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Daisy

madeliefje, daisy was walking round the streets at night. She did it partially because she couldn’t sleep, and because she loved the stars. She thought the stars were amazing, and she still admired them like a child would, even though she was twenty-four and just stuck inside a fourteen-year-old’s body.
But stargazing wasn’t why she wandered down a dark alley to find a young girl getting abused door a man just like her father. The girl’s aura was a startling bright red as she struggled to get away from him, whereas the air around him was a dull, greedy brown as he enjoyed her fear.
Daisy’s delicate little face scrunched up in disgust as she caught a glimpse of the thoughts running through the man’s head, and she decided it was time to step in.
She called out to where he stood, about two meters from her, “Leave her alone.” Her voice was still as high pitched and girly as it had been ten years ago, but the power that had been in it since she’s died made the man’s head snap upwards in shock. When he saw how young and fragile madeliefje, daisy looked, he laughed loudly and dropped the girl he was abusing. Instead, he advanced on Daisy, pulling a lethal looking mes out from his jas pocket. Bad mistake.
She jumped on his back with such a speed that she doubted he even saw her move. Before he had any time to react, she had brought her arm down on his neck and knocked him out instantly.
Once he had fallen to the ground, madeliefje, daisy hopped off his back, quickly checked he was still alive, and kicked the mes out of his hands. She then started towards the girl that was slumped against the alley wall, staring at her with huge, terrified eyes. Her aura was shifting to a dark grey and madeliefje, daisy knew how to give her the energy she needed. She gently touched the girl’s arm, and she felt the warm glow of some of her energy leaving her through her fingertips, until she had gegeven all she could afford.
“Go home.” madeliefje, daisy zei softly. She then smiled sadly and walked away.
As she walked around the streets for the rest of the night, she remembered what had happened to her ten, long years ago. Normally she tried not to think about it, but the sight of the man in the alley had brought it all rushing back.
Daisy’s dad had been beating her ever since his wife had left him. His little daughter looked so much like her beloved mother; he couldn’t help but take his anger out on her. madeliefje, daisy had no idea what was going on so she had carried on letting him abuse her, until she dag he went too far.
It was Daisy’s fourteenth birthday when her dad came home, drunk, and battered her to death. When she’d woken up, she was inside a bin liner in the bin outside the back of their house. She had gone round to the window, where she could see her dad sat in the living room, watching TV like nothing was wrong. He had had a bier in his hand. Tears welled up in Daisy’s eyes as she remembered how she had waited ‘til her dad had fallen asleep, and then she had crept into her own house.
The first aura she ever saw was her dads, and she saw that it was a deep, dark grey. madeliefje, daisy remembered accidently tapping into her dads mind, and being immensely shocked when his dreams were full of remorse and regret. She had looked into his old, tired face and had forgiven him completely.
She had walked along to her bedroom. She had looked in her huge mirror framed door fairy lights, and had been taken aback door her reflection. Her pale, freckled, heart-shaped face was un-harmed and un-bruised. Her deep blue, wide eyes had no black rings around them. Her bright auburn hair was full of life and bounced in little ringlets around her shoulders. When she allowed herself a little grin, she had seen that she had all of her teeth, and her smile was friendly and innocent.
madeliefje, daisy snapped back to the present as she found a small, folded piece of paper lying on the brick uithangbord beside her, her name marked in bold on the front. She picked it up carefully, but when she read it her mouth stretched into a happy grin, and her eyes shined with joy.
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I would never have thought that I would ever be here again.
But it still had come to that anyway. I was in the first floor of my old school which I have attended four years geleden again. It was still the same. Only the doors were painted newly the corridor, the walls. I heard noises from the gymnasium. I circulated to the third floor to look whether the theater group listed there today. I passed door the keep fit room, where I still had had lessons four years geleden once and I had got back the feeling for a short moment to be I myself. How it still have been me four years geleden and HE was the only one...
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Writers use sentence fragments for emphasis and other stylistic reasons, but over using incomplete sentences confuses the reader. u also should avoid incomplete sentences in academic of professional writing. The three major components of a complete sentence are a subject, verb and complete idea

Check for Grammatical Completeness



The two basic components of a complete sentence are a subject and a verb. Although these two things don't always make a complete sentence, grammatical completeness is a good place to start to avoid incomplete sentences. The verb is the action that takes place, and...
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posted by Me_Iz_Here
Depressing, COMPLETELY FICTIONAL story I wrote.

“My mother ruined my life.” u hear girls say that all the time. It’s never true. Unless u ask me. My mother truly ruined my life. Not in the way u would expect a sixteen jaar old girl to say that. I genuinely meant it.
I remember sobbing that day. When we got back from the doctor, sobbing my eyes out. I hated her. I hated my mother with a passion.
I looked down at my newly flat stomach. I missed the bump there. The bump that I had indicating an unborn child. The child that I loved and vowed to care for. Until my fucking mother made...
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There’s this chick called Princess Alyssia Renesmee III (Alyss). She’s the princess (obviously :). At the start she has a best friend who she’s been vrienden with since they were babies called Charlotte. She ended up being her maidservant though coz her parents were killed. Alyss lives in the kasteel with her parents the king and queen (obviously) and boyfriend/ fiancé, James. He keeps knicken off on ‘business’. Alyss doesn’t actually suspect anything, she’s just sad that she never gets to see him. She’s also known him since they were really little, and she’s supposed to marry...
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posted by London_Victoria
 Now i Will Always Remember You<3
Now i Will Always Remember You<3
Hurtful word's can mean so much but nothing means meer than to hear your beautiful word's.
Because when u cry i will too because noone
knows how much i love u only me and my heart
do,And it tells me that i would die for you.
When u say i cant take it anymore it surprises me that u mean it because i think it's
beautiful that u would give your hart-, hart to me.
People might say i'm wrong for u but their words dont matter because me and u are different from everyone else.
I know sometimes im not always there for u but i will try my best to tell u the truth because nothing really matters...
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posted by PFEIFFER11
It was Bri. She backed away slightly looking at them. Her head snapped up as she heard the dogs.

"This way." She went down past a fallen tree. Matthew, Evie, Leven and Cameron looked at each other skeptically but followed. She led them to an old cabin. It had most of the walls in contact but was over grown with plants. To Evie she couldn't of seen it but since Bri had opened the door she did.Bri then opened a hatch from the floor and ushered them. She followed the and closed the hatch. It had a musty smell to it and it was completely dark. They sat in silence for a few moments but they could...
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posted by problematic124
*******Sorry for the wait. Please don't copy******
Chapter 2
Irene
Even though we both screamed loud enough to blow your eardrums the thunder was much meer louder than us.
"RUN!"
We don't know where it came from but we obeyed. We ran for our lives out of there and kept on running.We ran into the rest of the guys.
"What was that thing!"Blake yelled
Wilderness shook her head and sat down. I followed suit and then zei "will u at least tell us what happened"
"I left u in the classroom and I ended up in the cafeteria volgende thing I know something is breathing heavily on me and when I turn I scream at...
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posted by hannah_vampire
thxs for the commentaren plz keep commenting thxs so much :)

I had not been to school which I kinda liked but I had to get out I hated it here and when i know that he likes me it makes it meer hard just to even look at sefo it kills me.

I stayed away from him for aleast a week, I had to talk to him but alone and the only time i could talk to him was now, He was standing near the water and it was sunset how perfect is this!
He turned and saw we walk down towards him 'Hey Belle look before u say anything your wrong i know that' I stayed at him excuse me did he just say I was wrong 'Look here sefo...
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