Writing Article: home pagina Alone chapter 2

posted by ZekiYuro

On the first days,everything went alright.Kai phoned her every time and every where.He talked to her so much that she felt he was still at home.But sometimes she talked to him,and just realized that he was absent when she received no answers.
But until today,it was completely terrible.Yurin was bored,Kai had been going abroad for 1 week,and in her dictionary "1 week" didn't mean"a few days".No food any meer in the fridge,dirty clothes was full in the washing machine....and so many unconvenient things happened.Kai didn't phone her too.Despite of not wanting to say it,but Yurin had to admit that SHE WAS MISSING KAI.
Yeah,now Yurin felt so lonely.The house without Kai became very silent.Since they married,she had got used to being taken cared door him.Although always thinking that"I can take care of myself"but actually,she coundn't.
Holding the mobile phone,she typed his number and called Kai.
-Yurin-Kai answered 1 seconde later,with a hurrying voice.
-Kai,there is no food left,dirty clothes are full too...-She complained.
-Oh,so little wife,try to wait for me 1 dag more,tomorrow I will come back
-No,huhu,Kai,it is so lonely,I miss you,come back pleassse-Yurin wouldn't wait until tomorrow,she wanted Kai to come back now...
-Yurin,you miss me?-Yurin was a shy girl and never zei sweet sentences ,so he was really happy when she zei she missed him.
-Yeah,hix,Kai,come back pleasse....-Yurin zei with a long tone.
-I miss u too,but Yurin,due to work I can't come back now,just wait me 1 dag more
-GO HELL,don't come back to me!!!!!!!!!!-Yurin angrily shouted at the mobile and turned it off.

Kai felt so bored,his little wife had got angry.
"I'm sorry,wait for me,I will come back soon".

At home,Yurin put the angry look on the mobile.
"Kai,you are so brave,dare to love your work meer than me,go hell,get married with your work,don't need to come back"
Suddenly the phone rang,Yurin tiredly answered.
"Hello?"
"Ah,my little daughter,happy birthday to you!!!!!!Have Kai gegeven presents to u yet?"
"Mom?What birthday?"Yurin asked surprisedly.
"It's your birthday,why do u forget your birthday,where is Kai?"
"My birthday,ahhh,I don't forget it,Kai is buying food outside"
"Good,I thought he forgot your birthday,if it happened I would punish him"
"Oh yes,thank u ,I have to go now,Bye Mom"
Yurin looked at the calendar,-November 3-today was her birthday?But she completely forgot,and not only her forgot it.
"Kai,go hell again,you are so brave,dare to forget my birthday!!!!!!!!!!"
~TO be CONTINUED~

mangamoo01 Wow I love these, (I'm commenting quickly as I'm a fast reader! ^-^)

1

Slumber Of The Woodland (Part 3)

posted by zanhar1

The fragrance of scotch pine and blue net, spar is pungent in the air, amplified door the heat of late June. of so u think it is June. This place feels oddly void of time. u open your eyes to see a sun hazed over door stratus clouds. From all angles u spy familiar wooden structures.
You are back.

You sit up with your legs tucked under your bottom and bask in the estival air and all of the scents that waft within it. u furrow your brows, thinking that it is not as clean as before. Even so, the place hums with earthy energy. A stronger gust of wind picks up the hem of your overhemd, shirt and flutters...

1

Slumber Of The Woodland (Part 2)

posted by zanhar1

u wake up under a shady willow with a vague semblance of what u had dreamt.
You have dozed off again. And no wonder, there is a good book in your lap and your favoriete songs are still crackling through your earbuds. u ought to replace them, they are going bad. u pull them out and decide to listen to nature’s muziek instead. The soft gurgle of the pond coupled with catkins rustling against each other has always been your favoriete blend of sounds. Every now and again your ear is filled with the nearly undetectable buzz of a cicada humming past. u aren’t quite sure, but u think that...

Mask

posted by Epismatic

The Man With No Eyes Collection (3): Mask

When the curtain rises, all is forgiven.

I’ll brush it all off with a movie-star smile,

A genuine laugh, but my eyes must be hidden,

The truth they contain is considered too vile.

My voice is a song that will play through your ears,

And invite u to dance to the sound of my tune,

I take a bow, deeply, and drink in your cheers,

I’ll always remain here,

You’ll come see me soon.

A new dag is dawning,

“Quick, put on your mask!”

And hurry outside, meet the crowd.

“Where’ve u been?”

With fanciful antwoorden to all that u ask,

I’ll always wait here for...

2

January 31 dag Challenge

posted by WritingBookWorm

So, one of my New’s Years Resolutions this jaar it to write more. So, I decided to make this:

The goal is to write something every day.

Starting on the 31st of January, every dag there is a vague word, idea, object, question, statement of anything. u can take it anyway u want.

Then each dag u should write what it tells u too of something inspired door it. Whether it be a poem, a small scene, a character description, journal entry, short story of even just one really well crafted sentence.

Even if the prompt confuses you, of u have no ideas just write something! It’s a great exercise...

