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posted by Lore_Master
Our hero fell to his knee's "Wha....what....no all my work and research.....gone!" he zei as he clutched his chest gasping for air, as dag turned to night he sat there with an empty feeling eating him from the inside, he looked up at the star's "Why me why do.... why the fuck does this happen to me!!!" the hero yelled as he started pounding the ground violently, his whole body filled with rage and sadness knowing all of his work was just wasted he began to shed tear's it seemed the meer he hit the ground the further it plunged him into dark thought's soon thinking of resorting to evil necromancy "What if I....." he thought to himself as he headed toward's the graveyard. The hero made his way toward's the graveyard he felt his soul slowly dissapearing as if he had completely fallen victim to the dark art's, reaching the graveyard he noticed a pair of bright yellow eye's stareing at him from the tree's "I know what you're about to do necromancer..... I suggest fleeing before you're soul is forever lost." zei the beast slowly makeing it's way down from the boom "Oh yea? what are u going to do u mangy mut!" zei the hero with great anger as he kept walking knowing that the beast would strike him down if he got any closer "Why you!" the beast yelled as he charged the hero but sunddenly stopped in his tracks seeing the symbol on his hand "No it can't be..." the beast backed away retreating into the tree's from whence it came, the hero was surprised and confused "Why didn't he kill me why he had the chance...?" he thought to himself as he entered the graveyard. Upon entering the graveyard dark ground 's the hero looked around at the grave's but one cought his eye "Hmm.... Mother." he slowly reached down a touched the grave "Please forgive me..." he zei as he began digging her up... it took him a couple minuten to completely dig the coffin up as he gazed at her coffin a cold chill ran down his spine knowing his soul and mind was completely lost in dakrness, he opened the coffin stareing at his mother's bone's he thought to himself should he continue with what he was about to do and if he progressed any further he would turn into a monster.... the zeehond, seal started to glow on the back of his hand he felt the urge to consume he couldn't fight it, he began tp snap his mother's bone's like twig's.... then he started sucking out the marrow staright out of the bone's themself! He could feel the dark power's engulfing his body, and a unbareable pain emergeing from his spine he could feel his bone's transforming as the darkness took control of his body. the hero began to feel light headed as he swayed back and forth feeling his morality being drained he couldn't hold himself any meer he fell into the coffin blacking out once more. As the hero awoke he had a odd smell about he sniffed himself as his nostrells flared he could smell sulfer on him, he got up looking around he had a strange feeling as if someone was watching him, it was quiet to queit "what's this odd feeling I'm getting?" he pondered as he got up out of the coffin, he looked at the back of his hand he noticed it had a spike at the top, boven of it knowing it wasn't there before it troubled him, a cracking noise broke the deep silence and a sharp pain was comeing from his back side "AHHH!!!" the hero yelled in agony as two black wings ripped their way from his back stretching and expanding, he could tell he was no longer human all of his morality was drained and his eyes completely engulfed door darkness, he couldn't remember anything about his past every little thing he thought he knew was gone "Wh...who am I?" he zei to himself as he stared into a pool of water seeing his reaflection stareing back at him.
posted by HouseMindFreak
Chapter 7

Koda awoke suddenly.
His hart-, hart was hammering in his chest and an excruciating pain filled his body.
His skin felt as if it was ripping open, his muscles were in so much pain as if he pulled every muscle fiber.
The skin and bones in his fingertips exploded as something else grew in replacement of his nails.
His jawbone crunched and popped.

Everything in his body was changing.

As he tried to maintain his thoughts, he slowly lost all memory of who he was. He was becoming meer animal than human.

The pain finally subsided.
All he thought and felt was anger.
And revenge.



Jax sat alone in the living...
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posted by MissMuffin38
Daniel stepped onto the streets ahead of him, packed with different families doing their regular thing. One of the families Daniel knew. A familiar face stepped out of the car - his best friend Jonathan. Jonathan's mother caught a glimpse of Daniel in the corner of her eye. She turned round with a smile on her face. "Hello Daniel! How are u today?"
"I'm fine thanks, how about you?" Daniel answered politely. "I'm very good thank you. I suppose you'll be wanting to see Jonathan?" she asked him.
"Er, yes please." He walked over to greet Jonathan.

"How are u Dan?" Jonathan asked. "Your mother...
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posted by HouseMindFreak
1st chapter: link

2nd chapter: link

3rd chapter: link


Chapter 4

Koda ran out of the school before anyone heard of found out about his little incident. But he knew sooner of later someone would walk in that office and see Principle Nakai on the floor with his bureau on top, boven of him and realize who wasn’t in school anymore…he would be serious trouble.

