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A sharp siring pain struck my stomach; I froze tight as stone grasping at my stomach. The pain was unbelievably unbearable. I wasn’t able to breathe it just made the pain ten times worse. My eyes were pinched tight, tighter then when I jumped off the bleachers in the high school gym a few years back.
The thought about that whole night made me cringe making the pain worst. That night was one of the worst nights of my life; something I hope will never have to be brought up ever again.
Patch and I were sitting on the divan, bank watching TV after our one o’clock lunch. My legs had been flung on top, boven of his as I stretched out on the couch. Patch was ruby my feet when the pain struck. He didn’t say anything he just waited till it passed. My hands were balled into fist so tight I could swear blood had started appearing.
The pain settled down letting me breathe. My head felt heavy for a few seconden as I let out a long thick breath. I opened my eyes, my vision was a bit foggy but blinking a few times took care of that.
I looked up at Patch who looked laid back and calm but in his dark endless eyes u could see the panic accelerating with every silent passing second.
“I’ll be okay.” He raised his eyebrows not convinced. “It’s my job to take care of u as your guardian and fiancé.” I gave a soft smile at the word fiancé.

I still couldn’t believe that he had asked me to marry him. He was so romantic purposing too, something he doesn’t do to often.
He had rented out a nice small yacht strung with lights covering every inch of the boat. We had avondeten, diner and talked. He looked extremely nervous; I had never seen him like that and it scared me.
When the yacht stopped he had walked me to the top, boven floor tonen the twinkling stars and the huge bright white moon. I was amazed with the scenery that I hadn’t realized that he had dropped to one knee.
“I love you.” he zei catching my attention, I turned around to see him on one knee. He pulled out a small velvet box out of his jas pocket and opened it. In side was a beautiful small white goud diamond ring. “I love u too, but,” I paused. “Patch I’m too young.”
He stood up laying his hands around my waist. “Nora, just because u say yes it doesn’t mean that we have to get married right away.” He looked down, deep into my eyes as if to hypnotize me. And that’s exactly what his eyes did to me.
He bent back down on one knee and opened the little box again. “Nora Grey will u marry me?” I wasn’t sure what to say. Yes I love him, yes I will always love him, and he was right we didn’t have to get married right away. I smiled “Yes.”
I could only imagine what my mother would think, of Vee. She didn’t like Patch before, but after Rixon she hated him.
She was immensely pissed with Patch for setting them up. She zei that it was stupid to think that a friend of Patch’s wouldn’t be just like him. Especially since he listened and did every single thing Patch asked of him. She thinks that he had skipped town after a bad gamble instead of being sent to hell door Patch.
Patch stood up smiling, tonen his perfect white teeth. He looked at me as he took the ring out of the little box and placed it on my finger. I leaned in and kissed him hard still smiling.

“Come on Nora were going to the hospital.” Patch got up off the divan, bank picking my legs up gently and placing them down on the ground. I shook my head. “Sit back down.” I patted the divan, bank where he was just sitting. “I’ll be fine the contractions aren’t that far apart and it was just a little pain.”
He kneeled down placing his hands on my knees. “Nora that wasn’t just a little pain, breathing hurt. Don’t u want pain medication?” I shook my head again. “Why not?” His voice was soft and comforting as he stroked my cheek.
I could feel the tears swelling up in my eyes I blinked and one fell. I looked down at Patch’s hands on my knees. “Angel?” I sniffled looking up at him. “I’m scared.”
He sat down volgende to me and wrapped his arms around me. I buried my head in his warm chest. I could still smell the summer sun lingering in his clothes. “There’s no need to be, as long as I’m around nothing will ever happen to you.”
I was softly crying in his chest when another searing pain hit. I dug my self harder into his chest waiting for the pain to past. I wasn’t breathing again. That was it for Patch. “I’m not fighting with you; u are going to the hospital.” I nodded my head slowly as the pain started to fade.
I lifted my head from Patch as he stood up. I held his hand out for me to take. I grabbed it and he pulled me up.
It took us a few minuten to get to his jeep. Once I was in he ran back to the house for the bag. Patch threw it in the back zitplaats, stoel and started the engine.
We hit the first read light and another contraction hit. I grabbed Patch’s arm clasping it immensely tight. I would have felt bad that I was hurting him but he didn’t feel it.
I hated the fact that he couldn’t feel my touch but at curtain times it came in handy. The mood swings can get pretty nasty. I remember when I told him I was pregnant.
He was so happy he was laughing and smiling. I didn’t want it I knew I was too young. I got pissed and started hitting him telling him that we weren’t keeping it. I told him that I had plains for my life. I threw a major fit.
He won of course, he convinced me. “Don’t u want to have a baby with me, have a family, a beautiful house?” he asked and that’s all it took. I hated my self for the way I acted, he zei it didn’t matter he understood why I had the reaction I had; of course that didn’t really make me feel any better.

