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posted by starwarsfangirl
This is another piece of a story I've been writing...
If you've read the other part, this has absolutely nothing to do with Drew. NOTHING.
This takes place in a mythical and magical country known as Dragomria.
Please review!

Light hadn’t even graced the towers of the palace in the capitol city of Dragomria as the scribe rushed through the grand corridors. He burst into the troon room.
“Your Majesties! Prince Berthold has chosen a bride!” He said, gasping for air. Queen Callidora stood, her bright red hair cascading down to her waist, her brilliant green eyes cutting like a mes through the young scribe. She towered over the small man, her beauty radiating through the dark, torch-lit room.
“Who has our son chosen?” She asked, cool, strong voice ringing off walls of cold stone. The man pulled out a scroll and read off the name of the princess-to-be, stuttering as he did.
“Ulrica Aayana. She is the eldest daughter of Taisiya and Reynard Aayana, elder sister of Eqberta, Axella, and Quintrell.” The scribe informed the queen. “Eqberta and Quintrell are both in their seconde level Taming Sessions. Axella is just being introduced to Dragon Anatomy.”
“Tell us meer of this Ulrica. What does she look like?” king Mordecai, his brown bangs falling into his face, making him look quite ridiculous. He sat in his golden troon watching the scribe closely with his dark brown eyes. Suddenly, their thoughts were interrupted door a young man bursting through the double-doors. His broad, charismatic smile and light brown eyes, added to his gorgeous shiny blond hair, catching all three of their eyes. His brightly colored tunic stood out among the rag-like-in-comparison clothing the scribe wore and the soft tones of purple the king and queen wore.
“Mother, father, I am in love. Young Aayana has stolen my heart! We are getting married at dusk tonight. That is, if u bless our wedding.” He said, looking at his father questioningly. Mordecai sighed.
“Very well, if it is what u wish.” Prince Berthold smiled, turned on his heel, and exited the troon room. He walked calmly through the corridors of his palace. At last, this whole place would be his. All his and his new wife’s. He had met Ulrica one dag as he had been escorted through the village to be ‘introduced’ to the people; though he never met one.
Except Ulrica. She had struck him, as soon as he laid eyes on her. She had long, flowing blonde hair and beautiful blue eyes. She had been buying food for her family in the market that day. He stopped her, and asked her for her name, and she responded clearly, not fazed door the idea of talking to THE prince. She looked him straight in the eye as if she was talking to any ordinary person, and he liked that about her. She treated him as an equal. He sighed as he reached the stables.
Though that had only been a week ago, he felt as if he’d known her his whole life. An indescribable feeling arose in his chest. Nothing could ruin this happy day. He rode into town, feeling as if he were on top, boven of the world. Soon he came to the Aayana family home. Outside, little Axella played with their dog; a scruffy, white little dog. He smiled at the little black haired girl. She looked up as his horse made a neighing sound. Her midnight blue eyes twinkled in the light.
“Hello, Axella.” He said, opening the gate. She got up and ran towards the door as he walked up the pathway. “Can u tell your sister to come out here? I have something very important to tell her.” He asked the young girl. She nodded and smiled her little girl smile, and ran inside the small hut. It was a mud hut, with a gras roof and a wooden door. They had covered the light brown mud on the outside with black paint to attract heat into their home.
Within a couple minutes, the smiling Ulrica hopped, barefoot, into the front yard. She was wearing a light roze colored sundress, really attracting his attention to her beautiful blonde hair and icy blue eyes.
“What is it, Berthold?” She asked, placing a hand on his forearm. She smiled up at him, blue eyes reflecting the sunshine. He dropped to one knee in front of her. Her eyes widened as she realized what he was doing. He pulled out a goud ring with a lovely diamond in it, and asked her.
“Ulrica, I know I just barely met u last week, but I love you. Will u marry me, at dusk today?” She looked dazed.
“Oh, Berthold, I-I; yes! Yes I will!” She bent down and hugged him, tipping off his balance and sending him backwards onto the grass.
door that evening, she had been fitted to a beautiful silk dress; the wedding was planned, along with a coronation for Berthold. He was going to be coroneted as soon as he was married. He would then be the king, and Ulrica his queen.

