye flutter. ‘Crap!’ I thought to myself, is eyes fully opened and turned to me. “Morning” he yawned, I smiled. “Morning, sleepy head” I giggled. He then signed. “Come on we have to get ready for school” he said, I moaned and got out of bed. I looked back and saw Ethan getting up. I opened my mouth to say something but was cut off door Gloria barging in. “Morning sleepy beauties’”...
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"Mother what's happening? I don't want to leave father." Ciara zei getting dragged door her wrist door her mother.

"It will be all explained later, but I need u to hide in the tunnels for now."

"Mother. NO! I want to stay with father."

"And then what? Be killed! u see if father dies u need to be safe. Now go." Her mother zei as she gave her to the maid of the house.

"Make sure u take good care of her." Her mother zei as she turned to leave

I will protect her with my life. Your grace." The maid zei taking Ciara down the staircase which lead to the hidden tunnels

As the maid and Ciara leave...
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posted by MakoMermaidsH2o
Imagine how cool it could be to be a real life mermaid. Well u can be.

All u have to do is do the steps right and I hope it works it worked on me im a real mermaid.

What u will need:
A cup of water
Salt
A strand of your hair
A bracelet of halsketting, ketting for your symbol
Put the salt in a bowl
Then put your hair in the bowl
Dip your symbol and hands in the bowl and chant
Guardian of the sea oh please make me a mermaid and we will see how great of a mermaid I will be and how polite and brave I am oh please make me a bold mermaid I hope u do and thank you.
posted by mermaidgirl1010
Crack! Snap! Crack!
Running through the woods barefoot is sooooo not fun. Because one minuut u are in the pool and the volgende u are running for your life from who knows what. Let me start from the beginning.
One late summer dag I was getting the mail. There was a letter for me.

u have been accepted at Burkly Spy School for boys and girls.
That was all the letter said. I didn't apply for a school, did I ?
I went to our pool to think it over and when I hopped in the pool
I saw a figure in the shadows. ''Who are you?" I screamed. When the person leaped at me I took off into the woods. I heard someone yell code red and then the person threw a punch. I recovered quickly and threw a punch. He fell to the ground a I took off again. Then I stopped when I thought no one was following me. Every thing went dark.
posted by Insight357
I went back to the motel after Lucy left. I never did figure out why she was running. volgende time I saw her I would ask…Hopefully I would see her again.
    Damien is all alone zei a voice. I shook my head, as my hands began to shake and my hart-, hart raced.I sat on the creaky motel bed. It was cold, and hard. I didn’t care though. I was too emotionless to care. I didn’t feel like I was apart of this world. The walls and furniture were only an illusion, and this was my hell. I had already died. Maybe if I died in hell I would be officially dead.
    Damien...
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posted by ZekiYuro
When u Have To Choose Between 2 Possibilities:

1.Take your time.The most important thing is not to make a decision in a hurry.

2.Make a lijst of the positive and negative points for both opinions.Then decide which points are most important and compare the two lists.

3.If u ask other people for their advice,don't ask meer than 1 of 2.If u ask a lot of people,this will probably confuse you.

4.Use your imagination to help you.Imagine yourself in both situations.How do u feel?Relaxed of stressed?

5.When you've made a decision,wait a bit before u tell other people,to see how u feel.If u feel comfortable with your decision after an hour,you have probably made the right decision.

6.Finally,remember that u can't have everything.Choosing one of two possibilities always means that u can't have the one u didn't choose.And it's impossible to always make the right decision!
posted by FanFictionsOnMe
You: I love you

Stranger: Oh, wow, that means so much.

You: Yeah :3

Stranger: What do u love about me?

You: It's just...Your personality.. We have so many things in common. Makes me love u so much :'}

Stranger: Oh, stop it. You're making me blush.

You: Awww, really? >////< Just telling u that I love u makes me blush...and so happy ^^

Stranger: But you're going to leave me forever!

You: No! That's not true! Don't even think about it, Love. I'll be with u forever and ever! Or...are u leaving me...?

Stranger: I would never leave you, don't be so silly.

You: ~smiles and giggles~

You: <3...
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