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posted by GreenLight24
 4444, Desperata Ave.
4444, Desperata Ave.
Author's Note: Well hello faithful readers and lovers of writing alike! This is the sequel to the story "Blacktie." on this club. So, if u haven't read it, go ahead a check it out, as this requires some prior knowledge. If u have read it, then awesome! Revenge is a dish best served in a tuxedo! lol.

The nighttime air was calm and the sky was dyed with a deep and reflective blue-black shade. Blacktie was still giddy over the successful trial run of his mental recall technology. He brushed himself off lightly and straightened his bow tie as he began to walk down Meredith straat towards his final destination: 4444 Desperata Ave. "It's Friday.", he whispered indignantly to himself, "Too glad it's Friday." Blacktie casually strode on for a good ten minuten before he noticed something uncannily disturbing. For the first time, Blacktie was panicing. He quickly set his cane down upon the sidewalk and put a finger to the center of his bow tie. "Goodness!", he exclaimed, "The device! What on Earth happened to the device?" The small metal ball containing the radiation necessary for brainwave interference had been lost. "How could it have fallen-" His train of thought was interrupted and an insane burst of laughter erupted from the tuxedoed murderer. "No matter." He picked the cane back up and began to gently coax the crow's head handle. "The real power lies within our minds." Once again, he felt his pulse quicken and his senses sharpen as his vision became blanketed door that familiar blue film. The tie began to blink meer slowly than it had the vorige night, as if deciding between the eerie blue glow and it's regular black shade. Soon, it had settled entirely on the blue glow. "That's meer like it." Blacktie then closed his eyes and reopened them to find that his vision had returned back to normal, and the tie back to the elegantly fierce black. "The control....", he hissed. "So much...control.

"Push me faster mommy! Push me faster!" "Alright, sweetheart." Blacktie's head jerked towards an image of a short young woman pushing a small child on a schommel, swing at the park across the street. The park was a ghosttown and the lady and her child were the only two there that evening. "Disgusting.", he spat as his gait quickened. "Mommy, mommy! Look at that man over there! He looks funny!" "Don't say that.", the lady replied in a motherly tone, "It's not polite to point, sweetie." Blacktie suddenly stopped walking and let out an amused chuckle. "Kids these days.", he whispered. Without a pause in between, he began to walk eagerly towards the two. "Good evening, ma'am.", he inquired as he removed his pet, glb and extended an open hand, "Might I ask what u lovely folks are doing out at this hour." A little taken aback door the villain's eloquence, the young lady nervously took his hand and shook it slowly. "Well, I just thought Junior and I could use some mommy-son time.", she replied playfully, "...His father is never around. He's out on a business trip." "Oh, really." A thinly disguised sneer took refuge underneath Blacktie's sympathetic frown. "My father was often...away. I see how that could be quite...taxing for a boy such as your Junior here." He cleared his throat. "I believe I haven't taken the liberty of properly introducing myself. I am Dr. R.E Venge, master psychologist." "...Uh, pleased to meet u Dr. Venge. I'm Amy. And this is James Jr." "Hiya, mister!", the boy exclaimed. "Hello, Junior. How are u tonight?" Blacktie stared gently into the boy's eyes as his vision re-assumed the blue tint. He was quite pleased with what he saw. The child's gleeful expression shifted into a dazed stare. "I'm alright. How are you?" "Oh, me?", he asked. "I'm just incredible tonight. Going to a avondeten, diner party." A wicked smile appeared on the well-dressed villain's face and his vision and tie returned to normal. "Uh, okay Dr. Venge, I think we otta go.", zei Amy, meer nervous than before. She picked Junior up off of the schommel, swing and grabbed his hand tightly. He seemed to be slightly dizzy. "Oh, do u really have to go now? That's quite a shame Mrs....Witherspoon."How did yo-" "Let's just say I'm a different sort of doctor." With that, Amy and her son disappeared into a crimson Mercedes E-Class, and sped down Meredith straat away from the park and the dimly lit schommel, swing set. "Still working like a charm.", grinned Blacktie.

