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posted by Free_Spirit
Me:Okay i wrote this short story after watching the lion king, and if u think i'm doing some sort of copy righting well... oh crap =). anyway please tell me what u think..and rate. Pretty pleaes, with cherries on top, smothered in chocolated, coated with sugar, sprinked with M&Ms topped off with whipped cream. Be warned, in my opinion its a sad story okay begin

TO FALL
Kila's POV
I was sure I felt a push but Marissa wouldn't do that. I mean even though our families didn't get along she wouldn't would she? We’re only eight, she wouldn’t murder me.
I screamed as I felt myself sliding off the ledge. My back scraped against the jagged rock and I struggled, trying to grab a hold of something, anything. I heard my cousin crying out to me.
"Help me!" I shouted through my tears.

My hand scraped against a dead tree, and I reached out desperately, grabbing hold of it. It croaked dangerously but held as I clung to it I called out to Marissa but she didn't answer. My foot kicked against the rock and I screamed again as little rocks tumbled down.

Kila's Dad POV
I looked around startled as i heard a scream. My nephew, Marissa was running towards me. I was immediately on the alert. She ran up to me and i grabbed her door the shoulders.
"Sir Hurry, Kila's gone over the edge," she sobbed.
"Kila no," I breathed. I started sprinting towards where Marissa was pointing.
"Kila hold on," I shouted. I was answered door another scream.

Kila's POV
"Kila hold on," My dad shouted again.
"Daddy," I cried, fear leaking out through my words. And suddenly he was there leaning over the edge.

He looked alarmed when he saw what I was hanging on too. With no hesitation he swung himself down onto the rocks. The movement was too much and the little boom snapped. I screamed, trying to grab hold of something else.

Suddenly a strong hand grabbed my arm, holding me from deaths waiting arms. Dad held on to the edge of the rock, and holding me with his other. I started crying, trickling down my face.
"I love u Daddy," I whispered.
"No honey, we're going to live, we're going to make it I promise," he assured me.
"Now Kila, u just need to crawl up me okay," he instructed, his voice only shaking slightly.

I nodded silently and tried to pull myself up using him. Halfway he slipped a little and I stopped breathing. I kept going and hauled myself up onto the ground. Marissa was standing away, with her back turned. Marissa's eyes widened when she saw me. She ran over to the ledge to see my father.

I scrambled over and saw his eyes widen as he slipped. I screamed and reached out to him. He looked up at me, and he dragged his hands against the rock and he started to stop. He started to claw his way up, his golden brown eyes glinting with determination

I heard footsteps behind me and saw my uncle running towards us having just seen the commotion.
"Please Uncle help him," I begged. I knew they hated each other, but Uncle wasn't a murderer.. His eyes widened as he saw his brother down the cliff.

He ordered me away and reached down. I walked away, and he leaned down, and seemed to whisper something. And then my father was yelling. I ran over just in time to see him falling.
"DADDY!" I screamed, leaning over. He can't fall, he p[promised we would survive it.

"Oh how sad, u shouldn't have leaned to close to the edge, otherwise u wouldn't have fallen and he wouldn't have had to try and save you, and died," my uncle, began, but was cut off door Marissa.
"You killed your own father, this is your fault," she accused. I stumbled back, realising they were right.

And then I started running. I ran through the trees with tears falling down and my hart-, hart laden with guilt.
And behind me I could see Uncle and Marissa smiling triumphantly.
Chapter 1
The miracle
It was over I only wanted my father and I could no longer have him. Yet again he was seduced door some girl. I never got what she met my “she was taking him away from me.” But I knew it met that I was going to be alone. Once again. That is a truth I could not handle I’ve been alone most of my life I didn’t want to be anymore. I just got my father back and no he is leaving me for some broad. I didn’t want to face the facts so I jumped of the roof of my house. The pain was excruciating but only lasted for a second. I sure thought I was dead when I open my eyes and...
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posted by rory2011
chapter (2)

john and carrie went to the museum ,they tried to find anything that give them some information about room 780 but sadly they didn't find much
the keeper saw them ,he know that something bad happened to them
the keeper call them "hey ,you", john and carrie "you meant us "
the keeper "yea ,follow me"
john and carrie followed the keeper they have no idea where they're going
the keeper entered carrie and john to his room
john asked "what u want from us?"
the keeper "your friend died? "
carrie" how did u know that?"
the keeper "oh come on this museum is suck no one visiting it ,and you...
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posted by Insight357
I hate you

But I just can’t seem to break you

Do I want u here?

Do I want u gone?



Everyone says your such a tease

But not to me

Are u real?

Are u fake?



Do I need to be

With this drama queen

u spout lies

No truth to be found



Why am I still

Trying to see the good in you?

