Writing Article: Promo to a story. Real thing later.

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posted by dragonrider

Dear Diary,
Yeah It's me again. I made one mistake and it's eating me inside.
Before u ask me "Lily did u at least try to escape?" I'm going to tell u that I did. On the first day. It's like he knew I would. I had just gotten shot door that straal, ray and I was feeling Sulky and then Jerald zei something that really ticked me off.
"So yeah your room is down the hall from where we are now"
I glared at him His stupid red hair and eyes were just pulsing out at me like I'm his prize
"You planned this didn't you? How? Well I'll never know but just know this I hate you. u killed the only living family
i had left and I will never forget it" I snarled
He smiled at me. He smiled at me! Who would smile at that?
"Yeah I know but I don't care u are so useful to me that I don't care. Now either stay in here of go rob a bank but if u don't rob it if u go out I'll know," He zei
"How?" I snarled
"What? u think I didn't do anything when I knocked u out with that ray? Well lets just say I know your every move
"Yeah well I rather go to my "Room" buddy," I zei walking away. I walked into my room and slammed the door. I looked around and thought wow he doesn't know what a 17 jaar old likes.
My room is horrible. It has all these little kid stuff like dolls and posters of little kids shows.
That was when I had enough. I looked around and saw a window on my right. I went to it and opened it. It seemed like I would get to go through it but no. When I started to climb through it, something zapped me hard and I fell back into my room
"God dang! What kind of fresh hell is this?" I screamed at the top, boven of my lungs
My doored opened and he smiled "what do u think I'm stupid? I know that u would try to escape. Now u will never escape from me ever now just relax and enjoy the freedom I gave u already,"
He slammed the door and I went on my bed. i will find a way out of here eventually I just need a really good excuse....

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That Wasn't Your Fight[Ch.8]

posted by HarryPLover

We were walking through the mall almost about maybe, 20 feet from the door. He hadn't zei a word to me since the whole Jose thing half an uur ago. Matthew was purposely walking behind me, though only a few feet away, still I wanted him at my side. I stopped and looked back at him. He was stopped his walk with his head down. I walked over to the side of him. I reached for his hand that was poking out if his pocket. Then he did the most crazy thing I think Ive ever seen. He actually stepped back so i wouldn't touch him. He seemed to think it was funny, of maybe it was my startled face that...

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That Wasn't Your Fight[Ch.7]

posted by HarryPLover

Those words pierced me like thorns on a rose.

"Happy Anniversary." His smile was absolutely priceless. I had to laugh just a little at his nervous grin. I knew the that it had been a maand since we had gotten together but I don't think he exactly remembers whether that dag was today....or yesterday. I wanted to make me sweat it out. But he was right, it was today. I gotta admit that I was kinda surprised that he even remembered.
"Aww, u remembered." I saw the nervous grin turn to relief. He earned a kiss.
"Of, course I remembered." I still wanted to make him sweat though. I couldn't resist.
"What happened to the whole " I don't remember...

Are We Right For Eachother?

posted by jacob_lover5253

*New character! Kayla Known as Karleigh's cousin*

I turned around and saw Nick waving from outfront. Oh, okay. I grabbed two water bottles, one for me and one for Nick. I picked up my phone to take with me.

(Kayla-underlined karleigh- italics)

so wen u getting here?

Uh...not for another uur of so y?

bcuz i was gonna play frisbee with Bri Nick nd others

UGH! Nick! I h8 him!

I don't get it y? y do u h8 him?

cause he pulled my hair in the pool!

I thought we cleared this up...he thought u were his annoying loser sister, Leigha!

ugh! his sister is too cute to h8 nd just cause u like nick...

Just another Crush Chapter 5

posted by iluvPrinceMJ213

While she slept I caressed her satin cheek. Connor stares down at her with love and I lean my head back on his chest. One night in May Damon calls me shouting into the phone. “ Keaira Callie’s pregnant with a baby girl with blonde hair and green eyes.” “ That’s great Damon.” “ Yea we have already decided on the name Avril u know after the singer kinda but I live the name too it sounds like a flower.” I smile even though he can’t see it. He then tells me to put Dawn on the phone and he tells her that she’s gonna have a cousin. She says she is happy and then says “ Is...

Just another Crush Chapter 2

posted by iluvPrinceMJ213

I pull on my Rocking Paris overhemd, shirt and Jeans. I then pull my dirty blonde hair into a pony tail and then brush my teeth and then wait in the car till Gabriel comes. When Gabriel does come out I see he is wearing his green vest that brings out his eyes. Gabriel sits in the passenger zitplaats, stoel of the mustang and lounges there. I look at the radio and groan its 7:15 and we have to be at school at 7:45. “Where’s Kaden” I ask? “I don’t know he’s probably fixing his hair again.” I snicker and then turn the key and start to drive down the street. “He can drive the roze corvette.” I and...

