Writing Article: I need u chapter 2

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posted by hailieywithin

I glanced at my digital watch. 7:48. Exactly 2 hours geleden Emily my girlfriend of 1 jaar broke up with me right as I was going to purpose. Occasionally Darla the sexy girl behind me would talk to me about collage. She was going to learn about getting a PHD in Physics. Darla was actually quite smart. She had a letters to 8 major collages. Then she would ask about my life. My dad died when I was 6 and my mom lost custody of me when I was 12. I quit daydreaming and prepared my things to get off at the nearest motel. We would take off again tomorrow. At about 5 minuets from a Red Inn Motel. As we slowed down into the parking lot the driver shouted loudly. "attention! There are 3 hotels in the area tomorrow I'll go door each at 9:27 okay now all for Red Inn Motel get off now." I stood up as Darla did too. "hey"Darla smiled. "hey" I zei back. Inside Darla and I choose rooms. Darlas face became white. I looked at her. "what's wrong". I zei to her paying for my room. "M-m-my dumbass boyfriend forgot money". Oh no. Boyfriend. "I-I'll pay for you"I zei to her. She smiled widely and hugged me "thanks Gage!" she zei I smiled back "don't mention it". Then the man interrupted. "um I'm sorry but we have no rooms avaliable at this point." Darla sighed. "shes with me" I said. The cashier nodded. Our room was cold. Inside it chilled me to the bones. Then a loud thump and the heater instantly erupted on. Soon I was content. Mostly because there was one bed. "call it"Darla smiled. I laughed at her. That night I slept on a windowsill cushion. It was actually very comfortable. But all night I was texting my girl-friend Alisha Summers. I knew her from highschool. She was going to datum me before I met Emily. Emily. Emily. Emily. My HTC phone zei 9:03. There was a vibration. My phone zei Ali S. The text was "Gage stop blamin uself for Emily leavin" I texted back to her "ik Ali but I g2g later". I didn't get another text back. Alisha had long chesnut hair and green eyes. Beside me Darla tossed and turned. Looked like a bad dream.

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ImDyingUrNotHA Again edit & "She was going to learn about getting a PHD in Physics." doesn't make sense, I think you mean "She was aiming to get a PHD in Physics. But other than that, great. ^_^

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A Short story

posted by coolie

“Pump! Pump!” went my pounding hart-, hart as I trembled across the deserted hallway of school. As I looked around in this hall of nothingness, I realized that I was the fist person here. However, I had the feeling that I was being watched, and followed. It was not a good feeling
I didn’t mind getting to school early because I always liked watching the other kids scatter out on the playground one door one, and watching them kom bij different games. I was too afraid to play the games that the other boys played. Football and their aggressive chasing games just seemed dangerous, and I couldn’t stand...

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The Edge of Mental Health

posted by sawfan13

To travel the roads less traveled by, to travel in the paths of The Great Electric Poet, as the lizards kiss your feet, rainbows giving u rides on their magnificent layers of light and color, to love everything, and trip out on every paddestoel on the ground. I would love that to be my life, Alice in Wonderland stoner version style. Alas, as an insane creature on God's most gorgeous green Earth, society and the laws my freedom. Yet, I do manage to find a way to release myself from these chains. For I am Kira Lucille Way, and I'm on the edge of mental health.

It's the jaar 1966. A year...

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You'll Thank Me Later

posted by para-scence

This is a dream I had. Just wanted to get it out of my head. XP

The three of us laughed; my vrienden and I. It was a fun Friday night, with the parents home, and sister sleeping over at a friend's house. Lydia and Alli were over, just having a good time. We sat in the family room, with only those room lights on, and the TV on.

Then from outside, there was a strange sound. We all froze.

"What was that...?" Lydia asked. Neither Alli of me spoke. We were all frozen in fear.

"Come with me, u guys," I said, standing up slowly. We slowly went into the kitchen, and then the living room, looking out...

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Fight Like A Girl

posted by para-scence

Inspired door the titel from Emilie Autumn's upcoming album, "Fight Like A Girl." ;)

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She was an innocent little girl, and that was their first mistake. That first thought.

"This is going to be easy," they'd thought. Yet, another mistake. The two men descended down the sidewalk casually, coming in her direction. She crossed the road, and walked on the other side. They two men stopped. She was smart...

They walked a little meer on the sidewalk, then crossed the road, now walking behind her. They made sure their footsteps weren't heard on the near empty street.

She began walking faster, feeling...

