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posted by anbonie
He respected bang, but it happened nothing. Anyway they hurried, because clock wasn’t usually wrong. Butler crashed bars.
When they came out of shaft, in cold room was bang. Bodyguard grabbed Pieter and with him ran across the garden and jumped in pond. He knew that pool is connected with house and it is going to be too dangerous to jump in it.
In the pond there were no many chances to survive. And it was late autumn and it was ice on surface.
But they haven’t got any other chance. Butler and Pieter waited for explosion and when they were face to face with brand they sink. Slave was all time holding his ward. He told that is Pieter really week, but he was able to be under the water almost much time than butler.
Bodyguard helped Pieter to come out of the water. Outside was blowing cold wind and it was really cold.
Pieter felt like homeless person, actually he was homeless person. There was no house. There left just garage, pond and…
…safe with money! Usually he would be happy to have all family money, but now he knew that he haven’t got nor mother, nor father. He was orphan. He never wanted it, but he realized that now…
Bodyguard broke his daydreaming: “You aren’t the only one who is having psychical problem…” Pieter was confused. Butler said: “Until now I haven’t told it to anyone, but I have to tell this someone…
…I am wearing a bra…” “What!” shouted Pieter and hardly holding back laugh. “I’m telling you, I’m wearing a bra. u are only one who knows that… and I want u will be only one who knows that for ever.” Pieter was holding back: “Who should I tell. I have, actually I had three friends. Now I have got only one and that one told me a secret which I will tell back to him.”
Few seconden later, butler realized that Pieter is quietly laughing. He changed subject of a conversation. He wanted to know, what Pieter now want to do. But Pieter didn’t know the answer; he knew that he will have to explain that in school. And they have to sleep somewhere too. He didn’t want to think about this in that moment, so he asked butler: “Can I give nickname to you? I know that u mustn’t tell me your real name, but u can have nickname.” Bodyguard said: “Do it!” Pieter smiled and said: “I hope you’ll like it. For a long time, actually I have never had so muscular bodyguard of butler. Because that u looks really strong. And if u are strong, u are hard too. So, u should be Iron.” Guard liked this name, so he repeated: “Iron…”
Sun started to setting. Pieter started to be a bit scared. They still haven’t got any place to sleep. He remembered that in poor part of city lives old man. People told that he is insane, but Pieter enjoyed in his stories all time and he knew that that man – Henry is total normal. They have to hurry, because it was almost dark.
When they arrived it was 8.30 pm. Pieter made few steps back and Iron knocked.
House of cottage was made door boards. A door was hanging on just one hinge. There was only one window.
Door opened. There was dirty, birded, untidy man. Pieter knew that look isn’t everything, that hart-, hart is important. But anyway he felt like this time, when he saw Henry for first time.
Pieter loved his stories. He was on square every time when Henry was telling stories and he gave him the most money.
Pieter had to look awful, because Henry didn’t know who he is. And he didn’t know Iron too, because Pieter got him this morning.
He has no idea how to prove him that he is really Pieter. And than he remembered, that few days geleden he was telling him how he lost his last bodyguard. He wanted to tell story again:
“It was dark, stormy night, the worst storm I have ever gone through. Because electric was out mum sent me to fridge to bring meat for dinner. My bodyguard went with me. Fridge was locked, so I have to open it with a key, working on electro-magnetic radiation.
u can use the key only once in twenty-four hours. Fridge was saving energy for at least forty-eight hours. It was bulletproof. Slave was clumsy, so he fell into fridge in the same moment when I was closing it. He was sentence to freeze…”
He wanted to tell how they were getting him out and how they buried him, but Henry interrupted him: “Piet! What the hell are u doing here? And why u were all time talking like: ‘It was’?”
Pieter explained him everything. When he stopped old man said: “What has your father had in safe?” “Money, I guess…?” Henry just said: “Let’s get some sleep, I think, that u don’t know half of things.”
posted by Insight357
    I awoke to the sound of doctors running rampant.
    “How did he near death?”
    “Why did he do it?”
    “Was it suicide?” All of these vragen ran through my room. I opened my eyes, I was back in the mental institution. I looked over at my left arm. A cast ran from my wrist to my elbow. I remembered taking the meds, but I didn’t remember breaking my arm. I wonder how that happened.
    “Dr. Demidov, how are u feeling?” A tall, thin man asked. He wore glasses, and he had...
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posted by Insight357
I didn’t know where I was going, but I had to go somewhere. The fight with Grey had been bad. I didn’t feel guilty, and that bothered me. I always felt guilty after a fight, but this seemed to be an exception. I was…happy? No, that wasn’t the word, meer overjoyed, I guess.
    I kept walking; it was around seven when I sank down on the sidewalk. I was tired, and I had nowhere to go. I didn’t know what I was supposed to do…I could always look for Xander, but knowing him, he knew how to cover his tracks. The only person who seemed to know where he was at all times...
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posted by Insight357
The museum visit had turned out to be fun. I learned Xander and Lucy were extremely educated about art, possibly meer than I was.
    Before we left the museum, Alexander had spotted an ad for a local artistry competition. The winner would get a contract with the museum, and the opportunity to have artwork in museums all over the world. We thought it would be a good thing for Lucy.
    At first, she protested, but Xander gave her a pep talk. Lucy zei she would consider entering. I think she was worried about criticism.
    After the...
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posted by para-scence
"Shiloh, I..." my mouth was dry, and I had no idea what to say. He smiled hopefully at me. I did love him, but I'm only eighteen! "I... uh..." The door opened, and Sicily and Chance walked in. Sicily froze when she saw us; my face burning and Shiloh down on one knee. She mouthed "oops" and tip-toed out of the room, still holding Chance. I heard her giggle.

