Writing Article: I need u chapter 2

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posted by hailieywithin

I glanced at my digital watch. 7:48. Exactly 2 hours geleden Emily my girlfriend of 1 jaar broke up with me right as I was going to purpose. Occasionally Darla the sexy girl behind me would talk to me about collage. She was going to learn about getting a PHD in Physics. Darla was actually quite smart. She had a letters to 8 major collages. Then she would ask about my life. My dad died when I was 6 and my mom lost custody of me when I was 12. I quit daydreaming and prepared my things to get off at the nearest motel. We would take off again tomorrow. At about 5 minuets from a Red Inn Motel. As we slowed down into the parking lot the driver shouted loudly. "attention! There are 3 hotels in the area tomorrow I'll go door each at 9:27 okay now all for Red Inn Motel get off now." I stood up as Darla did too. "hey"Darla smiled. "hey" I zei back. Inside Darla and I choose rooms. Darlas face became white. I looked at her. "what's wrong". I zei to her paying for my room. "M-m-my dumbass boyfriend forgot money". Oh no. Boyfriend. "I-I'll pay for you"I zei to her. She smiled widely and hugged me "thanks Gage!" she zei I smiled back "don't mention it". Then the man interrupted. "um I'm sorry but we have no rooms avaliable at this point." Darla sighed. "shes with me" I said. The cashier nodded. Our room was cold. Inside it chilled me to the bones. Then a loud thump and the heater instantly erupted on. Soon I was content. Mostly because there was one bed. "call it"Darla smiled. I laughed at her. That night I slept on a windowsill cushion. It was actually very comfortable. But all night I was texting my girl-friend Alisha Summers. I knew her from highschool. She was going to datum me before I met Emily. Emily. Emily. Emily. My HTC phone zei 9:03. There was a vibration. My phone zei Ali S. The text was "Gage stop blamin uself for Emily leavin" I texted back to her "ik Ali but I g2g later". I didn't get another text back. Alisha had long chesnut hair and green eyes. Beside me Darla tossed and turned. Looked like a bad dream.

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tigerseye43 i love it please write more

hailieywithin I totally am

ImDyingUrNotHA Again edit & "She was going to learn about getting a PHD in Physics." doesn't make sense, I think you mean "She was aiming to get a PHD in Physics. But other than that, great. ^_^

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Daddy

posted by Sweet_Pants

A/N: Ok, this is just a short, about 500 word drabble I came up with. It's about 7-year-old Alice and her drunk derpressed father, called, of course, 'Daddy'. It's not much, but I though I'd post it. Constructive critisizm is welcome.

Please rate and comment.
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The smell of his breath came off in waves of grief and alcohol mixed into what could be described as inner turmoil. Although Alice barely gave a thought to the bottle of whiskey in his hand, as she was meer preoccupied with not throwing up from the smell of her father she should have gotten...

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Wanting Someone - Chapter Five

posted by Lindy52

Chapter Five

When Jamie stared and was speechless the moment she saw the handsome man in the doorway, that man looked at her for a few seconden and still holding the soccer ball, he zei to her with that grin of his, “So, this really your ball?” In return, Jamie didn’t answered his question, she just kept looking at him and figuring out what her mother was doing, Mac decided to be the person who will do the talking and from below, she looked up to the man and zei to him, “Yeah, u are holding my ball!”

After hearing that, the man looked down at Mac and when he squatted down to Mac’s...

Trapped in my own time chapter 6

posted by dragonrider

"Uh Starr aren't u going to take me back to my own time?" Elliot asks
I glance at him "No the time travel part broke when I turned it off besides didn't u want to stay here?" I ask
Elliot looks down "Not really but isn't there other time machines?"
"Yeah but they can't get ahold of them so they are going after me. It's good and bad. It's bad because now I can't get u back to your own time. It's good because now they can't do those sick experiments So yeah u and I my friend are trapped in my own time," I say
"Hey do u think that if anybody is reading this they would laugh because...

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Spirit Of Stone part 3

posted by TDIlover226

Part 3
Eddie woke up on a sky scraper roof top. It was raining and he couldn't remember how he had gotten there. He was still tired, and dripping wet, but he didn't care, he curled up and went to sleep again.

"Good morning sleepy head!" Eddie woke up to see a mutant, that looked like an angel, standing over him. "Where am I?" he said. "On the top, boven of a building, can't ya tell!" another voice zei from behind him. He looked behind him to see the mutant that was dressed like a devil. "Annie, don't be mean to him, he probably doesn't have any ideal of whats going on!" zei the angel. "So I guess...

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Gods 2: Chapter 1: Palm Springs (Sorry I deleted the other copy)

posted by gossipgirlxoxo

There’s nothing better than a nice relaxing holiday; in the beach, city of country to meet your tastes. I had only been in the famous Palm spring for two days. And to be honest I wanted to go home, Ethan wasn’t speaking to me. Thor and Liz were all over each other. Remember that guy I ran into in the cemetery, well he’s here and talking to me, against Ethan’s wishes of course. I sat there on the fresh green grass, no not playing golf but reading ‘All the pretty girls’ a book that I needed, a bloody disgusting book with no love what so ever. I closed the book and put my face in my...

