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By: moolah
Chapter Two: Party
    Haley sat at Anne’s feet and had Joey in her lap. Suddenly Haley’s iphone vibrated in her pocket. She picked it up and opened the text from Sean.
Sean- Ware r u? I’m @ home. Come home pagina quick!
Haley sighed and texted him back.
Haley- I’m @ Anne’s house. Why what’s rong?
Haley sighed and got up off the ground. “Sorry. I have to go, Anne.” She zei and hugged the kids and left. When she got home pagina the house was full of chaos. “Oh my god, Sean! It’s a mess!!!” Haley screamed over the kids. “I know, honey.” He zei and kissed her. “I thought we’d do something tonight.” Haley smiled and picked up Andy. “Hi, baby girl-how are you?” Andy smiled and hugged her mommy’s neck.
    Hannah had Cole on her hip as she made her way over to Jessica and Jennifer who were playing Chess as best as they could (which meant they were throwing the pieces around). Jessica looked scared whenever she saw her mom’s sorta angry look. Cole was crying into his mother’s chest. “Jessica Lee Noel, Jennifer Kato Noel…did u say something to your brother?” Jessica gulped and looked at Jennifer for some assistance. Jen looked like she was going to cry. “Jessica. Jennifer? Anyone want to get spanked?” Jessica screamed at the top, boven of her lungs. “STOP IT, Jessica! Do not say anything like that ever again!” Hannah screamed. “I sorry mommy!!!” Jessica yelled and started crying. Hannah smiled to Cole and put the two kids on timeout for 20 minutes.
    “Jordon talk to me!” Anne begged again. “WHY?!?” Jordon finally exploded the silence. “You just bought that TV without permission! I got laid off, Anne!” Anne whimpered and curled up in a ball on the floor. “I’m sorry.” He heard. He knelt down to his wife, “Look-next time u want to buy luxuries, and we have run the numbers.” Anne nodded and hugged the 22 jaar old. Then they kissed for like an uur until Joey started to wail. It was a piercing sound-Anne got up and held the baby in her arms. She put him to sleep and went back to her room where Jordon was just laying…looking so…hot.
    Tucker looked into the baby’s eyes as he cried. Lindsay had died during labor. Ashlynn came out, “I’m so sorry, Mr. Shuman.” Ashlynn zei and sat down volgende to Tucker. “I can’t believe she died.” Ashlynn nodded and took the bloody gloves off. “Mr. Shuman-would u like to come home pagina with me tonight for dinner?” Tucker nodded, “Thank you, yes, I would. And call me Tucker.” Ashlynn smiled and helped Tucker out of the roze cushy chair with the baby. “Are u ready to meet my husband and my kids?” Ash asked. Tucker laughed and nodded, “Oh, yeah and my kids friend Jasmine?” Tucker continued his laughing frenzy until the little booger, Thomas started to wail. “Oops.” Tucker said. Ashlynn sighed and took the baby boy and rocked him. He fell asleep and Ashlynn silently handed a nurse named ‘Barb’ the baby. “Thanks, Barb!” she yelled as she ran out to her Ford truck.
    Luke was wrangling two squirming girls in his grip when Ian started to scream at the top, boven of his lungs. Luke sighed and shut his eyes tight, “Girls-stay out of trouble!” he zei and ran as best as a man can with 2 girls hanging onto his skinny jean pants. Ian was in his bouncy scooter bouncing away. “Ian, baby boy, what’s wrong?” Luke asked as he carefully picked up the baby. But then both Kat and jasmijn lurched forward. Luke flung vooruit, voorwaarts in like slow-mo and got himself turned around so when they fell Ian was lying on Luke’s chest. Ian started to laugh which surprised Luke because he’d just had a major fall. jasmijn started to laugh which caused Kat to laugh. Luke put Ian on the floor and sat up. Now, he had a major headache. He looked around. The divan, bank which was usually amazing, leather-Luke’s favorite. And the coffee tables were covered in mysterious red gook. Suddenly his vrienden Sean and Haley barged in. “HI!” Haley zei and handed Luke Adrian. “Here’s Uncle Luke!” Haley zei and ran into the keuken-, keuken to find some of his kids. “Hey, man!” Sean zei putting down Andy, Katlynn, and Eli. Eli ran over to Ian. Ian was clapping his hands because he saw Eli. Luke said, “Yo! What’s up?” “Nothing much, Hal’s been begging for a dag off.” Luke laughed and looked over at Haley. He laughed; she was playing with the girls. “So, what are u guys doing here? Shouldn’t u be at a fancy mansion?” Sean rolled his eyes, “Nope-your wife invited us!”
    Hannah got up off her booty and grabbed her cell phone.
Four missed calls
Twelve missed texts
Hannah laughed 2 texts from Anne,
Anne- Watch out! Haley’s got something up her sleeve.
Anne- U going 2 Ash’s BBQ?
4 texts from Kaylee:
Kaylee- Ashlynn’s inviting me 2 her BBQ.
Kaylee- Curtis is crying.
Kaylee- GR8, Mona is crying now 2.
Kaylee- Spoke 2 soon-now Jayson is crying 2.
2 texts from Haley:
Haley- I’m @ Luke’s house WOO! And I have my 500 kids w/ me.
Haley- HELP! I’M FRIGGIN’ HUNGRY!!
3 texts from Luke:
Luke- U coming here? I’m cooking.
