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Just a few things before the story; one, if there's something u don't like about it, please tell me! I want it to be as good as it can be. ^-^ Just please tell me in a respectful way, please. I would appreciate that. Thank you.
Also, this story will be a little (well, meer than a little) bloody and violent, and there may be some cussing later on. Just a warning.
That being said, I hope u like it!
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Gnarled branches. Green leaves grew from them—green leaves spotted with yellows and reds. They rustled dryly, talking of the upcoming season of autumn.
    Below the canopy of trees and foliage, a boy slowly awoke to find himself lying on the ground, something sharp digging into his back. His left cheekbone and forehead throbbed with a dull pain, and when he rolled over and sat up to regain his bearings, a sharp twinge shot along his stomach, from his left side to his navel. He winced and looked around, noticing as he did another pain in the back of his neck.
    He was in a forest, that was for sure, but how large it was and how close he was to the edge of it he couldn’t tell. From the darkness surrounding him, however, he could guess that he was deep inside, near the hart-, hart of the forest.
    He pushed himself to his feet and stood, albeit a bit shakily. Dark spots fluttered before his eyes. He shook his head to clear it, then took a careful step forward.
    He needed to get out of the forest. That’s what it felt like, at least. There was something important he needed to do out there; he just couldn’t quite remember what it was.
    He stopped at that thought.
    He couldn’t remember why he needed to get out of the forest.
    He couldn’t remember why he was in the forest in the first place.
    He couldn’t remember how his face and stomach and neck had gotten hurt.
    He couldn’t even remember who he was.
    He stood there for a moment, blinking and letting the shock of this sink in. He didn’t have a name, a past, a purpose. He was just here, in the forest, alone and not having the slightest idea of what he was supposed to do next.
    Get out of the forest, something told him. There was something u needed to do out there. Find out what it was and carry it through. Go on.
    Numbly, he forced himself to take a step forward.
    As he did so, his foot made contact with something soft, and he tripped, stumbled, and fell to the forest floor. He rolled over to see what he had tripped over and gasped in horror.
    It was a dead body—the body of a young man, even a boy, not quite to adulthood and yet still not a child. The boy had been decapitated and mutilated, and the cloying stench of rotten flesh rose off of it. One maimed, bloodied hand grasped something in a claw-like grasp—something small, the color of sand.
    He reached over and, shuddering, pried it out from the dead boy’s clutch.
    It was a box—wooden and square and simple. It had flowers carved into the top—a basic design, done plainly and honestly—with a small, steel lock holding it closed. Even though he knew it wouldn’t, he tried to open it.
    The lid stayed firmly in place.
    He sighed and began walking again, manipulating his way through briars and brambles and undergrowth and long, hanging branches. It took a long time—and hour, half an hour?—but eventually he could see pale light seeping out between the trees and knew he was nearing the edge. He ran the last few yards and burst out into the sunshine.
    He was in a narrow, grassy strip of land and ran alongside a dusty dirt road. The gras was sparkling with dew, and the sun was rising over the east horizon. roze and pale yellow fingers spread across the sky, and a black bird wheeled about in the air above his head. It was earlier than he had thought.
    The bird swooped down and landed in the middle of the road. It was a crow, he knew, of perhaps a raven; he couldn’t tell. It looked at him, small black head cocked, eyes intelligent and curious, then gave a caw and took off, soaring back up into the sky.
    He looked after it. Crow, he thought to himself. Something about the word sounded familar, as if it were something he heard often. It was an irritating thought, as he felt he could almost place it, but whenever he came close, it slipped away, always just out of reach. He took a few steps into the road and squinted up at the sky, where the kraai was now just a dark speck on the horizon.
    “’Ello,” someone zei behind him.