The pain subsided and I let got of Patch and leaned my head against the back of the seat. “I need to call my mother.” Patch dug his cell phone out of his pant pocket and handed it to me. “Don’t forget Vee.” He zei raising his eyebrows.
If I didn’t call Vee she would never forgive me. We hadn’t asked her yet but Patch and I wanted Vee to be the baby’s godmother.
I dialed my mother’s number. She didn’t pick up, “she must be with him.” I thought. It was tough to think of her with him, but I knew she loved him.
I left a voice main “Mom, Patch and I are on the way to the hospital. Come as soon as u get this.” I zei and hung up.
volgende I dialed Vee’s number, knowing it door heart. Ever since I got pregnant she called twenty four/seven either that of I was calling her. This pregnancy came with a lot of cravings, she always helped graciously. “Hello babe.” I was breathing heavy and fast I could feel another contraction coming. “Oh my gosh, are u in labor?” I nodded my head as if she could see.
I felt a little pain hit my stomach. I wasn’t too bad I was able to breathe but it hurt. Patch took the phone from my shaking hand. “Vee meet us at the hospital.” I heard her scream at the other end. Patch pulled it away from his ear. Once Vee stopped screaming he put it back to his ear then hung the phone up and stuffed it back in his pocket. “She’s not excited.” I gave him a tough smile.
“Hey Patch?” he turned onto the empty highway. “Yah?” I grabbed his arm again. “When we get to the hospital make sure I get the drugs right away. There’s know way…” I paused with another pain in my stomach. I let out a hard breath, “in hell that I’m sitting in the waiting room to wait for anybody.” He smiled. “Don’t worry, you’ll get the drugs.” I let out a breath as the pain eased away.
CHAPTER THREE:
CRYSTAL FALLS, CALIFORNIA
OCTOBER 27, 1995
It is five AM when I finally enter Crystal Falls. The sun has not yet appeared over the horizon. After entering the town, I spare no time searching for the apartment complex. I spot it after driving around the suburban area for about fifteen minutes. I park my car outside of the building I am looking for, and climb up two flights of stairs to unlock the door. Then, I race down the stairs and quickly grab all my things I packed and verplaats them into the apartment with ease. I switch on the news and find that another victim has been found near...
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This is a fiction story that I've been forming in my head for awhile and decided to post it.

This is a romance book but hopefully I succeed at making u laugh here and their. The main girl (Ember) is like me from her hair to her odd habbits. Anywho, she's pretty great and she can get along with most anyone... expect Kadin Ski. He's the most annoying, prideful, ignorant, boy she has ever met. She hates him with a burning passion.

And then something happens...

Suddenly, during a dodge ball game, things start to change. Soon she feels venerable, her stomach does cartwheels, she sweats when she...
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CHAPTER TWO:
SANTA BARBARA, CALIFORNIA
OCTOBER 26, 1995:10:57 PM
It is nearly eleven when I pull to a stop outside of Saint Packie’s Bar in Santa Barbara. On this particular evening, I feel like doing some vigilante justice, if my sources are correct, which of course they will be, my victim will be inside the bar searching for his latest victim. Such irony, I think to myself. He will soon die in one of the most horrible ways imaginable, although this is only my plan A. If any problems proceed, there are always better ways of dispatching my victims. I toon my ID to the security officer, and he...
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posted by Dreamcatcher26
Khloe, Caroline, a few other vrienden and I flung ourselves down the straat to the hottest club in town devils lounge, I was thankful that the bouncers here were as dumb witted as everywhere else about fake ids.

Inside the club Icy, smoke lurked on the ground; coloured lights gave me a spontaneous rush of excitement. I looked at the seas of bodies that were grinding on the dance floor, an arm snaked around my waist before spinning me around to hold me in their grip.

'Scarlett babies u joining us tonight for a hit?'
I scoffed and pushed Eric of me.
‘Control your brother Khloe before the dog gets...
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This is a Fiction Story I wrote EXCLUSIVELY for Fanpop. Please see what u think of it.

