Writing Article: The Art of Seduction

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posted by EmoKidSteven

she's that dangerous kind
she only wears black with her long dark hair and her light brown eyes
she loves the sight of blood
her ultimate pleasure is seeing people suffer from pain
hearing them scream and beg makes her moan
she killes with one look of her eye
she makes men drop at her feet
heartless,thoughless
she's a demon witch
she looks like a human,but she's nothing like a human
u can tell she's different
u can tell that she's got something special about her
the way she plays with her tongue,touch her skin
the way she chooses one,there's must be something about him she can't figure out
and she has to know any way it takes her before she kills him
she'll take him an easy victim and push him on the bed
she'll roll over him and take off his shirt
then she'll whisper into his ears her famous seductive words:
"close your eyes and picture me,then you'll feel my lips touching yours and an overwhelming heat of me taking u straight to hell"
the pleasure she gives,no woman can deliver
she's a queen of all the damned
she never gets enough and she can't be tamed
she's a wild creature,you can't hold inside what she's got
the feelings she has will make your brain go insane
all the twisted pervert thoughts in such a pretty little thing
don't try to stay in her way,don't try to change her
she can't be changed,just like u can't change the sky
she's not looking for who can fix her
she's looking for whose exactly like her
but she's one of a kind

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My True Love Final Chapter. Nessies POV

posted by Twilightsauce

HEY! SORRY I HAVEN’T geplaatst ANYTHING IN SO LONG, IT’S BEEN LIKE A jaar SINCE MY LAST POST. I DON’T REALLY HAVE ANY EXCUSES BUT DON’T WORRY I’M BACK NOW! ANYWAY THIS WILL BE THE LAST CHAPTER IN THE MY TRUE LOVE SERIES- I’M SO SAD! ALTHOUGH I LOVE IT VERY MUCH AND HAVE REALLY ENJOYED WRITING IT, I FEEL THAT I HAVE EXHAUSTED NESSIE’S STORY NOW. BUT I WILL BE WRITING ANOTHER, TWILIGHT RELATED SERIES WHETHER IT WILL BE ABOUT NESSIE of NOT, I DON’T KNOW. ANYWAY THANKS FOR STICKING WITH ME FOR SO LONG AND I KNOW THIS HAS BEEN A VERY LONG MESSAGE BUT IF ANY OF u ARE GOOD AT ART OR...

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Are we right for eachother? Chapter 2

posted by jacob_lover5253

Nick looked around. "Hmmm. How 'bout we play the Wii. I bet I can bet you." I smiled. "You're on!" We played bowling and he beat me. We played golf and I beat him. My mom came in. "Karleigh, come here for a minute." "Coming." I yelled. "Nick, just keep playing. u can take my turns if u need to." "Mmhmm." I walked into the kitchen. "I'm taking u and your sisters to the movies. We are going to see Toys Story 3!" "Yay." I zei lamely. I walked away. "What was that all about?" Nick asked. "My mom wants to take me and the girls to go see Toys Story 3. I-" Nick interrupted. "I wanna go see...

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The Hunt for the Thirteenth, Chapter One

posted by booklover13

Chapter One
Ashelyn (Ash):

The first thought I had waking up in the morning was, today’s finally the dag I’ve been waiting for all my life.
Pushing away my thoughts, I rolled over on my bed, and wiped the sweat off my brow. Pushing aside the velvet curtain that covered the hole in the uithangbord that was my window, I squinted in the early morning light.
It was mid-September, and the heat was something awful. Even now, not even eight hours into the day, I could see the sun beating down on the ground. Dirt from the paths swirled in the air, making it...

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Poem: Lonely Girl

posted by emmett

Lonely Girl

So peaceful in sleep she lies
Brown hair spilled across her pillow
I can picture her beautiful eyes
Looking into her dreams…

She looks like she’s not listening
But really she’s deep in thought
Remembering forgotten memories
When she lived life as she ought

Stolen kisses in the night
Laughing with her friends
Little did she know back then
This is where it all would end

Her hart-, hart is filled with regret
Always looking back
She wishes she would just forget
And find happiness once meer

I don’t think she’ll ever forget you
But for now there’s joy on her face
She keeps reminding herself
It’s not a race, to be the first to find your place

Now as the sun goes down
She’ll say a prayer
Wishing perhaps for you
But really, life’s not that fair
There’s nothing this Lonely Girl can do

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Broken Dreams Chapter 34

posted by BellaSwan636

Ashleigh

We got to go the hospital. A nice lady wearing white stuff gave us lollipops, and we got to play teaparties. There was another girl there, and she was five. I wanna be five. But I'm turning four in, um, I think mommy zei a month? I dunno. But u have to be four before u can be five, I think. Why can't I just skip it?

