Forbidden Love - Chapter 8 - Writing - Fanpop

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posted by ashesandwine

Ok, sorry for not writing meer sooner but I wasn't home! Ok... so thanks to patrisha727 for the help...
Thanks to Emmett4ever as always for that first push...
And thanks to everyone for the support...

"Daniel's POV"

I'll wait for you... I promised u that, I promised myself that and I'm keeping my promise... But, please, find a way to let me know that u are all right...
Find a way to keep my hope up...

I staied home pagina for three days... Waiting for any letter from her. I just needed to know that she was safe...
I never went down, unless for breakfast, lunch and dinner. I hadn't talk to my father since our argument, and, altough, he tried to communicate I just couldn't bring myself to forgive him.
Suddenly, I heard knock on the door, ansious for any news of Catherine I got up and almost run to the door...
"Are there any letters for me?" I asked to my surprised mother.
"Ohh I'm sorry, Daniel, but there aren't any... I just came to your room because Charles is downstairs and asked to talk to you." My mother said.
Charles was my best friend since chilhood, but until I got any news from her I just couldn't bring myself to talk to anyone.
"Could you, please, tell him that I'm not getting any visits?" I knew my mother wouldn't let this go. She couldn't stand seeing me like this, it hurted her almost as much as it did me.
"Please, Daniel! You've been locked here for three days. I know that she will write to you, but u can't be locked here until she does. Go out with Charles, if any letter from her arrives I will bring it to your room and when u get back u can read it." I knew that she was serious and I couldn't see her hurting so I got up and went downstairs to Charles.
"Hey, there. I was thinking we could go for a walk. What do u say, mate?" Charles asked. He was happy to see me. He had try, during these three days, to make me come and talk to him; and now I was here.
"Sounds great, Charles" I answered.
We got out of the house and started walking. I didn't knew where we were going but Charles seemed to know so I just followed him... We walked in silence for a few minuten until Charles broke the silence:
"How are you? I know that u probably don't want to talk about it, but if u do... u know I'm here for u right?"
"I know! It's just that my father doesn't understand, u know? He wants me to let her go... To continue my life like I never met her, like all those moments with her were nothing... I can't do that!"I tried to stay calm, but I had been angry with my dad for a while now, so door the end of the sentence I was almost screaming.
"I get that... I couldn't imagine my life without Beatrix. She's everything to me!" Charles and Beatrix were together for almost as long as me and Catherine, we thought that it would be fun to introduce the two of them. I had already met Beatrix, her best friend, and she had already met Charles, so one dag we arranged for them to meet.
It was like love at first sight. They had been together since and fortunatly for them, their parents accepted their love.
"You're lucky... I wish my dad would get it! How would he feel if someone told him that my mother had to go to another country and that he couldn't see her? I just need her to find a way to talk to me, to send me something, I just need to know she's safe." I did my best to controle myself and this time I didn't scream.
"I know, but she will get it! Maybe she already sent a letter, but u know that it takes time for male to get here from Europe! We're here..." I wanted to believe that, I wanted to get home pagina and have a letter from her waiting for me; but... wait what did he meant door "We're here"?, I looked around and I realised that we were at the park where we used to get together with our friends. They were all here, waiting for us, I didn't know why but I was a bit happy to see them. It was like old times, the only difference was that she wasn't there. But I had promised her that I would be with our vrienden for both of us... I couldn't promise that I would laugh like she had ask me but I would be with them... That would help with the sadness, of at least I hoped for that!

We spent all time together, just relaxing, enjoying each others company. I enjoyed it, I hadn't been with them for too long and I was sorry for that... I wished that they would forgive me, and for my satisfaction they did. I couldn't have asked for better friends, she had left me such good people to help me and for that I was really thankfull to her!
As the night started to come I went home, Charles asked me if I wanted him to come with me but I told him it wasn't necessary. I needed to think... Think about life, about my father, about her letter, about her...
She had asked me to be with her parents, to make them see how much I loved her, but right now I hated them so much that I couldn't even see their faces. I needed to talk to my father, I couldn't stay mad with him forever, I couldn't let this come between us...
I got home pagina and it was empty, but I didn't care, I ran to my room and oppened the door...
Right in that seconde I thank my mother, she had kept her promise. Right on top, boven of my bed there was a letter. I looked at the datum and it was dated of three days ago, it took three days to get here, but it came... I ripped it open and started to read it:

"Angel of my forever...

