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posted by liviabutterfly
Chapter [#2]

Narrators POV

An old man in a mantel walked into the neighborhood in which Olivia lived. Everyone stared at him as he walked around.

Olivia's POV

I smiled brightly as I dived into the ocean, "wait up!!!" Oliver laughed as my five brothers ran after me with surfboards, buggy boards, buckets for picking up sea shells, and dad brought out our special maid sandcastle buckets. They were big and made the best structures ever!!! Plus our family is known for our sand castles/structures. I smiled and dived down, feeling the salty cold water against my skin, it's the best feeling ever. When I got up to the surface my family wasn't there, I got out of the ocean and looked around. Then a man in a mantel came up to me, "Can I help you?" I asked slightly shaking a bit. Not because of the cold feeling u feel when the air blows on u after getting out of any body of water, but because of the fear I was feeling. He walked up closer to me, I dived into the water, and swam out to sea. Then I saw a fin, a haai fin, I screamed and swam back to shore. I was lucky I lived, I ran to my house but let out a loud scream when the man grabbed me. My family came outside and went pale, mom got the phone and called 911 but the last thing I saw and heard before the man knocked me out was, "Olivia!!!!!!!" And my parents and brothers running after me.

Narrators POV

The man came to the rough and tough city, where biker gangs, criminal activity, and the houses looked like total shit (pardon my language... but it's true) the sound of motorcycles rumbled around. But the old man soon came to a school, he walked into the school.

Jason's POV

I walked into class, "mr Johnson?" The teacher asked me, "Yeah?" I asked. "It's 4th period" she zei angrily. "Yeah so what?" I asked and sat down, "you're loosing your education!" The teacher zei glaring at me. "Yeah so what?" I asked again, "why were u in so late?" The teacher asked me. "My Alarm clock didn't go off, I had to take my motorcycle to the shop, I had to get my hair done, and I had to get meer clothes so I can look cool" I chuckled. "That's all meer important than school?" The teacher asks, I nodded yes. "Who's he?" Cole asked, I turned around to see an old man in a cloak. "How did u get in?" The teacher asked, the man walked up to me, "what do u want?" I asked him glaring at me. "Even when he glares he's hot" Justine sighed dreamily, I flashed a smile before turning to the guy again who then knocked me out.

Narrators POV

The old man walked to a huge huge mansion where u could hear screaming, the old man snuck through the back door.

Tatiana's POV

"I zei I wanted a pony!!!!!!" I screamed angrily, "honey we looked for a pony" dad zei to me. "Then why don't I have one?" I asked angrily, "the places where they sell ponies are going through a rough winter and they can't be brought to us" mom said, I let out a scream. Then a guy in a black mantel walked into the room. "Who are you?" I asked him angrily, "security!!!" Dad screamed, but he knocked me out and vanished before the security guards came.

Narrators POV

The man in the mantel came to the neighborhood where Cathy lived, the sound of loud screaming echoed through the neighborhood.

Cathy's POV

I ran after my cousin who was visiting, he had taken my bag of candy!!!! I screamed and screamed at him running and running. "Cathy stop being so loud!" Dad called, "then make Donny give me back my candy!" I called angrily. Dad came down, Donny gulped and gave me my candy back. "Thank you" I zei but glared at Donny. "Now be quiet" dad said, but literally 3 seconden Donny took my hair brush and I was screaming and running. But then Donny and I stopped, there stood a man in a black cloak. "dad?!!!" I screamed, "no figure it out yourself!" He called. Then mom came back from work, she saw what was happening, she let out a scream. Then the man grabbed me "mom! Dad!" I cried. The last thing I heard before being knocked out was "Cathy!!!!!"

Narrators POV

The man in the mantel came to the town where Xander lived.

