hallo guys!Okay,my friend is writing a vampire series(please don't judge it yet)and she doesn't know whether of not to keep writing.I'm gonna post these stories on here and can u please commentaar on whether of not she should keep writing.BTW,it is supposed to be weird,strange,crazy,stupid,funny,ect.
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Hey,my name is Allie and I'm in high school.I'm 17 and have this weird secret...i'm a vampire.
I can't live a normal life because everytime i get close to a human,i start to smell their blood.I try to resist,but sometimes i can't
I really like this guy,Nick,but I think it would be weird if we were in the middle of a datum and I'm sitting there sucking his blood.Yeah,creepy.
Well,I go to Emmett High School in Aliceville.I live with my mom and stepdad.My mom and dad know my secret,but my stepdad doesn't.
I really wish I could just live normal.I want to have a boyfriend and normal friends.
My best friend is Rosalie.
So meer about Nick.He is handsome,has a face of an angel.Hi is SO hot.
I really like him but I don't think he feels the same way.
Well,I'd better get to school.I walked into my 1st period class,Mr.Cullen's.This is my class with Nick.I took my zitplaats, stoel volgende to him.
The klok, bell rang and I walked to Mrs.Lovato's class.
"I hope I pass this test,"I zei to Nick.
"Me too.Hey,do u want to go out sometime?"I heard him say.
"Are u talking to me?"I asked him.
"Yeah,what about Friday?"
"Umm"Oh,no.I can't.I could kill him."Sorry,I've got plans."
"Oh,O.K. I don't mind being rejected."
"Oh,no.That's not it.Rosalie and I are gonna have a G.N.O."I turned around and worked on the test.
The volgende day,me and rosalie saw twilight.I couldn't take my mind off of nick.
Maybe I could just try to go out with him.If it didn't work out,I wouldn't try again.
When I got home,I called him."So,how about that date?"
"Oh,how about tommorrow?I'll pick u up at seven.We'll eat at taco Bella's."He got off the phone and probably started working on his abs.He is so SPICY.
So the volgende night,we were eating at taco Bella's.He gave me a present.It was a dog.He was as white as Casper the Ghost,so I named him Jasper.he was so cute!
When I took Jasper home pagina he WENT on my bed.I don't use it anyways.Since I'm a vampire and all.
I called Nick the volgende day.He was crabby.Said something about getting food poisining."Worst sushi tacos ever,"He mumbled.
Later,Rosalie came over to my house to watch a movie.Then out of nowhere I SMELLED it.The blood.It smeled so good.
So it happened.I bit her.I had to taste it.She screamed but I couldn't stop.
Then,all my nightmares came true.Nick walked in"AAAAUUUUUUUUUGGGGGHHHHH!!!"He pulled me off.
Nick took Rosalie to the hospital.They zei she would be fine.I hope so.
He came back and said,"So that's why u didn't want to go out."
"Yes,please don't tell anyone.Though I'd rather tell EVERYONE my secret to have a chance with you."
"I won't tell.I told the doctor she hit her head on a hammer."
"They believed you?"
"Yep,and I like you,too."
I smiled."Come on.I need to toon u something."I took him to my room.
He looked around."Umm,Jasper took a dump on your bed."
"I know I don't sleep,anyway.
"Right.I'm still getting used to having a vampire for a girl friend."He said,ever so casually.
"Girl friend?!?!?"
"Oh,so u don't want to be my girl friend?That's fine.There's always Taylor.She's hot."
"Well,Zack is spicier than you"We both laughed.
We went to see a movie the volgende weekend.I thought Nick was going to kiss me but he didn't.Boo-Hoo.But he did kiss me when he dropped me off at my house...on the cheek,but it counts.I think we're gonna have a good relationship.
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Hey,my name is Allie and I'm in high school.I'm 17 and have this weird secret...i'm a vampire.
I can't live a normal life because everytime i get close to a human,i start to smell their blood.I try to resist,but sometimes i can't
I really like this guy,Nick,but I think it would be weird if we were in the middle of a datum and I'm sitting there sucking his blood.Yeah,creepy.
Well,I go to Emmett High School in Aliceville.I live with my mom and stepdad.My mom and dad know my secret,but my stepdad doesn't.