It seems that it's been an eternity since we last talked, since I last saw your beautiful face...
I see your face every seconde of the dag in mind but I can not make justice to your beauty...
Send me all the angels in heaven and I'll still look for u in the meadle of the crowd...

u must be thinking how I'm writing to you, so I'll let u know that my aunt is a saint. She's allowing me to write to you, I couldn't have asked for better. I might be traped in hell, because u are not with me, but at least I can take confort on the fact that I can communicate with you, my love...
So much to say but I don't have words to put it...
Know that I love you, that u are always in my hart-, hart and that we WILL be together soon enough...

Putting Beethoven's words into my heart:

...Remain my true, only treasure, my all as I am yours...

As always:

Remain mine forever... Remain in my heart...

I'm forever yours... You're forever mine...

Shine for me, lead me back to you....

Love, Catherine"

I was so thankfull... To her aunt, to her, to the world... I had my love back, I had my hope back!

Hope u like it:D

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The fugitive chapter3:Patrick knows

posted by sahour95

I didn't care about Patrick's complement as much as I was worried about the sad look in his eyes. What was causing it? Ema told me they loved each other and they're happy together, what would make him so sad? I had to know and decided to find out about that while I'm in their house.
One week passed for me there. And as long as Ema is to busy arranging the house and running it, as long as Patrick and I spent meer time together. He taught me how to act in front of the guests and what to talk about what not to talk about. He said: "All u have to do is pretend that u don't have any problems,...

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Make Me Care About What u Have To Say

posted by Cinders

And of course, the initial reaction to a titel like this one is, "Well, why don't you make me care about what you're saying, first?"

So I'll cut straight to the chase: When submitting a short story, of even a poem for publication in a literary magazine, keep in mind that the editors receive hundreds of submissions a day, which means that they don't have time to read every last one of them. This is why it is incredibly important to hook them in your first few sentences, other than start slow and verbosely build up to why they should care. Therefore, this will be a succinct explanation of why...

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The Vampire Reporter -- Chapter 2

posted by BiteMeCullen107

“Somebody turn the lights on, Somebody tell me what’s wrong I’d be lying if I told u losing u was something I could handle…” I had been driving for about two and a half hours the highways were clear I had the windows all the way done singing along with my I-pod.
In a matter of seconden I could see cars slowing down on the highway in Kansas and as the cars started to stop I could see a long line of cars in front of me. I can’t believe this I was finally going to make it to the volgende state before the traffic started happening.
“Whoa” I jumped at the vibrating in my right pants...

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The Vampire Reporter -- Chapter 1

posted by BiteMeCullen107

I’m finally on my own, alone. I just turned eighteen a couple of months geleden and I got a job offer in Los Angeles California. I’ve been writing since I could write and when I reached junior high I joined the new paper and I did the same in high school and in my seconde jaar of high school I was offered a job as a reported for the Salem New Hampshire news paper and I accepted. My job threw the years had grown and now that I’m done high school I can take the job offer.
Ya my parents were pissed when the found out I wasn’t going to collage but if u think about it...

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Serenity- Chapter 1

posted by jasperwhlover

Serenity

Chapter 1

Once upon a time in heaven there lived an angel who was yet a child, she was loved door all the angels and most importantly God who named her Serenity, and gave her power that controlled serenity, peace and all things calm and gentle, but he secretly gave her the Elixir of Life which would drip from her finger each dag and each night, unknown was this to the other angels because God was sure that if this was known Serenity would be in grave peril because, man alone does not seek eternal life, angels, devils and all creatures whether they reside in heaven of hell seek the Elixir...

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Spirit of stne part 6

posted by TDIlover226

~It seems like these people that I use to call enemies, that I use to think were trying to kill me, are now my best friends. Annie, Ann, Vincent, and JJ are actually alot nicer than they seemed in the beginning. They save lives, and I help, they're known as the spirits, and I'm one of them now! They go to my school when they are in their human forms, and they really are the best vrienden that I could ever had, they all have there transfos, and I just can't live without them now! I can tell them anything! JJ has mastered free style fighting, and has become the leader of the spirits, and Annie...