Wands and Spells: Chapter 6

posted by StarWarsFan7

Angel's POV

All of a sudden the lights disappear as do our wands. I hope they were placed somewhere safe. Rosella, Tyler and I arrive in front of some sparkling pool of water. "Uhh...Tyler, what the heck are we doing here?" I vraag my rebel brother. "I don't know! I swear we were supposed to be with the Goddess of the Oracle!" Tyler exclaims. u know, I totally expected something like this to happen from Rosella. But, since Tyler did it, it's pretty surprising to me! "Well, the way I see it, there's no Goddess here!" Rosella yells at the top, boven of her lungs. I agree with my younger sister for...

meer Than This Ch. 23

posted by para-scence

We didn't tell mine of Blake's family about the pregnancy. I didn't want anyone to feel sorry for us if we had another miscarriage. I was really excited, but I was also absolutely terrified. And since I couldn't manage to keep myself calm, Blake insisted that I keep taking my medication throughout the pregnancy.

I took Hera to her first AA meeting. I promised not to tell Dad of Kara, even though I knew I probably should. We agreed we only tell them if she kept drinking; and I warned her if she lied to me, I would eventually find out and kill her. She didn't really talk in the meeting, which...

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meer Than This Ch. 8

posted by para-scence

I was able to avoid Drew for the rest of the school week because of work. He wasn't happy about it, but there wasn't much he could do; I had to work. I'd taken the last nonconvulsant pill a couple days ago. This worried me; maybe if I could manage to stay calm and not get too worked up, I wouldn't have any major seizures. Every once in a while, when I'm not on medication, I can have absence seizures; those aren't so bad, but it's still not fun.

Blake asked if I was free on Saturday. I guess I could avoid Drew for another day. He zei he'd pick me up at my house at noon.

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On Saturday, I was...

The Falling Angels

posted by bamagirl5899

Alex's pov

I hate Chicago busy all the time and easy to get mugged like right now.The guy was chasing me a gun pointed I couldnt toon what I was just around the cornor and wham. I felt a bullet hit me.the bullet was from a .44 magnuim I had one like it in my room at home pagina my friend accidently shot me with it and i knew what the bullet felt like.It hit me in my right shoulder damaging my wing.*no escape* I thought. I finally turned the corner to a dead end.I baked against the wall.Then my vrienden jumped from the roof tops and surrounded me.I got of the uithangbord and kicked the gun outta his hand and...

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Nothing meer Ch. 10

posted by para-scence

Things were better after that. It was... boring I guess. But being bored is better than being raped. I walked for hours upon hours, still seeming to get nowhere. I was starting to believe I was truly lost. My stomach felt like it was starting to digest itself, which I hoped it wasn't, but I wouldn't be surprised. The only time I had something to drink was when it rained. I'd walk down the road, with my mouth open at the sky like a complete idiot. It worked a little though, and I kept myself from dehydrating.

It was three whole days before I got close to home. But I was so hungry and tired and...

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Save Me Epilogue

posted by para-scence

1 jaar later...

I ran my hand through my hair, and took a deep breath. After a few meer breaths, I finally got the courage to knock on the door. There were some shouts over who should get the door, and I smiled a little. A couple minuten later I heard the deadbolt unlock, and the door opened. I smiled shyly.

"Alessa?" he asked. Tears of joy began their journey down my face and I nodded, smiling hugely. Iwas pulled into a giant hug, and lifted me off my feet..

"Micah!" I shouted. He set me off the ground looked me over, and chuckled.

"You haven't changed a bit!" he smiled.

"I wish I could say the...

Prologue to a story I'm writing. Thoughts?

posted by Me_Iz_Here

I have no idea what it's called yet. I would post this in antwoorden but it's a little long. It's about a girl named Kathryn who is murdered and her ghost starts following around a girl named Ambyr (name subject to change, I'm just using it for now). This is the prologue:

PROLOGUE
She got up immediately after she tripped, mentally yelling at herself for not paying attention. She ran, her dark brown, almost black, hair bouncing. Tripping had let whoever was chasing her catch up a little. Faster, faster! She thought hard to herself. But she had been running for a long time. Imagine the person behind...

Flawed Wings

posted by Insight357

    A raven flew up to me. I stayed up in my tree, my gear tampering with my balance. It was plenty bad on its own. It didn’t need help. I sighed, and jumped down from the boom as I heard my name. No, I didn’t need anyone to know my secret. Not her, not yet.

    I awoke to the beeping of my alarm. It was a cold December morning. I would love winter, if it just wasn’t so cold.
    I ran over to the window. Of course, the weather channel lied again. Last night they predicted it would snow, but did it? No....

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Who Am I? Ch.2

posted by itchygum

I glanced around the schoolyard, seeing plenty of familiar faces. Behind the trees, I saw Raegan's black curls. "Raegan!" I called just loud enough for her to hear. I watched her hazel eyes scan the schoolyard. when her eyes met me, she smiled, reveling her braces and waved to me to come over. I couldn't help but smile back. We'd been vrienden since first grade, but we'd been drifting apart. Out of the corner of my eye, I saw Brooke roll her eyes at Raegan. They never did get along.
I walked to the trees, carefully maneuvering around the dirt so my new converses wouldn't get ruined. "Hey, Ana,"...