    He jumped and spun around. A tall, scruffy, lank man stood there, carrying a geweer-, geweer and a small metal water bottle. Two bloodhounds stood behind him, sniffing at the road and at the man’s heels. The dogs were thin and scrawny, but their vacht, bont shone and their eyes were clear.
    “Oh. Hello,” he said. It came out in a whisper, hoarse and quiet. He could tell he hadn’t used it in a long time. He cleared his throat and tried again.
    “Hello.” His voice was still hoarse, but audible. The man nodded and gave him a smile.
    “Never seen ye ‘round here. Ye live in these parts?”
    He shook his head.
    “Where are ye from, then?”
    He stared up at the man. Just another vraag he couldn’t answer. Where was he from? He couldn’t say for sure, and he didn’t want to lie, and yet here this man stood, looking down at him, waiting for an answer.
    He pointed up into the forest, in the direction he had come from. “Up there.”
    “In the forest?”
    “Yes. I…my father built a cabine about a mile from the edge of it—the other edge, I mean, opposite from this one. I’ve lived there most of my life.”
    “What are ye doing all the way down here? That’s at least a day’s walk, probably more, I would say. When’s the last time ye ate? Drank? Have ye slept lately?” The man peered down at his face, looking genuinely concerned.
    “I…I haven’t eaten for a while,” he said, choosing not to answer the man’s first question. He didn’t really know why he was lying. Somehow the truth just didn’t seem believable.
    “Well, come on then,” the man said. “We’ve got plenty at my house—plenty to eat and drink, and we’ve got a guest room. meer of a closet than anythin’, but it’ll have to do. That is,” the man interrupted himself thoughtfully, “if ye’ll come.”
    He nodded. “If it’s alright.”
    “Wouldn’t have invited ye if it weren’t,” the man said, starting off down the road. “What’s yer name, anyhow?”
    He hurried after the man, still holding the box tightly. The man looked down at him expectantly. He stared at the ground. His name. What was his name? Such a simple vraag it was, and yet he had no clue how to answer it.
    He thought back to the bird, how familiar that word had been. Crow. Why did that word ring a bell? he wondered. Crow…crow.
    “Crow,” he repeated, thoughtfully.
    “Crow? Yer name’s Crow?”
    He looked up, surprised. Could that be his name? It felt right, at least. And he needed a name. kraai would suffice, at least for now.
    “Yes,” he said. “My name’s Crow.”
    “That’s quite the unusual name,” the man said. “I’m Jonathan. Live right down the road a little ways, I do. Small, honest cabin, meer of a shack, really, but it’s nice and cozy and keeps out the cold in the win’ertime. Not quite big enough for me, my wife, my children, and my hounds, so Poplar and Cedar here,” he nodded to the bloodhounds, “have to sleep outside, on the porch. Can’t say they really like that arrangement, and I can’t say I really do meself, but my wife insists. Don’t really think she wanted to get ‘em in the first place…”
    As Jonathan droned on, kraai again studied the box in his hand. He noticed a stain on the lid that he hadn’t seen before—a crimson stain, the color of rust. Dried blood, he realized. Shuddering, he wiped it off.
    “What’ve ye got there?” Jonathan asked.
    Crow looked up, startled. “A box. Found it in the woods.”
    “Ah.” Jonathan whistled and called Poplar, who was investigating a rabbit carcass at the edge of the road. Poplar gave it one last sniff, then trotted over.
    “Crow,” Jonathan said, turning back to him. kraai looked up.
    “Yes?”
    “Can I ask ye something?”
    More questions, kraai thought. Out loud he said, “Yes. Of course.”
    “Ye ever seen anything…strange out there?”
    Crow’s brow creased. “Strange?”
    “Yea…strange. The Fair Folk, Crow. Skinwalkers, vampyrs, griffins and phoenix and wendigo. Unhuman-type folk.”
    “I…uh…can’t say I ever have,” kraai said. “Why?”
    “Nothin’. Just rumors and the like. People say there’s things in the forest, evil, mischievous fellows. Put up protection ‘round their houses, ye know. Horseshoes hangin’ over doorways, crosses all over their property. Had a baby carried away before, ye know. Fair Folk swapped him out with one o’ their own kind. A changeling. Ugly little spriggan spawn, ye know. Died in a week. Human baby never showed up again. So now everyone’s meer careful ‘bout them unhuman-folk, ‘specially the Fair Folk. Them’s the worst. Wicked little creatures, them is.
    “Ah,” Jonathan said, nodded at a small row of cabins lining the side of the road. “Here’s me shack now. C’mon, now, Crow, and my wife’ll take good care o’ ye—wash ye up and give ye some food and a place to sleep. Ye look like ye could use it.”