I really wish I could just live normal.I want to have a boyfriend and normal friends.
My best friend is Rosalie.
So meer about Nick.He is handsome,has a face of an angel.Hi is SO hot.
I really like him but I don't think he feels the same way.
Well,I'd better get to school.I walked into my 1st period class,Mr.Cullen's.This is my class with Nick.I took my zitplaats, stoel volgende to him.
The klok, bell rang and I walked to Mrs.Lovato's class.
"I hope I pass this test,"I zei to Nick.
"Me too.Hey,do u want to go out sometime?"I heard him say.
"Are u talking to me?"I asked him.
"Yeah,what about Friday?"
"Umm"Oh,no.I can't.I could kill him."Sorry,I've got plans."
"Oh,O.K. I don't mind being rejected."
"Oh,no.That's not it.Rosalie and I are gonna have a G.N.O."I turned around and worked on the test.
The volgende day,me and rosalie saw twilight.I couldn't take my mind off of nick.
Maybe I could just try to go out with him.If it didn't work out,I wouldn't try again.
When I got home,I called him."So,how about that date?"
"Oh,how about tommorrow?I'll pick u up at seven.We'll eat at taco Bella's."He got off the phone and probably started working on his abs.He is so SPICY.
So the volgende night,we were eating at taco Bella's.He gave me a present.It was a dog.He was as white as Casper the Ghost,so I named him Jasper.he was so cute!
When I took Jasper home pagina he WENT on my bed.I don't use it anyways.Since I'm a vampire and all.
I called Nick the volgende day.He was crabby.Said something about getting food poisining."Worst sushi tacos ever,"He mumbled.
Later,Rosalie came over to my house to watch a movie.Then out of nowhere I SMELLED it.The blood.It smeled so good.
So it happened.I bit her.I had to taste it.She screamed but I couldn't stop.
Then,all my nightmares came true.Nick walked in"AAAAUUUUUUUUUGGGGGHHHHH!!!"He pulled me off.
Nick took Rosalie to the hospital.They zei she would be fine.I hope so.
He came back and said,"So that's why u didn't want to go out."
"Yes,please don't tell anyone.Though I'd rather tell EVERYONE my secret to have a chance with you."
"I won't tell.I told the doctor she hit her head on a hammer."
"They believed you?"
"Yep,and I like you,too."
I smiled."Come on.I need to toon u something."I took him to my room.
He looked around."Umm,Jasper took a dump on your bed."
"I know I don't sleep,anyway.
"Right.I'm still getting used to having a vampire for a girl friend."He said,ever so casually.
"Girl friend?!?!?"
"Oh,so u don't want to be my girl friend?That's fine.There's always Taylor.She's hot."
"Well,Zack is spicier than you"We both laughed.
We went to see a movie the volgende weekend.I thought Nick was going to kiss me but he didn't.Boo-Hoo.But he did kiss me when he dropped me off at my house...on the cheek,but it counts.I think we're gonna have a good relationship.
tell me why i miss you
why did i have feelings for you?
i wish i could answer these vragen on my own,
but i cant.
honestly, they only thing that i want right now is you.
i dont know why i still miss you,
i dont understand why i really want another chance
what i really dont get is why u wont let me toon u that ive changed
back then i didnt know any better
after going on intercession, ive grown alot
in all honesty, yesterday really made me think about things
it opened my eyes, and changed the way i felt.
i didn't really know you,
i wanted to get away,
now, i realize i was wrong, and im sorry.
i hate that we dont talk anymore
i wish we still do.
i hope u read this,
and forgive me, so we can start over again.
Hi, my name is Hikaru.
What's yours :)
why did i have feelings for you?
i wish i could answer these vragen on my own,
but i cant.
honestly, they only thing that i want right now is you.
i dont know why i still miss you,
i dont understand why i really want another chance
what i really dont get is why u wont let me toon u that ive changed
back then i didnt know any better
after going on intercession, ive grown alot
in all honesty, yesterday really made me think about things
it opened my eyes, and changed the way i felt.
i didn't really know you,
i wanted to get away,
now, i realize i was wrong, and im sorry.
i hate that we dont talk anymore
i wish we still do.
i hope u read this,
and forgive me, so we can start over again.