Fifteen years later:
“This last week, one of our greatest leaders has been murdered. Murdered door the despicable Eastlunddars. We gather here today to say good bye to King Berthold of Dragomria. And now, several words from our Queen, Her Higness, Ulrica.” The priest shouted to the large, sorrowful crowd below the balcony on which he stood, in the center of the royal courtyard. King Berthold had apparently been ambushed door several Eastlunddar criminals. As the Queen stood and spoke of her husband’s great life, a certain figure down in the crowd began to weave through the people, heading for the gates in order to leave. Unfortunately, one of the Queen’s advisors spotted her, and pointed her out to the Queen herself.
Ulrica’s face hardened, but she let the person go, though she felt very tempted to have her guard stop her. The figure looked back, and for a second, the two made eye contact, dark blue met light. And then the figure turned, and rushed from the palace.
posted by BiteMeCullen107
“Somebody turn the lights on, Somebody tell me what’s wrong I’d be lying if I told u losing u was something I could handle…” I had been driving for about two and a half hours the highways were clear I had the windows all the way done singing along with my I-pod.
In a matter of seconden I could see cars slowing down on the highway in Kansas and as the cars started to stop I could see a long line of cars in front of me. I can’t believe this I was finally going to make it to the volgende state before the traffic started happening.
“Whoa” I jumped at the vibrating in my right pants...
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posted by gossip-girl999
A/N: This was just a task I had for homework write a short story less than 2 pages of your choice so I thought I'd post it here see what everyone thought. Thanks for reading. xoxo

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We're not in Kansas anymore

        It's any teenagers dream to up sticks from a dreary country town and verplaats into the hustle and bustle of the city but for Alyssa that was the dream she wished to come true but it just made her appreciate the saying be careful what u wish for even more.
        The rain was falling down on the City....
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I thought it would be a good idea to try and write goodbye
but i was stuck when I realized there were too many lovely things to write about.
and not enough words invented yet to say them aloud.

and i know there are a number of things wrong with this,
but i really don't want to fix it right now.
i don't feel like doing anything but sitting upside down

but trust me, when it comes down
to having the choice of being right..
of protecting you, I'll be wrong every single time.
Because it's just who I am...
Chapter Two

When Jamie got to the kastanje oak door of Michael’s den, she put her fist on the surface and knocked on it while asking her husband, “Michael, are u there?” There was a minuut of silence that came after that and after waiting for a response, still in the den, Michael asked the person who was asking him that vraag about him being there, “Yeah, I’m in here. Who’s it?”

Facing the door, Jamie zei back to him, “It’s me, Jamie.” After telling him that, Jamie heard some groaning behind the door and right away, she knew that Michael had might be annoyed at her because...
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Keep in mind I have no idea what chapter this will be but I got this idea yesterday so I wrote it last night. Actually I had two ideas of how my two main characters would kiss. I'll write and put up a different version of their first kiss some time soon. I actually had tears in my eyes when I wrote this

I storm outside of the house and plop myself down on the sofa outside. I feel my eyes tear. It's so unfair. My tears overflow my eyes.
"Hey Starr what's wrong?" A voice asks behind me. I look behind me and see Elliot
"Oh hallo Elliot. Nothing is wrong," I say wiping my eyes
Elliot sits down next...
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posted by jasperwhlover
Chapter 2

The priest was reciting a prayer, stuttering heavily, Serenity realized that he was scared and replied, “Fear not for I am Serenity the angel of peace, I know not why my wings resemble the midnight blue that dawns when the sun goes to rest, I know not my purpose on this earth for my father the Lord, God did not verse me of this strange happening”. The priest believed Serenity and taught Serenity human activities, the priest, father Bartholomew, raised Serenity as his own. Now, father Bartholomew, being an exorcist sent many demons and evil artifices of the devil back to hell,...
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posted by jasperwhlover
Wishful Thinking

Introduction: I thought it was a sweet beginning, a chance to start anew, no looking back, nor turning. What I’ve found here, has me in its grasp, it’s captured me in its spell. But like every sweet beginning we never know how the story ends.


