Writing Article: That dag chapter 1 part 2

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posted by dragonrider

Sorry It took so long. Uh I was finishing my other story. I feel like this story would be successful. This part is short but I promise volgende chapter will be long

As I panted I got onto the bus. It was my first time since I was always late for the bus and my mom always had to take me. I looked around for an empty seat. I found one in the back volgende to a boy.
The boy had dark blond hair with green eyes. He was a bit tan and had a few pimples on his face.
I sighed and walked down to him and sat volgende to him. I felt him scoot closer to the window until he was basically kissing it.
The bus inched vooruit, voorwaarts and slowly traveled down the crowded streets of New York City. We headed over a pot hole and the bus bounced up.
I gasped and grabbed the boy's leg. I always hated bouncing. It scared me all my life.
I realized my mistake and I took off my hand off his leg. I glanced at him. He looked very shocked like I couldn't do that. He was red and pale at the same time. I felt his pulse quicken.
"Oh crap I'm sorry," I apologized looking down.
"It's okay," his voiced cracked.
I looked up at him and he looked like he was in pain. "Are u alright?" I asked inching my hand towards him
He looked at me quickly stopping me "I'm fine!" his voice cracked
The bus stopped dead and I passed him and saw we were at school. Everybody on the bus looked at us and laughed.
The boy seemed flustered and rushed off the bus. His face red. He ran towards the cafeteria.
I just sat there in silence in shock. Did I hurt him of something?

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Future chapter of Trapped in my own time First kiss version 1

posted by dragonrider

Keep in mind I have no idea what chapter this will be but I got this idea yesterday so I wrote it last night. Actually I had two ideas of how my two main characters would kiss. I'll write and put up a different version of their first kiss some time soon. I actually had tears in my eyes when I wrote this

I storm outside of the house and plop myself down on the sofa outside. I feel my eyes tear. It's so unfair. My tears overflow my eyes.
"Hey Starr what's wrong?" A voice asks behind me. I look behind me and see Elliot
"Oh hallo Elliot. Nothing is wrong," I say wiping my eyes
Elliot sits down next...

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Serenity-Chapter 2

posted by jasperwhlover

Chapter 2

The priest was reciting a prayer, stuttering heavily, Serenity realized that he was scared and replied, “Fear not for I am Serenity the angel of peace, I know not why my wings resemble the midnight blue that dawns when the sun goes to rest, I know not my purpose on this earth for my father the Lord, God did not verse me of this strange happening”. The priest believed Serenity and taught Serenity human activities, the priest, father Bartholomew, raised Serenity as his own. Now, father Bartholomew, being an exorcist sent many demons and evil artifices of the devil back to hell,...

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Wishful Thinking

posted by jasperwhlover

Wishful Thinking

Introduction: I thought it was a sweet beginning, a chance to start anew, no looking back, nor turning. What I’ve found here, has me in its grasp, it’s captured me in its spell. But like every sweet beginning we never know how the story ends.

Hi, I’m Alicia Alice Davidson, but u can call me Alice. I’m from a family of five, and I go to the best High School in the country, I’m confident and I follow my instincts I’m a fighter mentally and physically. It started off as the same boring, disappointing dag I was used to, at my school, it’s an all girl school u see....

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Wishful Thinking

posted by jasperwhlover

Wishful Thinking

Introduction: I thought it was a sweet beginning, a chance to start anew, no looking back, nor turning. What I’ve found here, has me in its grasp, it’s captured me in its spell. But like every sweet beginning we never know how the story ends.

Hi, I’m Alicia Alice Davidson, but u can call me Alice. I’m from a family of five, and I go to the best High School in the country, I’m confident and I follow my instincts I’m a fighter mentally and physically. It started off as the same boring, disappointing dag I was used to, at my school, it’s an all girl school u see....

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Wanting Someone - Chapter One

posted by Lindy52

Chapter One

Expecting Michael to volgende to her, Jamie moved around to her husband’s side of the bed and wanting to see him sleeping volgende to her the first thing she sees in the morning, Jamie opened up her eyes and founded no one there.

Jamie sighed when she saw that, knowing where her husband of seven years was sleeping right now. Since he returned from Iraq a few months ago, Michael Thomas had become a different man. A man who never saw the bright side of things and never wanted to look at people in the eyes.

For the past four months, their three children, Mackenzie, Isabella, and Jake had been...

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Spirit of Stone part 4

posted by TDIlover226

~one of them, how could I be one of them! I'm completly human, they're, they're just ugly freaks!.