"Be right back, evryone. Someone's at the door." Margaret Baker walked out of the living room and toward her front door with gentle feet. "Hi, sir. Who are you? I'm not interested in your product." Typical aunt Margaret. "Oh, I'm not selling anything, ma'am.", zei Blacktie politely. "You see, my name is Dr. R.E Venge. I am a master psychologist. I heard that there was a gathering here tonight." "You heard correctly." Margaret raised a skeptical brow. "Have I seen your before, sir." "Maybe. I'm quite well known in the field of psychology. I've come to inquire about your nephew, Anthony. I've been hearing that he is in dire need of help." "My Anthony? Oh no, sir u must be mistaken. Are u one of those crackpot teachers up at that school? I'll have u know that I am an excellent guardian and that there is absolutely nothing wrong with my Anthony!" "Well, hasn't he been lost for the last dag of so?", Blacktie injected, feeling accomplished in dismantling his aunt's argument. "Why, yes...but, I'm going to-" "When are u going to look for him?" "Well, when...uh, when..." "Let's hear it." "When..uh...tomorrow. After thee is over....Sir I'm going to have to ask u to lea-" "Looking for him won't be necessary. He's right here." "Anthony!?", she screamed before falling into a dazed stupor. "Now, aunt Margaret. Tell me where my parents are." "I don't know," She was struggling to stand and her body went cold. "They've been dead for ye-" "THE TRUTH, MARGARET!", he demanded. "I don't know." "YOU LIAR!", he yelled. door this time, the whole entryway had been set ablaze door bright blue flames, and the eyes and bow tie shone brightly. "Now look at me, Margaret." The woman involuntarily stared into his hazy blue eye sockets. "Oh no!", she screamed, "Anthony, please!" Her pleas were ignored. "What do u see?" Margaret was crying heavy tears and knelt down upon the ground as if begging him for mercy. She saw four little girls at church, one of which was separate from the others. She saw that same little girl sitting in the corner of a U.S History classroom, a dunce pet, glb on her head and a bright red nose strapped across her face. She heard boisterous laughs from the rest of the students. But, most of all, Margaret saw the silhouette of an angry middle-aged teacher holding a wooden rod and frowning coldly at the frightened little girl. Blacktie's eyes and bow tie ceased glowing. "Anthony. I'm sorry.", whispered Margaret as she fell gradually deeper into an endless slumber. "Sorry?", he murmured. "No u aren't. The glowing blue flames left the entryway and everything was as it was before, but Margaret Baker was dead. Blacktie overheard laughter and lighthearted conversation from the living room. "Jamie.", he hissed angrily, "And Lola."

TO BE CONTINUED
posted by werewolflover
Caitlin Tresp moved to my small town in Tennessee when we were in fourth grade,which was two years ago.This is her story so far.
So,she moved here in fourth grade.She was in my class.It was her first day,and she was already being bullied.By everyone.Ecxept for my vrienden and I.Jessica,Molly,Chyanne,Tori and me.It was like she was already part of the group.We all got along greatly.But later in the year,Jessica and Caitlin got in a fight at recess.When we went back inside,we all had to talk to our teacher,Mrs.McDonald.By the end of the dayit was all sorted out...or so I thought.For the rest...
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posted by tiny_princess
hiiiiiii 3
this is my very first time to write an artikel here in fanpop
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I`m in love with writing poems . In fact , i believe that words can do meer . > that`s why my poems are my life !!!
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this is a poem which was written with my hamble keyboard =) hope u all like it =)

~~ a letter to my dear prince ~~

Dear prince,
I`m tired of living in this unusual life
My diary
Took me to an old distain memory
when I become your wife
I don`t know why ?!!
Every good memory has became whiter then white
Except the dag I saw u
You`re right
Special memories always colored with special liquids
But which kind...
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posted by kateeuy
Alise opened her eyes on a beautiful Thursday morning. As she sat up, she wiped the sleep from her eyes and brushed through her long black hair with the tips of her fingernails. She looked at the time on her IPod dock. “Its 7:30, I’m late” yelled Alise as she jumped out of bed and ran to her wardrobe. She pulled out a white button-up blouse and a green tartan skirt. She opened the drawers underneath and pulled out a pair of black stockings. Alise quickly go dressed and packed her country road bag. She lived at home pagina with her aunty, uncle and her cousin Eliza. Eliza rushed downstairs and...
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posted by Bookworm_Mint
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Chaper 1 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
" Mom, why did u and Papa get divorced?" asked Lydia. Miss. Pheonix sighed. She waited a few seconden till she replied," Sweet heart, if I tell you, u shall not tell anyone ok?" Lydia nodded."Well it's a pretty simple story. I'll try to tell it in a short way as possible. Papa and I got divorced beacausehe fell in love with another girl." zei Miss. Pheonix. "But Mother! I'm old enough to know more!" pleaded Lydia. Ms. Pheonix shook her head slowly. Lydia left the room quietly and slowly walked to her room. Lydia was already 16 now and her mom thought she still wasn't mature enough. She sat on her bed. Suddenly, a girl appeared to her. "Who are you? Why are u here?" asked Lydia. "I'm Enchantical Essence. A fairy to be exact.Who are you?" zei the girl."I'm Lydia Pheonix. Now why are u in my room?!"........
TO BE CONTINUED
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posted by vanelandsisters
Told by: Amelia-Rose J. Aleena