    Jonathan turned into the yard of one of the houses and thumped up onto the porch, kraai trailing behind him. Jonathan knocked loudly on the door.
    After a moment the door swung open, revealing a woman wearing a long, roze checkered dress and her golden-brown hair pinned up in a bun. She had an hourglass figure and a round, pretty face that lit up when she saw Jonathan.
    “’Ello, Dina,” Jonathan said.
    “You’re back,” Dina said, still beaming. She seemed to not have noticed kraai standing there with his head bowed, as she went on talking. “Your hunting expeditions never do last long, do they?”
    Jonathan smiled and shrugged. “Never long enough to catch much, that’s fer sure.”
    Dina smiled and embraced him, then pulled away, one hand resting on his shoulder. “You didn’t get anything this time, did you?”
    Jonathan stepped back and swept an arm at Crow. “I got this.”
    “Oh!” Dina looked a bit shocked, and she took a step backwards, towards the front door. She blinked, then repeated herself. “Oh. Oh, hello.”
    Crow looked up at her. “Hello.”
    Dina took a few steps towards him—a bit cautiously, it seemed to Crow. “And who are you?”
    Crow looked back down. He felt out-of-place and uncomfortable, shy. “Crow.”
    “Excuse me?”
    “His name’s Crow, Dina,” Jonathan interrupted. “This here’s me wife, Crow,” he continued. “Dina Carlson. Dina, could ye fix him somethin’? I’ll take him to the washing room, so he can clean himself up a bit.”
    Dina nodded and stepped inside, holding the door open until Jonathan and kraai had entered. Then she let it schommel, swing closed with a bang and set about in the kitchen, taking out pots and pans and various ingredients.
    “What would u like, Crow?”
    “Pardon?” kraai looked up.
    “What would u like to eat?”
    “Um…just geroosterd brood, toast is fine, ma’am, if it’s not too much trouble.”
    “It’s not. Jonathan, get the children up, will you? It’s eight-thirty already. Crow, the washing room is just down the hall and to the right. The basin is filled up, but it might be a bit chilly; I’ll heat it up for u if you’d like.”
    Crow nodded. “Alright. Thank you, ma’am.” He almost winced. The words sounded too polite, too formal for this household. He gave a slight nod of his head and ducked out into the hall, following Dina’s directions until he reached the washing room.
    He stepped inside and closed the door, then surveyed the room. It was small, claustrophobic, almost, with the basin for him to wash in, a mirror hanging on the uithangbord to his right, and a small white cabinet which, kraai assumed, was filled with soap, sponges, combs, and other such appliances. He opened it, found that he was correct, and picked out a bar of soap. Then he turned and glanced at himself in the mirror. His eyes widened in surprise, and he took a step back, bumping into the wall.
    Two large bruises, both the size of a small fist, were blooming on his cheekbone and forehead, purple and green and black. His skin was deathly pale, almost white, and he had dark circles under each eye, as if someone had smeared his face with charcoal. His hair, straight and black, was oily and filthy, his face covered with grime and dirt and his lips chapped. He understood now why Dina had looked so shocked when she first had seen him.
    He looked like a wild animal.
    Crow blinked at his reflection, then shook his head and turned away, pulling his overhemd, shirt up over his head for his bath. The shirt, he noticed, was tattered, and also had a considerable amount of dirt coating it. kraai dipped it into the water and scrubbed at it with the soap, then hung it on the cabinet door to dry.
    As he did so, he felt the sharp twinge stab through his stomach again, worse this time. He gasped from the pain and looked down.
    A long scar stretched across his abdomen, in the same place the pain had shot through; from the side to the center of his stomach. He stared at it, feeling this was important, feeling like he should know what had happened, how he had gotten such a wound.
    The feeling gave him the sensation of being empty and blank, as if someone had hollowed him out and then left him alone, to figure out how to best go about things.
    And he was going to, he decided. He was going to figure it out, figure everything out—who he was, what had happened to him, why he couldn’t remember anything. He was going to figure it out.
    Crow crossed his arms over his chest, shivering, and tightened his grip on the box.
    It did little to comfort him.
posted by I_DONT-KNOW
So I started writing this a long time ago, and didnt have a title.Remember? Anyway to refresh your memories I have put the last part I wrote up.