Hi, I’m Alicia Alice Davidson, but u can call me Alice. I’m from a family of five, and I go to the best High School in the country, I’m confident and I follow my instincts I’m a fighter mentally and physically. It started off as the same boring, disappointing dag I was used to, at my school, it’s an all girl school u see....
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posted by jasperwhlover
Wishful Thinking

Introduction: I thought it was a sweet beginning, a chance to start anew, no looking back, nor turning. What I’ve found here, has me in its grasp, it’s captured me in its spell. But like every sweet beginning we never know how the story ends.


Hi, I’m Alicia Alice Davidson, but u can call me Alice. I’m from a family of five, and I go to the best High School in the country, I’m confident and I follow my instincts I’m a fighter mentally and physically. It started off as the same boring, disappointing dag I was used to, at my school, it’s an all girl school u see....
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Chapter One

Expecting Michael to volgende to her, Jamie moved around to her husband’s side of the bed and wanting to see him sleeping volgende to her the first thing she sees in the morning, Jamie opened up her eyes and founded no one there.

Jamie sighed when she saw that, knowing where her husband of seven years was sleeping right now. Since he returned from Iraq a few months ago, Michael Thomas had become a different man. A man who never saw the bright side of things and never wanted to look at people in the eyes.

For the past four months, their three children, Mackenzie, Isabella, and Jake had been...
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posted by TDIlover226
~one of them, how could I be one of them! I'm completly human, they're, they're just ugly freaks!.

Eddie just sat there in the dark room, alone. He wasn't sure if he should try to escape, of stay to see exsactly what "one of them" ment. "I can't stay here, with those freaks, they'll probably kill me, they're ugly mutated freaks and I'm getting out of here!" zei Eddie. "Ugly freaks huh" zei Annie stepping out of the darkness of the room, "yeah, wwe get that alot from people like you". "Well, mabey if u would just tell people what's going on, mabey-". "You don't get it, do you, u are one...
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Okay it's now of never Rachel. u need money for food. Yeah and uh clothes. u are doing it to survive not because u are greedy
I sigh. I never liked stealing jewels but what are u gonna do on your own? I turn invisible and walk through the door of the store. It's very dark in here. Huh they must be closed of something.
I look around the room. The glasses cases are begging to be smashed open.
I walk up to one of them and pound my fist into it. The glass breaks and a ringing fills my ears. The stupid alarm does bull.
A red gas fills the room. Crap Gas! I suck in my last breath and grab...
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posted by gossipgirlxoxo
I glared at the blond with evil eyes. She was pretty, but evil. My family loved her, laughing at every joke she made. They hung off her every word even Liz, the only one that stood door me was Callum and he just doesn’t talk much so he wasn’t really doing it for me. He only smiled at one of her jokes. Ethan was holding her hand and laughing at one stage he even kissed her on the cheek! What the hell? Was he going out with her when he kissed me? When he yelled at me before? “So Sadie, how do u like Palm Springs?” The blond one asked me. I smiled. “It’s just fine” I said. She nodded....
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posted by TDIlover226
It was Halloween eve and we had nothing to do.
My sister, Lee was on the computer searching for haunted places, it was a saturday night and her and her buddies we're bored and needed something to do, we were at our grandma's and she lived around alot of creepy places. She searched this cemetary that had alot of spiritual sightings. She of corse no longer believed in all that crap, she was 19. Me and my friend Vanita dared her to go there. "well" she zei "you have ta go with me too!". Me and Vanita agreed, Vanita had been to alot of haunted places before, and he thought that he wasn't gonna...
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posted by summerfrog
OK so i was walking down the street...all alone...in the rain...not happy but not sad ether...when suddenly I ran into a magnolia tree!I don't know how I didn't see it...or why it was in the middle of the road-but it was there and when I looked at it I saw it was the biggest magnolia I had ever seen;it was absolutely GINORMOUS!it to be at least as tall as a skyscraper. I couldn't even see the top.Now what is the easiest way to get past a tree? Go around it of course! but when i looked there was a wall!Two walls!on ether side of the boom that prevented me from passing(again,how didn't I see this before?)It was not an ordinary
uithangbord ether,and must have taken allot of work to build because it was as tall,or taller than the tree!so I was stuck with a magnolia and two walls
what was I to do?turn back?I had come too far!so knowing this,what do u think I did?What would u have done?
Dear Diary,
Yeah It's me again. I made one mistake and it's eating me inside.
Before u ask me "Lily did u at least try to escape?" I'm going to tell u that I did. On the first day. It's like he knew I would. I had just gotten shot door that straal, ray and I was feeling Sulky and then Jerald zei something that really ticked me off.
"So yeah your room is down the hall from where we are now"
I glared at him His stupid red hair and eyes were just pulsing out at me like I'm his prize
"You planned this didn't you? How? Well I'll never know but just know this I hate you. u killed the only living family...
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posted by XhuddyobsessedX
I look at the old photographs. It kills me to see him smile. I've only heard about him. I hear he would have loved me. I hear he was nice. I hear that he was a good dad. I hear he was an okay husband. I hear that he would have made a good grandfather. It's not fair. It kills me when my dad talks about him. My dad zei one of his last words to him were "Dont miss me when I'm gone." Those words run through my head. dag and night and keep me up thinking of him. Why did he have to go? I pray he's okay and fine in heaven. I pretend he's still here. If only he were ... I miss him....