Anyways, now there is a big girl living in the guest room. She says her name is Kayla. She has shiny goldish hair. Like Jamie's mom, but with brownish stripes in it. It's long. Like if she sits down, she almost sits on it. My hair is only halfway as long.

My mommy gets...

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My unfinsished story (no titel yet) chapter 2

posted by coolcatsRus123

Chapter two: Secret Lab
The doors of the elevator swung open. The three walked in slowly curious on what was in that room.”This place is really dusty” Kylie said. She got her special clean handkerchief and dusted off an area in the dirty room. Under the clump of dirt she dusted off, was a big bright blue button. The button zei “Lab generator”. “What’s that?” asked Alia. “Well, only one way to find out” Daniel said. He pushed the button and the room began shaking. “Whats-up-with-you-and-pushing-buttons” asked kylie as she began shaking with the room.
The room stopped shaking....

Ugh! Stupid Rockstar!

posted by karah1999

Willow May Rains. 15 Yrs Old!:)

Tik Tok on the clock,but the party don't stop!!Tik Tok!"

I covered my ears so I wouldn't hear the rest of that horrible song.People must be tone deaf to actually like it.

I watch as my sister went to turn off her alarm clock.That's when I remembered. Today we were going to see that horrible band in concert because my bestfriend got tickets.My sister likes them too.The band name is Snakebite.I think they are a horrible band that are wanna be screamo/rock popstars.They suck ass.

Let me introduce myself.

I'm Willow May Rains,your regular fifteen jaar old girl.I love screamo and rock bands.Real screamo/rock...

Diferent and Alone (a poem)

posted by Rae-Ash

Do u know what it's like
To be in this world alone?
To be so different
That no one understands?

As we wish upon the stars
For the very first time
We stand there
Like time is ours
In a world
That's speeding by

Do u know what it's like
To be in this world alone?
To be so different
That no one understands?

So here we stand
In the wake of our dreams
Hoping and wishing
For a day
That they can come true
Hoping for a world
Where I can fit

Do u know what it's like
To be in this world alone?
To be so different
That no one understands?

Now I sit here all alone
In a world where I just don't fit
I sit here alone
Never knowing...

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True Of The Unforgotten Past: Chapter 4 kidnap For The Deal

posted by MadagascarGirl

After Skipper and Katherine told the story to Kowalski and Rico, they went to theirs beds. But when penguins went inside to their HQ, they noticed Private wasn't in his bunk. The TV was turned on.
"Hello peng-you-ins" zei a familiar voice. Penguins lookes at the TV.
"Blowhole!" zei Skipper in angry.
"I kidnaped someone, do u who?" asked Blowhole and he laughed evilly.
"Private..."said Skipper "If u hurt him I'll kill u Blowhole!"
"Oh, I'm scared" zei Blowhole and laughed again "If u want save him, u must come here, alone, without your team"
"I'll came"
"But Skipper..." zei Kowalski.
"You...

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Sneak Peak of My Book/Novel "Remembering You"--Chapter 2

posted by PonygirlCurtis7

Chapter 2
Three Months Earlier

There was not much bright where I was. Just dull, cheap lamp-light. Ya know? The cheap light that bulbs give off. Not until I stepped out into the golden hue of this evening’s sunset could I get a good picture with my eyes. I had been in a bar with my vrienden or, as it’s usually called, my gang. It wasn’t a real rough bar, the one I had been in. there were a couple fights every so often, but not much. Gavin, the owner, was good about that. He didn’t want the fuzz tonen up all the time, so when he wanted a fight to stop, it stopped. He could persuade almost...

American and British English

posted by ZekiYuro

If you've learnt British English and you're travelling in the States,or if you've learnt American English and you're travelling in Britain,you'll notice some differences.An obvious difference is the accent,but most travellers find that they don't have too many problems with this.There are some grammatical differences,but they shoudn't make it difficult to understand people,or to communicate.That leaves differences in vocabulary,which can cause misunderstandings.Sometimes the difference is only the spelling,for example,in British English 'center','colour',and 'travelled',and in American English 'centre','color',and 'traveled'.But sometimes the word is completely different in British and American English,and it's good idea to be prepared.

How to Avoid Common Grammatical Errors

posted by IloveMyLord

using correct grammar will make a difference between appearing professional and educated of uneducated and ignorant. Many people make common grammatical errors when they write and when they speak. Use these steps to avoid the most common errors and sound intelligent and well informed

Tips:

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Make sure that verb tenses match. If the subject is present tense, then the verb must be as well. The same principle applies to past tense subjects and verbs.

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Think about whether the subject is single of plural. Words like don't, aren't, were, are and were belong with plural subjects. For example, "It don't...