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Alex's hunter chapter 4 (longer than the others)

posted by dragonrider

Alex's hunter had a name. Only one person knew his name and that was his ex wife. He was utterly baffled that Alex wouldn't crack where his family was. This was going to be hard.
Just then the door opened revealing his ex wife Melinda and his daughter Melanie. Alex's hunter felt his anger rise up into his head
"Crap Melinda why can't u bring her volgende year?" he roared raising his fists
Melinda became furious. He knew she would be coming! "Jerry calm yourself. It's your winter to take care of Melanie. u don't want to talk to my lawyer again do you?" She asked eying him like she trapped him...

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Alex's Hunter chapter 1 and 2 (very short)

posted by dragonrider

Some people weren't meant to be born. Some families are not to be made That's why there are hunters. Hunters take care of this problem

Alex Grazer walked down the dark wet hallway with his arms full of wood for his family. His hair against his neck was standing up because of fear and the freezing temperature. Little did he know what was behind him would hurt his life forever.
Alex stopped walking and looked around on all sides of the hallway. He had his knockout spray door his flashlight at home pagina so if anybody attacked he would be doomed. In a single snel, swift motion of somethings arm Alex hit the...

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Death. My new favoriete word.

posted by alice_cullen_12

Day 1 of my diary
Dear Esmerelda (diary),
Death is my new favoriete word. Closely followed door tragedy. I made a lijst of my new favoriete words since "He Who I Can Not Name, Because He Broke My Heart" left. Oh, all right. His name is . . . John. Oh, I want to die! Anyway, here's the list:

1. Death

2. Tragedy

3. Suicide

4. Hate

5. Nothing

6. Night

7. Darkness

8. Devil

I don't know what to do. I decided that I would wear all black. I'm going goth. He Who I Can Not Name hated goths. I like the Goth Club at my school. I never have to smile of laugh. And we trade ways to kill ourselves every Wednesday at...

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Westville: Chapter 1: Welcome to Westville

posted by gossipgirlxoxo

I winded the car window down; I could smell the fresh air, it was peaceful. My name is Katelyn Peers, I’m sixteen years old and I have never met my parents. The only family member I have ever known is my brother, Sam, he is my age, his my twin and usually twins are meant to have a bond, there is no bond for us, the only reason he puts up with me is because of our father, I have never met him, but Sam has, and for some reason he has respect for the man. I used to go to Down kruis academy for girls that were until I ran away a jaar geleden with Sam. I turned to see Sam driving the car; his long...

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Who are the real monsters: Chapter 1: The Antiworld Part 2

posted by gossipgirlxoxo

“There u are, man” zei Marley. Opal had blood dripping from her mouth; her eyes were shining red as the shadows off the boom darken her whole body. “Looks like we’re all done here, let’s verplaats out before they wake up” zei Alec. Later on while Marley was lying on his bed, the same thought came across his mind, should the others know about their secret. “Marley, someone’s here for you” zei Marley’s mum. “Hey man””It’s us”. This is Lindsay and Slone Sudiro (Lindsay 14, Slone 12) Lindsay level is higher than Opals, Slone’s is no better than Nathan’s. They are...

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Underworld Chapter 5: Road trips

posted by gossipgirlxoxo

Tayce’s p.o.v

“Training time for Lilly” I sneered looking at the small blond. She nodded. “Let me get ready” She said. I shrugged and then turned to go, but was stopped door Hayden. “She already trained today” he informed me, I nodded. “I know, but Rebecca wants her to have meer of it” I told him, he rolled his eyes. “Why is she being such a bitch?” he asked me I laughed. “It’s Rebecca, she sees her as a threat” I told him, he tensed up. The he turned to me. “You’re not being so bad” he said, pointing out that I’m usually a bitch. “She didn’t do anything...

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Gods: Chapter 10: Adam's appel, appel, apple

posted by gossipgirlxoxo

I woke up, still in Ethan’s arms; my face was up against his chest. I slowly moved up, Ethan noticed this, he let go of me. I got up and walked over to the keuken-, keuken table. Why was I in Ethan’s arms? But then I remembered. ‘Adam.......he’s dead’ Dawns words came to my head. I nearly fell down again, but arms caught me. “Whoa....come on” Ethan zei pulling me back to the couch. I was now sitting on the couch, Ethan sat beside me. “How did he....?” I asked. I sounded angry but I wasn’t I just couldn’t feel anything else. “We don’t know” Ethan answered me. He was trying...