Eddie just sat there in the dark room, alone. He wasn't sure if he should try to escape, of stay to see exsactly what "one of them" ment. "I can't stay here, with those freaks, they'll probably kill me, they're ugly mutated freaks and I'm getting out of here!" zei Eddie. "Ugly freaks huh" zei Annie stepping out of the darkness of the room, "yeah, wwe get that alot from people like you". "Well, mabey if u would just tell people what's going on, mabey-". "You don't get it, do you, u are one...

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Untitled. Chapter 2 Rachel's Perspective

posted by dragonrider

Okay it's now of never Rachel. u need money for food. Yeah and uh clothes. u are doing it to survive not because u are greedy
I sigh. I never liked stealing jewels but what are u gonna do on your own? I turn invisible and walk through the door of the store. It's very dark in here. Huh they must be closed of something.
I look around the room. The glasses cases are begging to be smashed open.
I walk up to one of them and pound my fist into it. The glass breaks and a ringing fills my ears. The stupid alarm does bull.
A red gas fills the room. Crap Gas! I suck in my last breath and grab...

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Gods 2: Chapter 2: Mission Impossible

posted by gossipgirlxoxo

I glared at the blond with evil eyes. She was pretty, but evil. My family loved her, laughing at every joke she made. They hung off her every word even Liz, the only one that stood door me was Callum and he just doesn’t talk much so he wasn’t really doing it for me. He only smiled at one of her jokes. Ethan was holding her hand and laughing at one stage he even kissed her on the cheek! What the hell? Was he going out with her when he kissed me? When he yelled at me before? “So Sadie, how do u like Palm Springs?” The blond one asked me. I smiled. “It’s just fine” I said. She nodded....

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A Haunting in a cemetary

posted by TDIlover226

It was Halloween eve and we had nothing to do.
My sister, Lee was on the computer searching for haunted places, it was a saturday night and her and her buddies we're bored and needed something to do, we were at our grandma's and she lived around alot of creepy places. She searched this cemetary that had alot of spiritual sightings. She of corse no longer believed in all that crap, she was 19. Me and my friend Vanita dared her to go there. "well" she zei "you have ta go with me too!". Me and Vanita agreed, Vanita had been to alot of haunted places before, and he thought that he wasn't gonna...

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Imagine This: chapter 1

posted by summerfrog

OK so i was walking down the street...all alone...in the rain...not happy but not sad ether...when suddenly I ran into a magnolia tree!I don't know how I didn't see it...or why it was in the middle of the road-but it was there and when I looked at it I saw it was the biggest magnolia I had ever seen;it was absolutely GINORMOUS!it to be at least as tall as a skyscraper. I couldn't even see the top.Now what is the easiest way to get past a tree? Go around it of course! but when i looked there was a wall!Two walls!on ether side of the boom that prevented me from passing(again,how didn't I see this before?)It was not an ordinary
uithangbord ether,and must have taken allot of work to build because it was as tall,or taller than the tree!so I was stuck with a magnolia and two walls
what was I to do?turn back?I had come too far!so knowing this,what do u think I did?What would u have done?

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Promo to a story. Real thing later.

posted by dragonrider

Dear Diary,
Yeah It's me again. I made one mistake and it's eating me inside.
Before u ask me "Lily did u at least try to escape?" I'm going to tell u that I did. On the first day. It's like he knew I would. I had just gotten shot door that straal, ray and I was feeling Sulky and then Jerald zei something that really ticked me off.
"So yeah your room is down the hall from where we are now"
I glared at him His stupid red hair and eyes were just pulsing out at me like I'm his prize
"You planned this didn't you? How? Well I'll never know but just know this I hate you. u killed the only living family...

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My Journal : Hard to Let Go....ch.1

posted by XhuddyobsessedX

I look at the old photographs. It kills me to see him smile. I've only heard about him. I hear he would have loved me. I hear he was nice. I hear that he was a good dad. I hear he was an okay husband. I hear that he would have made a good grandfather. It's not fair. It kills me when my dad talks about him. My dad zei one of his last words to him were "Dont miss me when I'm gone." Those words run through my head. dag and night and keep me up thinking of him. Why did he have to go? I pray he's okay and fine in heaven. I pretend he's still here. If only he were ... I miss him....

I guess he's just....
Hard to Let Go

Dedicated to my grandfather I miss u ... even if I never met u =,[

volgende journal entry coming up in few please
R&R
Thanks!!