Is it worth it?

Should I listen to them?



They tell me to go

Before I’m a victim

Of u mighty undoing

I won’t fall



I’ve made a promise

Can I keep it?

Will I leave?

Will I remain?



Promises

Sins

They all appear

The same



Lies

Sentences

Preach the

Difference



I’m listening to you

I can’t break you

I’m falling now

No one to catch me



Do I leave now

That I’ve fallen

Are u worth my time?

Am I worth this pain?



God, help me choose

For this is not my decision

Any longer

I’ve put my faith in my despair



Now toon me the answer

Tell me what to do

Do I stay

of do I leave you?
posted by para-scence
"Alessandra, u have two minuten to get down here!" Dad shouted from downstairs. I quickly pulled on my ratty old converse, not bothering to tie them. I ran downstairs, probably just making it to the two minuut mark. Dad folded his arms, probably upset that I'd made it in time.

"You're going to be late," he said. "You'd better get your ezel out of here." I grabbed my bag off the chair, and grabbed a candy bar from the pantry. Just as I got out the door, he grabbed a fistful of my hair, yanking it back. I yelped as my head jerked backwards, and I fell back into the house.

"Go say goodbye to your...
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posted by ambers1999
Ring, ring. “Hello”? ”Hannah I need u to come to my lab today”! “Doc”? but I thought”
…” I know, I’ve been working on something and I need your help”. “OK nice to talk to u again…bye”. In excitement I jumped out of my chair and put my best clothes on. Wondering what Doc was up to? I haven’t seen him in over a year, now that it’s the summer I finally have something to do. I raced down to Doc’s lab. The door creaked as I opened then I knew I was at the right place! “Hello” I zei softly, “anyone here”? “Ah here u are I haven’t seen u in awhile...
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Of course, unlucky as she was, Lara Binks, reporter for the "Sunnydale News, got caught in a rainstorm.
And, since getting stuck in a rainstorm wasn't bad enough, it also happened when she was stuck on a rather revolting public bus, which had lint and dead bugs littering the stained carpet and torn chairs.
If that wasn't bad enough, she and the odd-looking passengers were travelling across a dirt road in the middle of nowhere.
Worse yet, Lara had to get a story into the office in three days, and there was no longer any way this was possible, since the bus driver had announced they were stopping...
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chapter 3
the party

the klok, bell chimed and we all lead out of the hall, me and becca linked arms as we walked down and i thought to myself after the first day, i had some vrienden i was on the cheerleading team,and i had a party to go to tonight. i was acturally really exsited.
i didn't realise how much i was thinking and how much time passed, until i ralised that becca was now talking to tom liam and danny were play fighting and jake was looking down.
"whats up?" i asked quietly just incase.
"i was just thinking " i kept silent to give him time to tell me if he wanted to "i never believed in something...
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posted by serenacullen93
My world changed the dag my mom died as I’m in my fathers plane of our company plane that he owns. I remember the dag I was in the waiting room that the wreak had killed her . I remember stand on the cliff overlooking the ocean hoping that I would wake up to fide that it had all been a dream.
The metal had not cut though my mother flesh that her blood was not stain of the road. It was my fault I had been the one that had been at the party I should not have.     
    I pulled my headphones out of my ears as the plane touch down my father was standing...
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Hope u enjoy! :)
Annabeth Chase and the Olympians

One
We Find Two Idiots


Ok, let’s get to the point. My name is Annabeth Chase and I’m a half-blood…Or…..A demigod. I know, I know u think there’s no such thing. Most mortals do. Anyway, I’m a daughter of Athena-goddess of wisdom, war, and crafts.
I was sitting in the Big House talking with Chiron, Camp Half-Blood‘s activities director. “ I really think we should have a temple, Chiron. And I should design it. I mean the kids here are the children of the gods! And we don’t even have a monument for them!”
He gave me a tired...
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As Marley was at home, he was doing research about vampires but still nothing about vampires losing their short term memory loss ability. It is hard to get facts about vampires without running into a movie, T.V series of book. “What’s this?” zei Marley. “Vampires from the Hunters Eyes”. As Marley looked through the website a lot of the facts were true like the side effects, half-bloods and pure-bloods. Then he saw just what he was looking for, as he read he understood. “Half-bloods are hated throughout the line of pure-bloods but are used as slaves of grunts. Those who are bitten...
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posted by gossipgirlxoxo
(a/n:Rate and message me if u like it!)