Xander's POV

I groaned in annoyance when My sisters let out a loud squeal from the room volgende to mine. It's hard being the only guy in the family, I looked at a picture of my dad and I. He and I went hiking in the woods, that was the dag before he headed into the army. Then 4 months later he was killed in while in battle, I felt some tears fall down my cheeks. He died when I was 6 and it was on my 6th birthday too, but ever since dad died it was just my mom, my sisters and me. Then there was a knock on my door, I opened it to see a man in a cloak. "Uhhh hello" I said, mom came running up quickly. Mom knows when we're in trouble. She let out a scream, the seconde I look at the guy I was knocked out.

Narrators POV

Now the man came to the village Lexi lives in, people looked at him suspiciously.

Lexis POV

my friends, Jane, Nevaeh, and Anna were over at the house for a sleep over. "I brought snacks" mom zei coming in with chips and humus, fruit, pretzels, cotton candy, cookies, and crackers. "Thanks mom" I zei smiling at her. "No problem honey" mim zei and walked out. "So do u still have a crush on Felix?" Jane asked me, I nodded yes, "then why don't u talk to him?" Nevaeh asked me. "You know I'm nervous and can get shy when I even go close to him " I sighed. "We'll help u out with that nervousness and shyness" Anna zei smiling, "thanks" I zei smiling. Then there was a knock on the door, thinking it was mom, I called "Come in!" But it wasn't mom It was a man in a cloak. He walked towards me, I was afraid. I scooted back, but then i was knocked out.

Narrators POV

The man in the mantel came to the Big beautiful house in the country where Cameron's dad and mom bought so they could go and preform in the country performance.

Cameron's POV

I smiled brightly as I took dance lessons from my teacher. I had finished singing lessons so I'm doing my dance lessons. "excellent Cameron" mr Francisco zei smiling, I smiled back. Mom and dad then came in, "now lets practice on the stage" mom zei smiling. I gulped a big, I'm very afraid to go on stage u know and I can't do anything about it. Mom and dad took me on a stage with no one there, they put muziek on but I was too scared to do anything. Mom and dad came on stage with me. I hugged them crying, "I can't do it!!" I sobbed. "It'll be Okay" mom zei smiling at me, then a man in a mantel came on stage. He threw my parents away from me and knocked me out

Narrators POV

"Last house" the man in the mantel zei as he came to a school, Asher's school.

Asher's POV

I smiled as I solved the hard math problem on the board, "you never fail to impress me Asher" mr Franchise zei smiling. I nodded happily, but couldn't help but think about that girl at the pool. She always visits the pool, even in the winter with an indoor pool. Then the brand alarm went off and I spiering, spieringen smoke. Everyone walked out, but before I got to the door I was knocked out door some guy in a cloak
posted by coolie
. ‘’What happened to Sucky Sam?’’ Who knows,’’ replied Ted. They started walking through the catacombes.
We should get going ,”Bill. This place gives me the hibie Jeebeis,”said Death. You’re right,” replied Ted. They walked towards the front of the catacombes. For some strange reason, there was no hole to get out! They looked in the other direction. There was Sucky Sam standing about five yards away from them! Who, what, where, when…. Why,” zei Bill. Looking for me,” zei Sucky Sam in a cocky voice. All of the three were shocked in horror. Sucky Sam’s eyes turned...
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posted by amethyst44
After that, I had the courage to go into the forest. Every time I did, however, I felt a smidge closer to guilt and foolishness. His threat should have prevented me from going into the forest again, of even think about it. But no. I wasn't going to be bullied down door a snobby kid in the forest from letting me have my lovely freedom when I wanted. Besides, we owned these woods. He could file against me, of burn the whole forest for all I cared, but he would be the one to pay the price. And door the way his clothes were mangled and destroyed, I don't think the price would even match his dream sufficiency...
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posted by joe-edwardfan
end of chap3
The klok, bell rang then I saw Edward waiting for me in front of the office
-there u are I thought u were going to ditch me
-whenever I make a promise I will always keep it!
Specially the one that includes: killing Damien and his mother
-so who was he?
He asked a little angry
-no one
I sighed
-I won’t push it if u don’t want to talk about it
-that's a good idea
We reached the biology class I sat beside the window again and edward sat beside me like jasper
The teacher came in the class and told everyone to welcome edward and blah blah blah
In the biology class I wasn’t as tired as before so...
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posted by marissa
 "After a while, the insanity of the situation wore off and it seemed completely normal."
"After a while, the insanity of the situation wore off and it seemed completely normal."
Chapter Three:

Alan:

When Alan got onto the bus, he spotted Benny immediately and sat down volgende to him.
    