1

Ideas on Rewriting/Parodying Famous Stories

posted by glelsey

This guide was inspired door a vraag recently geplaatst door link on this spot. The user was looking for ways to put a twist on fairytales. I began to write an answer, but my answer soon developed into an article. So here it is.

Note that these aren't specifically for fairytales; they can be used on any old, well-known stories. After listing some ideas on how u can put a twist on such stories, I'll give a few examples of films that have done used one of meer of these ideas.

1. Swap the genders of the traditional characters.
Do any of the characters behave especially "typical" for their gender?...

Diana's wrath chapter 1

posted by floraisbest1

Ms. Farogonda asked for the winx to come down to her office. when the winx reached ms. farogonda's office she told them that diana wants to speak wth one of you. she didnt tell me who but she told me to pick two extras. ms. farogonda can i go, bloom asked her. flora will be going along with musa and aisha ms farogonda told them. hmph bloom pouted, can we at least go with them bloom zei quikly. fine all of u girls can go and im bringing the specialist. ok stella zei in a sing song voice. lets go zei the winx. they met the RF boys outside and went in the owl. winx: WINX BELIEVIX
AT THE amazone, amazon
flora: let's get going
aisha: see ya winx
bloom: meet back here in an uur k
ok bloom musa said
( diana appears in front of them)
GUARDS take them away
what??!
(to be continued)

1

Short horror story

posted by LunaNotLoony

Anna flicked the T.V from channel to channel, bored: there was nothing worth watching. Sighing, she left the news on and flopped back on the sofa, not really intending to listen.
'The war in Iraq-.'
'Oh no, u don't,' Anna muttered, grabbing the remote. Her Dad had joined the army after her Mum had died of an overdose. Anna didn't really blame him, she'd have got out of the house as fast as possible too if she was an adult. The whole house was contaminated with the memories of Mum, of her laugh, of her accident... suicide... whatever it was. Even so, Anna missed Dad like it was painful. She'd...

1

Talking to the Moon (Fanfic)

posted by Ichigo127

An Amuto one-shot
hope u enjoy!
‘You know, Amu…,’ he was sitting there again, on the ledge of the window, staring wistfully outside. ‘All of them think you’re gone. But I know better. u are alive, I know it. Somewhere out there, you’re thinking about me too, aren’t you?’
He was talking again, talking to the moon. ‘You’ll never admit it but u have already fallen for me,’ he smirked at the moon. No, not the moon. It was Amu’s blushing face that he saw and it was her voice that he heard, ‘Shut up!’ he didn’t know it was the echo of his memories because he thought...

The Guardian of Zamari chapter 1

posted by ITF

A shadowy figure silently brushed the silken curtains aside as she slipped through the open window and stepped into the dark chamber. Passing a small tafel, tabel and a bed, the vos, fox quickly headed towards a cabinet that stood against the far wall.
Beaded necklaces hung above a oval mirror that was set in the center. Her eyes rested on a miniature strongbox half hidden behind the mirror.
Paying no heed to the deafening clatter coming from the oblivious guest downstairs, she skillfully picked the tiny lock and raised the lid. It was hard to tell what was what in the darkness, so she emptied it into...

5

Tears (my Poem)

posted by Ichigo127

Yo! this is the first poem i wrote with a sane mind xD do tell me if u like it =)

Tears,
a combination of helplessness and anger,
a combination of joy and gratitude.
what different meanings it holds!
sometimes of love,
sometimes of hate.
with what different feelings we cry!
but those tears are the same.
they dwell inside the eye,
ready to attack,
the peace of our heart.
to flood the face,
with undoubted love and care,
with undoubted anger and hate,
with undoubted pain and despair.
pain? yes, and despair too!
the breakdown of our heart,
the dawn of the truth,
leading to flood the face,
with our sentiments undoubted.

2

How to pretend that u are a writer.

posted by australia-101

Act like you're not
okay when u are and
that u are when you're
not. Run barefoot in
the snow. Stand out
in the rain for an hour
and think about anything
and everything u can.

Fall in love with
riddles and things that
aren't real and the
way some stars
shine. Cry when
you realize that life is
just one big sham and write
one hundred cliché poems
about it, and then write one
that u actually mean.

Use profanity. Be the
one fucking introvert
in a room full of
extroverts and scream
shit just for the fun of
it. slikken every goddamn
metaphor u ever dreamed
of and write them down
with your own blood.

Eulogize...

"The Guide" What do u thing of the beginning of the book?

posted by kid_symmetry

Hi Everyone!
I've been working on a book for a while now. Im not gona post all of it at the same time, but I Will post the Prologue. Please tell me what u think! I invite constructive criticism to make it better! THX!

Prologue
“Tanya! I don’t understand what’s so different about this kid! He’s done nothing to make me see him as special!” Tanya glowered at her obnoxious boyfriend. “Don’t u see?” She zei icily, “He isn’t like us!” Virgil and Tanya looked at there new child. He wiggled around in his kinderbedje, wieg and giggled happily. The child crabbed...

