Writing Article: home pagina Alone chapter 2

posted by ZekiYuro

On the first days,everything went alright.Kai phoned her every time and every where.He talked to her so much that she felt he was still at home.But sometimes she talked to him,and just realized that he was absent when she received no answers.
But until today,it was completely terrible.Yurin was bored,Kai had been going abroad for 1 week,and in her dictionary "1 week" didn't mean"a few days".No food any meer in the fridge,dirty clothes was full in the washing machine....and so many unconvenient things happened.Kai didn't phone her too.Despite of not wanting to say it,but Yurin had to admit that SHE WAS MISSING KAI.
Yeah,now Yurin felt so lonely.The house without Kai became very silent.Since they married,she had got used to being taken cared door him.Although always thinking that"I can take care of myself"but actually,she coundn't.
Holding the mobile phone,she typed his number and called Kai.
-Yurin-Kai answered 1 seconde later,with a hurrying voice.
-Kai,there is no food left,dirty clothes are full too...-She complained.
-Oh,so little wife,try to wait for me 1 dag more,tomorrow I will come back
-No,huhu,Kai,it is so lonely,I miss you,come back pleassse-Yurin wouldn't wait until tomorrow,she wanted Kai to come back now...
-Yurin,you miss me?-Yurin was a shy girl and never zei sweet sentences ,so he was really happy when she zei she missed him.
-Yeah,hix,Kai,come back pleasse....-Yurin zei with a long tone.
-I miss u too,but Yurin,due to work I can't come back now,just wait me 1 dag more
-GO HELL,don't come back to me!!!!!!!!!!-Yurin angrily shouted at the mobile and turned it off.

Kai felt so bored,his little wife had got angry.
"I'm sorry,wait for me,I will come back soon".

At home,Yurin put the angry look on the mobile.
"Kai,you are so brave,dare to love your work meer than me,go hell,get married with your work,don't need to come back"
Suddenly the phone rang,Yurin tiredly answered.
"Hello?"
"Ah,my little daughter,happy birthday to you!!!!!!Have Kai gegeven presents to u yet?"
"Mom?What birthday?"Yurin asked surprisedly.
"It's your birthday,why do u forget your birthday,where is Kai?"
"My birthday,ahhh,I don't forget it,Kai is buying food outside"
"Good,I thought he forgot your birthday,if it happened I would punish him"
"Oh yes,thank u ,I have to go now,Bye Mom"
Yurin looked at the calendar,-November 3-today was her birthday?But she completely forgot,and not only her forgot it.
"Kai,go hell again,you are so brave,dare to forget my birthday!!!!!!!!!!"
~TO be CONTINUED~

mangamoo01 Wow I love these, (I'm commenting quickly as I'm a fast reader! ^-^)

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Boom Boom Clap

posted by NormalcyIsDead

Boom boom clap
Bounce your head, snap
To the classic, to the rap

Step ball change
Basic with a buck
Pleay, tour jete
Bounce your head to the rock

One two three,
Two two three,
Count along with your head
Mosh with the beat

Hop shuffle hop back
Twirl your arms, bend your back
Do the thingamajiggie
Wear out your taps

Breathe it in, breathe it out
Reach for the sky, dance on the ground
Flitter here, gallop there
Lose yourself anywhere

Flow with the music
Feel it in your veins
As u bounce your head, snap
Boom boom clap

Forbidden Love (Epilogue)

posted by DxCFan123

Third Person POV
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Sadao walked up to God and asked him if he was eligible to be in Heaven. God just simply nodded his head. Sadao walked through the large golden gates and found himself walking through his town he lived in when he was alive. He found his way to his house, and swung open the door. Everything was how it was before. He started crying, remembering the memories he had with Kat here. He heard crying coming from his room, so he opened the door and saw a blonde girl curled up in the corner of his room, sobbing.

"K-K-Kat?" he managed to stutter out. The blonde looked...