Alan took the bus every Tuesday and Thursday to visit his mother. He’d met Benny two weeks geleden and the two talked every time Alan was on the bus, and Alan ate up every word that Benny said.
    
He had been skeptical at first, but it didn’t take long for Alan to honestly believe he was talking to God when he rode the bus. After a while, the insanity of the situation wore off and it seemed completely normal.
    
“Hello Alan,”...
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posted by Sweet_Pants
He was yelling again.

    I’d close my eyes, letting his voice fade over my ears, pleading my breath to go even. My ears traveled out, hearing anything but my father’s yelling, anything but his harsh insults, anything but his mocking...

    Tick, tick, the clock was ticking. It was an angel clock, hanging over my head, hanging over the computer I was sitting in front of.

    He was saying something about towels, towels left on the floor in the bathroom...

    “...left towels all over the damn floors...someone...
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posted by BellaSwan636
Serena

"Why did u leave?"

I wish I could tell him why. But seeing him again din't ease the pain. Not one bit. The agony only multiplied. All of the feelings I had suppressed were clamouring to be acknowledged.

Ashleigh peeked out from her curtain of hair, and made eye contact with him.

My hart-, hart skipped a beat. She was his child too, I knew that, but he maybe he wouldn't want anything to do with her of me. He probably hated me.

Ansking the vraag I had feared the most, he said, "Is this her?"

I looked at the ground.

"I can't do this again," the words hurt me to say them, but I could never force...
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posted by Lorelei-Essence
Chapter Two

A maand later…

“Hungry?” Xavier asked.
“Starving.” I replied. Xavier went into the fridge and pulled out a tan plastic bowl and a smaller turquoise bowl. He placed the bowl of fresh fruit in front of me and the small bowl of plain yogurt. He handed me a fork.
“Enjoy.” He said. Xavier kissed me on my forehead.
“Thank you.” I said.
I began to eat when I heard a moan. Xavier looked down at his shoes.
“Um…after breakfast do u want to go for a walk?” Xavier asked.
“Xavier, what’s that sound?” I asked.
“It’s…Madison.” He choked out.
“Doing what?” I asked....
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posted by genyva
Genyva Salters
Cold Toes

Prologue
June 30, 2004
11:45 Open Door Eating


It’s the worst dag in the world for a lunch date. I look like hell my light brown hair was frizzing like a poodle. Damn this humid summer, only in Texas the humidity 90% all the time. And this place is like a hut; all the hot air coming from the windows is blowing out the A/C. How is any one able to enjoy lunch when they are drinking the air?

I looked over to Ethan, who was making his way towards the table. We had been together so long in this little town. I love it to death but I think its time to verplaats out. Greene, Texas...
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posted by BellaSwan636
Serena

Nine hours.

I was exhausted after it.

Rion came into the hospital room. He took my hand, and told me softly that I had a little girl.

"Rion, there is no way I will ever be able to tell u just how thankful I am that I have you," I sighed, before I drifted into a deep black mist.

**************************************************

I held my little girl close to me. I was filled with an indescribable love for this small creature, who I had worked so hard to bring here. Who I already loved.

**************************************************

Around a jaar after that, I became a guardian ad litem....
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posted by twilight0girl
 isaac
isaac
this maand is going to be terrible.
i live in barrow alaska.this is thier maand of complete,totall darkness.also,this is when the vampires come out to feed on the helpless men,women,and children.but instead of shaking in pure fear,i'll go out and see how they act.but i'm also going out because my two brothers,isaac and marcus,are vampires too.