"Well...?" Shiloh prompted, thinking I'd forgotten the vorige conversation. I turned back to him, my mouth still gaping. Then, my hart-, hart seemed to melt. I realized I loved him a lot; and I wanted to spend the rest of my life with him.

"Yes."...
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posted by xXxEmoRAwRxXx
Yeah I know it sucks I was bored when I wrote this....so yeah.           [Chapter 1]
She stares at the rain in silence. Grieve over took her. She sat there still looking at the body lying cold, pale, still, and dead on the floor. She just stared not sharing a tear and droped the knife, she then looks at the lighting that was flowing in the sky. She then spares a tear, she sits still volgende to the body crying for her lover. What had she done? He didn't deserve the pain she gave him. She gets up and comes back with another knife, a bottle of scottch, and a...
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Jason: blonde spiky hair, green eyes, wearing his favoriete gitaar overhemd, shirt for almost three days straight, and he’s a teenager, but a rather short one. He has oranje braces that are spotted easily when he smiles. Jason has an arm that can oddly twist all the way around in a
perfect circle. One of the strangest things about him is a black thing in the shape of a flame on his left leg. People think it’s a poorly drawn drawing, but he was born with it, and as he got older it grew with him.

Jason was sitting door the fireplace watching the flames blow from side to side. His eyes liked to find themselves,...
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posted by Insight357
It felt like I had been submerged under water. I was suffocating.
    “How could u leave her?” I managed to get the vraag out of my mouth.
    “Genette didn’t tell me she was pregnant. I didn’t even know about Lucy until she was five. door then I figured it was too late,” Alexander zei a look of pain was in his face.
    “It’s never too late, Alexander,” I said, angered door the fact he would just give that magnificent child up.
    “It was at the time. I didn’t know where she was, and the...
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"This is beautiful!" Aiko breathed. Elaine beamed and laughed, "I knew you'd love it!" Elaine had called Aiko's apartment at five in the morning, telling her (well, meer like yelling at her) to come to a spot in the park. In that spot was a bench facing a brilliant, crystal-clear waterfall that flowed around the bench like a sparkling moat. An authentic wooden bridge with white and blue roses woven in the railings connected the park with the solitary bench.
"We're going to meet your brother in such a beautiful place?" Aiko gaped.
"Yeah!" Elaine exclaimed, flopping down on the bench and grinning...
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posted by Insight357
“I can’t get u out of my head either,” I said. Voices broke loose in my head, and I fought to push them all back.    
    “What are we going to do then?” he asked unaware of the chaos in my mind.
    “What do u mean?” I asked confused.
    “We both have feelings for each other. We can’t just ignore it,” Alexander said.
    “I know,” I wanted to ignore it no matter what he said. That would be rude though.
    “We should take time together to explore...
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Part two, obviously, of the first chapter. No warnings this time, unless u count lying and subterfuge.