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Who Are The Real Monsters: Chapter 2 Hidden Creatures, Hidden vrienden Part 1

posted by H-A-T-R-M

“Alec, what the hell is a Rokurokubi?” zei Marley. “I don’t bloody know, maybe some sort of ancient demon” zei Alec. “We Rokurokubi are creatures like u from the other realm; we are also seen in Japanese history” zei Mia who seemed very happy to talk about her race. “So are u some sort of badass, brand breathing, soul sucking, body eating, shapeshifting, winged beast from the depths of the great abyss?” zei Marley taking a few steps back. “Umm... my race aren’t like that, there are stories of us eating bodies and drinking blood but that is a false accusation, the...

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Who Are The Real Monsters: Chapter 1 Antiworld Part 3

posted by H-A-T-R-M

Some vampires have a certain side effect to when they bite a human. This mostly happens with pure bloods of half bloods that gained their power from their vampire history. Vampires who were bitten and had their blood changed will rarely get this trait because their blood was once human so the DNA does not release this effect in their blood. Marley, Alec and Opal each have a side effect when bitting someone. The People Alec bites start to concentrate a lot on their love life, this is because Alec cares a lot about his love life (One of the many reasons he does not bite men) The Side effect People...

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missing chapter one

posted by kayleebabee

"Carlisle we're home!" I called out as I raced through the house dragging Edward along with me.
"Carlisle? Esme? Rosalie? Emmet? Jazz? Alice?" I called my voice getting higher and higher out of panic.
"They aren't here Bella come on we'll go and find them." Edward zei hoarsely taking my hand and tugging me toward the garage.
I flung my ferrari into reverse and screamed out of the garage. I hissed a stream of profanities as I raced toward Denali our first place to search.
"CRAP!" i screamed stomping on the brakes and screeching to a stop in the middle of the highway.
"I think we have been looking...

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Broken Dreams Chapter 37

posted by BellaSwan636

Shaun

I hated seeing her cry. Knowing it was my fault immediately made me hate myself, not that I didn't already. I needed to hear her voice, know she was really here.

Some part of me registered the fact that I'd sat down, and that I had touched her, if briefly. I had said, "Tell me."

She met my gaze, looking terrified. She closed her eyes firmly, as if she was living a nightmare. Maybe she was.

"I know I hurt you, and I'm sorry," she whispered, looking anywhere but at me. "I thought it would be better that way, u had your whole life ahead of u and I couldn't take that away because of my...

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Broken Dreams Chapter 30

posted by BellaSwan636

Serena

"You have no idea what I've gone through!" the girl tearfully screams at me.
"You're right. I don't. I have no idea what you've gone through, but that doesn't mean I don't care," I say calmly.
"Why would u care? u don't even know me."
"And u don't know me. How would u know that I don't?"

Kayla hesitates a little before answering.

"Because sometimes, not even being related to someone is enough to make them want to care. My own goddamned mother didn't even stick around long enough for me to remember what she even looks like!"
"Growing up must have been pretty awkward."
"You have no idea,"...

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Broken Dreams Chapter 5

posted by BellaSwan636

Tia

When it comes to relationships, I'm no idiot. I could totally see what was coming. But come on; who didn't?

The new girl and Shaun. Plus he didn't like attack her of anything when she sat at his table. What was so special about her, anyway?

Sure she was pretty, but there where way prettier girls, who'd each thrown themselves at him, (he wasn't that bad looking, actually) he'd ignored since freshmen year.

I flicked my hair over my shoulder. I could see she liked him too, she'd looked around the cafeteria yesterday and looked way disappointed when he wasn't there.

So I waited a little after...

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Gods: Chapter 6: Love.....ugh

posted by gossipgirlxoxo

Later on that dag when I am in my bedroom and Ethan is downstairs watching the game. I lay on my bed doing nothing but thinking. I hear my name being called I get up and walk downstairs. Ethan is at the door, someone is asking for me. I start to walk towards the door and see Adam he sees me and smiles I smile back. Ethan turns and sees me his expression is anger, he walks away. I walk up to Adam. “Hey, I didn’t see u at school today” he said. I wondered how he knew where I lived and why was he here. “Ah yeah I’m a bit sick” I zei putting on a husky voice. “I see that anyway,...

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The Powerful Word, "Because"

posted by Pushkin319

THE POWER OF BECAUSE

You're standing in a long line to pay for your groceries. Which sentence do u think will get u through?

1. "May I go ahead of u please?" Put on a really sincere face.

2. "May I step ahead of u please, because I'm really late for my doctor's appointment?"

Using the word "because" will get u closer to 'yes' in almost any circumstance. Why? Because your request is followed door a reason, an explanation for the request. If the request is reasonable, then why not say yes?

The word refers the listener to some background, some circumstances, a framework related to the request....