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posted by CheekyCheese
Sorry if this isn't very good!

Angel was so excited, her best best vrienden were coming for her birthday sleepover at five o clock! Time crept slowly to ten past five and still not a single soul in sight! Suddenly her little sister Summer shouted “Ha Ha they're not coming they hate u so much!” Angel ran upstairs weeping and charged desperately into her sister Friday's room.


“Was Summer being mean to u again?” asked Friday
“Yes, she zei that my vrienden weren't coming because they hate me and that's not true!”
“Don't worry its only because she is jealous about u having the best sleepover ever”said Friday
Suddenly Angel heard a knock at the door “I'll get it!” she called out. As soon as she opened the door Yvonne started singing happy birthday and was holding a large oval shaped present neatly wrapped up in sparkly purple paper. Angel and Yvonne hugged and while they were doing so Tillie appeared holding a square box covered in 'Happy Birthday' paper. They were all catching up on gossip when the klok, bell rang “That must be Aliona!” shouted Yvonne and they all ran to the door. “Hello people!” Aliona shouted in her excited American voice.
“I hope you've all remembered your swimming costumes because after thee we're going for a swim in the lake!” exclaimed Angel
“Right time for the presents!” Angels mum goudsbloem shouted. First of all Angel opened Tillie's present which was a short book and a bloem craft set. Then she opened Aliona's, which was an art box with pencils and charcoal all neatly in regenboog order.
“Oh thank u Aliona! I have been wanting this for ages!”
“Your pleasure” zei Aliona feeling pleased that Angel had liked her gift.
“Mine volgende mine next!” shouted Yvonne. Yvonne's gift turned out to be a massive tub of sequins, beads and lots of arty things.
“Oh thanks Yvonne!”

After their magnificent party thee the girls went to the lake near Angel's house. “I'll be first in!” Aliona shouted. So Aliona jumped in the lake and screamed at the temperature. The others were too scared so they just left Aliona in there. “I'll try and touch the bottom then” Aliona said. Aliona ducked down sticking her feet in the air and sticking an arm up over the top, boven of the water, waving. A few seconden later Angel, Tillie and Yvonne heard some splashing and saw some bubbles where Aliona had gone down. “She must of reached the bottom!” Tillie shouted excitedly. A number of seconden passed and still no sign of Aliona!
“Where is she?” asked Angel

They waited.
“It's been over nine minuten now!” Tillie shouted, almost in tears.
“What are we going to do?” asked Yvonne who was the smartest of the lot. It was bad news if she couldn't even think of an idea. “We can't exactly tell Angel's Mum, she'll go ballistic!”
“And so will Aliona's parents! They'll never want to see us again!” Things were looking very bad for the girls and they still didn't know what to do.
“Right I'm going in!” cried Yvonne “What? We cant just stand here and do nothing!”
“Y...v..v..v..vonne's right” stammered Tillie who was in tears now “We have to help A..A..Aliona!”
“Right” Yvonne declared “It was nice knowing u guys!” she hugged both of them and jumped in. Tillie and Angel burst into floods of tears. It was bad enough losing one best friend let alone two!
“Yvonne shouldn't of followed Aliona down there, it could be dangerous!” exclaimed Angel (The
worrier of the group). It was getting dark and the two girls who were still dry were very very worried! It had been over 11 minuten since Yvonne had jumped in and 18 since Aliona had disappeared! “Lets go inside and get Mum!” Angel suddenly decided after lots of pondering. “She'll know what to do!”
“But what if they come back up?!” Angel cried “I'll stay here!”

So Tillie went pelting back towards the house, faster and faster, when she saw a hooded figure in the distance. For a spleet, split seconde she thought it was Angel's Mum but no, it couldn't have been. For Angel's Mum didn't have fiery red hair. Angel's Mum wasn't that tall. Tillie slipped out a small scream. Her legs had frozen. She didn't know why, she didn't know how. The hooded figure turned. It had a chalky white face. Tillie felt her hart-, hart freeze.
posted by I_DONT-KNOW
So I started writing this a long time ago, and didnt have a title.Remember? Anyway to refresh your memories I have put the last part I wrote up.



Chapter 2:Part 1

"What?" Alexis asked in barely a whisper. Astrid fidgeted with her hands.
"I read your file, I do it every time there is a new kid.Bonus for having the headmaster as a mom." She zei trying to make it into a joke. "Sorry, I wont tell." She zei waiting for Alexis to look at her. "Promise, when u bumped into me I actually wanted to try and help u out." She zei smiling. Alexis couldnt talk, her brain was to buisy dealing with it. Someone...
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posted by irena83
When your minds are
upset
and so many thoughts
circling around
your head,
u try to make
this right,
to find the best way
so u could feel better,
so u could be free.

Pain will never
go away,
it always stays
to remember you
that life is not a dream,
life is unpredictable.

Endless questions,
so many "Why",
but the answer
we will
never find!
The strength within
will not let us crack,
life is unpredictable,
who's to say?