Inheritance

Part Two



    Harper, March & Fields wasn’t a law firm I’d ever heard of until a few months geleden when I’d received a letter from them concerning my father’s will. It was strange that they’d waited until nine months after my 25th birthday to contact me — especially when the instructions had specifically stated alerting me on that day. Phyllis March wasn’t an entirely unpleasant woman to talk to, but she was fidgety and a little high strung. She...
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posted by Insight357
    “Damien, that was years ago,” zei Alexander as his cheeks turned a light pink.
    “I know, and I don’t understand why the memory is resurfacing now,” I zei shaking my head slightly.
    “Do u think it’s because you’re with Grey meer often?” Alexander asked. I’d rarely seen Grey while at the asylum. The only people I would talk to was Deborah, Dr. Anozi, Alexander, and a few college professors.
    “I don’t know, maybe, but it’s scaring me,” I said. “I spent all last night at...
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"IDIOT!" the King screeched. Toyo flinched as if the King had struck him.
"DO u KNOW WHAT YOU'VE DONE?" he continued to yell angrily.
"The Vampire Society figured out that Aiko was at X Aacademy," Toyo zei quietly. "So I sent her away."
"Without the protection of other vampires," the King hissed. "Suppose they find out where she is now. Who will protect her? She's as good as dead now!" The King sighed irritably and strode towards the door.
"Inform the Society that I will not be available for the volgende year," he zei coldly. "And this time, don't mess it up." The King strode out of the...
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posted by Insight357
I sat on a black, leather couch, starring at the deep blue walls. I was in Alexander’s office, for my appointment. I’d come here straight from the cathedral. My hair was tangled, and messy. I still wore plaid pajama bottoms, and an old, gray tee shirt.
    I came to a realization last night. Today, I would make my move. I have done enough to hold my own. Now I could be happy…Maybe.
    I debated whether, of not I should tell Alexander about Lucy. Dr. Anozi would’ve liked the idea, but I’m not sure about Dr. Laveney.
    I also...
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posted by Insight357
I ran my hand through my tired hair. I fell asleep on the attic floor last night, after my outburst. I was tired, and ached everywhere. What a night it had been.
    I took my weight of the gurney I had been leaning on. I was at the hospital today, to help calm this schizophrenic man. I arrived here at seven this morning, and had to leave before noon. I couldn’t miss Lucy’s appointment at Social Services.
    It was eight-thirty now, and I was getting ready to meet my patient. He was in the emergency room, with the doctor. He’d had a nervous breakdown,...
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posted by HouseMindFreak
Chapter 17




“Who killed them?!” Koda growled.
Iah was trying to keep Koda calm; from his few encounters with this one he knew anger was Koda’s worst enemy.
“I am not sure…” he replied softly.
“How can u not know!?” he screamed, charging after Iah. He dug his fingers into Iah’s chest as they turned to claws, slamming him to the ground, his dark red eyes bored into Iah’s sending dark chills through his mind. “You know everything else but u don’t know who killed them?”
Iah cringed in pain, trying to speak.
“I do not know but…I have a feeling who may have done…it”...
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posted by Insight357
Today was my first dag working for the mental institution. I woke around ten, and got a shower. I dressed in my black pants, shoes, and shirt. Over the overhemd, shirt was my white doctor’s jacket. The color white didn’t’ suite me, but it’s not like I hade a choice in wearing it.
    I walked to work. The asylum was only three blocks away. As I walked I worried over people criticizing me. Or, making fun of me. What if I treated the wrong patient? What if I messed something up? What if I got lost?
    My stomach started to tighten as I thought of the day...
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posted by para-scence
When I woke up, all the windows were covered in snow, surrounding me, isolating me from others. My stomach growled, but I didn't want to leave. I feared if I didn't get a job, I'd lose everything. I got out of the car, still wearing my clothes from yesterday, which was nothing but jeans, converse, and a black schildpad neck. Not wanting to waste valuable gas, I walked around town. My stomach growled again, and the thing inside me kicked a series of blows for a couple seconds.

The buildings here were tall, and far away I could see the new, fancy skyscrapers. But here, the buildings were old and...
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I stroll down Western Avenue with a blue coin portemonnee in my fragile hands. People in every direction as far as the eye can see. Neighbors being neighborly, store keepers selling and people riding the subway to work. Today happens to be a Saturday morning. And as usual, I awaken in the morning at six o'clock and dress. Every Saturday morning is the same old thing. I turn to the corner seeing the store I've been looking for. Roosevelt Island Shop. Yes. Indeed I live on the island of Roosevelt Island. It's very exhilirating to walk in the streets of our state of New York. As I enter the small shop,...
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posted by para-scence
A little while after the holidays, Alice left for California. It wasn't long before I felt the despair of loneliness. Alice was the only one I've really talked to for months. Once she was gone, for the first time in a long time it felt like I had really run away. Not like I had gone to a veilig haven, but like I really was in an unfamiliar town.

I went to work , and Alice had only been gone for two days. Work just wasn't fun that day. I found it harder to be nice to rude customers, and the dag seemed endless.

"Yeah, Alice kind of brings light to this place, huh?" Georgie, the cook asked. I nodded...
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posted by Insight357
    I stood from the brown couch, rubbing my eyes. I had slept on the couch. Grey was mad, and I had been stressed. It was a fight waiting to happen.
    Grey had already left for her job at the pharmacy. She was a secretary. Today, I was going to get my license, to practice psychology.
    I stood from the couch, I was dressed in last night’s clothes. I’d been at the bar, doing tequila shots. I was trying to numb my mind from pop-up questions.
    It had been a week since I left the asylum. Since I left Dr. Anozi....
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