The sun was at its peak in the sky, probably around 1 of 2 pm. It was hot, the breeze that blew was dry and it burned Koda’s eyes. He stood volgende to his dirt bike, contemplating where he should go before any cop…or parent arrived.
He decided it didn’t...
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posted by hannah_vampire
I awoke to darkness, bloodshot eyes and pain that jolted now and again through my body. “As u know the hunt comes back then and again but this time was not for a friendly visit this time was because of the Demons of the night and Arielbelle’s obsession of getting in trouble and they have to be killed but Arielbelle has to be stopped and if u all wont the hunt will”.

ONE WEEK LATER.

Scarlett-Jane was in the koop getting a belly bar when I bumped into Damon oh just great.Niall saw Damon and me starting to dance with each other he made it pour down rain and then disappear, I smiled and...
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posted by kateeuy
It took some time for Scarlet to get her head around the fact that she was no longer human. Thoughts raced through her mind like a pack of wolves. Cravings. Her weakness. It was hard to resist the sweet lucious taste of human blood, running down her lips, into her mouth. So satisfying. She needed it, now, meer than anything else. Standing in her bedroom facing the the moon shining brightly in night sky. She closed her eyes gently, breathing in and out. Scarlet felt a sudden chill rise up her back bone, her teeth gowing larger, sharper, ready to feed.

That calm thursday night, the moon was out...
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I can't write this anymore.

I feel like its a copy of Avatar the last airbender. And the companions quartet. I never intended on making it like that. But whenever I imagine my characters using their powers I see them bending. I know u are all going to get. mad. Really mad. Really really mad. Really really really really mad. But my stories need meer *sparkle*. A better writer with better talent. I think it needs meer thought. I think I should create something that is REALLY from my imagination. Thats why, no matter what u all are going to say....

I'm stopping Girl who cried wolf.

I know your...
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Here is the end of the last chapter for you!

Unlike Alexis he wasnt soaked, accept for some dropplets of water in his hair that he had gathered from standing with her. Alexis sat on her knees and rubbed her now sore elbows.They looked at each other for a short period of time, before Alexis sneezed.
"You should probably go somewhere dry before u catch a cold," he mumbled offering Alexis his hand. Alexis shook her head at the offering, before slowly rising to her feet without the aid of his hand.
"I cant go back to school if that what u are thinking,"She snapped looking toward the small dot...
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"Good morning," I hear the principal say as she does every day. Normally, I would politely respond to that with a "Thank u Mrs. Monrale, u too," but today I'm just pissed.

How can she say that?! It was awful of her to say such a thing! "It is most definitely not a good morning," I mutter to myself. But she is all the way down the hallway now.

I pace around, taking a long route to my locker where, as always, the two cheerleaders on either side of my locker are cheerfully chatting. Normally I would say "Excuse me," but today I'm not normal. I can't bring myself to say why I'm so abnormal...
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Let me tell u the story of how I got here. It was the fourteenth of January, 2011 in school. Here they have alchemy classes when the students learn how to use specially shaped circular diagrams called transmutation circles to flow energy from their bodies through another object to transmute, of change, one object into another. In this class the only notable ones are the teacher, Mrs. Black, an elderly lady with bad memory and no experience with technology, the idiot, Justin, a light skinned black young man, the other idiot, Ben, a dark skinned black young man with black glasses, and me, Harrison,...
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sorry everyone who reads these but i have to stop writing them for three weeks. I thnk i will be able to fit in maybe 1 in that period, but i have my prelims and i will be too tired of too something to publiceer them, sorry. But i will try, i promise!




































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 Ahsoka
Ahsoka
It's been quite a while since Ahsoka has seen Rex. They missed each other in the war. But now Ahsoka was going to come back from the war, although it never ended yet.

Ahsoka was on the Twilight ship with Anakin. They have gotten older, so they grew out of their old outfits and picked new ones. They landed on Coruscant and all the clones waited for their arrival.

Ahsoka: Oh my god. I can't belive that I'm going to Rex aga- *she stopped* Uhh, I mean the clones.

Anakin: Yeah, sure. door the way, u look great.

Ahsoka: Thank you, Anakin.