Hi, my name is Hikaru.
What's yours :)
I intend to bring up a term that I am sure that u have all already herd of. Global warming. It is slowly, but surely killing us all! We need to unite as a team to stop global warming and save the world. Global warming is heating up the earth because of some people's bad choices, should we suffer because of that? NO! Global warming is killing inoccent animals and people, we could save them. Global warming is caused door pollution and over usage of electrisity. Start today. Turn off lights when u leave the room, don't leave anything on that doesn't need to be on. Start helping today. Save the world kom bij me. Be happy. Help me create a better place for everyone.
I NEED inspiration for this book. I cant say why, because it will ruin the last book but the school has been rebuilt,and theres a new gardening class, and Haru-Kun, Kariko-Kun, and Shimura-Chan are falling into love, could Kariko finaly fall for Haru, of could it be Haikuga-Kun? Haru could have his hart-, hart torn into pieces, of turned into gold. And Shimura, being the only lesbian in the school could have problems with love too. Karuga-Chan (a new character introduced as a Japenese girl found lying on the strand after a violent storm) changes all of that. Life when thrive this jaar in Dojenskei Koukou (Dojenskei High School). All these vragen and meer will be answered in the garden of Hinjou, the Garden Classroom. Be waiting, Both the first chapter of the first and seconde book are being worked on. (PLEASE give me good names for the third and fourht book, and the main name for the seconde series, such as Burning Passion Book One: The Flame. (oo, I might use that) Byes!)
The Man With No Eyes Collection (6): Dream
A crystallized life, on the bright TV screen,
But I’ve finally broken away from the dream,
And into the warm embrace of your esteem.
The stage that I left disappears from my mind,
Like suddenly being engulfed door sunshine,
I am truly alive, for the very first time,
All at once, let me sing, let me cry!
‘Til it bursts,
From my lungs, like a child,
Let me smile ‘til it hurts!
Let the blue of the morning
Strike my tearful eyes,
I still don’t know how,
I still don’t know why,
(I still fear this life may yet be a lie,)
But even if this world is the true dream, I want to play out this beautiful scene.
Here it is, the last in the Man With No Eyes Collection! I wanted to complete this on a pleasant note, give the guy some mercy.
A crystallized life, on the bright TV screen,
But I’ve finally broken away from the dream,
And into the warm embrace of your esteem.
The stage that I left disappears from my mind,
Like suddenly being engulfed door sunshine,
I am truly alive, for the very first time,
All at once, let me sing, let me cry!
‘Til it bursts,
From my lungs, like a child,
Let me smile ‘til it hurts!
Let the blue of the morning
Strike my tearful eyes,
I still don’t know how,
I still don’t know why,
(I still fear this life may yet be a lie,)
But even if this world is the true dream, I want to play out this beautiful scene.
Here it is, the last in the Man With No Eyes Collection! I wanted to complete this on a pleasant note, give the guy some mercy.
The noise,
buzzing and buzzing in my ears.
It's just not right,
u think u are so bright,
saying u buzz because u care.
But it's so unfair.
I don't need your concern,
the best way u can toon u care,
is to leave me alone.
Why can't u understand?
Have u tried to understand?
Do I really expect u to understand?
This is not a teenage problem,
the excuse u uses so often,
This is about my freedom.
u think I don't know anything,
u think I am naive and innocent.
But things are so different.
u think because u are older,
u know meer than we do,
That’s not true.
The world has changed,
We are not the fairy tales that sing,
we are the ones who could take our lives in a blink.
No, u are lying to yourself,
blocking the truth that would make u knelt
buzzing and buzzing in my ears.
It's just not right,
u think u are so bright,
saying u buzz because u care.
But it's so unfair.
I don't need your concern,
the best way u can toon u care,
is to leave me alone.
Why can't u understand?
Have u tried to understand?
Do I really expect u to understand?
This is not a teenage problem,
the excuse u uses so often,
This is about my freedom.
u think I don't know anything,
u think I am naive and innocent.
But things are so different.
u think because u are older,
u know meer than we do,
That’s not true.
The world has changed,
We are not the fairy tales that sing,
we are the ones who could take our lives in a blink.
No, u are lying to yourself,
blocking the truth that would make u knelt