In a somewhat large village not too far out in the country, the sun was blazing its hottest near a great forest. Luckily, in the forest it was cool, for the trees housed everything and blocked out the heat. But the trees also housed life. Animals.
A mother dog.
The Border collie had been stray all her life, yet she was healthy and happy living in the forest. She rolled onto her back to see the magical view of sunlight peering through the treetops, much to the dismay of her newborn litter. She sensed this and...
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Dear info keeper of my life.
Yes that sounds way koeler, koelwagen and not so mainstream. I was late to class again today, God I hate it when that happens. When u enter people just keep staring at you. It almost like I am some sort of alien from planet Zog!

The worst of them all is this guy called Ryan Singer. He is considered meer populair than me yet at the same time still a nerd. He sits behind me in class and stares at me the whole day. I mean it.
It is weird I mean. DOES HE EVER BLINK!

Well most people do tend to stare at me when me and my vrienden enter class, but that's just because I am a punk and...
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posted by juliet98
In the jaar 4125 the Earth was still turning on itself. Apparently everything was the same as it was two thausand years ago. But it wasn't so. The democracy we got fighting was distroied door a man. After 15 years of wars, in 4025 Cyrus defeated free people and he established the tyranny. The whole world was controlled and the freedom dind't exist anymore. Everyone lost trust in everything, in love, in courage, in God. Most of people didn't know that there was a prophecy. It zei that the humanity had to pass through a century of pain and fear to realize how important freedom was. But then in...
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posted by nekomatafox
 this is scarlet included becouse originally for manga so brief beschrijving
this is scarlet included becouse originally for manga so brief description
flameheart sits in the gras lettting the breeze pass over him waiting
"hmm i hope i dont wait long" he says to into the air
looks around startled as a rustle comes from the bushes behind him
"scarlet is that you" he ask nervously
there's a flash of red and yellow knocking flamheart to the grounf with a large slaan, smack like stone on metal. he shrieks with a hint of a smile on his face as a pair of half paws half hands hold him down.
a bright female tone female voice with a playfull tone talks to flameheart" i got u flameheart admit it!!"
holding him down is a human like vos, fox creature with red fur...
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posted by terra_rocker
Chapter one –
Unlike the last few months the last three days had broken out of the tedious routine my days had grown tired and used to. My dag took the same route as every other one that was until I had to toon the new girl… Briara, where her locker was. Briara was cheerful and happy, dressed in an array of exotic bright colours that not only made me want to vomit but shield my eyes, her outfit an extreme contrast to my alternate altered clothing. My plain black vest top, freshly ripped into a V-neck with added buttons and a tie, matched only with skinny jeans in a dark grey. My dress style...
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This was take from a post on Tumblr that I found interesting and wanted to share! (And I did some of my own Googling and added to the list.) It just goes to toon that someone telling u that your writing isn't good doesn't mean anything. People just think differently from each other. ;P

Sylvia Plath: There certainly isn’t enough genuine talent for us to take notice.

Rudyard Kipling: I’m sorry Mr. Kipling, but u just don’t know how to use the English language.

Emily Dickinson: [Your poems] are quite as remarkable for defects as for beauties and are generally devoid of true poetical qualities....
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"Shaun, wake up. u need to go now." The words I heard a faint voice say. It sounded familiar but I couldn't put my finger on it. Who was it? I just couldn't figure it out no matter how hard I tried. volgende was a sound. Blood spraying from a body. The drops hit the ground one door one. The sound echoing through my head like bells going off simultaneously. My eyes open in an instance. The only color I see is red. I rub my eye and feel the blood i had heard. It was mine.

I fall back to the ground as my eyes start to close slowly. I can hear that voice again. "Get up! Please get up! I need you,...
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Some people say that vigilantes’ are a menace. Apparently helping people in need when the police won’t is a problem for some people. In reality, if this so-called ‘menace’ knows what he’s doing and isn’t causing any problems, then why is it so wrong? I’ve certainly saved meer lives than I can count. I guess trying to be a hero is frowned upon these days. Don’t get me wrong, I’m not saying everyone should go out and take the law into their own hands. It takes years of training and skill to take such risks.