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A Blood's Tale: Part 2

posted by DarkGirl23

The dag my sister died, was the dag I, myself, died as well.

She may not have knew it, but she was my hero.
I guess, however, all big sisters were kind of like that.

I remember seeing it, the body, the blood, the note she left in her own form of representation.
It was written, all across the wall, the note she left behind was in her own blood.

Hatred.
What a word, so different from hated; just a different form.
Which one am I? I should be described as both.
I hate you, and I know u hate me too. Everyone does.
Here are my final words to you:
Pain is welcoming
Crawling down my arm so slow
Blood that leaks...

Vanished- my progressing novel.

posted by ashleigh-jadee

It was a winter’s morning when Nicola realised something strange. It was a peculiar morning, yet she didn’t understand why.
    Nicola called her mum from her bedroom, but she got no reply. She tried a seconde time, and even third time lucky. Yet Nicola still got no reply.
    Finally, after a few minuten of what was an eerie silence, she jumped out of her bed and ran across to her mum’s bedroom. She flung the door open with such force that it made a loud bang, scaring herself at first for sure.
    Nicola took a glance at the bed....

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My Crazy Bounty Hunter Life Ch. 2

posted by tigerseye43

Once I was finally out of the hospital I was afraid to sleep in my own apartment. Kyle asked me if I would like to sleep at his house but then I remembered that last time spent the night at kyle's house. It involved no clothes and a lotnof dirty things I don't want to mention. But I zei yes anyways, I had nowhere to sleep.
When we got to kyle's house I remembered I had not bottom any clothes. So for pajamas I wore one of kyle's t-shirts and my unferware. For avondeten, diner we ordered pizza, delicious. After avondeten, diner I brushed my teeth and combed my hair.
I didn't knowtice when Kyle came in the bathroom....

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Boy of Soul chapter 1 part 3

posted by FURRY

Simba sat me down on the floor as he pulled a chew toy out of his jas pocket and started chewing it *squeak squeak squeak* I opened my eye's, I was hopeing it was all a dream "Mother...." I zei as I sat up slightly, as I looked around I knew I wasn't it wasn't a dream, I looked over at Simba "....Simba" I zei as I started cring, I grabed Simba and held him tightly, as my tears rolled down my face Simba put his arm's around "Max...." Simba replied crying a little as well, as we sat there crying over what had happen my chest started to glow again but this time it wasn't purple it was blue...

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Unforgivable Ch. 10

posted by para-scence

I didn't know which way to run. One foot went this way, the other went that way. My knees faltered and locked. I fell to the ground in a mess of tears. I wanted to keep myself open, but instead I cowered in fear. I whimpered when two strong hands grabbed the tops of my arms and lifted me up to my feet. My cries came out in staggered breaths; I hyperventilated. The strong arms pulled me into a hug.

"Oh my fucking...." the voice said, but didn't finish. "Kodi, I swear if I wasn't so happy to see you, I'd kill u right now." I peered up through my blinding tears at him. Even though I could barely...

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Unforgivable Ch. 3

posted by para-scence

It was when they handed me the motel room key that I realized I was way in over my head. The place was called Big Dan's Motel. It didn't sound great, but it was only thirty dollars a night. I went to the room they had for me, and contrary to the Motel's name, the room was not. The kitchen, living room, and bedroom were crammed into one room. Maybe this is usual for a motel, but I've never been to one. Ever. The carpet was a mossy green, and the tiles in the keuken-, keuken were white squares with four black diamonds surrounding the center. The bathroom was a decent size, but it reeked. Mold was growing...

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Love is Wild: Chapter 5

posted by sawfan13

I began teaching him a little meer English. He knows meer words than I expected him to know, but I taught him a little more. He picks up very quickly! Howl is pretty smart for a person that has been in the wild parts of the jungle since infancy (my hypothesis, but he could have been here since a toddler of a wee bit older) and has had no human contact what so ever (another guess from how he reacted when he first saw me)and can pick up just like that! He's also very sweet. So much sweeter than my stupid fiance' Adam. Ugh, what a dope he is! Howl isn't one. He's a sweet gentle animal loving guy...

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Dangerous Lve Chapter Four.

posted by M169

One date...One datum will not hurt me Brian thought muttering to himself inside of his dimly lit room. His room was darkened door picures of obscure creatures, that he hand drew, he is an outstanding aritist, all of his work is so detailed, if he drew a indow, with scenery behind it, you'd actually think it was one, u might make a fool out of yourself door tring to open it of clean it....but thats how good he was. He can't get her off his mind. Luna and Brian were about to go on there first (planned) date. Suprising, Brian, being a Demon of the Dark,was nervous. Nervous? How can I be NERVOUS?...