1

Was It All Worth It? (a poem)

posted by Rae-Ash

What do u want from me?
A tortured body?
A broken soul?

What do u expect to happen?
As u kick me down
As u rip me apart

Tell Me!!!!!!!!!!

What do u want to happen?
As I close my eyes
And take my last breath

I zei I would stay
Till I took my last moment
But now I'm leaving
A victim no more

I lived with your love
The love u showed with your fist
I died because of that love
Your love was only Hate

Now someone else will take my place
Will live with your kind of love
Now someone else will receive your lies
Will know your treachery

What did I expect?
That you'd change?
That you'd learn to love?

What did I ever...

Daydreamer: Sapphire's Story: Chapter 1

posted by EmilyMJFan910

One afternoon, Sapphire sat in her room, on her bed, quietly daydreaming with her headphones in. Her eyes were glazed over, and she was in her own magical world.
Sapphire entered the sparkling cave in the middle of the forest. Her blue dress was tattered, and her misty roze fairy wings were damp from the moist, warm air. But she was feeling fine.
Sapphire took a few steps into the sparkling cave. It was made entirely of ice and crystal. Trickling water could be heard as miniature streams fell continuously from the ceiling. Icy stalagmites stood firmly in the cold crystal floor. Icicles hung from...

My talk with the moon

posted by Attirox2

The air was still as if it were holding its breathe waiting for me as I approached the ledge. I could feel myself pushing back tears as I clutched the fragile locket in my hands; I traced its dainty designs with my finger. "So mom and dad are getting the divorce after all. I guess u were right E. I don't know why I ever doubted u about that one I mean it was obvious! I guess I tried to block it out like what happened......" I muttered looking up at the milky white moon. It seemed to look down at me with sympathetic beams of light. My hands gripped the marble ledge tighter. "Eliza it's been...

A Memory of oranje (a poem)

posted by Rae-Ash

It’s the color of you
u always wore it
It’s the color we shared
As we hid from them

With it we showed our true selves,
Though no one cared
Our oranje book bags
Were our shields from some of the pain

We protected each other
But it wasn’t enough
We were like two oranje crayons
When everyone else was green

Then u left me alone,
All I had was our color orange
As they hit me
I took peace in knowing
u were in the oranje field in the sky
u always zei was there.

The oranje of the sun set
Is your smile
Even though u left too soon

Orange…

Now it’s my color
My way of remembering you
Now I am the lone oranje in the rainbow
Without u here

I protect my own
Though I wish u were here

Now oranje is my color
A color for your bravery
A color for my survival

oranje will forever be our color
Even though death took u away

Forever oranje for you,
Sweet Cassidy.

3

My Bullied Life: Max Lee Moore's About Me

posted by iHelloUniverse

Hello to the cold world, I was named Max Lee Moore door the parents who absolutely despise me. I am sixteen years old at the moment, will be turning seventeen on June 27th. But who gives a crud? u know what I receive for my birthday every year? For how old I am, like sixteen. I get sixteen whips from a belt. My dad doesn't live with me anymore to whip me, so there's my mother. She gets a kick out of every whip. It seems to make her ecstatic. Each whip equals to one of her evil laughs. She whips me any chance she wants to. It pains me so much that I'm surprised I haven't committed suicide yet....

2

Is Teachnology taking over our lives?

posted by nimone

I don't know about other people, but I've began to notice that we are relying on teachnology way too much!

Yes this vraag has been suggested to most of us before (most commonly door our parents). But this time it's different. It is normal for parents to think that teenagers are obsessed with our I-pods, i-phones, laptops of other. This is normal because our parents didn't have things like this when they were younger.

Most adults where I live including my parents didn't have the internet growing up. They all had to either go to the librery for information of have a collection of encyclopidias...

1

Mana and the Pet, Chapter 1

posted by queenpalm

Prologue
Mana was not your normal girl. Her favoriete color was grey. She called all her teachers door their first names. Mana was not on the populair side, nor the unpopular side. She had her own ways, her own ways for everything.
Especially pets...

Chapter One
I sighed and plopped down on my bed with my laptop. After a long, hard dag of school, nothing was better than writing an essay, not! Such mean teachers!
Looking around, I try to find an animal to do the meld on. All I need to do is describe the animal's habitat, eating habits, and appearance. I kept looking. Wow, hard decision. I love being...

Forever in my hart-, hart

posted by teamsalvatore98

Characters (just so nobody gets confused):
Keigo Shokuo- main character (Name meaning: roughly Prince's bodyguard)
Mikoto Kyuuketsuki- vampire prince/ eventually becomes Keigo's best friend and lover (NM: roughly prince vampire)
Blood Brothers/BB- this name is misleading because of the "blood" part, but they're actually a group of highly trained assassins who are hired to kill Mikoto. They'll come up in conversations.
Geretsu Kyuuketsuki- Mikoto's grandmother; retired vampire queen (NM: Mean Vampire)
Riaru Kyuuketsuki- Mikoto's real mother [deceased] (NM: Real Vampire)
Katanashi Kyuuketsuki- Mikoto's...