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Memories - A Poem

posted by Cuddles

A/N: My first poem I post here...I hope it is any good.

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Memories

Far distant seem to be
the things I now call memory.
The good and bad, the right and wrong
share a thing, cause they are gone.

Long forgotten feelings rise
each of them in their disguise.
They are not dead, so it only seems
waiting patiently to haunt me in my dreams.

Will it ever cease to be?
Even if it's called memory
Does that mean I always have to remember
to give up, to hide from them, to surrender?

Whenever I fight them I will lose.
I have nothing between I could choose.
No matter...

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How to Prepare Your Manuscript

posted by Pushkin319

Remember that u want to make a good impression and that the presentation of your manuscript is the first step. When you're preparing a manuscript, whether it's an article, a short story, of a novel, there are certain styles that make your piece stand out. u want it to look professional—not like the large percentage of manuscripts that appear as if the writer took no care at all in the presentation.

Writers disagree on whether editors really care about the typeface and the line spacing and whether the manuscript follows a certain style of format. Some editors don't care about these things,...

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Nightfall #1(COMPLETE REWRITE) Chapter Ten

posted by adamk

CHAPTER TEN:
Two hours pass, and during those hours, I ponder what to do next. Danny lays unconscious, his wounds have healed, but I can sense he still is in pain. On impulse, I have injected him with my blood. I enough to turn him into a vampire. I know he will not be as powerful as I was when I was turned, as I have not gegeven him enough to accomplish this feat. I lay back in a chair, continuing to ponder my volgende move. I am startled when the phone rings. When I look at the clock, it is eleven thirty. I answer, not knowing what to expect. “Hello?” I answer. “Hey Ashley.” I hear from...

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Not really a scary story but a true story

posted by Free_Spirit

Me: okay i actually found this story in my local newspaer from 20 years back. And i'll put a symbol for town names. I don't want rapists of pheaodifiles coming to my town... okay lets begin. And i shall have to give some background history. Well at there was a renovation going on at $ which was between # and &, for an old mental asylum to be converted into a power house musuem. Anyway so this story takes place then. I think i'm not sure of dates.
$ was a small town, very small as in like only three -5 thousande people

okay so in Australia out in the country there was a young couple travelling...

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"Weeds are Flowers, Too"

posted by ChiliPepperLuv

People say flowers are beautiful.
They're beautiful, that's true.
They also provide oxygen for us.
People say weeds are ugly.
They apparently have no value,
Nor do they deserve to live.
I'm not talking weeds that grow in the garden.
I'm talking about wild plants.
Well, weeds are flowers, too.
Just give them a chance.
Once u get to know them, they're amazing.
They can be just as pretty as flowers.
I may not be an orchid of a sunflower.
I may not be a rose of an iris.
I'm meer of a dandelion.
I may be a weed, but I'm not so bad.
Give me half a chance. I'm pretty neat.
So, weeds are flowers, too.
Get to know them. They're pretty great.

What I Enjoy About Writing!

posted by deedragongirl

I love this photo.

Hi guys, since I love to write, here are the topics that I love to write.

Travel Log

After watching a few videos of Rick Steve on Youtube, I was very inspired door him to be a travel log since I love travelling, especially to Europe, meer parts of the US and both South and Central America.

Movie & Musical Review

I love to write about films and musicals that I had seen, so whenever the latter is adapted into the former. I would also compare them if I had seen a musical before, however spoiler alerts ahead!

Book & Movie Review

Although I had done this a couple of times on Dan Brown's Da Vinci Code and Angels & Demons, I hope to do meer of this!

Enjoy Writing!

Whenever I write, I tried to improve myself and on my writing skills. It also became a hobby that I really enjoy!

How I wish!

The Super Cute Crush

posted by mermaidgirl1010

Another dag in paradise, NOT!
Just another summer dag of hanging out with vrienden and such.
Omg. He. Is. Hot. My friend and I were riding our bikes and I saw the cutest guy IN THE UNIVERSE. Well, maybe I am exaggerating but STILL! He is hot!
I must have been staring because the volgende minuut I was on a tree. OMG. He was looking at ME!!!!!!! ''Hi I'm Brady."
"I......I........." OMG! Sooooo stupid! My best friend was gone now and he leaned down. OMG. He kissed me! Then...... gone. I was in my bed. Was it a dream? Well, I think i'll check just to be sure.