Anakin was surprised. He's never heard her say his real name. Now...
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hallo guys, i hope u all like this....

the truth is something u allways want to know, something that burns inside, untill it is let out, but sometimes the truth is better kept a secret.

i stood in the same spot staring at the two black cars, my hart-, hart racing, my mind ticking. i closed my eyes and looked to the ground, my shoulders slumping. Giving up. No one came out the cars yet, they just waited, waited for this, for me to give up. they had won, whovever they were, they had me. in that single moment i had givn up, lost. I felt a hand on my shoulder, and i cringed away from it.
"Go!" jared...
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The sky had begun to turn to dusk and the moon was getting ready to rise.
Béla and Maleva were still heading down the old wagon road heading to their site
Béla is starting to get nervous as the mounting suspense of what will happen on the full moon started to build.
He watched the sky while keeping an eye on the sky his head began to give him a burning sensation a sensation he had never felt before his hart-, hart started to thump and thud bobop bobop bobop bobop he was feeling tension of his muscles tightening and contracting he was scared stiff.
He raised his right hand up to his forehead and rubbed...
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posted by ButteBaby_K
 An image found that somewhat looks like the image of Phim I had in my head. ")
An image found that somewhat looks like the image of Phim I had in my head. ")
Chapter 1: Lost in my own world of thought, a common occurrence, the rain left me like always. I remained standing moving with breeze, as the rain receded leaving me pondering my thoughts. I smiled to myself. Ilias, my name was derived from his. I was born in a great time of sorrow, called Ravasn; for that was the name of death, which there was much of nearly 15 years geleden on the dag of my beginning. A massive drought had plagued Phim for 7 years for the rain spirit was greatly wounded door the indecency of my people. They had lost his trust and his respect, and I was the solution. My mother had...
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posted by I_DONT-KNOW
HI EVERYONE, WELL THIS IS THE seconde PART AND HOPEFULLY EVERYTHING WILL BE EXPLAINED.

My hands were shaking as i looked at them, how did I do that?
"I take it u all got my message?" Alexis asked looking at the four groaning figures coming for us. I stood up and stood ready, but Alexis grabbed the bottom of my trouserr leg and stopped me from running.
"Robyn its cool, they are freinds, in fact u know them," she zei still smiling. How could she be smillig, apparently people where after us, and we all have powers, I threw my hands up and covered my head, before falling to the ground. A sharp...
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Chapter One: Before

A warm late Augusts’ evening was upon Hultimore, the secret area which humans that held no gem upon their left palm were not able to see. Gemmers believed that if they visited this area for any amount of time at least once in life, they will be born a meer powerful Gemmer after death.
No one stepped upon the streets of Hultimore after dark. It was forbidden. Most obeyed this rule and stayed indoors. Yet, the silence of Hultimore was broken, as a lone traveller stepped out across the barrier between dry, barren land and a city full of magic.
His footsteps echoed in the empty...
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posted by dancing_banana
Peter
    I can’t believe she opened up like that. I can’t believe we’re this close now. We talk every dag now. I keep trying to tell her to get away from her home pagina life. She just keeps refusing. I don’t know what to do, in all those classes in school they where always like meld it, meld it, and meld it. So what should I do?

Kristen
    Peter keeps saying to get away. I should. If someone else knew they’d call social services without hesitation. I am completely engrossed in the book I’m reading when Jim walks in with a very cocky smile....
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There I was… Stepping on my own feet on the real ground. Yeah… the real one.
No meer “dad, will u give me a ride to…?”, of “ please mom, I need that money to buy a lovely pair of jeans”.
No meer dependence, no meer good meals in family, no meer life as I know it.
Time to step up on my feet.
Lily is my name…and I´m 18 years old. This is the new beginning of a new life. MY own life, the one that I have to build up.
Desperate about all this thoughts, all I could do is call my BF to cry over the phone.
-Soph…Oh Soph! This is nerve racking…OMG OMG OMG! I can´t believe we´re...
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posted by mitchie19
11. M E E T A A R O N


At exactly 3 pm, Mario, our house guard beeped through the telecom.
“Mr. Riley?” Mario asked. He used his British accent. I shifted my weight near the front door which the telecom was hung beside it. I pressed the button. “Yes, Mario?” “There’s someone at the gate, looking for Ms. Marhion.” I wonder who it is. I looked out the window. A silver BMW was parked in front of the gate. Weird.
He might not be a bad guy. “Send him in,” I told Mario then I saw the gate opened.
I approached the guy looking for Mariah. “Hi, Riley Cruz,” we shook hands. “Aaron...
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posted by mitchie19
10. M A K E I T H A P P E N


“Yo, Sean, what up?” I shouted. Sean’s a football player, the quarterback of the team. Mostly he likes shaking his blonde hair. Sean’s living room was filled with my friends, Toby, Jason, Michael, and Chris. “I’m great, man. God, Melissa nailed me!” Sean said. We did a high five. The guys were watching Sports Channel.
I drank the can of Pepsi I was holding. “Look, look, look!” Toby was pointing at the flat-screen. “Another round left then the Toro’s will be champion!” Chris and Michael were shouting. I joined them.
“That was a two-point...
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