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Wake up... Ch.1

posted by GWENxTRENT

"Gwen,Gwen,Gwen!" Ms.Barton zei as I was asleep in history class."What?" I zei when I woke up."had a nice dream?" "S-sorry Ms.Barton,it won't happen again"."let's hope not." She said. When the klok, bell rang to go to lunch,my best friend,Marlon came up to me."What happend back there?" Marlon asked.To tell u the truth,I've always had a crush on him.I always had a feeling he liked me back."Nothing,nothing at all,i was just dreamin." "What about?"he asked with a smile."I'm not telling you!" I zei with a smile.When we went back to class,Ms.barton wanted to talk to me."Gwen,you have been sleeping in my class far to long". "sorry Ms.B,I havent been myslef lately." I zei with a frown."OK,first of all,dont call me "Ms.B",and u must go to sleep on time." She zei with a light smile."sorry,it hared to fall a sleep in my house." well then...ther is only one thing to do...you need to,wake up..."

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Three Poems

posted by Cuddles

These are for my dad who died almost exactly 12 years ago.
I don't know if it's any good.

Untitled

I’ve been at this point many times before.
One should think it might get better.
But now, as it’s almost exactly 12 years since
That special dag
I remember
Everything
As it would have been yesterday.
That I didn’t understand
That I didn’t want to understand.
That something faded away this day…
that it did not return
until now.
But it was not my hope
It’s still there, hidden in a small corner of my hart-, hart
Sometimes piping up
Just to abandon me again
But it didn’t leave me.
Yes…I still...

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Ode to Joy

posted by Dearheart

Josie ran.

“Maybe I made a mistake thinking you’d understand!”

“Well maybe I made a mistake marrying you!”

She ran, not heeding the tempest that tore at her clothes nor caring where she fled to as long as it was someplace far from home. Away from the chaos of her fighting parents and the hopelessness of the choice she was faced with.

“A tumor?”

“...it’s pressing on your brain stem and growing very rapidly. If it isn’t taken care of soon, it will be life-threatening...the surgery, however, would cost u your hearing... Permanently...”

Her hart-, hart pounded in time with her feet;...

Don’t u understand

posted by blossomyumyum

You’re keeping me up at night as dag breaks
It’s all for you
Yeah that’s what u do, got me feeling so blue
When will u see
u have to let it be
When will u see just how much u really mean to me

Why is it just so hard to send that card
When do u think you’ll be able to understand
My love might be killing me

I hope u realize I’m just a fool
Damn! You’re so cool

When do u think you’ll understand
u drove me to a far off land
When will u see
I can’t just let it be
Come on try to set me free
When will u finally understand
I care about you
I’ll tell u that firsthand
u have my hart-, hart and my life
I hope soon I’ll get a chance to be your wife
I hope soon you’ll see, u mean the universe and the galaxy to me

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Despairing in the Autumn Chap.1:Pt.1

posted by -Universe_COLA-

Daniel

~"Rays of hopeless light beamed dim and pale through the dull orange, yellow, and auburn leaves of the fall's trees. But even where there is calmness in neutrality, there is always a prey, and always a predator. Humanity is no different."~

Daniel tore through woods at full speed, clothes torn, his small oranje backpack dangling across his back, his left arm carved with shredded flesh in the form of animalistic claw markings and lines of smeared crimson leaked slowly from the wound above his eye. The leg to his jeans on the left side, only hanging on door a thread ripped itself away just above...

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about me

posted by stephany1617

Race:half Italian Human,Otaku,Reader Fanfiction,I love my vrienden and Respect them i Speak American English Fluent and i like the sound of the ocean and strand favoriete animals:Dogs,Wolf,Dolphins,Horses,Panda,Tiger,Orca
Beluga Whales
anime i love:Naruto Shippuden,Swords Art Online,Inuyasha,Vampire Knight,Rosario+Vampire
my favoriete sports are:Basketball,Tennis,Swimming
I'm the youngest child my mother have I have a biological brother and mom also my brother is a electronic Engineering
I have one small cute Malchi dog

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Suicide Squad trailer review

posted by MovieReveiw

This is an opinion so if u don't like these logoff...now.
In my opinion the new Suicide Squad sucks. Harley Quinn is not even Harley Quinn any more, Deadshot has stupid movie lines, and no King Shark. WTF. I will explain this all for people who are not familier with The Suicide Squad.
Since the beginning of time Harley Quinn has had an accent and, guess what, no accent in the new Suicide Squad. And since when does Harley Quinn dress like a fucking slut.
Deadshot is normaly the main charecter in The Suicide Squad but now he has two stupid ezel lines, "So we are some kind of Suicide Squad?" Yes u are stupid it is the titel of your movie. "Let's go save the world." Fuck it I am done with Deadshot fully.
King haai is, well, a giant haai but now they have replaced him with a less cool Killer Crok.

Sucky one

galaxy

posted by erissajade05

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100 Rooms Chapter One

posted by Weasel1999

I. The Nursery

Ember lived in her nursery for the volgende few months, only being let out occasionally to go to the toilet. All she saw were the four walls around her but it wasn’t all bad.
The room was painted a pretty sky-blue and the carpet was thick, fluffy and a deep midnight blue. There was a bed and a huge white wardrobe with the most beautiful, oubollig, ouderwetse clothes inside.
Rich velvets cloaks, soft vacht, bont stoles, bright silk dresses, every item of clothing needed to make a young lady of society look beautiful.
But Ember was not a young lady of society living in Victorian times. She was a...

Psychoanalysis: Chapter 30

posted by Insight357

    “Damien, I’m sorry,” his smooth voice zei in my ear. I couldn’t face him. He had kicked me out, why would he be here? To apologize? It was a nice gesture, but it crippled me just to see him.
    “I don’t believe you,” my voice was shaking. Tears kept streaming down my face.
    “Listen,” he crept down the side of my face.
    “No, u listen to me,” I zei turning over to face him. Our faces were all of three inches apart. “You killed me! Now u expect to come in here, apologize, and I’ll...