__________________________________________________
4 days later

i've never walked around outside during this time of month.i can hear the screaming coming from every direction.i havent seen any va,pires nor my two brothers.when i started to walke away...
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posted by BeSafe
I chanced a glance at you
from across the crowded room
and that was when I noticed
u were looking at me too

we both know this shouldn't happen
its a road we've been down before
and the only way it ever ends
is with u walking out the door

so I wish someone would explain to me
why I'm still rooted in place
staring in the direction
of just another lonely face

my mind is screaming at me to run
while my hart-, hart asks me to stay
for a moment I dont know what to do
and if its a price I'm willing to pay

we both know this is wrong
the love that we share
but we also know that wont stop us
because to find this kind of love is rare
posted by Maria_Quinn8
hallo guys I'm new here and I just want to tell u guys how to become a mermaid for those mermaids lovers
I only know 1 spells and I hope it works for u guys
SPELL1#
these 're the following items needed
cup of water with salt mixed in it
voice
steps to take
put ur hand in the salty water of fresh water if u want
say the spell 3 times
mermaids in the sea oh so fast and free
I wish to be one of u, I will have a tail colour of ()
and the power to () water
I will get my tail and power in ten minuten but no later
mermaid when wet, human when dry
10 seconden is all it takesto transform
so mote it be×2
U might get ur tail after 10 minuten but it might work for some people
BEWARE:U CHANGE AFTER ONE DROP OF WATER
Good luck
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in desperation, the king sent his greatest knights to save his duagter, but alas, it was all in vain.
the king had almost lost all hope, when he heard that a young sorccerer had come to his kingdom. the disstresed king called for the sorccerer to be brought before him.
when he saw the sorccerer...
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I hate my life now. I am now going against everything of what I stand for. It's all because of one stupid mistake. I can't write about it now. It's just too shameful to write about it. Today I mostly hung around my room. of my new room in Jerry's house. Man I hate him so much now. u are probably thinking Who are you? What are u talking about?
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You know I am actually not a super hero anymore but I'm working on that....
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posted by mermaidluver34
PLEASE READ!: Ok so for the spells without instructions put your hand of foot in water just to be safe. These following side effects will occur for the first four spells:Keeping legs crossed
Very itchy legs
Singing a lot
Rash on legs
Making un-normal sounds
Acting a bit out if the ordinary (goes on and off for about 6 hours)
Drinking lots of water. Where it says blue and goud that was just and example. u can choose your own colors and powers. Most girls that did these spells got tails when wet within 45 hrs. The spells don't have to be on a full moon unless the instructions zei so. Don't...
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BUMBLESTRIPE PTV
Bumblestripe padded into his hol, den and looked around for Dovewing, then he remembered she was out hunting around for us. All of his instincts told him to go and find her and hunt with her. Be her warmth on the leaf-fall night.
Then he got up and did so, he raced all around the territory looking for Dovewing but there was no sign.
Then he looked up at the moon and remembered she might be at the island. He raced over to the island and stepped onto the branch.
He looked up at the moon and saw the Great Oak. There were two cats at the top, boven of the Great Oak. They were sharing tongues...
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posted by Liz4Avril
One morning on Goth Lane, Janet Leyman woke up, she did her usual routine. She got dressed took a shower, and put on her makeup. But meanwhile... she didn't know what was waiting.
Her volgende door neighbor, is a vampire. She went over to her neighbors house, Antoniette. Then while she knocked someone opened the door, a tall skinny lady with pale skin and dark hair. "Who are you?" Asked Janet. "I'm Avoca, Antonitte's sister. Why are u here?!!?" zei the stranger in a negative cold voice. "I, I just wanted to see Antoniette." zei Janet. "She's over this way follow me." zei Avoca, motioning Janet...
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