Luke- HANNAH!!!
Luke- COME ON!
1 text from Jacob:
Jacob- I’m picking u up in 5. B ready.
HONK, HONK! It was Jacob. He was in the pickup truck. Hannah laughed and grabbed Cole. She put him on her hip then drug the girls out. She put Cole in his zitplaats, stoel and put Jess in first. She turned around to grab Jennifer. But she wasn’t their. It was as if she had run away. “Jessica, where is your sister?” Jessica giggled in her zitplaats, stoel and shrugged. “JACOB!” Hannah screamed. “Yeah, babe?” he asked. “Where’s Jennifer?” Hannah screamed. Jacob suddenly got alarmed he dropped his cell phone and darted over to her. “You were supposed to be watching her!” he yelled. Hannah ran over to the schommel, swing set out back. Jen wasn’t there. She ran over to the baby pool. She wasn’t wading in it either. Jacob went over to the picnic tafel, tabel where the checkers board was written in. She was sitting their crying. “HANNAH!! Here she is!!” he yelled. Hannah was their in 10 seconden flat. “OH! JEN!” Hannah yelled as she picked up the toddler. “Mommy, mad at me.” Jennifer told her father. “What?” “Mommy, mad at me.” Jennifer repeated.
    Maybe Kaylee hadn’t married anyone. So what?!? It wasn’t her fault it was that girl, Ally’s. But soon after that horrid break-up party Kaylee found herself pregnant. And not only with a baby-with…triplets! She was so scared; she ran away and lived with her grandma in Tennessee. She was 9 months pregnant and gave birth to two stunning baby boys (Curtis and Jayson) and a beautiful baby girl (Mona). Soon, Kaylee went to see her friends. door then they were all nineteen. First she went to see Haley (who was pregnant at the time…with…OMG, Sean!) Haley oohed and aahed over Curtis, Mona, and Jayson. Sean really didn’t care-he was too busy rounding up Haley’s money and the baby toys. It was there first child so they were pretty excited. And then 2 months after Haley gave birth to Elliot Troy Doyle, Sean proposed! But back to Kaylee, she went to see Hannah who was also pregnant with twins. She also loved the triplets. But, still Kaylee hadn’t even told Tucker about his babies.
    Ashlynn might seem all smiles but she was starting to have seconde thoughts on Tucker being here. She had Kaylee their too. But she guessed things would be alright, she had all her best vrienden their and her godchildren (Haley’s kids and Hannah’s kids: Haley was the godmother of hers and Sean was godfather of Ash and Luke’s). As Ashlynn entered the room she saw Haley sitting on Luke’s lap (which wasn’t weird, they acted like siblings), and Sean was getting wrapped up in tinfoil door jasmijn and Kat (with the help of Anne). Jordon was playing Lego’s with Andy and Elliot. Anne’s twins, Mia and Joey were sucking on binkies door the highchairs. Her other kid, Lucy was playing with Ian. Adrian was content twisting her big sister, Katlynn’s hair. While Eli was wanting on his mommy’s lap. FUN! Tucker entered and looked at everyone. His face was tear-stained. Although Ashlynn felt bad for him, she told him to help himself to the food lying on the plates in the keuken-, keuken and he headed strait for the food. “ASHLYNN!” Haley screamed and jumped off Luke’s lap. He screeched because her bony butt hurt like heck! Ashlynn laughed and hugged Haley. “What’s up?” Ashlynn yelled and kissed Luke. “Nothing, your hubby is supposed to be making me a drink.” Haley zei back to Ashlynn. Haley reached in her pocket and got out some tiny rubber animals that had pencil marks, they were ripped and one even had FAT printed on the side. It was the crew. Haley handed Ashlynn the rubber big piggy. Whenever, Haley and Ashlynn were in 5th grade they made up a Bus toon called, “The Fattie Family” they called it. Ryen was the blue (now almost white) koala named Charles. Haley was Baby Fattie, a small red and yellow parrot. Callista, Haley’s cousin was Charles’ daddy, Conner who was dating Ashlynn’s character, Mrs.Fattie. Cally was coming that night to the avondeten, diner party for Haley and Ashlynn. Cally had 1 child so far, Marilynn who was 4 and a ½ now. Haley was in love with all the kids here so its no surprise that whenever Cally waltzed in with Marilynn and her husband, Tom, Haley picked up Marilynn ASAP! Alex, Cally’s older sis had to come of course, she had 3 kids, Zoë who was 2 and a ½, Cleo who was 2 months, and Cleo’s twin, Victor. Alex was pregnant again, with twins, again!! So yeah, it was a party. Alex came immediately over to her cousin Haley and hugged her.
    Haley ate a kraker, cracker with cheese and then took a drink of the white wine. Maybe wine wasn’t so bad after all. She was in the keuken-, keuken with herself whenever she felt a cold hand on her shoulder. “Hey cutie.” She heard the voice say. She knew it was Sean so she turned around and kissed him strait on the lips. “Hey. What’s up hottie?” He smirked and grabbed her door the waist, “Want another kid, because, I’m not sure if I can keep my hands off you.” I rolled my eyes, “I’m not sure, I already have five…but if u really don’t think u can…” They laughed as he dragged her out to the minivan. The windows in the back were tinted and the romp, kofferbak was like pitch black so…yeah….


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The Stuffed Animal.
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They are useless.
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