    That’s where my years of military service come...
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Michael ran from the black, shadowy figure that was standing in the street. It began chasing after him, and he began to freak out. I can't freak out of it'll catch me, and I can't let that happen! he thought. Even so, he felt himself tiring as he cleared his neighbor's hedges and bolted for the alleyway between the Soda koop and the 10 Cents Store.
The antique store across the straat from him had it's doors open with it's lights off. Michael sprinted into the store and careened to a stop. He turned around, slammed the door shut, and ran haphazardly up the stairs to look for a hiding spot....
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posted by Herro_There
He creeps through the alley ways
Forever, perhaps
All in search
Of a few meaningless scraps

Paws scared, vacht, bont stained
Mourning over
What his hart-, hart once contained

kraag torn, soul lost
Forever wandering
On the ground of frost

Memories will never fade
For his closest companion
And master for life, betrayed

Kicked on the streets
Forced to live
With the night's beasts
Wanders and wonders
Hiding in the shadows
From the night's thunders

Forgive and forget
They always say
But that thought doesn't enter the mind of this stray
Hoping one dag a new master would come
But alas, that is seldom

As days go by, and nights linger
He hopes and prays
For his soul and body
To part ways

For the pain is torture
And the future is bleak
Shunned from the world
Known as a freak

When, oh when, will the world learn?
How would they feel if the tides were turned?
sit back now young ones while I tell u the story of the first Saviours.
The Saviours are a long and old race reaching back as far as the dawn of time they behold powers beyond our imagination. They can give life ,they can make u happy,sad of whatever they wish but most of all they hold the powers of truth, light and life. For years they have been fighting of the men of evil, called demons, and they have been winning but only just. The demons though they are biding their time waiting for their chance to shine and rule, the demons are stronger than any Saviour the powers they contain in their...
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Mai kiểm tra Sinh.Đứt đừn.
Keke.Bao giờ cho đến nghỉ hè!
Học học học!!!!!!
Bùn ngủ +_+
Chỉ cần 7 điểm thôi,con sẽ nhịn cơm 3 ngày!
Nhịn cơm=ăn pizza;))
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Đấy-đống status của thằng Vương Dương(rất dở hơi và cứ 15 phút lại thay đổi 1 lần)mà nguyên 1 đếm thức để học bài tôi dã dỏng cổ ngắm nghía.Lúc đó tôi thậm chí còn nghĩ:"Mình mà có SSM á,còn lâu mới giăng lên những câu nhảm như thế!".Nhưng tất nhiên là mình ko có.Tôi có phải là nhà tỷ phú như nó đâu!Biệt...
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Hà Nội,năm 2050
Đừng...đừng nói gì.Tôi ko nghe được gì hoặc là tôi nghe mà ko hiểu gì và hơn nữa là tôi ko biết mình sẽ phải nói gì đâu.
Suỵt,đừng hỏi!Nếu ko,tôi sẽ quên luôn cả rằng tôi đang định làm gì và phải làm những gì.
Tôi đang bối rối,chân tay trở nên thừa thãi vụng về.
Dây này...nối vào đây.Rồi,công tắc đó...
Màn hình cảm ứng sáng xanh hiện lên các thông số kĩ thuật.Tôi lần lượt chọn Font type,Color...Xong xuôi,tôi hồi hộp nhấn"Finish"và lao ra cửa,ngẩng...
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posted by FURRY
Life is a wonderful thing some people say... however I beg to differ, my name is Joel, my whole life I was treated like a monster. It all started when I was little around 7 of so, I was sitting around the town square in the little village og Yotun, a place I called home pagina when it all happened, the sky started getting cloudy slowly getting cold I could see my breath easily, but something wasn't right everything was getting unblieveable dark it was like I was going blind.

Soon I couldn't see anything, then I felt an odd sensation on the back of my hand, I clinched my wrist in pain, it was unreal...
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Very few people in the modern world obtain their food supply door hunting and gathering in the natural environment surrounding their homes.This method of harvesting from nature's provision is the oldest known subsistence strategy and has been pratised for at least 2 million years.It was,indeed,the only way to obtain food until rudimentary farming and the domestication of wild animals were introduced about 10 000 years ago.

Because hunter-gatherers have fared poorly in comparison with their agricultural cousins,their numbers have dwindled,and they have been forced to live in marginal environments,such...
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posted by ZekiYuro
Some reasons will explain why u don't have any lover now,according to Horoscope.
Aries(21/3-20/4):Because u always make argument and never make up your mind carefully.
Taurus(21/4-20/5):Because u are really really lazy.
Gemini(21/5-21/6):Because u can't make someone believe in you.
Cancer(22/6-22/7):Because u always worry too much.
Leo(22/7-22/8):Because u want to be a superstar.
Virgo(23/8-22/9):Because u are never pleased with your choice and just want to choose a PERFECT one-an impossible thing.
Libra(23/9-23/10):Because u love too much people,and then finally u have no one.
Scorpio(24/10-22/11):Because...
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