Another dag at another life, I thought to myself as I walked home. I won’t go all emo about it and tell u my life sucks, because to u it would most likely be heaven. My family is rich, I am in the populair group every girl in my school is obsessed with my brother. Everything about me is picture perfect, my looks. I have wavy blonde hair to die for; my eyes were very light green almost yellow. I was slender I had always been. And to top, boven it all I have a jock boyfriend, I know how cliché. I let out a deep sigh once I looked at the clock, it was nearly...
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posted by khfan12
Chapter One
A discovery
Two years later
"Come on, u three, hurry up! We have to get this project done fast!" zei Lori. "Lori! Slow down! We aren't as fast as you!" zei Jesse. Lori Lopez, Jesse Martin, Nina Boyce, and straal, ray Martinez are four best freinds who are all 14, and have superpowers. "Finally! We're here!" zei Nina. For their summer project, they were going to explore the old factory on the top, boven of Higgins hill. Once they were inside, they found a room labled 'freeze room' they looked inside the window. "There are people in here!" zei Ray. Lori pushed the 'defrost' button. They could...
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added by shubz10
posted by Rae-Ash
You’re the reason why
I have to lie
Why I hurt so much
That my heart’s in a clutch

I’m slowly dying
‘Cause of your lying
u used to be my magic
But now you’re a dick

u made me long to be
Everything that wasn’t Lee
But look where that got me
Locked in without a key

If only u knew
That I plummeted deeper than blue
But then again
You’re just another two timing has been

u ran away
Thinking it’d be okay
But u were wrong
meer so than any love song

u made me want to sing
With u following
But look at how wrong I was
Believing u that it was just “buzz”

Now you’re the reason why
I cannot do anything but cry
I woke up. The director came in and yelled at me to get out of bed. I sighed. I knew, this was, another dag in showbiz. Showbiz was, at first, a very interesting and exciting activity to take on. It was much meer serious than I thought it would be, and a lot less fun. I was Syria, the main protagonist in the story. My real name is Stace, for those of u who don't know. I could be a trouble-maker in the play, but I couldn't be rambunctious and cause trouble for the crew.
People confused me most of the time. Especially adults. I could be trouble-making in the play, but I couldn't be rambunctious...
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Mica and Amanda walked out of Maya's house, followed door Maya herself. The air was crisp, not a wolk in the sky, and the sun beat down on their heads. dag birds sang their songs. Male and female Cardinals caring for their young. Their bikes were stationed at the end of the culdasack. They all jumped on their Seastar bikes and rode down to the kasteel where Hannah and Jett live. Amanda ran up to the door, followed door Mica and Maya. She knocked the door 3 times and Hannah and Jett's butler walked up to the door and answered it.

"Yes?" He asked looking firm and tall. "State your buisness Miss Amanda,...
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posted by Insight357
I stood at his grave. The people had finally cleared out. Now it was only me and him. I bit my lip, there would be no meer tears. He didn’t want that. I sat down, and went into the depths of my mind.

I still remember the last kiss we shared. We had been in the forest on the far side of town. He pinned me against a tree, and crashed his lips to mine. Our lips moved so perfectly together. My tongue flicked out and ran along his bottom lip. His mouth dropped open and I eagerly entered.

He had been the dominate one in the relationship, no vraag about it. But sometimes, he liked to see me take...
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Let me tell u the story of how I got here. It was the fourteenth of January, 2011 in school. Here they have alchemy classes when the students learn how to use specially shaped circular diagrams called transmutation circles to flow energy from their bodies through another object to transmute, of change, one object into another. In this class the only notable ones are the teacher, Mrs. Black, an elderly lady with bad memory and no experience with technology, the idiot, Justin, a light skinned black young man, the other idiot, Ben, a dark skinned black young man with black glasses, and me, Harrison,...
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posted by Pirate_4_life
Hey guys, hopefully my story is getting read, so I'd appreciate it if u left a little commentaar and tell me what u guys think of it.



Chapter two

“okay guys, step back from your paintings and as I go round the class I want u to explain your influences and how they inspired u to create your art pieces” explained the hippy like art teacher who insisted upon being called Gwen rather than Miss Miller, claiming it will ‘enhance the harmonious relationship’ she hopes to hold with her students. As each of her classmates took their turns telling how they were inspired to use a certain style...
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Darkened Bliss

By: Non other than the legendary . . . drumroll please . . . ME!




“If u had a choice and it was to be thought over, what choice would u go with? Invade the World’s tactics, of leave what is left of our world after the Apocalypse?
Not like our world is going anywhere . . .”



“Repress and retrain,
Steal the pressure and the pain,
Wash the blood off your hands,
This time, she won’t understand”
- Muse, Ruled door Secrecy








To,
My vrienden who cannot wait to see if they are quoted








Need to know Basis, Rules and Legislations of the Bliss
The Cult of Sorpse was an ancient community...
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