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Nick & Grace: Chapter One

posted by CullenProperty

He made me stay in the car while he checked us into the room. I had barely noticed that he carried in two packs of bier with us. We started off just watching televisie and sucking on a beer. Then soon enough he had too many drinks and he started kissing my face. The bad thing is, is that I let him and I kissed him back. He touched me to, but again, I let him and then he pulled my overhemd, shirt off. I didn't mind it much until then and that's when I knew that this wasn't the best choice I'd ever made. The smell of his breath penetrated my neck and filtered in through my nose, making my stomach wrench....

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Are we right for eachother? Chapter 4

posted by jacob_lover5253

After Nick cheered me up I decided to go home. "I'm gonna head home. I'll text u when i'm coming back out. I have to eat dinner." He frowned. "Alright i'll be waiting." I laughed. "Bye." I walked my bike back to my trailer. My friend Briana came running up to me.

"So, I have a question?" I looked at her. "Alright ask away." She smiled a little and let out a little laugh. "Who do u like?" I stopped walking all together. She asks me now? "Uh, come to my trailer with me and i'll tell you." I zei walking again. I walked inside with her following me. Cocoa, my puppy, jumped up on Briana, "Alright...

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A Lesson Learned(by me!!)

posted by dexisawesome

A lesson learned

Once upon a time in the small town of Eighdensburgh there were 6 small children. 5 of the children loved to play all dag and sleep all night. The sixth one did not like what the other kids liked, he liked chemistry and science plus a little bit of paranormal things. One dag the first child, that was a girl, came up and asked the sixth child if he wanted to play. He said” No, of course not! Why would I want to spend all my time prancing around like a fool!”. the first child then said” What’s your problem, u got something against us!”. then the first child ran off...

Lucid Dream: Chapter One

posted by AliceKinsley

“Lev, u left your book on the table.” Boris rushed over to me, handing me my English textbook. I grabbed it reluctantly, sighing. I meant to leave it there. English isn’t my strongest subject. of Language.
“No, I meant to leave book there.” I replied, rolling my eyes and shoving the textbook into my satchel. Boris chuckled and patted my shoulder. America was such a strange country. The language was hard, the people were different, and the weather was unpredictable. At least in Russia u could understand what the people were saying, and when it was going to snow of shine. “Why...

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Learing to let go Ch. Four

posted by Funnygirl77

learing to let go is like jumping out of an airplan with no para shoot

8:00 am Saturday
I woke up, I felt way better then I had in years. I love the ending of my dream, I could still fill the warmth of Alec's arms. I smiled to myself as I made Breakfast for Aunt Maggie and me. I made pancakes, Bacon, and eggs, Aunt Maggie walked down stairs and smiled at me. "what's gotten in to you?" I smiled, thinking of what Alec said. Aunt Maggie looked at me, and zei "alright who's the boy?"

I pretended like I was offended, "boy, what boy?" Aunt Maggie laughed, "do I get to meet him?" I smiled, "You may? it depends." I stopped talking then, When I'm with Alec I fill so alive,...

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Evil, Darkness & Light

posted by juicyjossy9

Did God Create Evil?

The universiteit professor challenged his students with this question:

"Did God create everything that exists?"

A student bravely replied, "Yes, he did!"

"God created everything?" The professor asked.

"Yes sir", the student replied.

The professor answered, "If God created everything, then God created evil, since evil exists, and according to the principal that our works define who we are, then God is evil".

The student became quiet before such an answer.
The professor, quite pleased with himself, boasted to the students that he had proven once meer that the Christian faith was a...

John Muir Middle School Character lijst

posted by steph1011994

John Muir Middle School

Alexa Lightman: a girl with braces who wants to make a difference. Age 11
Deandra Cody: a formerly chubby Hispanic girl who loves drawing. Age 12
Katie Eckert: a pigtailed basketbal player who wants to be ster forward. Age 12
Emma Walsh: a young brunette girl who plays soccer to win. Age 13
Colleen Tepper: a blonde girl who strives to be a champion figure skater. Age 13
Hannah Slater: a girl with curly brown hair who is a violin prodigy. Age 14
Brooke Paxton: a Hispanic girl who play guitar. Age 11
Brigit Banks: a bun wearing blonde Irish dancer who is very serious and competitive....

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Character Development!!!!

posted by breebree446

Although JP doesn't really describe his characters that much, he gives enough about Iggy to know he's blind, a pyro, and has aardbei blonde hair!