Chapter 1: The First Reunited Morning

I woke up and saw that my four siblings were awake, too. I smiled and told them, "Good morning, my royal siblings!" My little brother, Tails, responded, "Good morning, sis." My brother, Sonic, was just like, "Mornin'." My sister, Sonia, glared at him and said, "Sonic! (turned toward me) Good morning, Amy." We all looked at our brother, Manic, who was still in his bed. He said, kind of weakly, "Morning? Already guys?" We gave him a look that meant, 'yes, now get up, lazy bones!' Tails threatened to spin our brother out of bed...
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    "I love you. Will u be my girlfriend?" an unknown boy has ask me. I was struck with shock that I have a dumb look on my face.
    "O-o-of c-course I will. I love u too." Wait. What?! What am I saying! Why the heck do I want to be this boy girlfriend?! Why am I in love with him?! Most importantly, WHO THE HECK IS THIS BOY?!
    Ouch! I open my eyes, gazing up at the bumpy, white ceiling. Oh so all of that was just a dream. I sigh with relief but feeling disappointed at the same time. Awwww and here I thought someone finally confessed...
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posted by Free_Spirit
Me" okay, well this is a complete tester. I'm just posting the start of my story on here, just to get some opinions. I don't think i will post the rest of it on here, unless people ask me too =) anyway i would love some feedback, especially critism, that probably sounds weird, but honestly u learn from critisism. anyway i'm rambling here.

I sighed, and stared out the window. The sun was glaring down, and it looked sweltering outside. For once I actually wanted to stay in the classroom, the nice cool air conditioner never looked better.

I glanced over to the tatty metal box that was somehow...
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posted by Hades332
CHAPTER 1
A cloaked teen age girl stood atop a grassy hill, the wind making her mantel sway in the breeze. Her metal scythe in hand she walked down the heuvel to the small town below. A sign came to her sight.
Welcome to CrowBay
Tennesee
Population: 213

The girl rolled her eyes and continued her path. She had named this town. 300 years ago. The murder of crows sitting on a sicamore boom looked at her and, amazingly, seemed to bow.
The metal scythe clinked against the road as she walked down it. A large SUV turned a corner coming straight for her. The blonde woman looked up and saw her. Her eyes...
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posted by SpellsOfBelief
Hi, These Are Spells That Are Most Likely To Work! I Didn't Make Them But I Could Answer A Few vragen If u commentaar Them Below ;) I Give Full Credit To The Founder Of These Spells.

Anyways There Will Be Spells To Become A Mermaid, Werewolf, Vampire And Angel!

Mermaid #1
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*I Have Tried It And I Haven't Got My Tail Yet After 2 Days But I Will Soon!*

Witches of the sea and air, Please listen as i call upon thee, There is a wish that i most desire. A mermaid when wet, A human when dry. A tail of *Whatever colors u want* is what i choose. The power of *Whatever power u want...
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posted by RuBB3rDuckie
Why?
Why is your touch so new?
Why is it so fresh?
Its not like u have'nt touched me before.
So why do I feel so shiny, so new?
Is it because I now feel this way?
Or is it because u do to?
We've hugged before.
But never, never, have i missed it, so much before.
I want to kiss you,
and never let it stop.
I want to hold you,
and never let u go.
I want to finish all your sentences.
I want to complete all your goals.
Why?
Why?
Why?

Because.
Because, now I'm touching u with new eyes, with different hands.
The hands of lover not just a friend.
Because my hands have a loving touch.
Yeah I touched u before, with...
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A/N: WARNING! SEX SCENE BUT NOT THAT TYPE OF SEX BECAUSE I GET WELL, UNWELL OF THAT BUT STILL READABLE! ALSO, THIS CHAPTER HAD A VERY IMPORTANT ENDING, I THINK.

Chapter Thirteen

When Jamie and Sean got inside Jamie’s home, put the bags of food on the keuken-, keuken counter, put Jake in his playpen and gave him a toy to play with, and the moment they saw a smiling Jake and completely ignoring them door admiring his toy, Jamie and Sean grinned at each other and to get it started, they ran upstairs to Jamie’s bedroom and closed the door.

The moment they got inside, Jamie got rid of Sean’s light blue...
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posted by rebaj2010
Chapter 1

Looking back i regret everything i did to her. not only was she the best thing in my life she was also the only thing.
A cool breeze comes rushing through the open door to the warehouse. Samsion walks in with a case of beer.
"Finally, stupid ass, took u long enough." a guy commentaar from the back.
All the Mexicanos in the room tackle my best friend for the beers and he come sits with me. we just sit there, he knows i dont want to talk. he gets up and hands me a beer, giving me a sypathatic look that pisses me off. i dont want sympathy, i want Rebecca.
"You know u can talk about it with...
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