Chapter 2:Part 1

"What?" Alexis asked in barely a whisper. Astrid fidgeted with her hands.
"I read your file, I do it every time there is a new kid.Bonus for having the headmaster as a mom." She zei trying to make it into a joke. "Sorry, I wont tell." She zei waiting for Alexis to look at her. "Promise, when u bumped into me I actually wanted to try and help u out." She zei smiling. Alexis couldnt talk, her brain was to buisy dealing with it. Someone...
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posted by irena83
When your minds are
upset
and so many thoughts
circling around
your head,
u try to make
this right,
to find the best way
so u could feel better,
so u could be free.

Pain will never
go away,
it always stays
to remember you
that life is not a dream,
life is unpredictable.

Endless questions,
so many "Why",
but the answer
we will
never find!
The strength within
will not let us crack,
life is unpredictable,
who's to say?

Today you're happy,
and yet
despair waits
stealthily
to engulf you.
But,
u need to be prepared.

Not only bad things
happen to bad people.
Unfortunately,
so many pure,
honored hearts
have been broken for
so many times,
in so many pieces,
and yet
they live,
they live with
their agony,
they live with
their groan,
but they live,
tho their eyes are
always sad,
their hearts are
still softly.

Therefore
they know...
Therefore
they are...

The brightest star
that shines
in the dark,
that spark of hope
for all of us
who deserve better.
posted by AvaMarch
When u look at the night sky, what do u see?
In my eyes,
I see the moon as a peaceful spirit,
watching over me.
When u stop and listen to the wind, what do u hear?
In my eyes,
The wind sings to me and tells tales.
When u feel the sun on your back, what do u think?
In my eyes,
The sun reaches out and gives me a warm smile.
When u hear a flowing stream, how does it sound?
In my eyes,
The stream is floating in my hart-, hart and soul, drifting on and on.
When u look at me, what do u see?
In my eyes,
I see an average girl who is silently struggling inside.
But that's all in my eyes.
posted by viju
 Pain!!
Pain!!
[Verse-I]
Something I feel inside
Something I breathe inside
The lightening and fire
Right now I’m bearing inside
My hart-, hart is broken now
And it have fall to pieces
I’m finding a way through out
To reassemble and fix it
Oooh (fix it) Oooh (fix it)

[Chorus]
The pain and sorrow
Is freaking me out
The brand and heat
Is melting my hart-, hart out
The man who supposed to be
Isn’t there right now with me
The devils look in your eyes
Makes me scream…..
Makes me scream…..

[Verse-II]
The scars and wounds
They won’t seem to heal
Suicidal
That is how I feel
Aggression and pain
I’m hiding in my eyes
I’m finding a way to
Control...
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posted by mitchie19
5.S L E E P O V E R M O D E

The doorbell rang. “Mariah! The pizza’s here,” Nikki shouted from downstairs.
Nikki Lim is my friend. She’d helped me pass my Chemistry test door teaching me how to solve the frikin’ formulas our adviser gave us and that was a relief. I went downstairs. “Here the money,” I handed it to him. “Thank you!” Nikki waved before I locked the door. Why’d we order pizza? It was my idea to have pizza with Nikki while Aeyla and Norah went to town to celebrate some event down in Houston Street. This is a sleepover. I want to do something fun before I go to...
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posted by hannah_vampire
I didn't know weither i should go back yet of if I should just stay here for awhile like I zei i would even though it feels weird but I dont have to go back I mean Damon of Melissa could go.

I was sitting on Damons when he had walked in, 'hey Belle umm I thought u might be hungry so Here have this'. I know that the look on my face zei are u kidding I am straving but I couldn't take it even though i decide to grabb it to be polite.

Four Days later

I hadn't been to school for four days and the only reason was because i know they would be their but I had to go back to Blairs because sooner...
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posted by Cullens4eva
Hi people. well im starting up an advice column for those people who need advice through situations and questions. If u yourself find your stuck in a problem emai my account at dearannie_advice@hotmail.co.uk. this is my special account i use for people needing help. Dont worry anything u say will never be told to anyone else, thats my promise. If u dont think u trust me then send it to my fanpop account. im here to help those stuck.

please if u need advice, just try it.

the new Dear Annie
xxxxx
posted by PrinceLover1999
While She watched her mother had a hart-, hart attack she was crying. While latter that night. She dreamed that her Father died...He was burned with fire.
"Why, does this happen to me?!?" She ask Then she starts crying. Then her mom as a ghost comes and hug her. Then she says....What...the.
She went to her bed and lay down...and she wakes up and she smelles fire. She runs down stairs, her father laying un consions. She's screaming for help, and luckly Help did come.
The volgende dag her Father died. She goes to a Foster home. Nobody wants her soo she goes home pagina to home pagina to home. Then she found this little...
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posted by EmoKidSteven
she's that dangerous kind
she only wears black with her long dark hair and her light brown eyes
she loves the sight of blood
her ultimate pleasure is seeing people suffer from pain
hearing them scream and beg makes her moan
she killes with one look of her eye
she makes men drop at her feet
heartless,thoughless
she's a demon witch
she looks like a human,but she's nothing like a human
you can tell she's different
you can tell that she's got something special about her
the way she plays with her tongue,touch her skin
the way she chooses one,there's must be something about him she can't figure out
and she has...
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posted by TeamRosalieHale
22: Way of the World