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posted by dragonwriter

As light fades the brightest of souls can even be turned to do the darkest of things. As time time pushes vooruit, voorwaarts the mind and body of an individual changes for either good of bad. the decisions they make and the things they do will stick with them forever. I was told this many years geleden door a wise old man that fortold my future. He zei "the one with the dragon soul is not alone in the world he knows." After being told this it left me nothing but confused but i had a feeling that it wouldn't be the last time i heard of it.

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God's Lost Child 2

posted by StarsGoBlue

God's Lost Child
Chapter 2: An Indefinite Prisoner Of War

"Unbelievable! Un-fucking-believable."
A nerdy blonde cussed as he stormed through the upper deck of Sovereign, his hands raised above his head in protest.
"Oh, let's put Baird in charge of the rookie! Since he's busy anyway. Let's just give him meer shit to do, that's easier on us!"
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The Writer's Block: Starting a Story and Character Develpment

posted by dragonsmemory

In this series of guides, I'll be tonen u the best techniques for writing your story. These are tried-and-true techniques, and they work.
First up: characters. Every story has characters. We all know that. But what u may not realize is that some portions of a character need not be mentioned. Why spend three pages on your character's dimples if they have nothing to do with the plot? In order to keep your readers hooked, u have to yourself to things that are involved with the plot.
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The Stuffed Animal

posted by PhoenixRoyale

This is another poem that I have written. It was inspired door some commentaren about stuffed animals/plushies on Youtube being people's friends. Enjoy.
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The Stuffed Animal.
To some, they are stupid.
They are useless.
They are disgusting little balls of fluff.

Those people think that it's necessary
to pick on the innocence of others
for having a collection of their own.
They poke fun, they tease, they even insult.

They target that person's age.
Sometimes even their gender.
They think they need to grow up.
They think these fluffy plushies are meant for babies.

But to those innocent people,
the ones who are quite...

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La parte prohibida del bosque

posted by shenelopefan

La parte prohibida del parque

"La depresión es la que guía, la alegría es la que llega"

En la ciudad dónde yo vivía de niña, había un parque en dónde siempre pasaba las tardes con mis amigos. Éramos un grupito de niñas y niños que nos juntábamos a jugar en ronda, cantábamos canciones que no tenían sentido (casi nuestro propio idioma, de hecho) y recorríamos todo el parque jugando a las escondidillas.

Bueno, no todo el parque porque había una a la que los adultos no les gustaba que vayamos. Era un sector tan lleno de árboles que, desde afuera parecía una selva en medio de un parque...

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ELF; Part 3

posted by alejpatv

The light of the brand faded as I got further into the forest. I jumped over roots and ducked under branches that threatened to whip my face. I ran as hard as I could. To escape, I had to keep my sister veilig and fulfill the wish of the village chief. My tears already used and dried, but the pain in my hart-, hart still wouldn’t leave. An emptiness had taken hold where my safety and secure feelings had once been.
On the edges of my vision, I saw a flash. I skidded to a stop and looked to where I thought I had seen it. There was a clearing where the full...

Writermind: A Glimpse of My Writing Technique

posted by dragonsmemory

The room is silent, as always. Nothing can be heard, aside from the soft rasp of pencil on paper. Words take form, joining various thoughts into one whole. On the outside, nothing is different from the average writer. To find what sets me apart, we must look deeper than the surface.
Inside my mind, afbeeldingen and ideas race about, sometimes colliding, sometimes not. This whirlwind is composed of everything I know, read, seen, heard, of thought of. It is here that my greatest works begin to form.
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Cursed angel

posted by Lord_Anubis

If u mates like it, comment, I'll make meer if anyone notices it =3

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''Oi, u guys! What are u doin'?!'' screamed a brown haired boy from the street.
''Mind your own business and go back under your momma's skirt, of you'll get some too!'' replied the tallest boy on playground, probably the leader of the rest 4 boys.
5 of them were teasing one small boy, taking away from him candies and ruining his game on playground. The brown haired boy frowned with his black eyes and started walking towards them.
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posted by dragonsmemory