Today you're happy,
and yet
despair waits
stealthily
to engulf you.
But,
u need to be prepared.

Not only bad things
happen to bad people.
Unfortunately,
so many pure,
honored hearts
have been broken for
so many times,
in so many pieces,
and yet
they live,
they live with
their agony,
they live with
their groan,
but they live,
tho their eyes are
always sad,
their hearts are
still softly.

Therefore
they know...
Therefore
they are...

The brightest star
that shines
in the dark,
that spark of hope
for all of us
who deserve better.
posted by AvaMarch
When u look at the night sky, what do u see?
In my eyes,
I see the moon as a peaceful spirit,
watching over me.
When u stop and listen to the wind, what do u hear?
In my eyes,
The wind sings to me and tells tales.
When u feel the sun on your back, what do u think?
In my eyes,
The sun reaches out and gives me a warm smile.
When u hear a flowing stream, how does it sound?
In my eyes,
The stream is floating in my hart-, hart and soul, drifting on and on.
When u look at me, what do u see?
In my eyes,
I see an average girl who is silently struggling inside.
But that's all in my eyes.
posted by viju
 Pain!!
Pain!!
[Verse-I]
Something I feel inside
Something I breathe inside
The lightening and fire
Right now I’m bearing inside
My hart-, hart is broken now
And it have fall to pieces
I’m finding a way through out
To reassemble and fix it
Oooh (fix it) Oooh (fix it)

[Chorus]
The pain and sorrow
Is freaking me out
The brand and heat
Is melting my hart-, hart out
The man who supposed to be
Isn’t there right now with me
The devils look in your eyes
Makes me scream…..
Makes me scream…..

[Verse-II]
The scars and wounds
They won’t seem to heal
Suicidal
That is how I feel
Aggression and pain
I’m hiding in my eyes
I’m finding a way to
Control...
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posted by mitchie19
5.S L E E P O V E R M O D E

The doorbell rang. “Mariah! The pizza’s here,” Nikki shouted from downstairs.
Nikki Lim is my friend. She’d helped me pass my Chemistry test door teaching me how to solve the frikin’ formulas our adviser gave us and that was a relief. I went downstairs. “Here the money,” I handed it to him. “Thank you!” Nikki waved before I locked the door. Why’d we order pizza? It was my idea to have pizza with Nikki while Aeyla and Norah went to town to celebrate some event down in Houston Street. This is a sleepover. I want to do something fun before I go to...
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posted by hannah_vampire
I didn't know weither i should go back yet of if I should just stay here for awhile like I zei i would even though it feels weird but I dont have to go back I mean Damon of Melissa could go.

I was sitting on Damons when he had walked in, 'hey Belle umm I thought u might be hungry so Here have this'. I know that the look on my face zei are u kidding I am straving but I couldn't take it even though i decide to grabb it to be polite.

Four Days later

I hadn't been to school for four days and the only reason was because i know they would be their but I had to go back to Blairs because sooner...
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posted by Cullens4eva
Hi people. well im starting up an advice column for those people who need advice through situations and questions. If u yourself find your stuck in a problem emai my account at dearannie_advice@hotmail.co.uk. this is my special account i use for people needing help. Dont worry anything u say will never be told to anyone else, thats my promise. If u dont think u trust me then send it to my fanpop account. im here to help those stuck.

please if u need advice, just try it.

the new Dear Annie
xxxxx
posted by PrinceLover1999
While She watched her mother had a hart-, hart attack she was crying. While latter that night. She dreamed that her Father died...He was burned with fire.
"Why, does this happen to me?!?" She ask Then she starts crying. Then her mom as a ghost comes and hug her. Then she says....What...the.
She went to her bed and lay down...and she wakes up and she smelles fire. She runs down stairs, her father laying un consions. She's screaming for help, and luckly Help did come.
The volgende dag her Father died. She goes to a Foster home. Nobody wants her soo she goes home pagina to home pagina to home. Then she found this little...
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posted by EmoKidSteven
she's that dangerous kind
she only wears black with her long dark hair and her light brown eyes
she loves the sight of blood
her ultimate pleasure is seeing people suffer from pain
hearing them scream and beg makes her moan
she killes with one look of her eye
she makes men drop at her feet
heartless,thoughless
she's a demon witch
she looks like a human,but she's nothing like a human
you can tell she's different
you can tell that she's got something special about her
the way she plays with her tongue,touch her skin
the way she chooses one,there's must be something about him she can't figure out
and she has...
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posted by TeamRosalieHale
22: Way of the World