Psychoanalysis: Chapter 22

posted by Insight357

I felt stiff, and I stretched. I slowly opened my eyes; I was in Alexander’s bedroom. I was fully clothed, that was a good sign. I laid flat on my back.
    “Yes, I found him on the street,” Alexander must’ve been on the phone. Was he talking about me? There was a pause.
    “He was crying, and I brought him back here. He got into a bad fight with Grey. She kicked him out,” great a recap.
    “Okay, I will. Goodbye Dr. Anozi,” Alexander hung up the phone. He was talking to Dr. Anozi. I felt comforted door the fact that...

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Chapters 7 and 8 of my book-Flame Boy-

posted by coolie

Chapter 7

The Front Desk

Jason walked up to the front desk. The front bureau manager was asleep, with his head facing the back wall. It seemed as if there were one million pictures and folders scattered along his desk. Right on his lap was the goud coin Jason had gegeven him.
Jason reached for it. He was just about to lift it up, when the front bureau manager rotated his head in a perfect cirkel with the front of his body facing the opposite direction. His facial expression and face was completely different. He wasn’t a human. He was a monster. His red eyes were not exactly eyes. They were meer like...

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Takaya Dreams chapter 1

posted by Skitty_Love

"Takaya's grades have been decreasing, there is a chance she may not make high school volgende year.." Ms. Mitsuba says calmly to my mother. "Takaya! Is this true? Why didn't u tell me u were failing school?" She snaps at me, who was sitting volgende to her on the cushioned chairs placed across the marble desk. I silently shrug, looking down at the patterned carpet. "Tell me!" She continues to order. "I just-" "Your father is gonna be furious!" My mom cuts me off of my sentence. Thats when I had snapped. "Quit talking! Let go of my now!" I cry, my voice thundering. Ms. Mitsuba grabs my wrist,...

Just something I tweaked at for a little while....criticism please!

posted by dramarama

Masquerade

Brightly colored masks
Lined up on the wall.
Waiting to take part
In the masquerade ball.
Smoothly shaped plastic
Fitted to flesh,
Each of their disguises
Much like the rest.
Hiding the scars,
Unsightly disfigurements,
Ways they are marred,
Ways they are different.
Each of them has one,
Hiding the truth,
Things that are ugly,
Battles of youth.
Smothering plastic
Hinders my breath,
Tightly laced ribbon
Cuts into my head.
"Just take it off"
The insistent voice says.
"Then u could breath.
You'd be free again.
Remember the days
When life was so simple.
The whole world was good,
And yours soft and simple.
Those...

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Unforgivable Ch. 1

posted by para-scence

My whole body was trembling. I sat up in my bed, the covers everywhere and messed up. My hart-, hart was pounding and there was a ringing noise in my ears. I scanned the room for him, and even when I saw he wasn't here, I still couldn't release my fears.

I had been raped.

Trying to keep calm, I grabbed my clothes off the floor, my overhemd, shirt had a rip in it, so I grabbed another overhemd, shirt from my closet. I ran a brush through my hair, getting out all the knots. Then I decided I couldn't live with myself this way and decided to take a shower. I turned the water on to blistering hot, and I scrubbed my entire...

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"i will not marry u " introduction

posted by peaceanddisney

this is my first story that i made on here i'm still decideing if i want to make meer of this book of not i am still decideing on a tittle name.please do not hesitate to criticize i need it.thank u <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 I Taylor Ann Smith was not happy.I was very mad.How dare them! i thought angrily to myself.how dare them decide who i marry!.this all happened when i came down for breakfast."Good morning mother,good morning farther."i zei happily.Mother was cooking eggs and geroosterd brood, toast while father was waiting."Hello darling"said Mother cheerfully as she sat a plate of eggs and geroosterd brood, toast in front of me."good morning taylor" farther answered. his plate."what's happening today?"i asked still eating."well.. mom started looked unconfertable...we decided who u were to marry"."What!" i cried almost chocking on my food.

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Life Goes On Part 5

posted by MissMuffin38

Marissa opened her eyes, half asleep, half awake. It was 8 o’clock in the morning and she felt hungry. She clambered out of bed, rubbing her eyes so she could focus on things properly. Olivia was already out of her bed, and it seemed like she was downstairs. Marissa walked down the stairs to find her, rubbing her eyes once again. As she entered the kitchen, she saw Olivia sitting on one of the wooden chairs, placed around the table. As she walked over, Olivia looked up, and gave her a weak smile. Marissa could tell something was wrong. “Where’s everyone else?” Marissa asked, puzzled....