The hours took forever, the seconde longest night Jack had lived through. Well, meer of less lived through. At long last, the sun started a steady climb in the Ohio sky, soon to be replaced with West Virginia. It didn’t take long for Tristan to wake, he needed less sleep than an average human to get by. Jack and Rosalie were changed from what they had been in before-he in simple black flanellen broek, broek and a white shirt, she in light blue jeans and a black tank top. Tristan was back to looking like a Greek god again-his hair golden, his eyes rich blue. “Can u do that at will?...
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posted by joe-edwardfan
end of chap3
The klok, bell rang then I saw Edward waiting for me in front of the office
-there u are I thought u were going to ditch me
-whenever I make a promise I will always keep it!
Specially the one that includes: killing Damien and his mother
-so who was he?
He asked a little angry
-no one
I sighed
-I won’t push it if u don’t want to talk about it
-that's a good idea
We reached the biology class I sat beside the window again and edward sat beside me like jasper
The teacher came in the class and told everyone to welcome edward and blah blah blah
In the biology class I wasn’t as tired as before so...
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posted by marissa
 "After a while, the insanity of the situation wore off and it seemed completely normal."
"After a while, the insanity of the situation wore off and it seemed completely normal."
Chapter Three:

Alan:

When Alan got onto the bus, he spotted Benny immediately and sat down volgende to him.
    
Alan took the bus every Tuesday and Thursday to visit his mother. He’d met Benny two weeks geleden and the two talked every time Alan was on the bus, and Alan ate up every word that Benny said.
    
He had been skeptical at first, but it didn’t take long for Alan to honestly believe he was talking to God when he rode the bus. After a while, the insanity of the situation wore off and it seemed completely normal.
    
“Hello Alan,”...
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posted by BellaSwan636
Serena

"Why did u leave?"

I wish I could tell him why. But seeing him again din't ease the pain. Not one bit. The agony only multiplied. All of the feelings I had suppressed were clamouring to be acknowledged.

Ashleigh peeked out from her curtain of hair, and made eye contact with him.

My hart-, hart skipped a beat. She was his child too, I knew that, but he maybe he wouldn't want anything to do with her of me. He probably hated me.

Ansking the vraag I had feared the most, he said, "Is this her?"

I looked at the ground.

"I can't do this again," the words hurt me to say them, but I could never force...
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posted by genyva
Genyva Salters
Cold Toes

Prologue
June 30, 2004
11:45 Open Door Eating


It’s the worst dag in the world for a lunch date. I look like hell my light brown hair was frizzing like a poodle. Damn this humid summer, only in Texas the humidity 90% all the time. And this place is like a hut; all the hot air coming from the windows is blowing out the A/C. How is any one able to enjoy lunch when they are drinking the air?

I looked over to Ethan, who was making his way towards the table. We had been together so long in this little town. I love it to death but I think its time to verplaats out. Greene, Texas...
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posted by twilight0girl
 isaac
isaac
this maand is going to be terrible.
i live in barrow alaska.this is thier maand of complete,totall darkness.also,this is when the vampires come out to feed on the helpless men,women,and children.but instead of shaking in pure fear,i'll go out and see how they act.but i'm also going out because my two brothers,isaac and marcus,are vampires too.

__________________________________________________
4 days later

i've never walked around outside during this time of month.i can hear the screaming coming from every direction.i havent seen any va,pires nor my two brothers.when i started to walke away...
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posted by BeSafe
I chanced a glance at you
from across the crowded room
and that was when I noticed
u were looking at me too

we both know this shouldn't happen
its a road we've been down before
and the only way it ever ends
is with u walking out the door

so I wish someone would explain to me
why I'm still rooted in place
staring in the direction
of just another lonely face

my mind is screaming at me to run
while my hart-, hart asks me to stay
for a moment I dont know what to do
and if its a price I'm willing to pay

we both know this is wrong
the love that we share
but we also know that wont stop us
because to find this kind of love is rare
posted by Maria_Quinn8
hallo guys I'm new here and I just want to tell u guys how to become a mermaid for those mermaids lovers
I only know 1 spells and I hope it works for u guys
SPELL1#
these 're the following items needed
cup of water with salt mixed in it
voice
steps to take
put ur hand in the salty water of fresh water if u want
say the spell 3 times
mermaids in the sea oh so fast and free
I wish to be one of u, I will have a tail colour of ()
and the power to () water
I will get my tail and power in ten minuten but no later
mermaid when wet, human when dry
10 seconden is all it takesto transform
so mote it be×2
U might get ur tail after 10 minuten but it might work for some people
BEWARE:U CHANGE AFTER ONE DROP OF WATER
Good luck
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