Past of present tense? Can I get some opinions (will explain in the details section)?

So basically with my fanfics I usually write in the past tense. Recently I started dabbling in present tense. Personally I think that it flows better. But I want to know what others think. And no one has gegeven me any feedback on it so far lol. With this fic link I wrote the first chapter in my usual past tense and the seconde & third in present.

Read a paragraph, read the whole thing, whatever lol. I'd just appreciate some feedback.

~Thanks in advance.
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TheLefteris24 said:
Interesting fic. I don't know much about this Series of its Characters but I really got the urge to learn more. I must say that I prefer the Past Tense. It seemed much meer Organized and Emotional to me. Overall, I found it easier to get engrossed in the Story !!!!
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It is a good show. Regina is the best. Yeah, I think I'm meer used to past tense. Thanks for the feed back. :D
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ace2000 said:
I like past tense way meer than present tense - I think present tense fits poetry meer than it does prose.

Also, when it's used in prose, the prose is typically in first person, whereas I much meer prefer third person.

Anyhow, nice writing - very descriptive and interesting :D
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Thank u for your feed back as well. So far it looks like past tense is meer ideal. I'm glad u liked it.
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