The Eden Chronicles is the fantasy series I am currently working on. As the series is in progress, I decided to add a club here, allowing you, Reader, to tell me your thoughts.
In writing the series, I decided to document the entire history of Eden. I called this place Eden because it is where the spirits of dead animals and plants are taken. No humanspirit has ever been pure enough to come here. Eden is a true paradise.
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posted by Kimi4312

Chapter 3: Here It Goes Again.
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posted by Kimi4312

Chapter 1: Don't Change Me.
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The Machinist guild. A short story door dexisawesome.

posted by dexisawesome

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posted by DarrenGruch

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4 days after the funeral for my family.... I became Emo. But the dag my Family died, something changed within me..... something good went rotten.
My Grandpa see's it, but ignores my pain and anger... only if that drunk driver that hit us was sober and never... spun out of control. Some dag I hope his hart-, hart gives out and he dies in jail.

Does any one feel the same?

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posted by noahnstar1616

"Are okay, V?" Francine was checking me for bruises.

"I'm fine."

"We're so telling the principal." Zoey grabbed my arm.

"No, it's okay. She didn't hurt me." I rubbed my arm where Mercury dug her nails in. She didn't leave permanent marks.

"What happened?" They both waited for my response.

I told them how Mercury knew that I felt something when Cameron was visiting me in the hospital. How she knew I was trying to get him back. How I saw her eyes glowing red, like a sea witch's eyes when angry.

"You know what this means, right?" Francine and I waited for Zoey's answer. "That Mercury is the sea witch...

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Invasion-Chapter 1. "The Rebellion begins."

posted by dexisawesome

Jed was a part of the Rebellion against the Syndicate of Alien Beings (S.A.B.). of like most enslaved races call them, the Monsters. In 2067, S.A.B arrived on Earth in zoek of fuel sources for their machines, not expecting to find a whole planet that has been living for centuries unconquered. Caught unexpected, the S.A.B. slowly amassed their forces, while countries all across world united. North Korea, Russia, China, all those countries that were on the opposing sides during all the wars, united alongside all the other countries. With the whole world united, the U.W.O. (United World Order)formed...

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posted by DxCFan123

"Oh, hallo Sam!" I zei as I found her in the hall while going to lunch. "How are you? u seem upset. Something wrong?" I said. The edges of my rok floated up as I walked. Marie's jewelery jingled along my neck, ears, wrists and fingers. It really hurt to get my ears pierced, but the earrings are so beautiful!

"Nothing's wrong" she murmured and pulled her arms closer to her chest. She looked away from me, at the floor. "Ah, come on! Something's gotta be wrong! Trust me! I know! One time, my cousin, Valeria, accidently fell off her carriage and twisted her ankle. But, still, she told us she...

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posted by noahnstar1616

My hart-, hart rate increased, causing my hart-, hart monitor to start beeping erratically. Not at the sight of Cameron, but at the sight of Mercury.

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I kept my eyes on Mercury. "What's she doing here?"

"You should be greatful that I came to see you", Mercury said.

"Mercury..." Cameron turned to face me. "She drove me here."

"After he hit you, the police too his car away", Mercury said, grabbing my televisie vision remote and changing the channel.

"Hey!"

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posted by dexisawesome

Jed was running. Running from a dark figure a few feet behind. "You will never escape!", the dark figure from behind yelled. "yes I will", he thought. He ran and ran, until he reached the dark grey building in the middle of the field. He ran inside and slammed the iron door shut. A few bangs came from the other side, but they subsided quickly. He ran down the hidden staircase that was under a krat in the small shack. He reached the bottom, and passed through the small passageway until he came to another door. He opened and entered the dimly lit room. Five other people were sitting around some...