Although JP doesn't really describe his characters that much, he gives enough about Iggy to know he's blind, a pyro, and has strawberry blonde hair!

So, we have the plot line and idea prepared. But what about the thing that makes it all come to life? The characters. This is a little artikel on character development.

Appearence!

u know the old saying, "Appearence is everything."? Well, it's not! But it IS important when writing. As u go along, think about what your character looks like. What's thier hair color? What kind of body type do they have. What's thier eye color. I'll admit i'm not a big fan of the "Hi. My name is _____ I have brown hair and blue eyes." What I do is describe the characters subtly. Like if one character describes...

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u and Me-Chapter 3

posted by Twilightluv3r

For the past three weeks Taylor and I haven't been getting along so well. All we do is argue about every little thing. Most of the time it's because we never have time to spend with each other.
He's still acting, but he's only getting small parts, so he thought he needed to practice his acting. It was so hard trying to be a bestfriend on his schedule, so we decided to distance ourselves, a little, for a week. The first two days were like hell. I did't want to talk to anyone except for Taylor. I would have talked to Amy, but she was sick.
But then everything turned around when Mark and I started...

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ALONE

posted by odekanmi

I told someone once,
"You are alone".
The person refused to agree,
"Why?",
"What for?",
"Why should i be told I'm alone"
Those were the words most probably flowing through the fellas mind at the time,
Think of it,
Stop,
Take a deep breath,
Think again,
Who were u with the last second?,
You, yourself and you,right?,
Look around you,
Are u sure this is where u want to be?,
I look,
Right now,
And,you know what I see?,
No one.
Nada Nada person,
Well that's my own language, forget it.
There's no one there,
But I do what I do best,
Suffer in silence.

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The plot for my unnamed story

posted by deathchick9

Syayuki Kimihiro,is a normal Japaneses high school girl trying to find her place and make friends,but when she was 5 she was taken from her home,she has many nightmares about this event even after 11 years,These nightmares consist of demons monsters and gargoyles.Her family says that it's normal sines she was found unconscious with no memories of this horrible event,now she has episodes where she has excruciating chest pain till she falls unconscious.Her mother being a doctor was able to make a vaccine for her but it only works for one day.Suddenly four new students appear making her episodes and nightmares worse.As if that's not bad enough now there are strange marks on her left wrist that hurt like hell.Do these new students have something to do with it and why is the leader constantly flirting with her?

Yeah, Me; The Nerd: Chapter one.

posted by cute20k

Dizzy:

As I weaved through the crowded hallways, I focussed on the rhythm of my footsteps. I was lost. It was as if I was a new student of something. Now that Annabella was gone, the hallways made me dizzy with fear. When you're with your best friend, nothing matters. When u know you'll never see her again, not even a faint light of happiness appears at the end of the freight tunnel.
I'm still me, I reminded myself. But who was I? Before knew it, a bib of tears flooded down my chest. I hear red-headed Abigail whisper to Elisa. Faint words saying, 'They're actually crying?' I wished those...

Darkened Bliss: 3rd and 4th page - Chapter One

posted by Heya

of was someone threatening me? Signs of threats weren’t the ones I had.
Maybe just warnings.
    “Glorious, Have u ever, had signs before? u know, like something warning u not to go on of go some place?” I asked myself. I shivered in the coldness of my room. I liked it cold.
    “I don’t understand you,” a voice rang to my left. There, in the middle of my doorway, stood Looi, my older brother. He was leaning on the door frame.
    “Hey, do u mind? I’m getting ready. Don’t u have your own bathroom?” I asked...

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A poem; Humanly Mistakes

posted by InnocentNoMore

Feel like falling,
    but sure to stand fast.
Feel like letting go,
    but afraid of the rash,
Feel like giving up,
    but afraid to sleep,
Want to jump,
    but afraid to of falling off way to deep.
Sometimes life takes me in weird directions,
    but knowing me, its all imperfections.
Sometimes emotions wolk every single thought,
    and knowing my actions, I’m here to rot.
Forever will my mistakes continue to haunt me,
    standing here, I now see.
What if things could be different volgende time?
    Would it then, take a lifetime?

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Ripped Chapter One

posted by amethyst44

The one thing that never freaked me out before was when the teacher got mad at us, especially Mr. Donnahue. But watching him shred up each and every paper that he touched on that dumb bureau of his...well...it made me shiver a bit.
That's when I saw it; my paper, neatly written in my cursive writting, only with roze gel pen instead of the standard pencil. Under my desk, I crossed my fingers, hoping, waiting, praying. I shut my eyes.
Then I heard it; riiiiiip.
I opened my eyes, blinking as I followed Mr. Donnahue's hands, which held my torn paper, throw the scraps over the edge and into the trash...