I guess he's just....
Hard to Let Go


Dedicated to my grandfather I miss u ... even if I never met u =,[


volgende journal entry coming up in few please
R&R
Thanks!!
posted by blackpanther666
Part One: Tales of Kern Age 04 Yer 00-155

Chapter One: A rather expected journey to Counquan

A young magician stomped down the shadowy path, accentuated greatly door the bright, luminescent full moon. The young man wore a vicious look on his light face; his bushy eyebrows swallowing much of the malice contained in his dark, blue-flecked eyes.
The young man’s name was Skye. He was travelling the stone-tiled road of Koren, the capital city of Argate, empire of the Blessed Ones.
Skye had been sent from the city, since the elder magicians had decided that he was too much trouble to train. Skye had...
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posted by Xennoxxx
(trigger warning: talks about mental health and sh ideation)

Dear Society,
This is a plea
From a broken girl
In this damaged world
A girl who never had the chance
To be herself in fear of being rejected
Cast aside for not following the public norms
This is a plea
For God's sake society,
A girl's body is not a toy
A piece of material to be passed around and thrown to the ground
To be torn and beaten
Bruised black and blue- bleeding through
Her very being

A person's dreams
Are not shared to be downgraded for being
Too childish, unachievable, and unrealistic
And yet, the sky is the limit?
For God's sake society,...
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posted by AnxiousSoul
Asperger's Syndrome is a mild form of autism with a bit of learning disability. It is the same as social anxiety. People with this kind have difficulty learning academics, socializing with other people, and forming friendships.

What does it feel like to have this? You'll be sensitive to loud sounds, lack of interest in to many things, difficulty understanding sarcasm and jokes, you'll feel lonely and alone, u see the world differently to other people, and the most overwhelming is u feel different in the world. It is also a lifelong condition and can't be cured. But help is a guide of their life. u will realize that those people have meer intelligence and will grow up successfully in their life. And also they have a great hart-, hart of understanding on people's problems. They will also be kind and patient from what we are.

See the outside, and know deep the inside. There's no nothing than a reason behind.

It's better to be UNIQUE!
First off,harry potter has actual struggle and creative and developed villains while twilight centers around a girl who is completely dependent on a 2 hot guys who go to war for her and constantly abuse her.Second,harry potter has compelling storyline and fun unique characters while twilight is ALL STEREOTYPES, with the new hot shallow girl who runs a love driehoek and the the two guys and their vrienden who fight over her.And lastly, for all u people who say that edward is hotter than harry, cedric is hotter than edward.look at all characters,not just the main ones.peace y'all