The hours took forever, the seconde longest night Jack had lived through. Well, meer of less lived through. At long last, the sun started a steady climb in the Ohio sky, soon to be replaced with West Virginia. It didn’t take long for Tristan to wake, he needed less sleep than an average human to get by. Jack and Rosalie were changed from what they had been in before-he in simple black flanellen broek, broek and a white shirt, she in light blue jeans and a black tank top. Tristan was back to looking like a Greek god again-his hair golden, his eyes rich blue. “Can u do that at will?...
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posted by coolie
. ‘’What happened to Sucky Sam?’’ Who knows,’’ replied Ted. They started walking through the catacombes.
We should get going ,”Bill. This place gives me the hibie Jeebeis,”said Death. You’re right,” replied Ted. They walked towards the front of the catacombes. For some strange reason, there was no hole to get out! They looked in the other direction. There was Sucky Sam standing about five yards away from them! Who, what, where, when…. Why,” zei Bill. Looking for me,” zei Sucky Sam in a cocky voice. All of the three were shocked in horror. Sucky Sam’s eyes turned...
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posted by joe-edwardfan
end of chap3
The klok, bell rang then I saw Edward waiting for me in front of the office
-there u are I thought u were going to ditch me
-whenever I make a promise I will always keep it!
Specially the one that includes: killing Damien and his mother
-so who was he?
He asked a little angry
-no one
I sighed
-I won’t push it if u don’t want to talk about it
-that's a good idea
We reached the biology class I sat beside the window again and edward sat beside me like jasper
The teacher came in the class and told everyone to welcome edward and blah blah blah
In the biology class I wasn’t as tired as before so...
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posted by marissa
 "After a while, the insanity of the situation wore off and it seemed completely normal."
"After a while, the insanity of the situation wore off and it seemed completely normal."
Chapter Three:

Alan:

When Alan got onto the bus, he spotted Benny immediately and sat down volgende to him.
    
Alan took the bus every Tuesday and Thursday to visit his mother. He’d met Benny two weeks geleden and the two talked every time Alan was on the bus, and Alan ate up every word that Benny said.
    
He had been skeptical at first, but it didn’t take long for Alan to honestly believe he was talking to God when he rode the bus. After a while, the insanity of the situation wore off and it seemed completely normal.
    
“Hello Alan,”...
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posted by BellaSwan636
Serena

"Why did u leave?"

I wish I could tell him why. But seeing him again din't ease the pain. Not one bit. The agony only multiplied. All of the feelings I had suppressed were clamouring to be acknowledged.

Ashleigh peeked out from her curtain of hair, and made eye contact with him.

My hart-, hart skipped a beat. She was his child too, I knew that, but he maybe he wouldn't want anything to do with her of me. He probably hated me.

Ansking the vraag I had feared the most, he said, "Is this her?"

I looked at the ground.

"I can't do this again," the words hurt me to say them, but I could never force...
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posted by genyva
Genyva Salters
Cold Toes

Prologue
June 30, 2004
11:45 Open Door Eating


It’s the worst dag in the world for a lunch date. I look like hell my light brown hair was frizzing like a poodle. Damn this humid summer, only in Texas the humidity 90% all the time. And this place is like a hut; all the hot air coming from the windows is blowing out the A/C. How is any one able to enjoy lunch when they are drinking the air?

I looked over to Ethan, who was making his way towards the table. We had been together so long in this little town. I love it to death but I think its time to verplaats out. Greene, Texas...
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posted by twilight0girl
 isaac
isaac
this maand is going to be terrible.
i live in barrow alaska.this is thier maand of complete,totall darkness.also,this is when the vampires come out to feed on the helpless men,women,and children.but instead of shaking in pure fear,i'll go out and see how they act.but i'm also going out because my two brothers,isaac and marcus,are vampires too.

__________________________________________________
4 days later

i've never walked around outside during this time of month.i can hear the screaming coming from every direction.i havent seen any va,pires nor my two brothers.when i started to walke away...
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posted by BeSafe
I chanced a glance at you
from across the crowded room
and that was when I noticed
u were looking at me too

we both know this shouldn't happen
its a road we've been down before
and the only way it ever ends
is with u walking out the door

so I wish someone would explain to me
why I'm still rooted in place
staring in the direction
of just another lonely face

my mind is screaming at me to run
while my hart-, hart asks me to stay
for a moment I dont know what to do
and if its a price I'm willing to pay

we both know this is wrong
the love that we share
but we also know that wont stop us
because to find this kind of love is rare
posted by Maria_Quinn8
hallo guys I'm new here and I just want to tell u guys how to become a mermaid for those mermaids lovers
I only know 1 spells and I hope it works for u guys
SPELL1#
these 're the following items needed
cup of water with salt mixed in it
voice
steps to take
put ur hand in the salty water of fresh water if u want
say the spell 3 times
mermaids in the sea oh so fast and free
I wish to be one of u, I will have a tail colour of ()
and the power to () water
I will get my tail and power in ten minuten but no later
mermaid when wet, human when dry
10 seconden is all it takesto transform
so mote it be×2
U might get ur tail after 10 minuten but it might work for some people
BEWARE:U CHANGE AFTER ONE DROP OF WATER
Good luck
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